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nahar-saloni

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Posted: 11 January 2008 at 4:11am | IP Logged

hey guys i am satrting a story like dil mil gaye ..... hope u like it...
CHARACTERS ---

ARMAAN MALIK - 25 yrs old.. he comes from an affluent family... he is charming though little bossy .. he is an intern in a reputed hospital "sanjivani "" .. he lives with his younger sister as their parents are in london practising .. he is very caring towards his sister but little strict as he is the only one taking care of her... he is smart almost every girl wants to make luv with him ....

RIDHIMMA -- 24 yrs old... she is an intern in sanjivani ... very nice in nature .. caring,wants to make big..... she luves her family a lot.... she is very samrt and is very attractive.. though lil introvert with strangers but once with frends she is non stop talktative... has a elder sisiter anjali ........

anjali- character same as dil mil gaye

DR . shashank -- character is almost same just a lil different that he is married to padma and they both have two daughters - anjali and ridzi .. he is very strict with his daughters and is very punctual and has always made them understand the imp. of it... can get angry sometimes when he finds sumething amiss...

padma ----- she is not a nurse here .. very caring twards both her daughters ..... defend them whenever shash scold them ...

atul - same

sapna - same ...

keerti --- same but the difference is she is married to shubhankar and they both have a daughter who is a friend of armaan sister...

tanisha ------ she is younger sister of armaan ... she is very scared of him though luves him a lot ... cries on small small things..... she is manipulative which can really irritate armaan sumetimes... she is studying in class 11th but she does not take her science ser..


short forms --

ARMAAN -- AR
RIDHIMA - R
ANJALI - ANJIE
TANISHA - TIA
KEERTI K

 

part ---- 1 ..

TIA - BHAIYA GET UP NAA...mujhe school jaana hai ..... aur aaj apko sanjivani bhi tu jaana hai na .... uthho main late ho jaongi...
ar--uth raho yaar sir mat kha meri maaa..... ja jake ready ho jaa ....
tia -- okiessss....
in the dining table ---
ar- good morning ..
tia-good morning bhai .... bh ... aii repot card sign kar do plsssssss..
ar- raat ko kyun nahi dekhi ????? lil angry on her ..
tia-- wo bhai bhul gayi .
ar sees her report card and is very angry ..
ar-- tu isliye madam aapnereport card nahi dekhi ..... holds her ear tighly and says kam kyun hai marks... aaj se tera sab band no net , no tv no mobile and takes her mobile... tia-- bhaiya pls pls last time pls i will do better next time.... pls..
ar--chal tikhh hai magar sirf is bar . agli bar nahi tu shows her his hand.......
chal abbb school chod du.. drops her at her school and goes to sanjivani ..

at anji res.

padma-- ridzi , anjie get ready fast ... ur dad is waiting for u ...
they both cum in the dining roommm ...
anjie .. hey dad .. hi mom
ridz- good morning pa and good morning mummy ,,
shash -- jaldi chalo we r getting late aur vasie bhi keeri doesn't like new comers....
anjie - dad aap jaiyie we will cum by our car..
shash - as u say my daughter all the bestt ...

after sum time anjie and ridzi also go ......

 

IN TRAFFIC ----
a guy is const.... horning ........
ridxi -- yeh kuan pagal hai .. idiot .. dekhg nahi raha traffiuc hai ... late tu hum bhi ho rahe hain na di ..
anjie -- ridzi zaara check karna kaun hai ..
ridzi -- ayye dikh nahi raha agge traffic hai aapko ..
ar -- main late ho raha hoon ..
ridzi - late hum bhi ho rahe hai
ar-- oh realllyy ... vaise u beautifulll ... what's ur name ??/
ridzi -- ur sick..... vaise all boys r same and cumes back --
ridzi to anjie -- pata nahin ladke apne appko samjhte hya hai ?????/
anjie-- cool yaar ridzi
ar to himself -- pata nahin ladkiyan kya sochti hai ki naaam puchne se koi insaan insse flirt kar rah hai...... foolish ...vaisie ladki hot thii ... kash mujhe mil jaye kahin ........

well guys will continue later.. hoping for u r review

 

promo --- all intern are late by 5 min.. and dr. keerti is quite angry with thim .. coz of this... but after takign short interview she is happy .....
armaan and ridzi fight .... anjie have a crush on atul ......... and atul on sapna

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Posted: 11 January 2008 at 4:45am | IP Logged
hey ..
it's nice
btw, even my name's tia .. as in even one of ur characters is named tia .. lol ..

nahar-saloni

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Posted: 11 January 2008 at 4:47am | IP Logged
oh thats' gr888 ...

dillmillgayee1

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Posted: 11 January 2008 at 6:27am | IP Logged
very nice.......................really intersting..................please post next part soon....

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Posted: 11 January 2008 at 9:13am | IP Logged
hey tht was kool......plz continue soon.....
luv ur ff
ishiqa

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Posted: 11 January 2008 at 3:31pm | IP Logged
hey...its gr8 plz cont

patem031

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Posted: 11 January 2008 at 3:56pm | IP Logged
LOL hey it was gr8
pls continue Smile

nahar-saloni

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Posted: 11 January 2008 at 10:10pm | IP Logged
welll guys i am continuing my fan fic ----- pls do reply if u like it and tell me shud i continue as it is first fan fic..

PART-2

A- mere plants i am going bbi , bbi ,,,
Cry ajj ke baat hum saara din ek saath nahin bita payege..
and he goes to sanjivani by taking a autorickshaw ( well let me tell me tell u something about his life (( he is going to be intern tday .. his parents are no more due to sum accident and because he saw only doctors can save anybody life he decided to become a doctor and save many people life ))

in a small house ---

maa --- sapna beta yeh ladka tu dekho ..... bahut sushul hai ..tumhe bahut khush rakhega ... kya doctor voctor ke chakkar main pad gayi .. ek sushil ladke se shaadi kar aur ghar beth kar aish kar
sapna dad -- haan haan ladki ko bhi vohi sikhana jo khud ne kiya aaj agar tum bhi mera haath bate ti kaam karne main tu we have been rich enough jaa sapna beta is ki baat par dhyaan mat de...
sapna -- daddy app duno bhi naa . accha abb mujhe ahirwad dijie ..
god bless u sapna dear ..

at sanjivani entrance ---
ridzi and armaan clash ---

ridzi -- tum
armaan -- tum ( woh what a luck )
ridzi - tum yaha kya kar raheho
armaan - tumse matlab .... nahin hai tu batao naa
ridzi --- u .. uuu r sick ..
anjie- ridzi chill yaar tum bhi na kisi se bhi ladna shuru kar deti hoon.. hi i am anjali .
armaan -- hi i am armaan .. nice to see u ..
anjie-- ridzi chalo hum late ho rahe haii ...

they all go to dr.keerti' room ..
DR. keeri was taking attendance and only atul and sapna were dere ...
she got angry with ridzie , armi and anjie ..
k -- app logon ko doctor banna hai filmstar nahi ..jab chahe aa jayin ... sanjivani is a hospital not a shooting place .. yahan patients ke liye ek ek sec kimati hota hai aur app tu pure 10 min late hai .. already atul aur sapna 5 min late the lekin aap tino ne tu haad kar di.. anyways be punctual next time ...
all of them -- sorry mam it will not happen again ..
k-- ok interns main aap sab ka ek cmall interview loogin so that i can decide better who to give which case ..
so dr. armaan u first then dr.ridhima then dr. sapna. then dr. atul and then dr.anjali
after the interview she is very happy ..
k -- good interns i am very happy .. u all r very good...
u have to report to me at 11.00 and be right there at right time ...

all intern go to locker room ..
atul -- hi am atul and he shakes hand with everyone except anjie coz he seems not to be liking her coz of the way she dreessed up ...
anjie -- was quite surprised as till date no guy as actually not done this before .... she likead atull attitute very much ... she was quite impressed ..

ridzi -- tum yahan pe kyun bane intern .. to armaan ..
ar -- kyunki tum yahan par hu
ridzi-what ??
ar-nothing
ridzi - hey listen don't try to act oversmart ok ..
ar-- chal na ...

atul -- ( to sapna) tum kahan rehti hoon
s- gahr par--
a- he he he ..
s-tumse matlab --
a - arree hum abb ek saath kaam karege aur abb hum frendz bhi tu hai .. hai na
s- yaa .... and tells him the adreeess

all intern pls report to dr.shashank cabin ..

freezeeeeeee

guys will continue later .. hope u like.. plss tell me shud i continue it or not..



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