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Posted: 16 years ago
wow nishat......u r gud man...u r awsome....it felt so gud reading urs....i cud just imagine it happening....wow grl...plz continue.....
oh an plz pm me if u dont mind...wen u hav next part 😛
cheers
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Posted: 16 years ago
hey
great part
plz continue
😊 swansea 😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
heyya
sorry ppl havent updated in ages!!
been a bit busy lately but hopefully i will update by tomorrow!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
will be waiting nishat .. plz update soon ..
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Posted: 16 years ago
part 5

[ridz was shocked! she had totally forgotten about maya, ever since ridz sent her to jail
maya was completely scraped from ridzies thoughts]

RG: main kya karu...woh kya armaan ko..NAHI!! woh mujhe aur armaan ko kabhi alag nahi karsakta!
KOI nahi karsakta [in thoughts]

AM: riddhima?!..hello?!
RG: armaan mujhe kuch karna hoga..Woh agar tumko kuch..
nahi, mujhe kuch karna hoga
AM: nahi riddhima mujhe kuch nahi hoga likin tum sirf apna kiyal rakna ok?
RG: haa
AM: see you tomorrow, bye, love you
RG: bye

[and she put the phone down]
[The next day riddhima walked into sanjeevani remembering about maya]
[Dr keerti was assigning everyones duties while ridz was thinking]

DrKEERT: Dr armaan aur..
[she noticed that ridz wasn't listening]
DrKEERT: dr riddhima
[she said nothing]
DrKEERT: DR RIDDHIMA

[ridz finally came to her senses]

RG: haa..yes dr keerti
DrKEERT: concentrate Dr
RG: yes maam

[at that point a girl walked in]
[she looked familiar, VERY familiar]
RG: maya?

MAYA: hello Dr keerti
DrKEERT: hello maya, everyone this is maya, she will be working with us for a few days.
AJ: par dr keerti ussne to armaan ko frame kiya tha
[muskaan nudges atul]
M: woh kaun? aur ussne armaan ko kya kiya?
AJ: baad main batounga
[dr keerti walked off assigning everyones duties, as maya went off with dr keerti she winked at armaan]
[rahul saw her do that to and he thought armaan was trying to flirt with her]
R: armaan tum kabhi sudroge nahi, jabhi ek lirki dekti ho usske saath flirt karna shuru kardete ho
AM: what?
RG: rahul, tum aisa soch bhi kaise liya?
[rahul was shocked, ridz was telling HIM off!]
R: riddhima main tho
RG: armaan aisa kuch nahi kiya, uss maya nai armaan ko frame kiya tha! haa past main woh armaan ki girlfriend tha likin she cheated on him! aur ussne natak kiya aur sanjeevani main aagayi.
M: kya? armaan agar main tumhari jaga par hota na, to main usske ek zor se thapar deta!
RG: main itni stupid thi ki mujhe laga tha ki armaan ussko cheat karehe hai aur main armaan ko..jail..
AM: arre woh saab purane baate hai , lets talk current events!
A: haa hume usse yaha sai bagana hoga, varna woh kuch karegi
AJ: haa!


Edited by nishat_1995 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
it was really very nice but short but i understand ..
dis part was absolutely fantastic ..


keep rockin'
--Tia--
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Posted: 16 years ago
hey
well done loved it so mch i remember maya really well i hate her 😡 so much she a b**ch i hate her so much but anyway loved your ff so much
plz continue
😊 swansea 😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
heres part 6!

[after they finished work they all went to the canteen]
A: hum kya karenge..
[ek minute main kana lekar aati hu!]
A: ok!
M: mujhe ek zabardast idea aya!
[everyone turned to look at muskaan]
EVERYONE: KYA?
M: hum na, ussko kidnap karlete hai
[they all sighed and looked back]
R: yeh kya idea hai? [mutters, bakwas]
M: tho kya tuje better idea hai?
R: nahi likin hota tho teri idea se bhetter hota!
[they both stood up]
M: main na! tumko ek mardalongi
R: tik hai aaj hi karlo!
[muskaan went up to rahul and started strangling him!]
M: idiot
R: loser
AM: STOP IT!!!
S: hee hee, armaan muskaan aur rahul, tum aur riddhima ki tara hai, sirf jagra!
A: haa!
[and they all started laughing!]

[just then maya walked in]
MAYA: hi guys!
[riddhima had got the food and was about to sit in the seat next to armaan, but maya happened to sit in it before her]
[armaan saw and he moved and sat next to ridz]
MAYA: kya hua armaan? tum meri saath nahi betna chati?
AM: nahi
MAYA: armaan..
[she put her hand on armaans]
MAYA: i'm sorry honey, i was stupid, main kaise tumko cheat kiya...
AM: save it! main tumhari saath nahi baat karna chati, tum sirf yaha ayi ho kyunki tum mujhe phirse jail bejwana chati ho
MAYA: na na na! main tumko jail nahi bejwata! iss lirki nai kiya tha!
[she pointed at ridz]
[at that point tears fell down riddhimas eyes]
[she stood up and was about to run for it, but armaan caught her hand]
AM: dekho maya, riddhima nai galati se woh saab kiya tha, aur maine usse maaf karliya..tum please aur problems mat karo
MAYA: whatever
M: oye churel tu armaan aur riddhima ke dur rehna ok
MAYA: maya stormed off which left everyone laughing
AJ: waah bhai waah muskaan!, tumne tho uss churel ko bagwadiya!
M: dekha rahul main itni stupid nahi hu jitna tum kehte ho!
R: your right..tum zyada stupid ho!
[and he runs out of the canteen followed my muskaan!]

SPEAKERS: ATTENTION ALL INTERNS, PLEASE REPORT TO DOCTOR KEERTI IMMEDIATLY FOR SANJEEVANI CAMP INFO

AJ: haa main to bhul gaya tha hum aaj sanjeevani camp ja rahi hai!
[they all started walking to doctor keerti]

DrKEERT: doctors, sanjeevani camp ki jane ki plan postponed hai, aap saab kal jayegi
9.00am early aana, i hate latecomers
AJ: phew!
DrKEERT: excuse me?
AJ: uhh sorry
DrKEERT: aap saab apni duties par jaye
M: likin humari duties tho katam hogaye!
DrKEERT: tho aap saab ghar jaye
[everyone went to the locker rooms except sapna]
S: dr keerti!
DrKEERT: yes?
S: aap aur dr shubhankar ki beech kya hua?
DrKEERT: abhi tho kuch nahi,likin woh mujse aaj kaal dur rehrahe hai
S: oh, ok bye!
[sapna started walking in the direction on the others]
S: yes! mera plan kaam karehe hai! Dr shubankar sirf mera hai! dr keerti!

sorry its short again! its coz its just a addition to the part b4 coz that bit was short too!
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Posted: 16 years ago
it was really nice .. and now sapna turns into a villian ?? dats interesting ..
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Posted: 16 years ago
lol i thought she needed a change!