hi guys ...................... i myself enjoy a lot reading fanfics n 2 day decided 2 make 1 of my own............... so here it goes.........
part 1
its gonna be ridz's bday d next week..................
everybody cums 2 d hospital as usual............evry 1 is dere in d locker room except 4 ridz..............so anjali tells every1 bout ridz's upcoming bday...............atul very excitedly replies"are wah............... ridz ka bday hai wednesday ko!!!!!!!!!!!ye to baut achi bat hai...........kyu na hum log kuch kare uske liye"
anjali"to main tumhe ye bat aur kis liye bata rahi hu dr.atul?"
atul saying 2 sapna jali anjali kahin ki......
armaan thinking bout ridz n smilling n his background muzic is being played..............n den he says "hum sab log basket ke liye 1 surprise party prepare karte hai"
anjali"so dr. atul.........main aise ideas expect kar rahi hu................hai apke paas aisa kuch"
atul"ha hai na........... pichli bar ki tarah is bar bhi ridz ko party mein armaan hi lekar aega"
listening dis armaan bcums quite happy n kisses atul...........atul says chi chi ...........kya kar raha hai armaan>.....n armaan laughs n thnx atul.........
sapna"kyu na hum log ridz ke liye party beech side rakhe................aur sare arrangements main aur anjali kar lenge"
anjali"ya............gud idea"
atul"fir main kya karunga"
sapna"tum............tum...........flowers ka arrangement karna.................vaise bhi flowers ki tumse achi knowledge kie hogi"
atul "ha to fir thik hai"
armaan"aur main basket ko launga.........😊(thinking bout ridz n becuming very happy) aur sare guests ko invite karunga"
n every 1 says ok den armaan asks"vaise basket hai kaha?"
sapna"vo kal rat ko uski nite duty thi na to vo bas ati hi hogi apni shift khatam karke........."
armaan"(feeling bad 4 ridz ) n says"to jab uski shift khatam kab hogi"
n den ridz enters........
anjali"hi ridzi...............kaise ho? baut thaki hui lag rahi ho...........tum ghar jakar aram karo main aj ke liye tumhare cases attend kar lungi"
ridz says .........thnx di par uski koi jarurat nahi hai..........main ghar jakar 1 hour mein vapas ajaungi........
armaan "ha thik hai................ (every 1 luks at him)nahi matlab tab tak tumhare case main aur anji dekh lenge"
ridz "thnx armaan"
armaan smilling at ridz n wen ridz turns 2 laeve he holds her dupatta...........
den every 1 leaves
ridz turns 2 takout d dupatta frm armaaan's shirt which armaan has put janke in hisbutton.........she cums 2 take out d duppata
armaan touches her hand n den ridz luks at him.............dey both start luking at each oder.........armaan holds ridhima's hand .........she den realizes n tries 2 remove her dupatta frm armaan's shirt............her hair cums on her eyes ..........armaan sees dat n tries 2 remove her hairs frm his hands very gently .................she is buzy in removing d dupattan armaan buzy at admiring d beauty of riddima n luking at her in a very romantic way..............n den d dupatta cums out n ridzi leaves..............
n armaan says tum itni khoobsurat kyu ho ridhimma ..................kahin tumhe meri hi nazar na lag jae............... i love u ridhimma............. n den he says nahi ridhimma ko kabhi kisi ki nazar na lage" n leaves
dr. keerti standing behind listens everythng n smiles................ n she decides 2 help armaan armaan n ridhimma 4 patching up their relationship............
its d common room n cricket match is going on n all d docters r dere in d room 2 watch d final moments of d match............ suddenly by mistake d channel gets changed by sum1 n d news channel cum on.............. d news reporter says dat due 2 sum match fixings n everythng of dat soughts d pakistanis n indians are very angry n r fighting wid each oder(d cricket match was between pakistan n india)n den armaan puts back d cricket chaanel n sees d match has also been stopped............. dey put back news channel.............. d reporter is on d roads of mumbai n says dat here is a curfue like situation................ any1 who is cuming on d roads is being killed b d pakistanis............n den it is annonced dat all d interns except 4 dr.armaan hav 2 report 2 dr.keerti bcoz dr.armaan hav already been given his duty..............every 1 leaves..............
armaan is in d common room................ he is still watching d tv news.......... he suddenly remembers dat ridhimma also had left 30 mins be4 only n it takes atleast an hour 4 her 2 reach at her home............he tries 2 call ridhimma but she doesnt pics d phone up..................armaan becums very tensed..............n wen armaan finally decides 2 go n check 4 her..........he suddenly sees sum auto being put on fire n he sees d same dupatta which ridhimma was wearing..........
hey guys...........plz dnt get me wrong........ i was not at all ameing 2 hurt any 1 of urs feelings.........even if den any1 of u felt really bad bout dat,den im really sorry.............i promise it wont happen at all.............so nw widout any mistakes here cums 2nd part of d story...........
PART 2
armaan saw ridz's dupatta.........he was shocked..........n widout waisting any time he quickly confirmed d place of accident frm d tv n with his eyes full of tears he left d hospital in search of ridhimma..........armaan while going saw anji n told her bout all dis.............. she was shocked n screamed at armaan dat he is lying n it cudnt be ridz............she was mourning badly ..............n kept saying dat nthng can happen 2 my ridz.............armaan asked sister lovely 2 calm her down n not 2 inform any1 bout dis so dat d dr.s dnt get distracted n can take care of d patients properly.........
armaan went 2 search 4 ridz in his car.............he was crying very badly..........tears cud not stop cuming out of his eyes...............den on radio it was declared dat d match fixings n all were just sum silly rumours spread by sum1..............n d situation is under control now.............armaan after hearing dis said 2 himself dat"agar meri ridhimma ko kuch bhi hua to main use chodunga nahi jisne ye sab batein felai hai"n tears continuosly kept cuming out frm his eyes...........
armaan thought in his mind of all d nice moments he had spent wid ridz 2day............n suddenly he rememberd dat 2 day he said dat"meri ridhimma ko kahin meri hi nazar na lag jae" n he hit his head hard on starring wheel n said dat"maine aisa kyu kiya, ridhimma ko meri hi nazar lagi hai" n den anoder thought came 2 his mind dat if his luv is true den nthng will happen 2 his ridhimma............
now he had reached d place..............he got out of his car.............n saw dat d auto was still burning n d police had surrounded d place............he came out n in a shking voice asked dat"isme.....isme 1 ladki thi..........vo ...............vo kaisi hai .....????????kahan hai??????????"
policce"dekhiye mr. ye ye baut serious tha............is auto mein jo bhi log the ........afsos ab nahi rahe........sabhi log mare gae.........mera matlab vo auto vala khud aur vo ladki jiski ap bat kar rahe hai"
armaan pulled d police man frm his collar n said"ye kya bakvaas kar rahe hai ap? khuch bhi bol rahe hai" he left his collar n was sitting down n crying very badly..........he was holding ridhimma's dupatta in his hand.........."
den suddenly a little boy came out frm back of a small cart n said 2 armaan"bhaiya...............ap is dupatte vali ;ladki ko dhund rahe hai"
armaan "ha.............ha mughe pata hai vo abhi zinda hai/..........usko kuch nahi ho sakta.......tumhe pata hai na vo kaha hai?plz mughe bata do"
boy"ha chalo mere sath" d boy takes armaan behind d cart.............ridhimma was lying dere .............her head n her arms were bleeding badly armaan tuk ridz's face in his hands n kissed her may times.......he put his chin on her head n cried n said"main jnta tha tumhe kuch nahi hoga"
rihimma was half conscious n said arm..........armaan.......tum agae.........mughe pata tha tum aoge " she said n became unconscious........armaan tuk ridhimma in his arms her n put her in his car.............d boy was also injured so armaan talso asked him 2 cum wid him.........
ridz was on d back seat n d boy n armaan on d front seats.............armaan asked"ye sab hua kaise?'
boy"vo sab log didi ke piche piche bhag rahe the, didi chup chap ai aur mere sath akar chup ke baith gai............vo auto jo jal gaya usme 1 aunty thi jo baut bimar thi .........aur vo log ne auto ko rok kar rakha tha isliye auto ja bhi nahi pa raha tha"
maenwhile armaan was driving n also luking at ridz frm d mirror wid tears in his eyes boy"ddidi ko maine baut roka par vo us aunty ko bachane chali gai.........didi unhe lekar hi arahi thi ki unka dupatta auto mein atak gaya unhone aunty ko auto mein hi bithaya aur apna dupatta utar ne lagi......tabhi kuch logo ne auto pe vo goli chala di jise aag lag jati hai..................vo aunty aur autovala to mar gaya par didi bhar unhe ki vaja se bach...........par didi ko jab main dhire dhire laraha tha us cart ke piche tab didi behoshi mein bhi yahi bol rahi thi ki vo aunty ............vo aunty....."
armaan "luking at ridz n crying said"aisi hi hai meri basket kabhi apni fikar nahi karti...........khud pareshani mein hokar bhi dusro ki fikar karti hai"
dey reach d hospital n armaan takes hr inside d hospital.......he ask 1 of d sister 2 call 4 d strecher n he puts ridhimma dere n asksd ister also 2 take care of d boy n admit him in d general ward............armaan n dr. keerti operates ridz n ridz operation was successful...............but ridhimma was still critical as she had lost a lot of blood...............
dr.keerti asked armaan 4 O+ blood group.........armaan said dr. mera bhi blood group O+hi hai ........main dunga ridz ko blood..........dr.keerti smiled n said jaldi dr.
now ridhimma was under observation n armaan was her dr. now.............which dr keerti hai had done so dat armaan n ridz cud cum closer.........armaan decided dat he wud stay wid ridz 4 d whloe night........be4 going all d interns came 2 meet her n anji crying n said"meri pyaari ridz...............baut achi ho tum...............kyu kiya tumne aisa............n kisses her on her 4head........agar tumhe kuch ho jata to" sapna said"ridz to aj baut lucky hai ki use itni asani se O+mil gaya.......varna to baut mushkil se ye blood group avaliable hota hai"atul smiling at anji n said"tum itni achi ho mughe to pata hi nahi tha..............tumhare itne kadak chehre ke piche itna komal sa dil hai ye to meine socha hi nahi tha"
anji was still hugging ridz................den armaan said"ab tum log jao ......... main hu ridhimma ke sath.......use aram karne do"
sapna "lekin armaan .......tumne bhi to ise blood donate kiya hai...........aur kuch khaya bhi nahi hai na aram kiya hai..........tumhe bhi to blood donate karne ke bad blood chahiye"
ridz was cuming in hosh dhire dhire n heard dis..................but she didnt say anythng............coz she wanted every1 2 go n she wanted 2 tell armaan dat she luvs her.....................she felt like crying after hearing all dis.........coz vo armaan ko baut galat smaghti thi.............
ever1 leaves..............n ridhimma still acts as if she is sleeping n not in hosh..............armaan sits near her puts his hand on her headn kisses her on her 4head.........he den says"agar aj kuch ho jata tumhe meri jaan to main apne apko kabhi maaf nahi kar pata /.............kyuki tumhe meri hi nazar lagi thi"
ridz slowly opens her eyes ........armaan was hugging ridhimma n his head was on her shoulder so he cudn't see har face n armaan was crying............
ridz holds armaan's hand n he gets up n says"tum ...........tum thik ho na ridhimma"
ridhimma luking at armaan wid tears in her eyes n sweaps armaan's tears frm har hand n says"kyu armaan?kyu tumhe meri itni fikar hai"
armaan holding ridhimma's hand n kisses her on her hand n says"kyuki main tumse apni jaan se bhi jada pyaar karta hu"
ridz puylls armaan n hugs him n says"main bhi tumse baut pyaar karti hu armaan ...............main tumhare bina nahi ji sakti"n kisse him on his cheeks
armaan very happy but still wid tears in his eyes says"rihimma agar tumhe aj kuch ho jata to?" n kisses her
ridz"armaan tumhare hote hue mughe kuch nahi ho sakta"
dey both hug each oder n armaan kisses ridhimma many times on her face
den suddenly ridz's heart beats becoms fast n she was unable 2 breathe..........
thnx a lot 4 all ur comments......................i really like wen u all compliment ma ff..................so here is d 3 part
PART 3
ridz was unable 2 breathe..............armaan saw dat n paniced...........]
ar"ridhimma ...............ridhimma...........9.shaking her frm her face)........basket kya hua tumhe ..........basket.............."
ridhimma goes unconscious..............armaan crying badly..........n den ridz luks at armi wid 1 eyes closed................n laughs..........
armaan luks at her n hugs her.................ridhimma tum thik to ho na?tumhe kuch hua to nahi na?tum thik to ho na"?tears slipping frm his eyes
ridhimma holds his face frm her hands n says"armaan .........(.wipping his tears) tum to dar hi gae main mazak kar rahi thi armaan"n kisses him on both his eyes
armaan holds ridhimma tightly n kisses her on her face n puts his head on her lap n says"ridhimma kabhi bhul ke bhi aisa dubara mat karna............meri jaan nikal jati hai..............agar tumhe kuch bhi ho gaya to main mar jaunga"
ridhimma wid tears in her eyes n putting her hand on armaan's mouth(like all heroins do)"armaan tum mughse itna pyaar karte ho? kyu?"
armaan"kabhi apne dil se puchna ki vo dhadkta kyu hai?jis dinnjavab mil jaega us din khud hi samagh jaugi"
ridz n armi hug each oder tightly n armaan kisses her on her neck..........
den armaan asks ridz 2 lie down n hav sum rest..............she sleps n armaan keeps lukin at her 4 sum time but den he als sleeps...............
sorry ppl dis much only 4 2day..................will continue it tomorrow...............promise..............but dnt 4get 2 comment!!!!!!!!
im sorryn guys................4 writting d 4 part so late...........its because i was not having time 2 write such a big post bcoz of my annual function in scul............sorry again.......
so d 4part begins nw
PART 4
its 4am in d morning nw.................AR r sleeping.............suddenly sumthng happens n ridz was unable 2 breathe........(but dis time she was not pretending.........she really was unwell nw............)
armaan gets up n luks at ridz n gets angry..........
armi"basket bas baut ho chuka hai.............maine tumhe kaha tha na aisa mazak mat karna mere sath..........fir bhi tum........"
he gets angry n leaves d room as he thought dat ridhima was still acting.........
armaan goes in locker room n bangs his head on his locker.............
on d oder hand ridz is unable 2 breathe...... sum dr. passing by sees dis n cums running over dere...........he checks her pulse n everythng n immmediately ask d sister to call dr.keerti...........
after 10 mins wen keerti was hurriedly cuming towards d ICU she saw armaan sitting on d bench in an angry mood............she is shocked 2 see armaan dere.......n goes 2 him....
k"dr.armaan ap yahan kya kar rahe hai?apko to ICU mein hona chahiye dr.ridhimma ke sath..........kya ap jante hai dr.ridhima ki kya halat hai is waqt"
armi"dr.keerti use kuch nahi hua hai.......vo sirf natak kar rahi hai"
k"acha.......agar aisa hota to mughe hospital se specially phone kyu ata...........ap mere sath aiye.....hum khud hi vaha jake dekh lete hai"
armi"ok dr."
dey reach dere n everythng is calm dere by nw............armi"dekh dr.keerti maine kaha tha na ki use kuch nahi hua hai"
keerti went inside in a bad temper n wen she reaches near ridzshe sees her eyes closed n shouts on her n says"dr.ridhimma ye kaisa mazak hai?"
d oeder dr.standing dere says"
ye ap kya keh rahi hai dr.keerti.....ap inse aise bat kyu kar rahi hai............im sorry 2 say but dr.ridhimma COMA mein chali gai hai"
dr keerti"wat?ye ap kya keh rahe hain?"
armi"wid tears in his eyes n i unable 2 speak nythng)
kerti"checking everythng n den finally believes dat ridz is in COMA
she has tears in her eyes n asks dr.armaan bout wat had happend...........armi told her everythng.........n is expressionless nw.................
keerti n armaan both r unable 2 believe wat has happend but dey have 2.............
k"hume dr.shashank ko inform karna hoga................"
keerti calss up shashank n tells him everythng..............shashank , anjie n nani cum 2 d hospital n all d 3 of dem r crying very badly..........
nw its 7 am n all d interns r wid dr.keerti except ridz............she tells every1 dere duty n atul n sapna r still unaware of wat happened wid ridz.............
aatul"cahlo duties start karne se pahle ridz ko milke ate hai...........mein uske liye flowers laya hu...use baut ache lagte hai na"
sapna"ha chalo atul"
den only angie bursts outn is crying very badly.............armi is also crying n widout saying a word leaves d place n goes to ridz as he is his dr................
atul"angie tum ro kyu rahi ho.........mughe galat mat samgho...........ridz to sirf meri dost hai.............tum aise mat ro............plz galat mat samgho"
sapna"shut up atul..............angie kya hua tumhe ?kya hua anjali?"
den sister lovely is passing by n tells everythng 2 dem n dey both r shoocked n nw all r going 2 meet her.,..............
IN THE ICU
armi"is crying very very badly................ye sab meri vaja se hi hua hai...........na main tumhe chod kar jata aur na tumhe kuch hota"
he is holding her hand n is continuously kissing her on her hand.............den ll 3 of dem enter.............
angie is hugging ridz n is crying..........
angie"armaan meri bhen ko kuch hoga to nahi na............vo thik ho jaegi na"
armi"mein kuch nahi hone dunga basket ko..............vo jald hi hum sab ki tarah kam kar rahi hogi sanjeevani mein"
atul"bechari ridz...anjali tum pareshan mat ho......main hu na tumhare sath......."
sapna"aj hum sab sham ko mandir jaenge...........aur ridz ke liye prayer karenge.............use kuch nahi hoga"
dey all agree 2 wat sapna said except armi
armi"main nahi chal sakta tumhare sath ..............."
sapna"kyu armaan "
armi"jab tak ridhimma ko hosh nahi ajata tab tak mein yahi rahunga iske pass ..........na kuch khaunga na hi piunga."
sapna"aashiq ho to aisa ho"
dey all laugh a bit n den go 2 deis duties..............
armi is sitting wid ridz all d time n taking care of her,................nw its 5 pm n all d interns have finished dere duties n hav cum 2 ICU
angie"armaan hum sab mandir jarahe hai........1 bar fir sochlo chaloge?"
armi nods n dey all leave......................
dat was all 4 the 4th part..........i will continue soon but only if u comment..............
hi ppl..........imsorry 4 d late update coz i had gone on an outing coz ma vacations r going on........so here cums d 5th part of ma ff....
PART 5
arman is sitting wid ridz n luking at her continuosly......he is remembering of all d gud times he had spent wid ridz........
on d oder hand all r praying very seriously in d temple 4 ridz's health..........dey all hav gone 2 d same temple were ridz always goes n d pandit knows dat angie is ridz's sis........
wen pandit asks her dat y hasnt ridz visited d temple since 2 days as she daily goes 2 d temple.......angie bursts out crying n sapna tells d pandit everythng..........
p"ridhima to baut achi ladki hai .......uske sath aisa kyu hua.........beti tum chinta mat karo...bhagwan se sache dil se prathna karo to vo tumhari bhen ko jald hi thik kar denge"
he says dis n givesdem sum jal n told dem to put it in ridz's mouth........
armaan is still sitting wid ridz n waiting 4 sum kind of movement frm her...........just den atul angie n sapna entern giv dat jal to armaan nd ask him 2 feed it 2 ridz as d pandit had told...dey all leave saying dis ...........
armaan puts d jal in ridz's mouth.........a drop of water cums out from her mouth n armaan drinks it which seems just like he kissed her(same as in kc episode)just den he notices sum movement in ridz's hand...........he widout waisting any time calls dr.shashank.......
as he was on his way 2 sanjeevani he n was cuming 2 meet ridz only, he quicklycame inside nd did all d things dat were needed..........(i dnt knw nythng bout medical)armaan was helping him all dis time............
after everythng was donedr.shashank sits down on his knees n armaan bcomes very scared at dat time....he goes 2 shashank n asks him wat happend.........he sees tears rolling out of shashank's eyes..........he becomes more scared n continues 2 ask him again n again dat wat happened.......shashank hugs armaan n says "dr. ridhimma ,meri beti aur apka pyar (armaan becomes shock dat howcum he knows dat dey both luv eachoder)ab bilkul thik hai aur comma ke bhar hai"
listening 2 dis armaan hugs him baqck n becomes very happy.......thnku dr.shashank"
s"dr.shashank nahi beta........papa kaho"
a"lekin apko kaise pata?"
s"shayad ap bache ye bhul jatehain ki hum bhi is age se guzar chuke hain aur hume bhi dikhta hai ki itni concern 1 ladke ki agar 1 ladki ki taraf ho to vo sirf dost nahi ho sakte"
arman blushes a little
s"ab sharmana band kariyeaur jaldi se tayar ho jaiye kyuki 12 bajne vale hain aur kal apki ridhima ka bday hai....aur kuchi der mein use hosh bhi ajaega to ap jaldi se tayar ho jaiye"
a"ji dr.........i mean papa"
shashank smiles n leave while armaan cums n hugs ridz n kisses her on her forehead........n says i love u ridhima
justden ridz opens her eyes........n she keeps her hand on his face n dey both kiss eachoder on lips.....
PROMO 4 THE 6TH PART!!!!!!!
its ridz's bday! n dey hav a lot of romantic scenes in the darkroom in which dey had wen armi was d patient!!!!ridz is given a surprise beech party!!!!!!she wears sumthng really different as per the theme which armi decided!!!!!!!!SHE LUKS DAMN HOT, SEXY BEAUTIFUL,PRETTY n u all can add watever u feel like wen i'll giv d description in d 6th part.........
so 2 knw bout d theme n ridz's description keep reading my ff!!!!!!!
LUKING AT RIDZ WILL SUM1 ELSE ALSO FALL 4 HER??????????
to knw bout it keep reading!!!!!!
Edited by peppie - 16 years agoya sure.........dnt u worry at all.............bdw thnx everytime i post u comment........thnx a ton!!!!!!!!!my inspiration gal!😊
