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Main Laksh Ki Deewani Hoon(Final Part 51-Pg30)

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Let me first give you an intro of all my characters in this story...

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K.T:She is a sweet simple girl who is doing her first year degree in a college in Pune.

Sneha:She is KT's best friend.

Laksh:He is in the same college as KT but in a different class.He is also a first year.

Manthan:He is Laksh's friend.

Neev:He is also Laksh's friend.

Prachi:She is Neev's Girl friend and she is in Kt and Sneha's class.

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PART-1

First day in college:

Kt enters her class and sits near Prachi and Sneha.

Sneha:Hiii....Whats ur name?

Kt:Hii...I m Kt..ur name?

S:I m sneha...and this is Prachi.

P:Hiii....Kt

K:Hii...

Meanwhile in Laksh's class he had become friends with Neev and Manthan

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In the evening after class:

Manthan:Kitna boring day tha..!!I m glad that it has ended..

Neev:Hey guys..Lets go and meet Prachi..She will be in her class..I ll introduce her to you guys.

Laksh:Sorry Neev..I m not coming.I m goin to play football with these boys..You guys catch up later..ok..

N:ok Laksh..Come Manthan, lets go..

By that time, Kt leaves the class with the other two and were outside.They were passing by the football ground.Kt was watching the game as she noticed Laksh.She couldn't help staring at him..

P:I wanted to see Neev.Where is he?He had promised to come and meet me in the evening.OMG..!!I had told him to come and meet me in our class..I forgot..Ab kya kare..?

S:OK then..Lets go back to class.

Both of them started to go back,but Kt was still there staring at Laksh..

S:Come Kt......KT(shouts)

K:What..?Oh..

Sneha noticed that she was staring at someone in the football ground.

S:(teases)Kya baat hai Kt..?Kis ladke ko dekh rahi ho..?

Just then Laksh went and took his bag, took out his water bottle and drank some water...

K:Can you see that boy drinking water...Isn't he handsome..?

P:Handsome toh hain..Come let's go and ask his name..

Just then Neev saw Prachi standing there and he and Manthan came running to her..They had gone to her class and didn't see her there..So they decided to come out...

N:Prachi...(taps her shoulder)

P:Oh Neev!!I am so sorry..I forgot to wait for you in my class...I was coming to meet you and...

N:Its ok Prachi..Meet my friend Manthan..Manthan, this is Prachi..

P and M:Hii(smiles)

N:And where is Laksh...(looks to the ground)LAKSH..OYE LAKSH....IDHAR AAO..

Laksh came running to them..Kt thought "Laksh..Oh!!"

L:Kya baat hain yaar?

N:Prachi, yeh hain Laksh..

L:Hii..(smiles)

P:Hii Laksh..(smiles)

P:Guys, meet my friends...Yeh hain Sneha aur yeh hain Kt..

They greeted each other...Prachi looked at Kt and decided to pull her leg..

P:Neev, Kt keh rahi thi ki...(looks at Laksh)

K:(nudges her)ki hum canteen jaate hain...

N:Why not girls..Let's go..

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END OF PART 1....SO TELL ME HOW IT WAS...SHOULD I CONTINUE??...PLEASE REPLY...
THANKS!! Smile



Edited by hp_2006 - 25 August 2008 at 6:16am

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Posted: 04 December 2007 at 10:20am | IP Logged
wow.. Smile

LOVE UR FF LOL

PLZ   CONTINUE Smile
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hey ur ff is really gud Clap Clap Clap
plz cont.
u hv already earned 1 fan! bdw wats ur name?? im marisha...
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it was fantastic plz continue
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plz plz plz continue
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great start continue soon Smile
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thank u friends..... Tongue .....I will be able to continue only after a week...Exams going on... Cry Plzz forgive me....
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nice part and love the name!!
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