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FF-Ritz and Armaan’s love

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Posted: 23 November 2007 at 9:32am | IP Logged
Hi everyone, iam also a big fan of DMG. i liked the fanfics written here...so i want to write a fanfic.so, i started from thursday's episode...

     Ritz is ready for the viva test. In the next morning atul, sapna n anji wishes her all the best in the locker room.Ritz thens look for armaan but he did not came yet. Later when she enters for the test, armaan stops her and wishes her.
R: armaan main kabse tumhari intazaar kar rahi hoon...
A: woh main tumhare liye pray karke aaya hoon isliye...
 then Ritz smiles at him Smileand went to the test. All interns go for their rounds
In the locker room all waits for Ritz and Ritz came and says 'i did well results ka wait karni padegi'. Armaan tells 'u will be back to sanjeevani definitely' and stares at her and the background music starts.
Later Dr. Keerthi says toRitz that u passed and can come to sanjeevani and also can participate in the cultural activity.All felt happy and Armaan says'main jaanta hoon meri basket mujhe nai chodegi'.
 On the next day in the locker room Ritz looks upset for her mother and then atul comes there n asks wat happened?
R: kuch nahi atul main teek hoon..
Atul: arey Ritz tum mujhse chuparahi ho...agar tume koi advise chahiyenaa to tum mujhe bataoona..Armaan ki tara
R: Armaan ne advise liye tumse?
Atul: haa..uski ek adopted girl frnd ti ....uske liye woh mujhe raat ka neend bhi cheen liya. mujhe lagata hai ki woh usse bahut pyar karta hai..aaj kal Armaan rota hai isikavajese aur hastabhi isikevajese...
R: ( with shocking face) kya...tum jante hai kaun hai woh?
Atul: nai...
and tells her all the advises gave to him...and says her 'don't tell to Armaan abt this agar use patachala na ki main yeh baat tumse kehdiya woh meri tange toddega.
 Atul pager rings and he lefts....
R: iskamatalab Armaan mujse....maine socha woh majak karraha hai...maine Armaanse pyar karke ghalat naikiya(tells to herself)Embarrassed

Armaan comes there ...Ritz completely losts herself and stares at Armaan.
Ar:hi....(with a lovely smile) welcome to sanjeevani.
R: hi Armaan
they went to their wards.
In the canteen Ritz sits and all comes there and hugs Ritz for her return to sanjeevani .Ritz sees Armaan and wants to hug him but then Atul comes between them.
In the evening all discuss abt party for Ritz return in the locker room. Finally they decides and goes home. Only Ritz and Armaan were in the locker room.
Ar: basket....main bahut khush hoon tumhari aane se...
R: main bhi Armaan...Armaan main tumse kuch kehna chahti hoon....
 she slips and going to fall but Armaan holds her in his arms...
R: (smiles) main jaantee hoon tum mujhe girne nai doogi.
pager rings and Ritz says to him' main tujhe baadme miloongi'.
 she walks to the door and again she come backs to Armaan...and they both stares at each other...
 suddenly Ritz hugs Armaan...
R: thanks Armaan ...thank u for everything( tells very softly)
 she leaves him and goes to work
Ar:(pinches his hand) yeh sach hai?... i love u basket( says to himself)

In the next day Ritz feels sad abt her mom and atul abserves it. Atul tolds to other interns...
Atul: Ritz ko khush karni padegi yaar...
Sapna: lekin kaise..anjali tum  kuch socho..
Atul: nahi anjali tum soch kar pareshaan mat hoona....main tume aise nai dekh sakti.
Anjali: oh! really
Atul: haa ..mera ek idea taa ..
Sapna: Atul tum aur idea..
Atul: mere idea kabhi flop nai hua...hain naa Armaan.
Armaan: arey tum mujhe beech me matlana yaar...
Atul: teek hai..Armaan tum bas girjaayo jab Ritz aaye....woh bahut khush hogi tum e dekh kar...
Ar: tum paagal hu aa kya...woh kabhi aise nai karegi..
Atul:main jaantahoo ki tum aur ritz only fighting no meeting.. tum asie karona yaar..
Anji: yeah i think so...
Ritz is entering the locker room and then all says to armaan to fall..and Armaan fells.
Ritz sees that and comes to him takes him in her arms ...
R: Armaan kya hua? Armaan...(she shouts)
Ritz starts crying ...Cry
R: Armaan tume kuch nai hoga main hoona tumhare saath....Atul jaldi paani laa..
 all panicked and then armaan opens his eyes ...
R: Armaan tumne mere saath ...aur aisi maajak..
Ritz leaves the room and Armaan follows her and he takes her to the stairs..
Ar: Riddhima meine ee sab jaan buchkar nai kiya...atulne ...
R: Armaan mere to jaan hi nikalgaya aisi dekh kar...tum nai jaanti Armaan agar tume kuch hogaya to ........
Ar: iam sorry Riddhima...please don't cry
R: oh! just shutup Armaan tumko samaj menai aata kya?....(seriously she goes nearer to him and hold his collar) main tumse...
 pager rings....
R: i have to go..(she goes forward 2 steps)
Ar: basket keh kar jaayonaa
R:(smiles) kya kehna hai..Tonguesee u
Ar: main jaantahoon ki tum mujhse pyar karti ho...lekin itna pyar.....(smiles)basket tum to jaroor kehna padegi ( says to himself).Big smile

 hey! how's the story? if u like it i'll continue the Armaan and Ritz love..
 hoping for reply...

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Posted: 23 November 2007 at 9:54am | IP Logged
really nice plz continue Big smile
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Posted: 23 November 2007 at 10:07am | IP Logged
very nice..plz continue!
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Posted: 23 November 2007 at 10:07am | IP Logged
Nice start
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Posted: 23 November 2007 at 10:09am | IP Logged
continue plzzz Smile
preetiar Senior Member
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Posted: 23 November 2007 at 10:25am | IP Logged
thanx for replies n i need ur comments also...
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Posted: 23 November 2007 at 5:05pm | IP Logged
plz continue..im relli looking forward to it...

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Posted: 23 November 2007 at 9:05pm | IP Logged
wow!itz a ud part.

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