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Dosti ya Pyaar 3 love story started pg 22 (Page 4)

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Posted: 01 November 2007 at 11:53am | IP Logged
hey nice one dear......i havnt dissapeared anywhere....i read it..........but amrita shahid ke saath rehti hai??
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Posted: 01 November 2007 at 12:46pm | IP Logged
Great updates.
liked it.
plz cont .soon
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Amrita takes his shoes off makes him lie in the bed she starts to take his jacket off when Shahid touches her hand an electric current went pass her body. She never had this feeling before when he touched her hand why now.
Amrita was about to leave when Shahid held her hand
S: Math jao na plz
A: Lekin mujhe tu jana padega Shahid. Aur tum tu aise keh rahin hoon ki main ek doosri sher main rehthi hoon. I just live down stairs.
Shahid didn't listen to her and pull her hand she fell right on top of him.
S: KAREENA MUJHE CHOR KI MATH JAO PLZ.
Hearing this Amrita was really upset she thought to herself he was asking me not to leave just coz he thinks I'm Kareena. She left his apartment n went down in to hers. She sat there thinking abt wat happened tonight flashbacks were coming back to her.
Next morning she got ready early n left for college without waiting for Shahid. Mainly Shahid takes her to the college on his bike. She was wearing this with a bit of gloss on long earrings and he hair tied up in a pony tail with a bits of her fringes out.

Shahid woke up n had the worst hangover he couldn't even lift his head up
S: Man I shouldn't have drunk too much.
He got up n had a quick shower after he came out of the bathroom he was wearing this looking as hot as ever n cute.
He knocked on Amrita's door but she didn't answer he waited for couple of minutes when he looked at his watched and saw he was getting late. He left for college n he seen Amrita with the rest of their crew he was quite pissed off with her about this morning. When she saw he was coming towards them she excused herself from there.
A: Hey guys I hve to collect some books from the library
Evryone: Ok cya later
Shahid comes there he says hi to everyone
S: Hey wassup guys wat u lot up to
Su-sujal S- Shahid Kr-Kripa K-kashish
A: wassup buddy
S: Hey
K n Kr together: Hey sup
A: Boy were u drunk yesterday we had to tke u home.
Su: Trust me ur were not in ur senses last night.
S: Did I drink that much
Kr: Yh man
K: Do u even know how upset u made Amrita yesterday.
S: Kya kab main kyun Amrita ku naraz karuga
K: Patha nahin parr kal wooh bohoth upset thi tumhari halath dikh kar.
S: Kahan hai wooh
Kr: Wooh library gaye hai kuch notes collect karne ki liye
S: Ok thnxs.
Shahid leaves n goes to the library.
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Posted: 01 November 2007 at 3:36pm | IP Logged
Great part.
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Posted: 02 November 2007 at 4:00am | IP Logged
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Posted: 02 November 2007 at 4:04am | IP Logged
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Posted: 02 November 2007 at 6:59am | IP Logged
hey cute part........plzz post a bit longer updates dear Embarrassed
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Posted: 02 November 2007 at 7:29am | IP Logged
Originally posted by togepe30

hey cute part........plzz post a bit longer updates dear Embarrassed  I'll keep in mind but I had to update my other ff Kya Yehi Pyaar Hai in the DMG forum if u hve time do check it out Big smile

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