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Posted: 15 May 2008 at 1:42pm | IP Logged

Raj's cell was ringing....

it was 2 a.m...

both navin & raj had dozed
off in the living room itself
waitin for naina to return....
........................
a little while back...

the pulp truck's headlights
had been directly behind her now...,
pushing & blinding her...

the foggy winter night didn't
help her either.....

on top of it all...
a heavy downpour had begun.....

her mind was slipping ...
& she tried to regain her composure...

the first crash left her weak & shaken...

something else too was terribly wrong...

her stomach was doing funny things...
she knew
all she needed was fresh air...
but the brakes had failed....!

the second bump...shot her reflexes...!

dizzy & disoriented..

she fumbled with the seat belt...
but it refused to respond to
her clumsy fingers ....

panic slammed into her as she
struggled to free herself,but
her movements were awkward....

this isn't an accident

she heard d words in her head....
as clearly as they were spoken!

her heart hammered...

had everything been staged??

had he purposely helped her?

how otherwise could she explain his presence??

..a mere coincidence...?????????

she drove in utter disbelief....
but why would he???...

it doesn't make sense!

then she remembered her drink...

oh my!!...
so Thapar purposely drugged my drink!
the goddamn son of a b....!!

she knew she was about to die....

her life would be wasted....!!...

she hated the thought..
she hadn't solved her case....
dammit!

it was indeed her worst nightmare
coming to life...!

she stepped down hard on d accelerator...
but her pursuer was faster...

this she knew...for her instincts screamed
...would be the final blow....!

& her instincts were right...!!!
raj told him everything....

"shit!!...wow!..i mean...reporter!...
dat's quite impressive!
she's one hell of a woman..
uski himmat dekhni chahiye thi!"

"main usse chodta nahin..
par jab maine teri car wahaan dekhi,
i thought she'd be safe!...

i was to stay in touch wid u...
par maine yeh nahi socha tha ki
madam itni badi problem mein fas jaayegi...
woh chod...tu hospital mein kaise pahuncha?"
raj asked...concerned...

"one of dem had a gun...
bullet mere shoulder ko graze karke chali gayi...
but i'm fine now!"

"u were shot!!"
both of dem screamed together...

"u don't have to be so modest!.."
raj replied...

"u risked your life for my sis...
main yeh kabhi nahi bhooloonga dost!"
navin thanked him...

"bakwaas mat karo tum dono!...
naina aaye to give me a ring....
main rakhta hoon..."

"absolutely...take care yaar..."
....................................

back to the present....

waitin for her...the two had dozed off...

the ringing of his cell woke raj up...

he rubbed his eyes..& instantly became alert...
shit!...naina abhi tak nahi aayi....

"navin uth!..yaar nia hasn't returned as yet...
kuch gadbad hai...."

"oh hell!...phone utha..."

he put it on loudspeaker....

"r...raj!!"

"abhi??!!!....kya hua...itni raat ko?"

"navin phone kyon nahi uthata!!?"
he shouted...

"why're u shouting yaar?
...sorry...aankh lag gayi thi!
its 2 a.m....why would i be awake??"

he said... sarcastic...
wondering only bout naina....

"wow!!...yahaan your
sis is bleeding away in pain...
& u're sleeping!"
he sounded disgusted...

suddenly raj & navin grew cold & still....
now they could also here the ambulance....

"shit!!...abhi...abhi..nia kaisi??
oh my god!...is she...is she?"
navin was shaking with fear....
"she's alive...i'm so sorry...!
there's a better way to break the news....
guys...bahut khoon beh chuka hai
...i'm taking her to Apollo
hospital...jaldi pahuncho...
i'll tell u everything...
& please don't panic!!..
raj...don't let navin drive...
u do it....raj?...raj?..."

"huh..wat?...yeah...ok!"

he snapped out of his reverie...
he hadn't heard a word
after abhi broke the news...

"damn!!..teri haalat bhi kharaab hai....
aalekh...aalekh kahaan hai?"

"academy...samaan laane gaya hai...
we're all shifting here..."
navin managed...

"drive carefully then...
i'll see you at the hospital...."

..........................................

they had all driven in complete tension...
wondering if she'd survive....

navin felt numb...& so did raj...
he didn't know how he managed to drive....
the trip to the hospital seemed to take hours...
although in reality it would've taken less than 10
minutes...

aalekh,abhimanyu,yudi,huda,B.C,
navin,raj,shalini...
almost everyone had reached to see her....

standing outside the O.T....with folded hands...
they prayed to see her alive....

after 3-4 hours...when navin felt he
just couldn't take it anymore......
when his tears were exhausted...
the doctor came out....

"she's out of danger...
par hosh aane mein time lagega...

maybe a day..maybe a week at maximum...
khoon kaafi beh gaya tha
...par luckily internal injuries zyaada nahi thi....
but yes...she's had multiple fractures...
it'll be a while before she can resume to
jumping around..."

they all sighed with relief...
atleast she was safe....!!

navin went upto the doctor & hugged him...
"thanks doc!"

"thank this young gentleman..
agar yeh time par nahi aaye hote...to..
your sister wouldn't be here..."

raj went upto abhi...& hugged him...
"great job yaar..."

no one noticed his face...except ziya...
& a light smile crept on her face...
after sometime.....

"tujhe aisi haalat mein nahi aana chaahiye tha...
your arm's in bad shape..." raj told him..

"arrey tumhe meri haalat
par taras khaana chahiye...!!
main to academy hi jaa raha tha..
when i saw his car hanging in dat shape...
mujhe to laga yeh gaya!!...
band baj gayi thi meri!...
aur jab darr-darr ke
aage gaya aur naina ko khoon mein
lat-pat dekha
tab to hosh hi ud gaye...!!"
he really did look exhausted...

"teri car ki to waat lag gayi dost...
i'm sorry huda..."
navin replied...tired....& sleepy

"phir shuru ho gaya!
aisi 100 car tujhpe qurbaan hai yaar....
waise bhi saali khataara
chalti hi kahaan thi..."

all of them laughed at his words...

huda was a genius at lightening
difficult situations...!

"alright everyone...back to home!...
it's too late...i mean too early..."
they all giggled at navin's words...

it was already 7 a.m....

all the others left...

"main yahin hoon...go catch up wid your sleep....
aalekh...ghar par saara samaan rak diyo yaar"

it was d first time dat 'rockstar' spoke...
he'd been too disturbed by wat had happened...
& a realization had struck him...
"theek hain...don't worry...raj chal.."

"a...nahin...main bhi yahin hoon...
u go ahead...freshen up..."

"raj paagal mat ban...
tu ja..."

"ek kaam karte hain...lets take turns...."
aalekh suggested...
"main jaata hoon..i'll come back in two hours...&
get your clothes along..."

the two agreed...& aalekh left....
..........................................

the entire week paased in the hospital..
with friends dropping in....

raj,aalekh & navin were here almost 24 hours....
lookin after her like nurses...

naina ko hosh nahi aaya tha...

raj went upto the doctor....
he was clearly exhausted...
"wat's wrong doc...
ab tak to naina ko hosh aa jaana chahiye tha?"
he was worried....

"dekhiye...i think i'll need her medical history...
koi aur gadbad zaroor hai...was she...
she was on drugs kya?"
raj nodded....

"oh god!...ab samajh mein aaya !
i'll have to do a series of other tests..
reports?"

"yeh lijiye doctor..."

ziya had got them along wid her....

"i'm her personal doctor & friend...
i thought u'd like to discuss the case with me..."

after about an hour...
ziya came upto raj....

"she was drunk!...
uski drink mein drugs the....
dat would explain her
accident...."

"i shouldn't have let her leave..."
he hid his face in his palms....

"listen to me carefully now....
naina ki medications change ho gayi hai...
usse aaj hosh aa jaana chahiye...
she'd feel sick...
depression mein bhi jaa sakti hai.."

"why?"

"coz her body's used to drugs...
aur aaj usse drugs touch kiye 1 hafta ho gaya hai...
her body's not goin to take this change easily...
kuch bhi ho jaaye...remember...
don't let her touch them!!...

not even a bit....
de-addict hone ka yeh last chance lag raha hai..
she'll need all the support & love...
your love raj..."

he looked up to meet her eyes...
"she's a great friend....
i look upto her...respect her ziya...
& i'll always be with her...."

ziya smiled & shook her head...
"you ought to tell her...."

"what?"

"dat you love her...."

at his shocked expression she laughed..
"dat is if you've realised it...!!"

"a.a..are my feelings dat transparent?"

"to a doctor...yes!...
to others....no...
but i'm sure you care..."

she winked & disappeared...
leaving him confused...
indecisive...
......................................

on the third day of her accident she'd
stirred.... raj had been sitting next to her den...
"w....water....raj"

"i'll just get it...."

..............................

"p..paani...i..thought
...i asked for..water..."

raj was still dere...
"the last time you asked was 3 days back....
jab tak main aaya you were......asleep!..
phir so gayi!"
.................................
he stood at her room's door...
gazing at her...wondering...

"was ziya rght?...kya main..."

it was the first time dat he
found himself looking at her
this way in d hospital....

inspite of her bandaged head,arms...legs...
her face radiated peace & beauty....

she was a remarkable & courageous woman...
witty & humourous...sarcastic & loving...
a versatile personality...

not for a second was she pale...or dull....

some of her tendrils lay loose on her face...
& as if by magic he found himself
inches apart from her .....

he slowly bent down....
feeling her breath..

tujhe chaand chahiye to chaand doonga,
jaan chahiye to jaan bhi doonga,
pyaar chahiye to pyaar doonga main...

dil ka karaar main hi tujhko doonga,
tere paas-paas main rahoonga,

teri dhadkano mein, raahon mein,
teri thandi-thandi aahon mein,
teri behki-behki saanson mein main rahoonga.....

ek pyaas hai,ehsaas hai,
sawaal hai, jawaab ki talaash hai???????

"I LOVE YOU NAINA....
I REALLY DO....i know words aren't enough to
express my feelings for you...
but i want you to know just one thing..
whether you love me or you don't
you'll always find me beside you...
we'll always stand together.....!"

he blew away the tendrils from
her face lightly..

planted a kiss on her forehead
...& den on her eyelids...

smiling he walked away....
unaware...
dat she'd heard him...

dat she'd been planning to surprise him...

but it was she who'd been taken by surprise...

& she knew her answer....

it was......................

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EimenEnchanted

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Posted: 16 May 2008 at 6:57am | IP Logged

superb

really nice....
cant wait for the next ud...

plz do it fast Embarrassed

gazal_sameer

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smiling he walked away....
unaware...
dat she'd heard him...
dat she'd been planning to surprise him...
but it was she who'd been taken by surprise...
& she knew her answer....it was....

it couldn't be anything else...

it had to be a ...

NO!....

& only she knew the reason...!

she pondered over his words time & again...

& it occurred to her dat her feelings were
perhaps pretty similar to his...

could she go as far as saying it was love??

dat she didn't know!!

but yes...
she too would stand by him in
hard ,turbulent days...

what worried her was d fact dat she would
probably be the one causing dem in his life...!

NO!..she decided...she'd stay away from him..
from his life...

her accident had taught her a certain lesson...
a lesson dat she'd never forget....

she couldn't trust anyone...
not even herself....

a whirlpool of thoughts
were going around in her mind....

scenes flashed by...

scenes dat shook her...

why d hell hadn't i fought back??

why had i relied on huda to save me??

inspite of the fact that i'm
capable enough to fight...

not in martial arts...

but i do have the basic training to
protect myself!!....

was i ...scared??

for the first time in my life i felt fear...

fear dat chilled my senses...
made me so numb dat i didn't even react!!
she was so surprised by her own reaction!!

"hey...tum uth gayi?"
raj stood dere smiling at her...

just seeing him there made
her heart grow warm..

probably coz she'd just heard
him admit his love for her...or?????

"hmmm...bhaai kahaan hai?
he must be furious wid me?"

"filhaal to nobody's upset wid you...
par yeh thode hi time ki baat hai...
jab madam normal ho jaayengi...
to class li jaayegi...i'll go call navin...
by the way...u still need water?"

she shook her head...
"how long have you been here?"

"almost as long as you have!...
all three of us...
accha ab bolna band karo..."

"order huh?.." she asked weakly...
"raj....main hospital main rehna nahi chaahti...
can i get a discharge today?"

"you sure can young lady..."
d doctor had walked in wid navin & aalekh..

"but only if u promise dat u won't
leave your bed for atleast a week..."

"a week!!"
she sighed...

"mera bas chalein to tujhe
bed se baandh hi doon!!..

tu ghar chal...i'll murder you!"
navin went & hugged her tightly...
slightly teary-eyed...
glad dat naina didn't realise it!

"iska badla main tujhse zaroor loonga...
i'll scare you like dis one day...pakka..."

"ooooh...was my darling bro scared for me?
how sweeeeeeeeeeeeet..."
she pulled his cheek....her tone sarcastic..
yet loving..

"doc...i think you forgot to treat her head...!
bheja abhi bhi khaali hai!!..."

a comment dat made dem all laugh...
except nia of course..who simply glared...
...........................................

while aalekh took out the car..

navin & raj held her...giving her support..
& made her walk out till the car...

all the while she winced in pain...
but not a word came out of her mouth...

she knew she'd already put them into
enough trouble...
they all looked so old & worn-out...

by the time they reached out to the car...
naina was fast asleep on raj's shoulder...
looking tired...
"itni si walk ne isse exhaust kar diya...
navin darwaaza khol yaar.."

as navin opened d door...
raj carefully slid inside..with
naina's head exactly in d same position...

the only difference were her arms dat had
gone around his neck....

"i'll hold her if it's uncomfortable for you raj.."
navin asked him...

"paagal mat ban yaar!
she's sound asleep..."

"maine saara samaan shift kar diya hai...
teeno ka..
& b.c ko bhi bata diya ki
naina's coming home today....
he's been quite tensed..."
aalekh told them...

"you bet he was!!..
i've never seen him like dis...
naina ko apni beti jo maante hain!"

.....................................

it took them time to adjust at home....
raj had picked naina up &
placed her on her bed...

(not forgetting the kiss on her forehead!)...

for 2 days..she stayed in a state of delirium...

getting up at odd times at night...
feeling sweaty..& drawing huge gasps of air...

she slept most of the time in d morning....
& wen she did get up...
the three saw to it dat she didn't
leave her bed...

they weren't only cooking...
but doing lots of other homely stuff....

on the fourth day naina got up...
& sneaked out of her room...

she stifled a laugh wen she saw navin dusting...
& arranging the living room...

aalekh was in d library placing the books in order..
wen a small pile fell on him....

"ouch!!..mar gaya!"

naina was holding her stomach now...
almost on d verge of breaking into a laugh...
she'd barely controlled it wen raj's sight
sent her roaring ....

he stood in the kitchen...
his hair crisp white....
he'd dropped the box of dough on his head....
& he was sneezing repeatedly...

"tum...aanchoo!....yahaan?...aanchoo!
stop laughing!!...aanchoo!!"

& so she did....

she stared at him....for about 5 minutes..

"kya hua naina...?...nia??"
he was truly worried...something
had gone wrong...

she seemed in a distant world...

all of a sudden tears fell from her eyes...
she began sobbing uncontrollably...

navin & aalekh rushed out....

naina clutched her head....tightly....
still crying...

"god!...nia..wat's wrong?
kya ho raha hai?"
navin held her in his arms....

"is your head hurting babes?"
aalekh looked tensed...

she broke away from navin....
& rushed to her room....upstairs...

"i don't get it!!"...

"i think i do!...
shit!...guys upar chalo!"
raj rushed to her room....

she'd locked herself in...
& sounds were coming andar se...

"naina...naina kholo!"
navin & aalekh struck at the door...

"i think darwaaza todna padega"
navin suggested...feeling worried...
"aisa lag raha hai jaise she'll
...she'll do something to herself..."

"nahi..wait!!...
nia...nia...!"raj called
"i have what you want....
open d door....yeh lo..."

suddenly there was pin-drop silence.....

the door creaked open..& she peeped...
her hand stretched outside...

raj held it tightly..&
forced himself in...

while the others stared at the codition of
the room...stuff lying on d floor...
broken....curtains torn...everything hay-wire...

raj looked in her eyes....

eyes dat plead...

plead for mercy...

plead for freedom...

plead for a 'high'...

plead for....'drugs'....!!!

"jaldi raj...i'll die if i don't get it !
i'm begging u...please....now!"
her breath was coming in gasps...

she resembled a distraught woman...
hair falling crazily on her head...
her brow having a thin line of sweat...
"oh hell!...
u still crazy about drugs!
u'r addicted!...shit sis!...
u'r disgusting nia!
itna kuch ho gaya...."
navin had raised his hand to slap her...

raj held his hand mid-way...

"hold it!..shut-up navin!!...
get out of here..."

"par raj..navin's right!..."
aalekh added...

"i know he is...
ziya ne kaha tha aisa kuch ho sakta hai..
let me handle her...jaao....trust me!"
he whispered....

"raaaaaj....were you lying?"
she held his collar.....
her eyes filling eith tears yet-again...

"one more minute nia!!
i'll just get it...go guys!"

reluctantly the two left...
leaving them alone...
he closed the door.....& faced her...

"what do u want?..
aaraam se bataao...calm down....

nia!!!"

she was pulling her hair..

"i ...can't calm...down!
i know it'll kill me raj....
but if i don't get it ...
main abhi mar jaaoongi....
it's doing...funny...things to me..."

"listen to me naina...."

he held her shoulders...

"you have to come out of this!..
take a deep breath it'll be fine..
u just have to pass this period...."

she held him tightly....

"you're right....but...
just one ....last time....
one shot raj...one!!"

her hands clutched his tighter....

he shook his head....
tears fell from her eyes....

"main kab addict ho gayi...
i don't know....
it's my only support...
i swear i'm in pain....
my head's hurting...
& so is every part of my body....
every limb....i can't handle it anymore..."
she shook...vigourously...

"i'll fall..." her head was reeling....
"hold me!...main gir rahi hoon...
i need it...it's torturing me!"
she cried...as if a demon had possessed her..

"all you need is me naina...
i love you....we'll go through this together...
i love you a lot!....look at me!"
"love??!!
then save me!...give it to me!!"
she screamed....

he put a hand under her head...,
& pulled her closer...

lifting her mouth to his...
he kissed her....thoroughly..

gingerly...she explored the hollow of his mouth...
participating..drawing strength...

it was indeed one of the most passionate kisses....

his lower lip was full &
when she nipped at it the effect on
him was electric.....

as their tongues entered each other's mouths,
she experienced what seemed a short-circuit....&
he took her into a world of senses!!

my heart it speaks a thousand words,
i feel eternal bliss.....

no drop of rain,
no glowing flame...
has ever felt so pure..
if being in love can feel so good..
then i'm in love for sure!!!!!

Surya.Ravi

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that was good..very nice...cooll.. Clap

continue soon... Smile

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gr8 yaar its too good mindblowing. I just love it plz plz pllllllllllllllz update soon Smile

its rocking.......

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Posted: 26 May 2008 at 3:28am | IP Logged

wonderful

simply superb Clap

i just love ur ff Embarrassed

cont. soon pls Big smile

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continue soon... Smile

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plz ud soon......

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