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Posted: 12 October 2007 at 12:33pm | IP Logged
Woh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
thank u and also thank God ki Naina is a reporter.
friend ek rasta hai to popularise ur fic. mmmmmmm.
you post ur fic in LRL-forum
I think u'll certainly get a huge reply
to try it
all the updates jo tumne yanha post kiye the, post there and then update regularly there.Ok???
got it???
2day's update-excellent!!!!!!!marvelous job yaar!!!!!!!!
waiting 4 next part

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since it had been too late,
aalekh,raj & navin decided to stay
the night over wid naina...

following was a sunday ,
so they didn't have to bother goin back to d academy,
since their lectures had already ended for d session...

they had been residing at the academy
quarters only till they found a place for themselves...

it proved to be a day full of interesting phone calls!!

when naina got up, she was surprised to find
d aroma of coffee fillin the house.,..

she rushed to the kitchen only to find raj
fiddling with stuff to find tea-cups...

"gud-morning...mugs kahaan hai?"...
he tried to remove his eyes from her...
for she looked stunning in her blue night-gown,
her hair falling over her face...
sleeping beauty!!

she mumbled a quick morning...
& took out the cups...

"u guys really do get up early!!
...wat time is it?..
bhaai aur rockstar kahaan hai?"

"rockstar?!...aalekh?"

"hmmm...college days mein we called him dat...."

"its 6.30...we've been up since 5...
woh dono baahar garden mein hai..."
he was put off wen she mentioned aalekh

"aur tum coffee bana rahe ho!!

typical nanoo attitude!!...
throwing his work on others!"

she shook her head...
"tum jao...i'll get the cups...."

"thanx..."he walked away...

raj really did look tired...
deep lines of weariness were sketched on his face...

she took the cups out & joined the gang...

as dey drank in complete silence,
( nanoo & naina completely ignoring each other)

...it suddenly struck nia day their night had passed
pretty uncomfortably...
coz all of them had slept in their formal clothes...

"i'm so sorry!" she shocked everyone wid her outburst...

"i'm glad dat u are!!...
so when r u goin back to london?"
navin asked..hopefully...

"wat!!?..ooooh!..shut up!

i have loads of spare clothes out here...
dad ke bhi aur kuch nanoo ke bhi..
u guys could have slept a bit more peacefully...
in suits & stuff mein uncomfortable lag raha hoga...."

"wow!!...bahut jaldi yaad aaya hai sis!"

"c'mon navin ...she was really exhausted yesterday!"
aalekh sprang to her defence...

it was den dat her cell...
placed on dat table...began to ring...

but before she could pick it up...

navin snatched it away...
& switched on the loudspeaker...

"hello...naina??..u dere?"
a voice called out..

"...yeah....gud morning.."
navin's action had put her off-balance...
& she gave him a threatening look..

"i hope its gud for you!...
but not for us!
u really scared us all yesterday...locked away!"
he sounded disappointed

"u knew about it?...why d hell didn't u get me out ..?"

"i tried to...only to find u'd already been released...
whoever that prince charming was...
u shouldn't have left wid him!"
he was a bit angry

"wat?..why?!"
she looked up at raj...& shrugged her shoulders...

"coz dat puts u under a lot of suspicion!
ur gang's goin to b firing a lot of questions at you!!
kya answer dogi unhe??...who got u out?
anyway dat's your headache .."

he answered not bothered
it seemed...

"we guys are waitin for you...
tum ghar se nikli ho yaan nahin?"
he seemed irritated...

dat was d end of navin's patience...
this was going too far! "look you scum!!...whoever you are..."
navin screamed..

"dat's my sister you're talkin to...
not a doormat!
she's not a machine!!
give her some peace at least!

wat d'ya expect??..
usse jail mein sadne ke liye chod dete?

she's not comin to office today...!!..
& to hell wid ur company policy..."

"ah...ah..ok sir...no problem!
i didn't mean to...hurt your sentiments..."
d man seemed scared...
navin sounded so pompous & arrogant!

"ah...samir...don't mind him...
he's just a little mad...main aati hoon"

naina glared at navin...
he knew she was waitin to shout back...

"nahin...absolutely not!!...take a holiday..."

"but.."

"no i insist!!...sleep tight...bye.."
hurriedly he kept down d phone!

"are...you...trying..to..get...my...ass...
kicked...from...my..job????!"

she screamed at the top of her lungs...

"well..i do think that's d best option!"

furious...her eyes reddening...

not understanding how to hit him...
she picked the cup of her boiling hot coffee...&
without realising gulped it down in one go!!

"aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah!!"
she screamed...& ran inside ..
fanning her tongue all d while..

while aalekh grinned...
raj beat his forehead wid his hand..
& navin gave a satisfied expression...

..................................

they had all changed into clothes dat naina had
placed out for them...

& when they stepped out to face each other,
they all grinned...

they were all wearing white cotton kurta -pyjamas...
raj looked extremely sexy even in these....
d first few buttons open...

"well...dat was all i could actually find!!
i thought there would be more but there wasn't!"
naina smiled....

eventually aalekh & navin went up to d terrace,

while raj remained in d living room...
reading a newspaper..
& naina in d kitchen...preparing lunch for everyone..

her cell rang again...

"nia ur cell's ringing!!..."

"call receive kar lo...
but handle the conversation carefully!"
she added..

he picked up the phone...

"naina...ziya here...
i've got a horrifying report!"

"ah...may i know who this is?
i'm a friend of naina's..."
raj wondered wat report the woman spoke of...

ziya felt silent....

"well...i'm ziya from Pfizer pharmaceuticals...
i need to talk to naina please...it's a bit urgent!"

"just a sec..."

he kept his hand on the phone...& approached her..

"Pfizer se ziya...
are you ill?...drugs ka effect to nahi ho raha!"
he stood shocked.... while she paled....

"a..a...no..can i talk to her now?"
she asked...

raj raised an eyebrow...

"u obviously can...but..."
he kept the phone out of her raech..
"i'll hear d conversation too!"

"but...oh alright!!"
she added defeated!

he put the cell on the loudspeaker phone....
while she looked amused....&
wondered why he cared....

"hi ziya..."

"hey finally!!...
mujhe to laga aalekh wasn't planning to hand u the phone...."

"aalekh?"

"yeah....dat guy i just spoke to...
it seems u guys are back together...
i hope i didn't spoil a romantic moment..."
she chuckled...

naina blushed...& looked up at raj...
who stood rooted to his place...
an eyebrow up ..but a little uncomfortable...

"a...well...dat was another friend yaar...
& aalekh aur mera connection
to bahut pehle hi khatam ho gaya tha..."

"oh...sorry...so dis was the new guy in ur life..?"

she was hell embarassed now....

"can u shut up!
meri personal life kabhi aur discuss karenge..."
she retorted...

"tujhe kya hua hai??!!...
anyway on d professional front...
dat report's ready...& its not good...."

"not good...hmmm....u mean drugs strong hai...?"

"yup!...specially the ones dat are going around,
being distributed in colleges, universities & discs...
there's just one word for them..."

"wat?"

"LETHAL!!"

"thought so...to ab..?"

"ab ek kaam kar...u come here...
i'll give u d details...
& then we'll talk about those
blackouts dat u'r having so regularly.."

"wat blackouts??" raj spoke aloud..

"a...i'm sorry...it's confidential...
naina...do u want me too?"
ziya paled...
she'd just realised why naina had shouted at her...

"to hell wid dat confidentiality of yours!!
naina ...
why was dis bit hidden in yesterday's conversation....?"
he asked...angry at her...

"ziya ...i'll meet u at 6 in d evening...at ur office...
thanks...bye.."

"bye....all the best!"
she giggled and put the phone down...

she was about to leave the kitchen
without answering him...
but he held her wrist & stopped her...

"i asked u a question...
& i intend to be answered..."
he added seriously..

"stop making a fuss about it!!...
it's nothing really!"
she was fidgeting in her place....

"fine!!..if u want to continue playing
dat super-woman angle...
do dat!...
par main tumhaare saath ziya ke office chal raha hoon!....

& don't u dare refuse me...
nahin to nanoo ko sab bata doonga!"
he was downwright blunt ...

"dat's blackmail!!"
surprisingly she felt no anger...
only a pleasant sensation...

"when did i say it wasn't!!"
he smiled..& went out...leaving her glaring...
...................................................

it was 4 in d evening...
the weather was certainly cold...but not fiercly.....

nia sat in d garden.....kneeling over some plants....
gardening...

while the sun played hide & seek...
naina didn't realise dat

she looked stunningly feminine....
& quite ravishing
even in her simple pink sleevles kurti &
white patiala salwar..

her wet hair...loosely bound, fell on her pretty face...

raj watched her for a long time...
before he actually approached her..

"u still into this stuff?
somethings never change do they?"

"wat stuff?...oh gardening...
u knew it was always a passion for me...
aur isiliye tumne aur bhaai ne mere
plants ka murder karne mein koi
kasar nahi chodi thi!!" she accused him lightly..

he chuckled...
"u still remember!...ah...
ab itne saal baad to i hope ma'am
isn't holding any grudges against me?"

she laughed softly..."oh yes i am!!
& i plan to punish u severly...."

"accha..kaise?"..he looked amused

"kuch khaas nahin...bas sochti hoon...
how bout boiling u in oil....
then frying u in d pan...
finally chopping u into pieces & eating u??!!"

at her visualisation...raj simply laughed his head off...
"i can assure you i'm not dat tasty!!"

"woh to khaane ke baad pata chalega!
anyway...come sit..."
she patted at a place next to her...on d grass...

"won't this get dirty?"
he pointed at his white kurta..

"chuck it naa!..."& she pulled him down...

dey sat in silence for sometime as naina busied herself...

he watched her intently ..
sitting cross-legged...while
naina sat on her knees..
too close for comfort!!

her cell rang..

"not again!!...
subaah se baj raha hai..."
she made a face...

since her hands were gloved
raj put it on d loudspeaker yet again!!

"hey hottie...wassup?...where have you been?"
a voice called out..

she was completely lost in her work ..
"who is dis?"

"aaah!!...meri aawaaz bhool gayi...
rohan!"

the moment she heard dat name,
she became outright nervous...
the spade in her hand fell & so did she!!losing her balance was one thing...
but falling right into raj's lap another!!

he held her tightly by her shoulders..
wen he realised who it was on d phone....
encouraging her to talk normally...

"oh...hi rohan..."

"kal hum sabko jail mein chod kar
kahaan gaayab ho gayi?"
she heard his accusatory tone....

"i was bailed out...."

"really?!...khaali tum??...
why didn't u try gettin us out of here den?" Jul 25     delete DIPIKA......
raj could sense her wild heartbeats...& his too...
but for a different reason altogether!

"i couldn't!...he..he was a ..customer!"
she slapped the first thing dat came to her mind...

"kitne ka maal becha?"
he was serious again...

"ah...75000..."

"aur saari raat uske saath aish ki..
uska kitna mila?"

she was red with rage now!
her fists clamped in fury....

raj could feel the heat coming out of her!
but couldn't do a thing to make her feel comfortable...

she knew dat she was almost called a prostitute...
& for d first time...
felt a severe hatred towards her profession...

"10...10000..." she answered ..tight-lipped..

"u'r a much better piece of ass...
aage se zyaada maangna...
anyway aaj bar mein ek aur badi deal hone waali hain..
reach at 10....bye"

a tear rolled down her cheek....
& he saw dat she was hurt...badly...

"naina...don't think much about it...
yeh bekaar ki baatein hai..."

she turned in his lap...fully facing him...

they looked at each other for a long time...

before she went straight into those solid arms...
seeking support...strength...

it seemed eternity...they stood hugging each other
for a long time...her tears flowing freely...

unable to resist the temptation...
he bent his mouth to her face..
.& kissed dem away....

every kiss to her was a blessing in disguise...
& a peaceful feeling came over her...

she hugged him tighter...
& he kissed her harder...

this time on her lips...moistening them,
giving her a strength...

it didn't take her long to kiss him back...
with renewed vigour & vitality...

& they stood locked into each other...
with no space even for air to seep in...

it began to rain..& their kiss deepened...
arousing them...
doing things to them dey had never felt before!!

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friend forever

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Posted: 13 October 2007 at 12:59pm | IP Logged
oh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! God....................
what a exciting moment 4 them
really splendid.
ab to tumhe kal update karna hi hoga...................
reply ke baare me jayda tensed maat ho
just concentrate in ur work and love ur
ok???
then bye
see u 2morrow

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Posted: 13 October 2007 at 10:16pm | IP Logged
interesting , damn gooddd,cooll.. Clap do post the next part soon..me waiting for the next part eagerly.. Big smile

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Posted: 13 October 2007 at 11:16pm | IP Logged
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update    

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Posted: 14 October 2007 at 7:40am | IP Logged
hello sun rehi ho??????

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Posted: 14 October 2007 at 12:16pm | IP Logged
kya ho gya hai?????????????????????

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