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*~*~SURPRIZE~*~* [SUJAL KASHIS LAST PART]

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Posted: 09 October 2007 at 2:18am | IP Logged
    Sujal:-Ok mumma thek hai ap aur kripa kehtey hai tu muje ye shadi manzur mai ess shadi ky liye tayar hoon.       & nbsp;Kripa:-oh sujal i'm so happy thank God ky tum mann gaye.       & nbsp;Veena:-sujal beta mai bohot khush hoon ky tum es shadi ky liye taiyar ho "KASHISH" sy achi ladki tumy kahin nahe mile ge.       &nb sp;Sujal:-Mumma kashish ho ya aur koi muje kya mai ne tu osy bachpan mei dykha tha muti si thi shararti mai tu sirf ap logun ky kehne pe ye shadi kar raha hoon.[making face]        Veena:-haan magar wo ab esi nahe hai jesa tu samajh raha hai.        Sujal:-Whatever [jesy koi parwah na ho uth ky chala jata hai]        Kripa:-ye nahe sudhrey ga kahin es bar bi tu koi dhmaka nai karne walah i mean koi "SURPRIZE" wesy bi es ki bachpan ki adat hai surprise dyne ki [giggles]              Veena:-Sudhar jaye ga 1 bar shadi ho jaye mai janti hoon kashish ko bohot sanskari aur masoom hai esi liye mai ne ose es nalayak ky liye pasand kiya hai acha ab tum yahan bethi kya kar rahe ho jaldi sy apne papa ko phone karu jaldi ayen un ka nalayak beta maan gaya shadi ky liye..      Kripa:-jee mumma.   [in the office]              Sujal:[thinks] kesi ho ge wo mai ne tu dykhi bi nai chalu jesi bi ho muje kya muje tu sochna chahye saab ko surprize kesy karun....[chehry par smile aa jati hai naughty]

Edited by Anam azhar - 15 October 2007 at 7:16am

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Posted: 09 October 2007 at 2:21am | IP Logged
Ok dear friends ye meri short fiction hai aur es mei sujal bi naughty hai osy surprize dyene ki aadat hai n plz need ur support plz do comments thank u.Anam
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[in home] Lalit:-Kya howa veena muje es tarah ghar kyun bolaya?      Veena:-kyun ky ap ka nalayak beta shadi ky liye maan gya hai lejiye muh metha kijiye [put a lado in his mouth]     lalit:-ye tu bohot khushi ki khabur hai kahan hai ye nalayak?        Kripa:-Office gaya hai.        Lalit:-hmm theek hai mery khayal se hamy baat agay badhani chahiye.Aj sham ko hi shagun le jate hain kya khayal hai?       Veena:-haan ye shahi rahey ga mai senha sahab ko phone kar dyti hoon ky hum log sham ko arahy hai.
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Posted: 09 October 2007 at 3:53am | IP Logged
very nice.. good going.... i liked the start.... Clap do continue soon..me waiting for the next part.. Smile
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Posted: 09 October 2007 at 12:37pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by sun_423

very nice.. good going.... i liked the start.... Clap do continue soon..me waiting for the next part.. Smile
   Thanx alot 4 the comments n liking Smile will continue soon so keep readingSmile
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***SHAB-E-QADAR MUBARIK 2 ALL OF YOU MAY GOD BLESS ALL OF US IN THIS NIGHT OF BLESSING***
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Posted: 09 October 2007 at 12:59pm | IP Logged

Originally posted by Anam azhar

***SHAB-E-QADAR MUBARIK 2 ALL OF YOU MAY GOD BLESS ALL OF US IN THIS NIGHT OF BLESSING***

sane to u!!Tongue and btw, continue this short ff. i will read it...Tongue

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Nice ff dear plz try 2 cont ASAP Tongue

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