Love is love..thats it ? - Page 6

Originally posted by: qwertyesque

have you felt he mist caused by a water-fall. If you notice the morning dew on the leaves glistening in the sun. the gentle breeze caressing as it whispers something and then those eyes and that smile talking to you enrapturing you - but that is possbile i fyou are honest to yourself.. True love is the experience that sustains....epehemerally but is difficult.....😊

Sir, now-a- days  you are too poetic😛, this time I am happy since it is in English different from usual Hindi😆.  But one thing, now a days  I re- started my Hindi lesson due to dear DM'rs.

Originally posted by: nitasuni

sacrifice is not mopey, it only enhances the beauty of love.

 Dooba here doesnt mean sacrifice, ... I think it means to be immersed totally into something..but yes love in literature  quite often ends in tragedy or sacrifice except of course the fairy tales where everyone lives happily ever after!

 

Originally posted by: ssammy

Love is complicated.

Originally posted by: TallyHo

 Dooba here doesnt mean sacrifice, ... I think it means to be immersed totally into something..but yes love in literature  quite often ends in tragedy or sacrifice except of course the fairy tales where everyone lives happily ever after!

 I disagree , being soaked or immersed is different then drowning which is what dooba translates to literaly and figuratively but with shayari everyone is open to their own interpretations. Big difference in tere rang mein rang gayee and pyar mein dooba.

 But thanks Ashu for the couplet because I just wiki'ed khusro and found that he wrote the original "zee hale miskeen mukund" song sung by lata..😊 I love that song and never knew that Khusro/khusrau coined that phrase ...and wrote the poem in 2 languages, 1line in persian and next line in Brij basha. .. Interesting tid bit about the song. 😃  http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Amir_Khusro

Originally posted by: lighthouse

 Qwertoo, yeh kab , kyun aur kahaan hua? 😛 aur kiske saath hua? 😛

 Seriously , this is one of the nicest way to describe love rather then dark grim rap love gets mostly.😊

 

 

i agree .......................

itne complicated definations se to kab kaha kaise hau better hai......

Originally posted by: qwertyesque

[have you felt he mist caused by a water-fall. If you notice the morning dew on the leaves glistening in the sun. the gentle breeze caressing as it whispers something and then those eyes and that smile talking to you enrapturing you - but that is possbile i fyou are honest to yourself.. True love is the experience that sustains....epehemerally but is difficult.....😊

How did I miss this. really beautiful lines 😊

remember my fav poem by Faiz

 

Dasht-e- tanhai main aey jan-e-jahan larzaan he

teri awaaz ke saye tere hontoon ke sarab

Uth rahi he kahin qurbat se teri saans ki aanch

apni khushbo main sulagti hoi madham madham

door ufaq paar chamakti hoi qatra qatra

gir rahi he teri dildaar nazar ki shabnam

Edited by Morning_Dew - 16 years ago

Originally posted by: Morning_Dew

How did I miss this. really beautiful lines 😊

remember my fav poem by Faiz

 

Dasht-e- tanhai main aey jan-e-jahan larzaan he

teri awaaz ke saye tere hontoon ke sarab

Uth rahi he kahin qurbat se teri saans ki aanch

apni khushbo main sulagti hoi madham madham

door ufaq paar chamakti hoi qatra qatra

gir rahi he teri dildaar nazar ki shabnam

i loved the theme, so romantic. 😳

larzaan matlab?? 😕

in reply to your poem,

let me share my work, i love to write such piece of thoughts. 😊

Aarzoo ke sahil par,

tarasha tumharey khayalon ko,

bheeg bheeg gaye nazuk armaan,

reh reh kar atey tum,

reh reh kar atey,

ulfath ki nazar tham si gayee

yun chukar,

kuoon chua bhi nahee.  😳 😳

 

Originally posted by: rockstallion

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i loved the theme, so romantic. 😳

larzaan matlab?? 😕

in reply to your poem,

let me share my work, i love to write such piece of thoughts. 😊

Aarzoo ke sahil par,

tarasha tumharey khayalon ko,

bheeg bheeg gaye nazuk armaan,

reh reh kar atey tum,

reh reh kar atey,

ulfath ki nazar tham si gayee

yun chukar,

kuoon chua bhi nahee.  😳 😳

 

arey aap to shayar niklin .... kia baat he janab

Larzaan , have several meanings .. but here it is used as" to shimmer"😊

@dewey and rocksy - nice poems girls 👏 zyada kuchh naheen bolungee. otherwise qwerty will pull my leg again 😆 😆