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Posted: 24 October 2007 at 4:52am | IP Logged
Originally posted by iamsmart

amazing concept loved it
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i hope angad is not a ghost LOL


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LOLLOLLOL..He might be..Big smileLOL Thnkx for the comment.. Appreciate it
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Posted: 24 October 2007 at 4:52am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Sabrinaa xo

that was great!! Clap Embarrassed
oo, oo i want angad to be a ghost!! LOL
-i might be the only one??   Embarrassed

anyways, nice update and waitting for the next part! Smile Clap Clap


SmileThnkuuuu hun..hehe yeah..we;ll see what happens..he might be he migth not be..hehe! Thnkx again

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Posted: 24 October 2007 at 4:53am | IP Logged
Originally posted by angelic shaz

oumaaaaa its gr8 awesum!!!! Clap Clap
love it
cnt wait for more
continue soon Big smile


woah..Ur sigyg full of Jatin i see!!EmbarrassedLOL Thnkuu!! Luv u!

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Posted: 24 October 2007 at 4:54am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Rhydima

oh my god..i m totally in luv wid ur story... Wink


~ Thnku I really appreciate the commentEmbarrassed..Hope you continue to like itEmbarrassed

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Posted: 24 October 2007 at 4:55am | IP Logged
Originally posted by iqbals4ever

awesome story cont soon plz!!!!! Clap


ThnkuuuuuEmbarrassed Appreciate the comments..

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Posted: 24 October 2007 at 4:56am | IP Logged
Originally posted by mintfresh

interesting concept
plz cont soon Smile


Thnkuuuu!! will do!!Big smileBig smile

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Posted: 24 October 2007 at 4:57am | IP Logged
Originally posted by sujalangad_rock

nice start...
conitnue soon


~ Thnkuuu..and yeah wil do later..!!Big smile

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Haunted Love

 ~ Things begin to repeat

 His arm was around her waist before she could run into it...
He looked down at her, she wasn't facing him, but her hair blew into his face. Kripa stopped screaming and started breathing hard, her hand was on his arm, she held it tightly, she slightly stood up with his support, he watched her, he still couldn't see her face. Kripa still breathed hard and fast, she looked to her left to see who it was and found her self staring straight into gorgeous brown eyes. He gazed straight back to her beautiful big blue eyes. They continued facing each other, until a huge puff of smoke blew into Kripa's face, she started coughing…

Kripa started choking; her hand was on her chest as she continued to cough countlessly.
"Do you mind not choking me??? She said, breathlessly *cough, cough*..she started taking deep breaths, her coughing gradually stopped, she looked up to see him, but he wasn't there. Where did he go? She thought to herself, as if this night wasn't creepy enough. She felt someone tap her from the back, she turned around, another puff of smoke blew into her face, she started coughing again but not as bad this time "seriously will you stop, muhje koi shuk nahin hai lung cancer se marne ki liye" He laughed at her, "seriously chill, have you never tried to smoke? " No actually I haven't, Why would I want to kill my self?" She remarked back. Kripa still hadn't seen his face properly, but how could she, he kept blowing puffs of smoke in her face. Kripa faced up to look at him, she found her self looking at a face that could have belonged to a Greek god, his eyes stood out to her the most, the pair of eyes she found her self staring into earlier when he saved her. She still hadn't Thanked him..

"Urrm..yeah Thanks for you know, saving me.." "Woh hi toh, you just told me I'm killing myself by smoking, then what the hell do you think you were doing? Your were running into that sharp point as if it someone was offering you free money.."  He looked at her as is she was some psycho. "Listen, I couldn't stop myself, especially after hearing that…" Her voice drowned, she remembered what happened, she looked down onto the floor, the expression on her face was confused and agitated. Angad looked at her, he had to admit to himself, even though this girl was kind of weird she was extremely pretty, especially her eyes, but it was kind of dark, he had barley seen half her face yet, he couldn't imagine what she would look like in light… "Waise, what did you see, and why were you screaming STOP?" He asked as he scanned her face. "Maine..urrm I was like downstairs, looking for candles..me Josh and Mishti, and then I smelt this weird smell and it kind of led me in a trance, and then followed the smell and I got up here and then the smell kind of vanished.." she said all this hesitantly. Angad looked at her as if she was a psycho. "tumhara deemak to teek hai na, a smell..haha.." he started laughing. Kripa looked at him, he found one of the scariest experiences of her life funy?

 Angad laughed even more "What a joke, a smell..haha" "Did you not here a ring, and the people clapping and whistling..???" Anagd laughed even more "haha..Ok this just gets better.." He continued smoking.." Kripa looked at him.." Fine, laugh..I'm not lying I heard something. Thanks again, she turned around to leave. Angad grabbed her by the hand, he dropped his cigarette on the floor and put it out.
Kripa turned around to face him and look at him, she had a stern look on her face she was just about to tell him to let her go, but he spoke before "Tum kya akele phir jah paoghi?? He laughed.. "Come On baby I'll take you" He pulled Kripa. Kripa wanted to tell him,s eh didn't want him escorting her, but she couldn't, the ringing creeped her out so much...

Once again Kripa entered darkness but this time along with Angad, he still had his hand tightly round Kripas arm, they walked through. "Waise, the Names Anagd Khanna" he let her go and got a lighter out of his pocket and turned it on. He lifted it upto Kripa's face she looked extremely beautiful as it lit up her face. "Try not to burn my face please" she said as she started walking a little faster. "Honey your name is.." he winked at her  "Kr…Not interested.." Kripa replied, she laughed to herself, she could have told him her name, but she didn't want to, he was annoying her as it is. "Well..Aise bhatt hai, you know what I have to do with girls who try and show me attitude.." Kripa wasn't really listening… by now they had reached the stairs  "I nick name them, and you miss look like a smelly to me.." he laughed.. "Smelly?? What the.."  .."Well, you're the first girl, who starts telling me that she smelt something in this house..you know you ever thought, maybe you smelt yourself.." He got a little closer to her and smelt her neck, she smelt of strawberries, it was a sweet smell. "you smell good..aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa" Anagd didn't have a chance to finish his sentence. He started screaming loudly, he had lost control of his body as his feet slipped. He pulled Kripa along with him as they both rolled down the stairs.."


~ Hope you liked, please comment, next part will be a more intresting, where they take tour around the house..
~ I'd also like to say ThnkU to everyone who commented before..always appreciatedTongue

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Edited by ~Ouma*n*Eijaz~ - 24 October 2007 at 9:47am

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