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Posted: 29 May 2008 at 3:43pm | IP Logged
although the kiss ended & her hysteria subsided...
her tears still fell....

she continued to cling to him
for what seemed an eternity...

& he continued comforting her...
stroking her...
smoothing out the tendrils from her face..

her eyes were tightly shut
wen she parted from him...

opening them slowly she gazed into his....
& saw nothing but love....

she began to retrace her steps...
moving back..
still looking at him....

& suddenly turned to face away...

standing at the window....
her passive expression not
giving away her thoughts....

she gazed at the sky...
the clouds floating away...
the fog settling down....
the dew drops on the green leaves...

the serene & calm atmosphere was a contrast to
her fast...scary thoughts....

she'd decided to stay away from him...
from his life...
& yet had found solace in his arms...

her anxiety...
her frustration...
her desire for drugs had led her to him...

she was slowly getting addicted...
not to drugs..
but to his presence around her...!

she realised dat she did love him...
yes..i do!
but love was actually a
very small word to express her emotions for him...

she respected him,
cared for him,
wanted him as a partner in whatever she did,
following him wherever he went,

even his presence would last her a lifetime......
she didn't need to hear any words from him..
even silence would suffice...

i think i've loved him since we were kids....
before we even met dat day....

what were dose lines.....


i new i loved you
before i met u...
i've been waiting all my life...


par kya main is relationship ko
aage leja sakti hoon??

how can i make him suffer at my cost?

"don't think about it nia...."

she didn't realise when he'd come behind her...
"i think you need to rest..."

he was facing her now & held her hands...

"it'll take time to drive out of your system...
but you can't afford to be addicted to it...
it's poison for you....

apni zindagi ko apne haathon mein se
itni asaani se mat jaane do....

u might not need yourself...
but there are others who do...
i for one...really..do...!"...he smiled...

for a while she wondered...
was he talking about himself or drugs???

"r..raj...i...can't...
i don't...love ..you"

her voice was quivering...
but she'd regained a control over herself..

she saw a shadow settle behind his eyes....
saw the hurt...
wanted to tell him it was all a lie...
but she turned away...

"take your time nia..."
he added slowly...
his voice not hiding his feelings...

"main tumse pyaar karta hoon...
dat doesn't mean you have to reciprocate it...
filhaal..all you need is a good sleep...
shut your mind to everything else..."
he led her to her bed.....

she lied down & he covered her with a blanket...

kissing her lightly on the forehead he whispered....

"whatever tomorrow brings...
i'll be there for you...as a friend...
as your love...as your support...

whatever you want ....

i'll be standing next to you whenever you feel low...
with open eyes & open arms....

i hope it'll compensate for your
desire to take drugs...
tum dobaara yeh bewakoofi nahin karogi...
ab so jaao..."

he smiled ....sat next to her....
stroking her hair...like a child...
till she'd gone off to sleep...
& then went out....sullen..& saddened...

but he'd not reveal his feelings to her...
for her sake....
he'll continue smiling...
..............................................
the same scenario occurred again
for the next 3-4 days...

she would suddenly burst into tears..&
the three would support & comfort her....

even wen her hysteria faded away
she remained depressed,
talking to herself in isolation...

the usual chatty liveliness had
completely disappeared
& the mood too was depressing...

her injuries had mostly healed
but the bandages were still on...

they irritated her...
but she'd been forced to keep them intact...
one of her legs still hurt for she'd run up the stairs
when she'd got her first attack...

the term 'attack' scared her but she'd
overheard the three talk of her
condition in those terms....

she knew they were trying
to lighten the atmosphere whenever
she was wid dem...
but her foul mood refused to lift....

am i losing it?
am i going beserk?

...or was it simply the lack
of activity dat made her feel alone in this world.....

"guys...bahut din ho gaye hain yaar...
wen will she be out of dat dead-state?"
aalekh looked vexed...

"kuch to karna padega....
she has to step out of her delirium...
na theek se kuch khaati hain..
na theek se baat kar rahi hai...
bus apne room mein locked padi rehti hain..."
raj was apprehensive...

"ek hi raasta hai...
formula 420!.." navin smiled...

"yeh kya hai...?"
aalekh wondered aloud...

"navin!..tu paagal to nahi ho raha hai..
main usse depression se baahar
nikaalne ki baat kar raha hoon..
usme dhakelne ki nahin!"
he looked shocked....

"try karte hain...kya pata !!"
.................................... the next morning ...as naina lay in her room
flipping through the pages of a magazine...

her thoughts reeling ...

i need to get back on my case....

the room burst open...
"oh..sorry..woh haath mein plate thi so
door ko kick karna pada..."

"aalekh?..wat is it?"
she sounded unpleasant...

"kuch nahin...breakfast..
london mein tumhaare liye
kitni baar to cook kiya hai...
yeh lo..your favourite pasta"

she smiled...faintly...
"main neeche aa jaati..."

"madam...yeh sirf tumhaare liye banaaya hai..
un dono namoonon ke liye nahin...
wait..main khilata hoon..."

"i'll manage rocky!
mere haath salaamat hain...."

but he insisted...

she opened her mouth...
& the moment the pasta touched her tongue...
she let out a scream!!

"mirchiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii!!...
ssss....aaahh.....paani...paaaaaniiii...."

he handed her a glass immediately...
and she kept asking for more...

"bas bhi karo!
pet hain yaan kuaan...
paani se pet bharne ka iraada hai
kya?"

"u idiot!!...mirchi ki poori bottle ulat di kya??
paani nahi to kya isse khaaoon...!!.."

she was wringing her hands...
& covering her ears...fanning her tongue...

"get out!!...aur haan...
paani ka jug rakh kar jaana....
duffer kahin ka!...jaa ab...."

"i thought you relished spicy food!"
he looked hurt....

"yes my lord!!...par khaali spice nahin...
it has to be 'added' to food...."
she answered sarcastically...

he was leaving when he collided with navin...

"tu yahaan kya kar raha hai?"

"i cooked pasta for her...
aur madam nakhre kar rahi hai!"

"nakhre!!..aalekh!!!
khud khaa kar dekh...
kaan se dhuaan nikal raha hai!!"
she looked furious...but her colour was returning...

"to hell wid ur pasta...
yeh le chowmein sis...my speciality...
just for you!"

"kya baat hai?..bada pyaar phoot raha hai?"

"waise wat a coincidence na.
aaj hum dono ne hi cooking ka socha!....
anyway...jab tak raj gets your tea...tu yeh kha lena!"

very smartly...he avoided her question!
the aroma was filling the room..&
she realised dat she'd been really hungry...

she picked up her plate...and began eating...

"yummy..."

the second time she picked up the fork...
her wail filled the house.....

she shrieked like a maniac...
& raj came running inside...

"shit nia!
kya hua??....r u alright?...
having an attack again?"

"yes!!...a fury attack...
wat d hell is dis?"
she pointed at her fork....disgusted!

"chipkali...kyon?"
sooooooooo innocent!!

"raaaaj!!...
mere khaane mein chipkali kya kar rahi hai!!.."
she was red with rage ....

"quite obvious isn't it??!!
share kar rahi hai..."

"kya?..share?"

"haan..tumhaara khaana!"
he grinned....

"really!..u find dis very funny....
bhaaaaaaaaaaai!!"
she screamed...& navin rushed up...

"ab kya hua?...saare ghar ko sar par kyon
utha liya hai?"

"come...here...!" she ordered rigidly...

the moment he stepped forward...
she took the entire plate
& smashed it on his head....

raj began laughing...

"awesome hairstyle nanoo!!
yeh lo nia...iced-tea...
should cool your head...!
god navin!...u look so cuteeeeee..."

& he patted his cheeks....

"thnx raj...aaj to hadh hi ho rahi hai...
dono ki recipes mein panga...
i wonder kahin yeh...."

she gulped down her 'ice-tea'....
and her reaction...

well i bet you guessed it...!!
it was yet another scream....

dis time so huge
dat the guys felt the walls would fall-down!!

"i...wondered...right!!...
fooling me!!....raaaaaaaaaaaj...
u're dead!!..."

she jumped off her bed &
what began was a chase around the house...

naina limping around throwing
curses at all 3 of them...

"ek mirchi khilaata hai...doosra chipkali...
aur teesra!!...
meri jali hui tongue pe ice-tea bol kar mujhe
boiling hot tea pilaata hai!...

where's d world heading too!..
bhaagte kyon ho!!...

i'm here to murder the three of you...
bigde...batameez...scoundrels...!"
she tried her level best to catch them...
but to no avail...they were just too fast for her!

tired & defeated...she went out to the garden..&
sat down on a chair...

"don't u dare show me your faces!
hadh hi kar di...!
acting like 10 year olds!

oh hell!!...i should've guessed...
formula 420!!...DAMN U !"

They came out laughing...
glad to see her reacting like her usual self...
throwing acid words at them...!

"wow navin!...it worked...
even after so many years!.."
raj smiled...

"dat's coz our dear nia hasn't grown up a bit!"

he answered...loud enough for her to hear dem...

"go...to...hell!"

they all stepped closer to her....&
circled her chair...

"a SORRY...won't work!...
so...GOOOOOOOOOO!........AAAAAAAAH!..
PUT ME DOWN!!"

She yelled...they'd picked up her chair...&
were whirling it around in a circle...
giggling all d while....& finally broke into a song....


aalekh- ishq mohabbat...pyaar ki baatein..
bekaar ki baatein...jhoote hai saare waadein...
( putting her down)

navin- rasmein na jaane, kasmein na maane....
kare jo hum chaahe...
(pulling her by the waist)

raj- hum to bigde shehzaade.....
hey..hey...baby...baby...
jee lene de is pal ko..
hey..hey...baby...baby...
kal ki sochenge kal ko...

aa jaa yahaan mere sang aake
zaraa jhoom le jaanejaan...
( dancing with her)

aalekh- kis ko pata jaane dhal
jaaye kab jawaaniyon ka nasha...

navin- ho madhoshi mein kho jaane de...

raj- hota hai jo bhi yaara ho jaane de...

doori rahein naa darmiyaan.....

( pulling her closer...& winking at her)

this time she couldn't control her smile....


"NAUTANKI!!...POORE NAUTANKI HO!!
KABHI KUCH TO NORMALLY KAR LIYA KARO.!!"
"chal nia...bahut ho gaya!
itna bhav to main apni
girlfriend ko bhi na doon!"

navin lifted his collar...like a 'gunda'..

"abbey chal-chal!
kisi ki kismat itni kharaab nahi
hai ki tere saath 'lafda' kare...

girls have a better taste!"

she put his collar down...
as if putting him in his place....

the day thus ended brightly for them with nia..
(it seemed!!)...back to her usual chilled out self!

in d evening....
restless she decided it was high time to get back to work...
So she called up samir..

"hi...kaisi ho?"
his voice sounded weird...

"badi jaldi yaad aaya hai poochna?"
she'd been wondering why no one from her office had
contacted her...it'd been so long...&
yet not even a phone-call had come

"don't give me dat shit atleast!
i've been trying to get to u for the last 10 days...!

par tumhaara cell kaam nahi kar raha hain..&
your so- called 'protectors' didn't lemme talk to u!"

so...this was it!!
no wonder...she turned around
& glared back at them...

probably comprehending her reaction..
they all looked away!

"not again!..i'm sorry...anyway...
main kal se field work mein return karti hoon!"

"sorry!"

"wat?"

"nia...we're ...
we've handed it to someone else...
waise bhi tum bar mein kaam
nahi kar sakti thi ab....
we all decided to replace you on the project..
it was pointless..."

she'd been sitting in d living room..
and the shock she felt jolted her out of the sofa...
they were all sitting there....
& wondered what had gone wrong!



hope you enjoyed the initial RN bit...
formula 420..., the song ;)
& the last bit...well..she's fired it seems!!

anyway gtg...
byeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

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Posted: 30 May 2008 at 6:01am | IP Logged
very goodd..cool.... Clap continue soon.. Smile
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Posted: 30 May 2008 at 7:34am | IP Logged
formula 420??? ya kaisa formula hai Confused


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o gosh LOL LOL LOL that bit was too funny LOL LOL LOL and the song selection was cool too Clap   Clap Clap u rock Wink


ud soon, okay??
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Posted: 02 June 2008 at 5:37am | IP Logged
gr8 update yaar but RN ko alag mat karo we want to see more RN scenes plzzzzzzz.............. Smile
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Posted: 24 June 2008 at 2:57pm | IP Logged
"POINTLESS!!..u can't..do..this..to..me!"
she yelled...

"god dammit!...
i've been sweating so hard on this...
itne saare proofs...
it's the most prestigious
assignment of my career samir!
...you can't kick me out!"

"relax naina..itna personally yeh sab mat lo...
there's a lot of paper work..."

"now u don't give me dat shit!!!
paperwork..my foot!...yeh mera case hain...
& i swear i'll kill anyone who comes in between!"

"par naina..u've just risked your life..
ghar par thode din rest karo..."

furious..she picked up a knife close to her &
began tearing her bandages off!...

the others glanced nervously at her...
"i risked my life..
& i'll do it again!

mere liye yeh decide karne
waale tum hote kaun ho!!
i can very well handle myself
...& i'm still on my case!...
you're not the boss remember!..
we're both heading the unit!"

"fine!..aa jaao...it's your decision...par"

she slammed the phone down...

raj, navin, aalekh rushed forward...

"stop it babes!!...you're not supposed to
open them abhi!" aalekh shrieked..
but she continued..

"main jaa rahi hoon....z..
ziya se milne...i don't know wen i'll be back..."

"tum kahin nahi jaa rahi!!"
navin stopped her...

just her look warned him to stay away...
nothing could stop her dis time...except...


TING-TONG!

"tum dono yahaan?..."

raj had opened the door & was surprised to see
huda & abhi standing at the door....

"kyon?...nahi aa sakte kya?"
huda smiled...

"a...come on in...
mood thoda kharaab hai.." he whispered...

"i heard dat!!...
aur mood thoda nahi bahut kharaab hai!"
nia glared at them...

"it's all because of you guys!
why d hell didn't u lemme talk to samir??!!
they decided to throw me off!"
she accused...

"tumne apni condition dekhi thi nia...!
how d hell could we let u back?!"
navin shouted back...

"alright guys!!....cease fire please...!
naina...actually i forgot to give you this..."
huda handed her bag to her....

"yeh...oh my god!!"

a smile lit up on her face...
"u got my bag back!!..."

as d others wondered what was
so special about her bag..,

nia jumped on the wooden table &
den again to land right in front of huda!

"stop jumping naina!..u'll hurt yourself..."
raj warned..

but she ignored him...
& snatched it from him...

"tumne isse khola to nahin??"
she asked...almost accusing...

"wat?!..n...nahi.."

"gud!....& ...thanks..."
she quickly kissed him on the cheek..
suddenly she ripped it open &
began emptying its contents....

the others were surprised
to find loads of stuff falling out...

& shrugged their shoulders wen huda
looked puzzled!

after all the contents fell out...
she began turning a knob inside her bag...

& finally
with a triumphatic grin took out a digital camera!

but before she could relish the idea...
her sight fell on something & her smile faded....

a weird look came on her face...
"main....abhi..aati hoon!"

leaving almost everything there..
she rushed up the stairs...
& locked herself in....

meanwhile huda felt something strange...

"ah...guys..."
he rubbed his chin...

"woh...don't mind...i actually ...did open
her bag....aur filhaal ..some packets...
stand missing...drugs??"

everyone paled at the thought...

"oh shit!!.."

they rushed up the stairs....

"i thought she was over them.."
aalekh looked worried..

"naina!!...i hope you
remember your promise!!"
raj yelled....

"koi faayda nahin!...
lets break the door..." navin decided...

after a mighty push the door gave way...

naina shrieked &
hid the contents in her hand...

her eyes were bloodshot!

"w...wat?"

"wat!!!...u'r asking me??"

navin pulled her by her arm &

WHACK!...

slapped her hard...!

"navin!!" the others screamed..

"u guys will stay out of this!!"

he commanded...stern & serious...


naina fell on her knees...
not because she was upset...

but simply coz the packet had
fell down from her hand...
& the white powder was spread on the floor!!

the slap didn't affect her a bit!

it was as if she'd gone blind
to everything around her....

"u don't get it do u??"
navin asked calmly...

"theek hain....u can have it...!"
she looked up...
smiling expectantly...
while the others stood bewildered...

"navin yeh tu..."
but abhi was forced to shut-up
wen navin glared back...

"jitna khaana hai kha...but sis...
ek baad samajh le...

jitna tu drug intake karegi...
utna main bhi karoonga!!

right here!..right now!!..
we'll do this together...!"

he picked up a pack ,
tore it open
& began sniffing...

naina stood routed...horrified...
her breathing going haywire...

"STOP!!...STOP IT!
IT'LL KILL YOU NANOO!"
she screamed...

"so what!?

apni life ki jab tumhe koi tension nahi hai...

to main apni life ke saath jo bhi karoon...

is se tumhe kya farak padta hai?...

u'r so selfish sis...
thinkin only about yourself...

par koi baat nahi...
ab main bhi tumhaare nakshe-kadam par
hi chaloonga!"

he continued the drug intake...
"nice....feels great!"

"oh hell!!..."
she slapped it out of his hand..&
threw it out of the window....

"main...i couldn't...stop myself....
it's...it'll kill me bhaai!"
a tear trickled down her cheek...

"look nia!!...
you have to do this on your own...
no one can help you...
& i warn you sis...
next time..i see you with this stuff...
i'll drown in drugs!"

"i'm ...sorry..."

"you have to feel sorry nia!
baar-baar bolne se
problem khatam nahi hogi!"

she slouched & he held her...

"i don't want to lose you naina!
ek hi to pyaari si...nakchadi...
nautanki behen hai meri...."

he hugged her tightly &
she held him for a looooooong time...

"chal...ab rona band kar.....and this time round...
i want you to go back to your work...par haan...
bar se tum door rahogi...is dat clear?"
she nodded...

"i...will..."
as soon as the packets vanished from her sight..
she had realised her mistake...

what also hurt her was raj's expression...

"raj...i'm sorry...i didn't mean to
break the promise...trust me...
it won't happen again..."

sumhow she wanted him to believe her...

after a few seconds he nodded...
"i trust you..."

& it came as close as saying 'i love you'


...........................

she went back to the living room...
& the moment she held d camera in her hand...
her hopes rose...
she was once again excited...

the others had followed her down...

she was making a phone call....

"samir...naina here....
ab jisse pehle tumhaari bakwaas shuru ho...
listen to me very carefully...!

i'm going to be mailing you some photos...
yes photos!!....i told u i had proofs!

anyway...in mein jitne bhi log hain...
i want their background information
on my table first thing tomorrow
morning

....nahi...hmmm...
no!....itni jaldi news nahi telecast hogi...
we haven't even reached the head!...

haan...shak nahi ..yakeen hai...
one of them is behind my accident...
gud..bye"

when she turned around...
she saw everyone staring at her
terrified...dazed...

"aise kyon dekh rahe ho?!"

"someone was 'behind' your accident?"
aalekh enquired...

"wat d hell is dat suppose to mean ?"
raj had paled...whitened like navin who found it
difficult to even speak...

"a...a..i guess i forgot to tell u !
mera accident nahi hua tha...
i was d.....driven ..off the road....
in..intentionally!!"

she swallowed...uneasily...&
so did the others....

"u...forgot..to..tell...me..dis!"
navin's voice rose...

"police...we have to file an FIR...immediately"
he suggested...
the first thing that came in his mind....

"no we don't!!
it'll ruin everything...police ko main
beech mein nahi laa sakti...."

&

the discussion went on........

finally ...naina won the round...
as usual...!
....................................
"yes sir...she's doing fine...
much better dan the last time you saw her"

raj stood in B.C's office the following morning...

"gud..glad to hear she's back to work...
i'm goin to meet her today...

anyway....gettin back to our work
..there's a bad news captain...

one of our most reputed officers
passed away a few days back...

he was an undercover officer
...investigating a case...
and was killed by the enemy.

...yaan phir yeh kahein
ki desh ke liye unhone apni jaan dedi...

....unka case ab tumhe handle kiya ja
raha hai...here's d file...
study it & report to me tomorrow"

"right sir...
a....may i know the name & rank of the officer sir?"

"he was from the 63rd commandement..

a pass out of dis academy....
tum nahi jaante hoge..
tumhaari training to KMA se hui hai...right?"

he nodded...
"his name sir?"

"oh...Captain Begh...Ali Begh...!"
.............................................


well dat's all for today guys.....
hv to rush....

so naina was back to drugs...
& her job's back...

naina-navin ka scene i hope thek tha!

the camera bit was necessary...
photos kaam aayengi...

& lastly...captain ali begh!

dead before he even arrived!!

lets see aapke reactions kaise hote hain...

byeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

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Posted: 25 June 2008 at 3:52am | IP Logged
that was nice..goodd..interesting... Clap do continue soon... Smile
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Posted: 26 June 2008 at 9:22am | IP Logged
sorry for late.......
the ud was really cool...i loved the nia-navin part Embarrassed
good jod Clap

ud soon
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Posted: 27 June 2008 at 6:48am | IP Logged
ud sooooooooooonnnnnn Confused

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