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hey jst now read ur ff.. its gr88.. plz continue soon...and from now onwards i m there in ur reader list..

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please continue soon... Cry

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wht up yaar??when r u giving the next update????

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she had 5 guns pointing at her head!er head!

"what d hell are you doing here?"
the'boss' asked her....blunt & rude..

oh man!...c'mon nia think of something!!..
buy yourself time!

"a...a...sir...i know you want to kill me too
coz i saw everything....but trust me...
main apna mooh kholne waalon mein se nahi hoon...
all i care about is drugs & money..."

she went on to say...
"i can attract customers for you too!"

everything sounded so false even to her ears...
she wondered if these guys would believe it....

"hmmm......she's got a point thapar!
atract to yeh kaafi logon ko kar sakti hai..."
he rubbed his chin...

& she found herself being thoroughly assessed...
from top to bottom....

fury rose in the pits of her belly...
but dis time round she knew better than
to divert their thoughts!

maybe her attractiveness would save her life!

"par raheja..."

thapar called the so-called boss

"itni risk leni ki kya zaroorat hai!
we'll find plenty like her...
lets finish her off...!"

her heart hung on every
word dat was being spoken...

she was being discussed as if she was a vegetable &
these guys were deciding if she
was tasty enough to be eaten or not!!

wat an outrageous comparison!!

she felt sick...

there was a brief silence before raheja went on...

"she's a nice piece...lets try her out tonight!
ample time to prove herself!!...
we can have some fun...
aur agar mazaa nahi aaya to uthake phaik denge....
it's easy...."

the knots in her stomach tightened...

wat if dey...she'd rather die!!

"hmmm...maal to accha hai...upar chalte hain...."

she knew she'd been granted life for a few hours...
but she had to escape before they got their hold on her...

"tum dono laash ko yahaan se nikaalo....
charles...hold her back to gunpoint while we escort her
to our room...."
thapar pointed to a man...

she found herself being led through the crowded bar again...
yahaan par shor machaoongi to
na to kisi ko sunaai dene waala hai...
& neither will anyone bother...!

besides inhone firing shuru kar di...to
lots of innocent people will die...

i can't do a thing!...
shit!!...
kaash raj yahaan ruk gaya hota...

he could have forced me....idiot!
yeh ladke samajhte hi nahi hai ki
ladkiyon ki na mein bhi haan hoti hai!

ab main kya karoon?????????????????????

was it sheer coincidence...
or her amazing luck??

how could he be here?....

par main uski attention divert kaise karoon....

on one side of her walked thapar..
& on d other raheja...
they held her tightly by the waist..
squeezing her to them...
caressing her....
she felt pukish...gross...disgusted...!!

right behind her walked 'charles'
holding a silencer fitted gun at her back....

there isn't a way out!

suddenly an idea struck her...
it was too frail to work...
but she had to try...!
...............................................

dil ne tumko ,chun liya hai...
tum bhi dil ko chuno naa...
khaab koi...dekhta hai...
tumbhi sapne buno naa...
dil yeh mera, tumse kuch keh raha hai..
suno na...

i shouldn't have left her...
par main kis hak se rukta...
he wondered as he drove around the streets...

she's one hell of a woman...!
intelligent & warm...
will she be able to handle herself??
.............
when he reached home...
navin stood out in d garden...

"kya hua...tu baahar kyon khada hai?"

"you're alone??...
i thought naina was wid you...!"
he sounded upset..worried..

"she was...i dropped her to the...
the bar..."

"you what??!...kya raj!...
stop pushing & encouraging her
... will you??
she's my sister...
yahaan main tension main uski wait kar raha hoon...
& you've left her stranded at some silly bar...
i thought you cared!!"
he accused him...

"stop it nanoo!...she's my friend too!
& how dare you accuse me of not caring!
kya tu mujhe bas itna hi jaanta hai??"
he fought back...

"she...is...my...sis..!
you don't even have one!
how d hell would you understand
wat i'm goin through?"
he yelled...

"navin!!...you're sick!
& i've had enough of your rubbish accusations...
thanx for trusting me soooooooo much friend!!
i'm leavin..."
he was so angry...his voice dripped with sarcasm...

he walked off to collect his stuff....

after 15 minutes, navin sneaked upto him...

"ah..raj..."

"go away!!"

"sorry yaar.." he murmured...

"i'm sorry dat u'r my best friend!"
he continued descending the stairs...

"look...i'm really sorry...
i didn't mean to be rude yaar!
bas itni tension mein kya bol raha hoon ...
kuch samajh nahi aa raha...
i wouldn't have left her alone there.."

"neither would i!!...
why is it so difficult for you to
believe dat she might find help there?"

"u mean u...."

"exactly...!"

"pehle kyon nahi bataaya?"

"yeah right!...
janaab ko mujh par chillaane se fursat
milti to kuch bolta na!"

"a..oh..yeah..sorry again ...kaun hai wahaan?"
..............................
the place was filled with smoke...so
her chances of being sighted were difficult...

after a few steps...
she began coughing & shaking loudly...
so dat the men were forced to leave her...
& look at her...

meanwhile her hands worked in a frenzy...

her bag ...
she knew had lots of mirrors studded on it...
& she'd placed herself right under a chandelier...

as she shook...a bit too violently...

her bag dangled from her hands...&
the mirrors reflected the light into his face...

"kaun hai??..."
he wondered...
when the light continuously struck his eyes...

he looked up...trying to find its source...
& saw a bag striking it directly into his eyes...

he would've looked away...
but sumhow he thought he recognised d bag...

his eyes moved upward...
& he was left shocked at her sight!

yeh yahaan kya kar rahi hai!!
& dat too in such a pathetic attire!

she acted as if she'd regained composure once she'd
seen him glance at her...& smiled seductively at
her capturers...

they held her yet again...
& took her to yet another lobby...
where she saw lots of rooms lined out.....

not much time!

she hoped...& prayed dat he hadn't been drunk...
dat he'd recognised her amidst those fumes...

coz if he hadn't...
then the only alternative she had was death!
she wouldn't allow dem to touch her!..
not as long as she lived!


they opened a room...

naina knew d door would be closed....

so she quickly slipped off her ring on d floor...
luckily no one noticed....

"charles...jaa kar dekho laash dispose hui yaan nahin..
we'll be here for a looooooooooong time..."
thapar stepped closer to her...
& pulled her in....

the door was shut...
& her heartbeats thumped faster by the second....
.................................
when she was being taken away....

he'd wondered if she was willingly into all this...

but when he'd seen her pleading eyes...
her pale face...&
most importantly the gun stacked on her...

he'd realised she was in knee-deep trouble..!

setting aside his drink,
he began following them....

he was probably a bit too late...coz
he saw d man wid d gun coming back
...& the others
had disappeared...

charles passed him...
they didn't even glance at each other...

he'd decided to strike the man and
ask him where naina was being held,
when his eyes fell on a ring...

a ring dat was too expensive
to be lying there for a long time...

dat could only mean dat it had
purposely been dropped...but why..?

to attract his attention....he understood...

"u've got brains !...
aisi situation mein bhi dimaag kaam kar raha hai...
himmat ki daat deta hoon...
but now it's time for some action!"
..................................

she was pushed on to the bed....
& a drink was forced in her hands...

she knew it had drugs...but she still drank...
gulping it in one go!

she was sweating profusely with fear now.....
she wasn't even trained in martial arts...
she wondered!

her hands were clutched tightly...

the room was huge...it was a suite....

"main doosre kamre mein hoon....
u have your share...den i will..."
raheja winked at thapar ,
put on d music & left....

great...one's going to be easier to handle...

you touch me & you're dead fella!!

she took a deep breath....
arching one of her
knees a bit higher...
so as to strike him wen he neared...

where d hell is he?!!...
i hope he didn't miss my sign...

she shook a little now....
almost on d verge of tears....

under the man's gaze...she already fell naked...

"don't do this to me...please..."
she finally begged the man...

thapar's eyebrows went up...

"resistance is tempting baby....
but i wonder tumhaara mood
suddenly change kyon ho gaya!
saying so...he clutched her arms....&
bent down to strip her...!

she felt faint...
the drug having its effect...all
her strength disappearing....
her knee went down again...

thapar was about to close in on her
wen d door burst open...

he kicked thapar off her...
& she sighed...calming her heartbeats...
tears falling down ..finally..

"get out of here!"
he shouted at her...

"par tum..."

"leave naina...jaao!... "
he continued kicking him...

"they've got guns...andar bhi ek hai..."

the music was too loud..
so probably raheja hadn't heard a thing..

"u'll pay for this sweetie!..very soon!"

thapar threatened her...
& got a box on his face...

"here's my car keys....
i'll handle them...tum
niklo naina!...."
he shouted...

..........................

she knew he'd handle them....

"oh no!...mera bag to andar...
chuck it...jaan bach gayi yahi bahut hai!"

she clutched her forehead...
she was feeling a bit drowsy again....

........

she was driving wen she realised ki ghar par
kisi ko kuch pata hi nahi hoga....

forget it!...
unhe phone karna matlab 100 gaaliyaan aur khaana!
..............

a truck was following her....
...............

the last thing she heard was the sound of
tearing metal and snapping branches.....


then something hit her head, hard &

the world went blank!!!!!!!!!!!!!

MysticRiver

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Posted: 08 May 2008 at 1:45pm | IP Logged
that was interesting part too good...very well written.. keep up the goof work going... Clap do post the next part soon..me waiting for it.... Smile Tongue Big smile

gazal_sameer

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Posted: 09 May 2008 at 12:58pm | IP Logged
hey i want some more comments

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Posted: 11 May 2008 at 7:03am | IP Logged
cool....and interesting............. Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed exciting.......
it was a superb update..thanx a lot...

btw- i'm glad u r back with an update Big smile

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