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amazing!!!!!!!!!!

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great part sneha. do con't.

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PART 4
atul's car gets spoilt and angie gets extremely tensed.She tells sir..gaddi ko kya ho gaya??? and then he tells madam i am not super intelligence jo bina dekhe bata doon ki kya hua hai...then angie tells umm sorry..and he smiles..and goes to see..he tells engine garam ho gayi hain...dekhiye..mujhey abhi practice area pahoochna hai...ridhima bhi nahin aa rahi..waha kuch bhi theek se nahin ho raha hoga...aap kuch jaldi kijiye...then atul tells...hello..mein tumhaara naukar lagta hoon kya?? then she tells enough..naukar to nahin lagtey ho..lekin waqt ki kadhar nahin..humhe practice area 10 bajey pahoochna tha..aur 10 yaheen par baj gaye...then atul tells..anjaliji maine gaddi se nahin kaha tha...ki main bahut khoobsorat ladki ke saath hoon...kharab ho jao..taaki mein uskey saath waqt guzaar sako Embarrassed ..she gets furious..TUM TUM..aah fuhget it..she takes her cell..and tries to call the city taxi..but he denies tellin the place it too far off..atul was just staring at her getting tensed.and then she tells..kuch karo..11 baj gaye..then he tells..mujhey to bahut maza aar raha hai..she tells....you rich spoilt brat..then he tells ok ok..aagey chalkar dekhtey hai ..she agrees..and then they both start walking..he tells her tum itna tension kyu le rahi ho..your with me..the guy every grl wants to be with..enjoy my company..MR.atul..mein unme se nahin hoon jo aapkey saath waqt guzaarna chahegi..main apni naukri nahin khona chahti..mujhey aur koi kaam nahin kya jo mein tumhaare saath yahaan sadko pe ghoomu paaglo ki tarah...Atul tells..oh yea..dont lie..every girl would do anything just for her to touch me..and they both get into an arguement..and atul notices a rock in angie's path and tells her anjali..but she shuts him..and then TRIP..she trips over the rock but atul holds her..and they both are looking into each others eyes..and she tells..umm mujhey chhodo..then atul is looking at her..then she tells CHHODDDOOO..then atul comes back to earth and leaves..she tells thank you..he tells MY PLEASURE..then gives a flirtous smile..and she gets bugged again...GOD..tum kaisey ladke ho?? pata nahin tum jaisey ladke se ladkiyaa pyaar kaisey kar sakti hai? i pity the girl who would marry you...Atul thinks..meaning your feeling bad for yourself??? Embarrassed and angie gets extremely tired...and tells ok bass..thats enough.i am tired..then he tels..hello..tum baith gayyi to kabhi nahin pahoochengey..then she tells..mujhse chala nahin ja raha..he tells..main utha doon??she gets furious..and she tells oh shutup.they sat there for 15mins..but she still didnt agree to leave..and atul carries her..and she shouts but he doesnt listen..he tells her..tumhara bas chale to tum poori zindagi wahi par baithi rahogi!
They reach the practise area and he puts her down..and he keeps looking at her and she looks at him..and then she realizes that she has work..and goes.There atul' best friend ashish comes there..oho..nayaa nishaana uh atul?? then he tells nahin yaar..iss ladki mein kucch alag baat hai...pata nahin..yeh unn ladkiyo mein se nahin jo meri ek I LOVE YOU ke liye kucch bhi kar de..i dont when i am with her i feel different...then ashish tells omg...atul tujhey kya hogaya???

EPISODE ENDS

precap:ashish tells atul i am sure your in love...you shud take tips from armaan..JO ridhima ko pata sakta uske liye anjali kya cheez LOL

sneha

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Posted: 19 November 2007 at 6:04am | IP Logged
precap is 2 guud....
jo ridzi ko pata sakta hai...lolzie..
2 guud part...
cont soon... Wink
im w8in..

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Posted: 19 November 2007 at 5:24pm | IP Logged
amazing!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Posted: 20 November 2007 at 5:41am | IP Logged
nice yaar
plzz continue.

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Posted: 20 December 2007 at 2:44pm | IP Logged
Hey sneha....gr8 part 2 gud ab jaldi se doosra post kardo Wink Wink

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Posted: 20 December 2007 at 3:08pm | IP Logged
awesome really loved it plz continue soon

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