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awwww i would have never guessed bheegi that you would break my heart with so much bherehmhi (how do u spell that?) im still sick and worse...ufff kya karoon? eh whatever it'll go away soon...
but i cant believe kripa, she got pregnant? i have to admit my true feelings when you wrote that part, at first i thought that was stupid, and you'd loose readers and i actually lost the feeling to keep reading...but then it knocked something into me thats what happens in the US all the time, girls getting pregnant as young as the age of 12 repeatedly throughout, and then i realized that your doing a better job by getting the word out there one mistake changes your life not only for the good but for the worse....
anyways zaib's hearts broken but he still is a wonderful person, he saved afreen but couldnt accept her and neither can she...i feel bad for afreen hopefully you will bring azaan back for her, because after kripa and zaib reunite afreen will be left alone and i know zaib will not go back to kripa leaving afreen and the daughter behind...
kripa im glad she decided to keep the baby, the baby did no wrong, if anyone was at fault it was kripa and josh, but im glad she was knocked some sense into by zaib or otherwise people in the US continuously do abortions or throw their kids out into the streets, if you make a mistake learn to accept it with love, only then will you realize how powerful it is....
awesome part as always, all your ff's hold a powerful meaning and im very glad that i can say that your work touches my heart in every way it can possibly do so...sometimes i wonder if i will find someone who loves me as much as zaib...
continue soon please
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i hav done it di
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