Soniye-FanFic Part 1, Page 1

Hello Everyone!

I am just wanting to say that I am going to start a FF on this Forum!  i wll give the details about this FF

This stiory taskes place in the colllege days.  Saket also plays a role in this story.  Saket and Sadhna are Boy frend and Girl frend. Saket and Puneet are bruthers. Raghini has a crush on Puneet and Puneet likes Sadhna.  He is waiting for Saket an Sadhna to break up.  So he does alot of things to brake them up.  Sadhna is not a really sweet innocent, gullible girl.  She is rich and she is asporty girl, she wares the latest brand names and lets just say Raghini and Sadhna are really miodern.  Nani likes Saadhna but Mami doesnt and Mama ji wears business suits.  mami and Malti are teamed up and Vinu like both his sisters. The rest you'll find out While you read this FF.

I have another FF on BMTD Banoo mein Teri Dulhann called Tere liye too!

 

Edited by pinkpinkers - 16 years ago

Yay, finally some one is writing one! 👏 👏

ya i was waiting for a very long time!  I wont let you down!😃

the story seems interesting, will be waiting for ur FF

i'm updating today!

Hi guys! Finally got a time to update!
Keep in mind...
--> that means next scene

Part 1
You see a really big bungalow...It is HUGE! Then you see Sadhna in her own room looking at herself in the mirror. She is wearing jeans and a pink t-shirt having the nike sign on it. She is very sporty you know. She has her hair down half way down her back with side-cut bangs,
Then you see Raghini in her room standing in front of the mirror.   She has natural curls. That are messy. And front nbangs. It's length is a lil beneath her shoulders. She is wearing a white kurta and jean capris.
They both look really pretty. The come downstairs all ready for college. Prakash Chandar[PC] sees them. (remember, he wears business suits)
PC- Raghini, Sadhna...aao aao! Aaj pehla din hai college ka, haina?
Raghini-Jee papa
PC-Tum dono bahut achhe lag rahe ho
Sadhna-Thanks mama ji!
PC-Saadhna, waise Saket...
Sadhna-naam bhi nahin sun n chahthi main uska!
Raghini-Saadhna, itna gussa nahin karna chahiye
Sadhna-Jij, aap teekh kai rahi ho
Raghini-Really?
sadhna-Haan! mujhe isse bhi aur gussa karna chahiye
PC-Saadhna tumhari di ka ye...
Saadhna-Aap dono ka bahut thanx, aap dono ne mujhe bahut help kiya.
Raghini and PC make really annoyed faces at Saadhna. They don't know what to do with this girl.
PC-Yeh ladki bhi naa!
Kaushi enters the picture.
Kaushi-Kaun? Saadhna? Yeh ladki toh bahut hi badmaash hai(she laghs while saying it)
(By the way, she is wearing a pink sarree)
PC-Kaushi, Vinu apne honeymoon se wapas kab aa rahaa hai.
Kaushi-Bas teen din hoe hae usse gaye nu. yaad aa rahi hai?
PC-Bahut!
Raghini- Papa, aap un doni ki fikar mat kariye!
--> Kaushi, PC, Raghini and Saadhna are eating breakfast. Nani comes in.
Nani-Raghini betaaaa!
Raghini-NANI!
Nani-Main apne pyaari si beti kae liye ek taufa laee hun
Raghini-aur voh kya hai...

Precap- nani opens the present...raghini is dissapointed
--> Raghini and saadhna reach college!

That's all folks! 😃
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