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Posted: 22 December 2007 at 5:46am | IP Logged
This is my first fanific!
the characters and armaan[AM], anjali[A], riddhima[RG], rahul[R], muskaan, atul, sapna [those are the main!]

DING DING!!
RG: UGHH
DING DING
RG: UGHH!! DI!! TIME KYA HAI? DI!!
A: RIDZ mujhe disturb mat karo
[snore snore snore]
ridz gets up and checks the time
RG: AAAHHH DI TIME DEKHO HUM LATE HAI!!
[ridz gets up and goes for a shower while anjali is still asleep in bed]
RG: di uto!
A: 5 mins ridz
RG: tik hai main jog karne ja rahi hu

[ridz goes downstairs to find Dr Shashank and nani laughing on the kitchen table]
RG: kya hua? aap dono kyu haas rahe hai?
[DrSH] kuch nahi hum dono ko tumhari aur anjali ki kuch din yaad aya
RG: ok papa main jog karne ja rahi hu
N: breakfast to kake jow!
RG: Time nahi hai nani! bye!

[ridz runs through the streets past shops and busy streets]

RG: mera lace!
[ridzies shoelace was untied she was near a basketball court and sat on the bench to tie her lace]
RG: OUCH!
[ridz turns around to find armaan playing basketball with some kids]
AM: bullseye!
RG: Armaan!
[ridz walks up to armaan]
RG: bohoot din sai mai basketball nahi play kiya
[she bounces the ball a few times and scores a basket from where she was standing]
RG: match hojaye?
AM: nahi, main tumhe harake fed up hogaya hu [angrily]
RG: KYA? mujhe? tum? harougi? puhlease!
AM: aur phir bhi tum tu mujhe ek gire huwi aadmi samajti hu, main to tumhari kelte waqt faida ut toungi

[and ridz jogs of looking guilty]

[ridz runs home and jumps onto the bed, she remembers all the good times she had with armaan,
how could she accuse armaan of being so sick minded? she had to aplogise]
[she runs to the phone and rings armaan]
AM: hello
[ridz doesnt speak she just listens to armaans voice she loved it!]
AM: Hello??
[in the backround ridz hears a voice saying kaun hai?]
AM: pata nahi papa main rakdeti hu
RG: nahi!
AM: huh?
RG: armaan
AM: riddhima, kya hai?
RG: armaan, i am sooooo sorry, mujhe pata nahi kyun main us din woh sub kaha
jo dimagh main aya main woh kaha, mujhe maaf kardo, tum aisa aadmi ho hi nahi sakte!
AM: riddhima
RG: i'm soo sorry mujhe maaf kardo
AM: tik hai riddhima
RG: PLEASE PLEASE armaan maine galat kaha mujhe maaf kardo
AM: TIK HAI!! maine maaf kardiya!
RG: friends?
AM: sirf friends?
RG: armaan![smiling!]
[and she cuts the phone]

AM: mujhe pata tha, mairi riddhima mujko pyar karti hai

This is part one! if you like it tell me 2 carry on! coz i sure will!

PART 2 ~Keerti In Love, AR in Love~ PAGE 3

PART 3 ~R says ILY to A, Keerti Asks Sapna 4 Help~ PAGE 4

PART 4 ~Maya Back From Jail~ PAGE 6

PART 5~Maya DrK'sAssistant interns make plan to kick her out~PAGE 8

PART 6~Interns find out they r going 2 sanjeevani camp~PAGE 8

PART 7~Atul Fools Maya, Maya in trouble~PAGE 9

PART 8~On their Way 2 sanjeevani camp, Anjali admits likes atul~PAGE 10

PART 9~AR tell evryone about their relationship!~PAGE 12

PROMO~ MUSKAAN LIL BRO HAVE A ACCIDENT, ANJALI~ATUL~ARMAAN~RIDDHIMA CUTE&&FUNNY SCENES ~ PAGE 14

PART 10~ Muskaan lil bro has accident, shubankar asks keerti on date!~PAGE 15

PART 11~ Minnie Back!, Sapna in love!~PAGE 16
PROMO~maya leaves! PAGE 16
PART 11~ Shubs proposes to Keerti! ~PAGE 18
PART 12~ Muskaan boyfriend problems!~ PAGE 19
PART 13~armaan admits he loves ridz to muskaans parents~PAGE 20
PROMO~ EveryoneCelebrating!! FilmCrewAskToDoAMovie! ~PAGE 22
PART 14~ everyone shooting the movie, AR argue!~PAGE 23

      



Edited by nishat_1995 - 24 March 2008 at 12:10pm

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my hindi is really bad but plz cope with me!

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Posted: 22 December 2007 at 5:52am | IP Logged
i lyked it nce start! willbe w8in to read prt 2 contd soon! Tongue

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it was a nice part...continue soon Wink

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Posted: 22 December 2007 at 6:20am | IP Logged
yeah it was awesome .. i really luvd d fact dat now a and r will be together .. lol .. neways , plz cont. soon ..

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i need more replies!!!

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Posted: 22 December 2007 at 6:52am | IP Logged

Originally posted by lrl_fan14

yeah it was awesome .. i really luvd d fact dat now a and r will be together .. lol .. neways , plz cont. soon ..

plzz continue..

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hey
that was amazing i loved it Clap
plz contiue
Smile swansea Smile

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