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fan fic 2 (by anvesha rulz ,esha and lamina)
Thanks to anurag's topic single line remix story this idea just struck me abt writing a completely imaginary scene between any of the characters of remix I have thought one on Ashi and Yuvi and am writing it here...guys this is the 1st time I am attempting sumthing like this so I just hope its not awful and that its worth ur time.
Yuvi is in the gym (it has more equipments as compared 2 the actual maurya high gym) on the stepper?.just then ashi enters the gym she says ?hey bhaggu mujhe nahin pata tha ke he-man ko bhi exercise karni padti hai, maine 2 socha tha ke wo bahut powerful hota hai.?
Y: wacko tum se tumhari opinion kisi ne maangi
A: arre maine tumse kuch kaha kya?I was to just talking to myself
Y: ya?what better proof does anyone need 2 prove ki tum is duniya ki sabse wacked out aur pagal ladki ho
A: whatever!
Ashi is on the treadmill and yuvi still on the stepper. Just then a very beautiful girl enters the gym to collect sumthing.Yuvis eyes r continuously following her?and ashi notices this. The girl then leaves the gym
A: hey bhaggu old habits die hard ?.aaj mujhe is saying ka ek bahut hi accha demo mil gaya?.nahi wait?wait?. wait?wo doosri hindi ki kahawat kaunsi thi?.kutte kid um hamesha tedhi hi rehti hai?ya rite suits sum1 perfectly
Yuvi is really furious on hearing this. he says
Y: Anvesha?.tum kehna kya chahti ho ke main kutta hoon.
A: arre maine thodi na aisa kaha?.tum har baat ko itna personally kyun lete ho?waise bhi tumhe apni excersice par concentrate karna chahiye....ab tumhare paas sirf do saal hi bache hain?iske baad tum chahoge na to bhi tumhari height nahi badhegi?MR.2 by 2
Y: stop it ashi?tum saari limits cross kar rahi ho.
A: Main sach hi to bol rahi hoon?.Isn?t it true that more than half the girls in the class are taller than u
On listening to this yuvi completely looses his temper?.he gets down the stepper and walks towards the treadmill.
A: itna sab samjhane ke bawajood tum stepper chodkar mujhe niharne chale aaye?I know mujhe resist karna asaan nahin hai.
Y: Anvesha tum har baat par fight kyun karti ho?.can?t we just live in peace
A: maine kahaan kuch bhi shuru kiya?wo tum hi us ladki ko stare kiye ja rahe the.
Y: O?so now I get the point?.. Ms. Anvesha Banerjee Ray is jealous.
A: jealous ?.jealous of what and why
Y: tum jealous ho kyunki tum mujhse pyar karti ho aur mein kisi ladki ki taraf dekhun ye tum bear nahin kar sakti.
A: tumse pyaar? haan right us din maine hi tumhe apni taraf pull kiya tha na tumhe hug karne ke liye.
Y: woh?woh to bas aise hi?par tumne bhi to reciprocate kiya than na
Before anvesha can answer the treadmill just stops abruptly and ashi looses her balance..and falls of the treadmill but yuvi saves her.she somehow manages to stand upright with yuvis support. their eyes meet ?.both are just gazing into each others eyes?both move closer to each other?Yuvi gives ashi a small peck on her cheek?.just then sid and vrinda enter the gym?they are shocked on seeing ashi and yuvi so close?vrinda coughs on purpose?Both yuvi and ashi are stunned?vrinda says? ye kya ho raha tha tum dono ke beech? and smiles wickedly towards ashi?.both ashi and yuvi look at each other through the corner of their eyes?and blush.