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Before i start writing it let me tell you, tht this fic is a romantic comedy and like a fairytale also, has characters like fortune tellers, and seven sins thingies also so please dont find logical expects in this FF.

*~*~*~CURSE OF LOVE~*~*~*~
(A fairytale)

Here it goes,
The Atmospehere:Is like of old AR fighting like cats and dogs, in these fights sometimes they get closer to each other and feels something for each other but their egoes did'nt allow them to confess what they feel for each other so like always they keep on fighting on useless issues Rahul and Muskaan ,Atul and Anji are here in this fic and like AR they are at war also, in their continous fights they get a shock of being made for each other and how lets see.

Episode # 1 Nothing but fights!!!

Sanjeevani Cafe:

All are sitting , except for AR,they all are looking tired:

M(muskaan):Kya din tha aaj, aik key baad aik cases ki line lagay ja rahi thi, fitay moon us dr.Keerti ka apnay alawa har kisi ko kolo ka bale samajhti hai

R(Rahu)l:Chuch chuch.... main teri halat samajh sakta hoon , jab logo ko kabhie kabhie  kaam karna padta hai tu wo yehi kehtay hai.

M:Oye tu chup kar waisay mera dimagh paka hu hai, agar mujhay gussa agaya na tu.....

Anji:Please guys sab thakay huay hai ab tum duno shuru mat ho jana,waisay hi Armaan aur Ridzy kam hain kya jo tum duno bhi.....

Armaan and Ridz enters cafe and figting as usual,

A(armaan)Basket tumes baat karnay ka matlab hai apnay sir main dard karnaab main tumhein samjhanay wala nahi hoon ka us waqt pateint ko test ki nahi medicine ki zarrorat thi.

Ridz:O my foot, mujhay bhi tumharay moon lagnay ka shauq nahi hai, tum pateint ko ghalat advice day rahey thay aur main chup nahi reh sakti.

A(armaan)Excuse me basket wo mera pateint hai so you back off!!!

Ridz:I wont kuynkay...

A:yooooooo basket ab main mazeed apna time aur energy tumharay sath waist nahi karnay wala.

Ridz gets angry they both reached the table where all are sitting.

Atul:Please tum duno yaahn nahi betho gay, apni table kahin aur sat karo aur wahan ja kay lado?

Armaan comes and put his hand around Atul's shoulder and says:

A:(He shows his hand to him)champ tujhay pata ye kitni ungliyaan hain???

Atul:Paanch?waisay agar duno hathon ki count karo tu 10 hoti hain , kuyn teray paas 10 nahi hai?

A:A says yaar champ tuu!!!!he smiles ab achay bacho ki tarah kursi udhar kar.

The waiter comes and put the sauce in between both Rahul and Ridima takes it, but Rahul gives to Ridz, she says thanks to him Rahul smiles and Ridz looks at A who roles his eyes and says copy Ridz thanks.

S:sapna:Armaan wo tumharay us patient ka kya haal hai jo kal apni gf kay liye poems par raha tha.

A:O he is perfect, afterall me Dr.Armaan is treating him, mainey usay aisa mashwara diya kay ladkiyoon ke peechay bhanahy ka koi faida nahi kuynkay har ladki apnay aap ko helen of troy samajhti hai, unhay siway apni importance feel karwanay kay aur kuch naho ata, aisi ladkiyon main kya rakha hai.

M:Oye Armaan kay bachay, kya matlab hai tera.

A:Aray tumhari baat thori kar raha hoon main.

S:Armaan ladkiyaan means sab ladkiyaan.

Ridz:Ji haan aur ladkay kya jantay hai siwai ladkiyoon ke buriyaan karnay kay.

Rahul:I agree with Ridima, but trust me Ridima it is not like tht, sab ladkay aik jaisey nahi hotay.

A looking at Rahul:Exactly andar say kuch aur , aur bahar say kuch aur.

Ridz:Bilkul tumhari tarah.

Atul:Nai Ridz Armaan aisa nahi hai, jo andar say wohi bahar say bilkul meri tarah, haina Anjali.

Anji:Yeah right.(Atul gets happy and so as Armaan)unbelievably disgusting sometimes.

Smile disappears from Atul's and Armaan's faces, while Ridz,Sapna and Muskaan smiles.

Their pager rinfs and it is Dr.Keerti, they all leave......

They all are standing in front of Keerti, she give them all an angry look and says, break ko  khatam huay 5 minute say upar ho chukay hain aur aap logon say mainey kaha tha kay mujhay sharp 4:00 pm par akay report karein.

Atul:Mam wo aj kaam itna kam tha kay hum sab cafe main ja kar beth gaye
aur baatein kartay huay kab waqt guzra pata nahi chala haina Anji , he looks at her who is standing beside him.A hides his face,Anji is speechless, and Sapna,Ridz ,Rahul and Muskaan tries to hide their smile.

Keerti stares at Atul like she is going to eat him.Atul nods his head,

Atul:Nai wo mam wo atually wo....

Keerti(almost shouting)Dr.Atul aap ke lye behtar ye hi hoga kay aap chup rahay.Doctors aap ko pat hai kay kal hum sab Mussorie ja rahein, is liye aap sabko yaad dila doon kay kal subah 7:00 bajay aap sabko yahaan puhonch jana hai,aur aap sab abmeray cabin main aa kar apni reports submit karein.

A:  thinks wow Mussorrie he smiles.

Dr.Keerti pointedly looks at A and says:Aur yaad rahay hum wahan kaam karnay ja rahein hain aur apki progress IOTM main count hogi, so you all better behave........


should i continue or not, and yeah abt the 7 sins idea, i read tht in a post, so i decided to add in my fic, i thought it would be fun.

Maleka/Love Armi

Edited by Lois_Lane - 30 March 2008 at 12:36pm

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Posted: 29 December 2007 at 5:40am | IP Logged
Wow Maleka it's very good Clap Clap
AR fighting as usual LOL so did RM LOL anji was right AR are enough to phir yeh RM kyun fight kar rahein hain ? LOL
I like the atul kirti scene LOL LOL
Please continue ASAP Wink
Humera. Smile

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Posted: 29 December 2007 at 5:49am | IP Logged
i really lyke it! its really nce u shuld contd! btw dnt 4get 2 pt tond of AR sences! Embarrassed cont soon! Tongue




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Posted: 29 December 2007 at 6:18am | IP Logged
gd str=art n its sumthin
differnt gd job
plzzz continue soon Clap




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Posted: 29 December 2007 at 6:57am | IP Logged
nice ff maleka Clap !!do continue




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Posted: 29 December 2007 at 12:35pm | IP Logged
thanks folks i m sure you will enjoy it!!! Big smile
i will update it soon. Big smile thanks for the feedback but need some more. Embarrassed

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Posted: 30 December 2007 at 5:15am | IP Logged
here it goes:

Episode# 2 The Journey Begins!!!
Dr.Keerti pointedly looks at A and says:Aur uaad rahay hum wahan kaam karnay ja rahein hain aur apki progress IOTM main count hogi, so you all better behave........
Armaan lost in his thoughts of childhood, because his childhood was spend in Mussorie,he remembers his school days, he smiles, Ridz looks at him and thinks
"zaroor koi mini skirt wali yaad aa gaye hogi!!!

Next morning they all standing outside,and putting luggage in to the bus, Armaan has a big bag, he put that up.

A:Aur kisi ka bag rakhna hai tu bata du.

S:Haan Armaan ye meray begs.

A:A see 2 big bags, Sapna mera khayal hai Dr.Keerti nay humein 3 din kay trip ka kaha hai, teen saal ka nahi.

S:Nahi ye wo dosray beg main tu sary medical equipments hain.

A:O, fine, Anji hands over him a bag,than A says Rahul aur basket ko tu koi bag nahi rakhwana hoga, kuynkay usmay kuch hoga hi nahi siwai kuch stupid aur boring magazines kay.

Rahul:Mujhay faltoo saman uthanay ka shauq nahi hai, jaisay kuch aur loog apnay bags ko bharay rakhtay faltoo chezon say.


A:Laughs ahem baat ye hai kay tum duno nahatay bahut kam ho, change kiya nahi kiya sab chalta hai, waisey bhi Rahul tu t bahut simple hai na, itna simple kay do teen teen balo main tail laga kar reh sakta hai.

Ridz:Tumse baat karna ka koi faida nahi hai, u r useless talking too.

Shubhankar comes:Are you all ready doctors, chalein.

in the bus Atul tries to sit with Anji but Armaan pull him and make him sit with him, Ridz and Anji sits together,some other docs sits, Rahul and Muskaan are still standing and only one seat for 2 is left, Keerti says,
K:Dr.Rahul , Dr.Muskaan any problem?
M&R: No, Yes.
She stares them both.
Shubhankar:Kya ap duno nay poora safar kharay ho kar tay karna hai?
M&R:Together ji, haan, matlab nahi..look at each other angrily.
Now they both sit together in vain.
Ridz kneels her head on Anji and closes her eyes, and her hairs gets spread on her face, Armaan looks at her, and kind of
get lost in her, he looks how beautiful she is looking , he looks at her and smiles, but than he shook his head,
A:Ye kya hogaya hai mujhay main is basket ko kuyn ghoor raha hoon, he looks at Atul who is sleeping and snoring
loudly, he looks at him but again he starts staring Ridz, Ridz wakes up, and A turn his face from her and put his head
on Atul's shoulder who snores so loudly that he gets back and shakes him.
A:Champ hai champ, Atul is still snoring , Anji looks here and there with a irritation on her face.
Anji shouts Atul!!!!
Atul:Kya hua kya hua, Anji, tumne koi bura sapna tu nahi dekha, ghabrao mat mein yehi hoon.
Anji:Tumharay kharatay kisi buray sapnay say kam nahi hain.
Sapna, Ridz and Muskaan smiles.
A:Actually she is right champ, actually main kab say sonay ki koshish kar raha hoon
is champ ki wajah say…!!!!
Atul:Sirf tumehin problem hai wo Rahul ko dekho kitnay mazay say so raha hai.
M:Aur meray hotay huay ye kaisay mumkin hai, (she takes out a packet of peanut, deliberately open it
from her mouth and loudly, but Rahul is still sleeping calmly)ab bhi nahi utha ye jhado ka tinka,she
starts eating peanuts and chew them making noise, A start laughing, Ridz looks at him angrily.
Atlast Rahul wakes up.
Rahul:Tu gawar, kya pehli baar kuch kha rahi hai???
M:Oye meri marzi main jasey bhi khaaon tujhay matlab.
A:Aur kya uski marzi wo jasay bhi khaye.
Rahul thinks:Is ko bhi sabaq sikhana paday ga.
Shubhankar and Keerti are talking
K:Ye loog bhi na, aik baar shuru hotay hain tu roknay ka naam hi nahi letay.
Shub:Aray ye tu inkay din hain enjoy karnay kay, waisy hum nay bhi kum masti
nahi ki hai.
K:Hum nahi, sirf aap Dr.Shubhankar.
Shub(smiles)O yes, aap tu ye sab karti nahi thi, haan sirf plans apkay hotay thay.
Keerti:Ab tum shuru mat ho jana Shubhankar.
They both smile.They heard RahulMuskaan fighting.
Rahul;Main keh raha hoon meray moon mat lag tu.
Muskaan:Oye tu chup kar, bahut bardasht karliya tujhay ab nahi karongi,Armaan is say keh do
ke ye meray mamlay main taang na ghusaye.
Rahul:Main taang ghusaon kay moon ghusaon meri marzi.
Ridz:Rahul calm down bet jao.
Rahul:Ridima tum janti nahi ho isay.
A(copy Ridz)Rahul beth jao!!! Hey Muskaan calm down , kcuh loog ka kabhie kuch nahi ho sakta
, wo kabhie nahi sudhar saktay, wo kahawat kya hia haan kuttay kid um hamesha teri ki teri rehti hai.
Ridz:Yes, bilkul sahi kaha, tum bhi aisay hi ho, doosron ke mamlay main taang aratay rehtey ho.
A:Aur tum say kisnay poocha basket tum bhi yehi kar rahi ho.
Ridz:Main Rahul aur Muskaan ko ladnay say mana kar rahi hoon aur bus.
A:Laken beech main tu bola na tumnay.
Ridz:Lekan bila wajay tumhari tarah nahi.
AR stands up,
A:Main bi Muskaan ko ladnay say rok raha tha.
Ridz:Ghalat tum Rahul ko ulta seedha suna rahay thay.
A:O my, kya kiya hai tumhary Dr.Rahul nay tumhary liye jo tum uski itni
tarafdari kar rahi ho.
Rids:Meri marzi.
A:Tu meri bhi marzi.
Atul makes A sit and Anji makes Ridz sits.
Sapna:Kamal hai chalay thay do ladnay walon ko roknay aur khudi ladnay lagay.

Anji:Seriously Ridz tum loog thak nahi jatay.
A:Main tu bahut pehley hi haar maan chukka hoon tum apni basket, I mean behen ko
Keerti shouts:Enough is enough , aap logon ko aisay ladtay dekh koi ye nahi kehey ga
aap loog doctors hai, ab koi kisay say baat nahi karega aur nahi kuch bolayga.
Atul:Allright ma'm.
She stares him.
Atul:No not allright, I mean ammm.(he puts finger on his lips).
At night, in the bus Sapna,Anji and Ridz are talking, while A is telling Atul that how
exciting he is about going to Mussorie as his school days where spend there.
Atul:Really yaar, Mussorie kitna khoobsurat hai, aur aisi jaga schooling.
A:Ofcourse school jaisey din koi nahi hotay, sharartein,masti,teachers ki
dant dapat, humara pora gang tha, hum sab milkay khoob sharatein plan
kartay thay.
Atu:Aur phir in sharartoon par mumy papa ka dantna,laken uska
bhi apna aik maza hai.
Ridz is listening all this and smiles.
A:Hmmm mummy papa,(he slowly says)mujahy tu who bhi nahi mila.He gets a little sad.
Ridz looks at him, A kneels down on the seat and close his eyes, she is keep
looking at him, she thinks tht he is not the Armaan she knows, he is someone
else, than suddenly she shook her head.
Ridz:Ye main kya soch rahi hoon, wo bhi is sadoo kay baray main.
Rahul is sitting and looking out of the window, he looks at the tall trees
in the dark,suddenly hairs start bothering him, he see tht Muskaan is sleeping
with her hairs open and kneeling on his shoulder, he looks tht Muskaan's
face is covered with her open hairs, he untensionally tries to remove them, he notices
she looks so sweet when sleeping, he slowly tries to kneel her head on the seat,
but she again puts her head on his shoulder.
Rahul:Sotay main bhi zid karti hai, kitna sakoon lag raha hai.
It is morning and now they reach Mussorrie , they takes out there begs
and all other stuff.
They all see greenery everywhere around them.
Armaan: so beautiful as ever.
Ridz:Kitna shanty hai yahaan, dil chahta bus yahin reh jaon.
A:Aur yahan logo ki naak main dum kardon.
Ridz:(Angrily)Kuch kaha tumnay.
A:Haan laken tumhein batana zaroori nahi samajhta.
Keerti:Abhi hum fresh ho kar, yahan kay logo ko treat karengay, aur uskay baad
humein school ko visit karna hai, Dr.Armaan,Dr.Ridima and Dr.Sapna, aap loog
aik team main, Dr.Anjali and Dr.Atul, and Dr.Rahul and Dr.Muskaan, aap sab
team main kaam karengay, Dr.Sapna,Ridima and Armaan, aap loog bachon
ko treat karengay, Dr.Atul and Anjali aap loog mujhay aur Dr.Shubhankar ko
assist karengay aur ap Dr.Rahul aur Dr.Muskaan……
Muskaan:Dr.Keerti please mujay inkay saath team nahi banani.
Rahul:Aur mujhay bhi.
Shubhankar:So you both agree on tht?
Shubhankar:Aap duno main tu bahut ittefaq hai, aaap duno as a team karengay.

They both give each other a drastic look!!!!

to be continued...

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Edited by Lois_Lane - 30 December 2007 at 5:28am

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liked the 2nd part a lot Clap
really amazing
plz continue
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