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hipreet Goldie
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Posted: 12 November 2007 at 4:15am | IP Logged
Hi I'm new to writers corner and i just read this story............its wonderful and sad story.......liked it
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Posted: 12 November 2007 at 7:15am | IP Logged
Thanks hipreet! Embarrassed
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Posted: 12 November 2007 at 8:51am | IP Logged
aww it's sad na Ouch ...but I loved ur story...do write more ...if u canSmile

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Posted: 13 November 2007 at 3:31am | IP Logged
I love the ending.

One suggestion: Instead of giving us high drama from the beginning itself, build the tension instead. That way, your ending will have a better impact.
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Posted: 13 November 2007 at 7:21am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Morgoth

I love the ending.

One suggestion: Instead of giving us high drama from the beginning itself, build the tension instead. That way, your ending will have a better impact.


Thank you for your suggestion..I will definitely keep this in mind next time...very helpful!Big smile
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Posted: 13 November 2007 at 7:21am | IP Logged
Originally posted by nitu07

aww it's sad na Ouch ...but I loved ur story...do write more ...if u canSmile


Thank you nitu..will write sometime..EmbarrassedEmbarrassed
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Posted: 14 November 2007 at 6:25pm | IP Logged
OMG!!! holy shit tha was so gudddd....damn i am so showing this to my frends to read how sad..but reall gud=P Big smile Big smile ...write more!! Big smile plzz..ur a gud writer and i liekd how u described it ..liek its different but real gud
Big smile <3
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Posted: 15 November 2007 at 12:50pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by starry_eyes29

OMG!!! holy shit tha was so gudddd....damn i am so showing this to my frends to read how sad..but reall gud=P Big smile Big smile ...write more!! Big smile plzz..ur a gud writer and i liekd how u described it ..liek its different but real gud
Big smile <3


Wow! Thank you starry eyes..really appreciate it ...Big smileBig smile

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