Posted: 01 September 2005 at 9:49pm | IP Logged
continue after part one.
this is not as good as the first one but i tried, the next is onna be
better, promise. love yall. and yea kaol's name (garv's daughter's
name) is now kiran. lol
Garv and Kumud are in the front seats. They get back home after
their dinner and they are in the car on the drive way. They realize the
Kiran (Kajol) has is fast asleep in the back seat.
Kumud : Uh Re Kiran to sogayi.
Garv: Haan, Umm woh toh jaldi so jati hain. I mean her regular bed time is like 10 pm. But now its like 11 pm, so yea,
Kumud looks at Kiran with a smile because Kiran looks cuter while is asleep.
Kumud: Bahut hee pyaari bachee hain.
Garv: Thanks, aakhir meri beti hain
Garv: I don't think we should spend the rest of the night in the car. Mera matlab gaddi mein se nikal chahiye.
Kumud smiles agin and says
Kumud: Oh yea! Chalo.
Kumud and Garv get out and Garv gets kiran out and lifts his little girl in his arms and takes her home.
Kumud looks at them lovingly
Garv: Kumud here, Take this home key and please open the darvaza.
Kumud is lost in her thoughts and suddenly gets out of it and says
Kumud: yea, sure.
Kumud opens the door and then goes in.
Garv: Pehle mein Kiran ko soola kar aata hoon.
Kumud: she is already sleeping, usse ab sula kyun rahe ho.
G: Mera matlab hain mein usse, uske bed par sula kar aata hoon, okay?
K: Ohhhh! Thik hain, till then mein change kar ke aati hoon.
Garv: smiles and says okay!
Garv gets Kiran back to bed and goes to change his clothes himself,
in their own rooms. Lol. and they both freshen up. After they have wore
their pajamas and stuff they meet each other in the living room. Kumud
is there before him.
Kumud smiles and looks at him.
He smiles back and continues
G: Kumud tum jakar so jayo, mein zara bahar jakar aata hoon.
K: Bahar? Iss waqt, Koi important kaam hain? (she is surprised coz
it's 11:30am, not that it is late or anything but also that he is in
his pajamas) lol
G: not really, mein toh sirf, umm I am just going on a little walk,
to digest the food. Aaj thoda zyada hee khaya, I am so full right now.
(he is so cute)
K: (She smiles lovingly) oh okay, Garv kya mein tumhare saah chalu ? I mean I am also full right now.
Garv laughs, she laughs too. (oh man they just love being together)
G: Acha chalo, we will walk and talk.
Kumud and Garv are outside on the street, walking and talking. Lol.
G: So kumud, Abhay Papa aur Kkusum mom kaise hain? Bahut dino se baat nahin hui unse.
K: Mama, Papa thik hain, tumhe bahut yaad karte hain.
G: mein bhi unhe bahut miss karta hoon, lekin for some reason I
feel kinda awkward calling them, because I am not their son-in-law
anymore, I mean mein kis rishte se unse baat karoonga.
K: (Smiles) Garv!! Mama, papa tumhe apna beta maante hain. Tumne
hamesha unka saath diya hain. And always got them out of trouble. Garv,
you are the son that they never had. Son-in- law ka nahin balke tumne
ek beta ka rishta nibhaya hain.
G: (Smiles and says) exactly Kumud, mein unhe bahut pyar karta hoon
aur unki bahut izzat karta hoon. I respect them a lot. Meine unhe
kabhie tumhare parents nahin balke apne mana hain. Tumhare saath mera
rishta nahin raha lekin Papa aur Kkusum mom ka beta hone ka rishta
K: (she smiles and they are still walking)
Garv: lekin, kumud meine ubhe bahut dukh pahuchaya, unki dono
betiyon ki zindagi mein sirf dukh diya. AbhaY papa aur kkusum mom se
wada kiya tha tumhe hamesha khush rakhoonga, lekin woh wada poora na
Kumud has tears in her eyes but doesn't say anything.
Garv: but anyways, kumud you know what we should do? ( Garv looks
back coz garv is walking faster than kumud. She wipes her tears before
Garv sees her.
G: Aare kumud, kya hua? Are you alright? ( he has a worried face,
he runs back to the place she was standing. He didn't realize that
Kumud is behind. So yea he runs to her and holds her, not hugs her)
G: Kya hua? Tum itni slow kyun chal rahi ho?
K: mein slow chal rahi hoon, yaa tum fast chal rahe ho?
G: thik hain, baba, slow chalte hain! Fast chalna toh tumhare bas ki baat nahin hain. (he teases her)
K: Garv( she looks at him angrily) khana khaane ke baad, sirf
tumhare jaise idiots fast chalte hain. You just watch, mein tumhe
haraoongi, we'll have a race. Ab nahin phir kabhi.
G: you called me an idiot!
K: yahan koi aur hain besides you and me? Obviously I called you an idiot.
G: ( Garv is happy, that at least they are talking like friends,
and there isn't any awkwardness between them. Garv is not mad at her,
but pretends to be serious, for awhile)
G: Acha chalo(he keeps quite and walks at Kumud's slow speed)
K: (notices his seriousness and thinks that he is upset) naraz
hogaye? I was just playing around. I am sorry. (she smiles and touches
G: Its okay Kumud, (he smiles). I was just kidding too. Come-on lets walk back home.
K: (feels relieved and smiles) Achaa chalo. (she holds his hand while walking and feels secured)lol. Its 1 am in the morning.
K: Garv tum bhi naa itne raat gaye walk par nikalte ho.
G: (doesn't mind holding her hand, because he thinks that she is
scared) Dar lag raha hain, itni raat gaye? Don't worry Kumud, mein hoon
K: Tum agar saath ho toh darr kis baat ka hain? I am not scared. (garv smiles, and kumud holds his hand even tighter)
They look at each other and they snap outta it when,
Suddenly it thunders and it starts raining. The thunder scares the
hell out of kumud and she hugs Garv tight and Garv hugs her back( love
is rekindling guys). The hug is like lasting forever, they forget about
the rain and the thunder it doesn't make a difference to them because
they are lost into each other and feel like everything they had yearned
for is now fulfilled.
Garv realizes that he is still hugging her. He looks into her eyes,
(tere naam, song goes in the background) they look into each other's
eyes and see the love for each other pouring out. Kumud feels shy and
lets go of garv. Its still raining.
G: isss bar toh tum sure shot dar gayi thi! (garv smiles and teases her).
K: Smiles and says: Haan iss baar toh mein dar gayi. Garv yahan ke thunders kitne scary hain.
G: I know. But I am used to them, lo ghar aagaya.
They get inside soaking wet.
Garv: tum jakar change karke sojao. Mujhe zaara office mein kaam hain.
Kumud looks shocked, and yells, Garv!!
G: Kya hain, kuch hua kya, mein toh yahin hoon, cheela kyun rahin ho?
K: Ab raat ke 2:00 baje hain aur tum office jaa rahe ho!
G: Aare, kumud, office toh ghar mein hee hain. I have made one at
home too. Anyways, if you need me, I will be in my office, Okay!
K: Tumhara office kahan hain!
G: Mere room ke opposite jo kamra hain naa woh mera room hain. Got it!
K: Haan, mein jakar change karti hoon another time!
G: you better, warna sardi ho jayegi. I better go that too.
Kumud smiles and goes to the room to change, while garv changes and goes back to his office.
Kumud wears this gorgeous night gown, she looks very beautiful in
it. U know the song mere tang mein rang ne wali (from Meine Pyar kiya)
yea, its that kinda situation. Garv is working hard and she is
impressed by her love working so hard. She just waits at the door
watching him lovingly.
Garv finally looks up and sees his love, looking all beautiful. He
is just amazed. Garv and Kumud do not know how they feel about each
other yet. They might soon. Just wait and watch. I am kinda busy, and
this is the best I could have typed for today. I will try to finish it
up soon. I had lots more coming up in this part but I will do it in the
3rd part. Till then tell me how u like it. Bye.
Edited by Garv_Kumud_4eva - 06 October 2005 at 5:37pm