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Hey!!!
the part's really interesting.....pls continue soon dear.... Tongue
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Hey!!!
the part's really interesting.....pls continue soon dear.... Tongue
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THE NEXT PART:

"oh really!!addicted huh??!!"

his smile disappeared...

" u think i'm a fool don't u?

maanta hoon hum gyaarah
saal baad mil rahe hain naina,
but don't forget dat we've
known each other for 17 years!!

we've literally lived together...
shared our childhood dreams...
had exactly d same upbringing ...

tumne soch bhi kaise liya ki main tumhaari
yeh bakwaas maan loonga!!
c'mon nia...speak up!!...

yeh sab ho kya raha hai??
r u working for someone??"
he shook her hard....
trying to get the truth out...

she jerked his hand away...
freeing herself of his hold..

lost for a while in thought...
she knew the moment had
come to disclose her identity...

atleast dis man..
of all d others deserved to know something...

he'd saved her from needless troubles..

sighing she spoke up....
"woh raj..."
she was having second thoughts about her decision...

"woh kya??!!...trust me naina...
i won't breath a word about it..."

"fine....raaste mein baat karte hain...
i'm too tired & dis place is sick!!"

he chuckled...
"u haven't changed a bit have you??!!"

she smiled at him..."kya matlab?"

"wahi nakhre!!...poori nautanki ho!"
he grinned...

"wat!!...nautanki!...dat was mean!!
i think i'm much mature dan wat i was den!"
she made a silly face...

"mature to i doubt...."
she gave him a cunning look...
"but yes..you've turned pretty sexy!"

"aaah!!...so d quiet brat has finally learnt to flurt!"

"flurt...or main!!...not at all madam..."

he kept his hand on his heart and acted

"you're d fairest of all damsels dat i've ever met!!
the most beautiful angel to have descended the planet...
exceedingly charming...and...and.."

"sexy!!"

"right...sexy!!"

the two of dem laughed aloud...
forgettin d fact dat there
had been a cold war between dem

"ab jisse pehle humaara tamaasha banne...
lets get out of here!!"
she suggested...

"jaldi kya hai??..i like it when you blush...
the last time i saw u blushing was wen i kiss..."

he saw her turning a shade of purple..
deeply embrassed...

"ah...sorry...
by the way..
i'm also sorry for venting my anger out on you dat day..."

"u sure did scare d daylights out of me!!"
her smile had disappeared

"a...'nightlights'.."

"raj.................SHUT-UP!!"

& the two really did shut-up...

conversation between them ceased pretty abruptly...

while naina was lost in deep thought...
raj realised his mistake...

wrong timing!!...
he addressed himself....

she was so happy until i reminded her of all d
insults dat i threw at her d other day!
someone plz remind to me to keep my mouth shut!

all d camaradie..d comfort dat was dere between
old friends had suddenly disappeared ....

well...atleast we're back on talking terms...
& she's no longer angry at me...
dat sure is a beginning!!
i hope slowly she'll forgive me completely....

she didn't say a word throughout d journey &
he dared not ask...

ghar pahunchke to she'll have to be out wid it!!

navin isse aasaani se chodega nahin...
he sighed
...................................

10 minutes later they were at d Ahluwalia mansion...

d same house where dey had grown up...

"a...raj.."
she broke d silence...

"hmmm"..he was snapped out of his reverie...

"aunty-uncle kahaan hai...&
why is your house locked?"

"mom-dad bangalore shift ho gaye hain..
dey sold d house...kaafi time ho gaya.."

"so where did u stay?"
she asked naively..

he smiled..

"initially at d army hostel..aur phir
army camps at different bases...

so did navin for dat matter....
we never needed a permanent place...

but yes....now things are changing...
we're looking for a place...

accha yeh sab chodo...brace yourself...
andar dhamaka hone waala hai...!!"

she nodded,sighed...& walked in...
navin & aalekh were waiting anxiously inside..

the first day itself naina had handed him
a duplicate set of keys to d house...

they stood up...when naina walked in..

navin rushed to her side & held her tightly...

"samajh nahi aa raha ki relieved feel karoon ya tensed...
tujhe hug karoon yaan do thapar maaroon..."
he said very seriously...

"i'm not a kid nanoo!!"

"den stop behaving like one..!!
for god sake naina ...r u insane??"
he shouted..

"don't you use dat tone wid me!!
i'm not your little sister ...
i know how to handle myself...&
i'm old enough to make my decisions!"

he was so furious dat his hand rose to slap her...
but raj stopped him from doing so...

"no need to stop him raj!
aaj kal mujhe thapad maarna
iski hobby ho gayi hai!"
she retorted back...

navin freed himself...went back to d table..
picked something up...& came back to naina...

holding her wrist tightly..
he slapped stuff in his hand...

"wat d hell is dis??"

"tickets...u'r going back to london tomorrow..
pack ur stuff..."
he added calmly...

naina was so shocked dat no words
came out of her mouth...

"navin....lets atleast hear her out once!"
raj tried...

"no point!!
i'm not interested!...
there is no justification for drug addiction...
is there nia??"

"well!...yes, there is!"
"well!...yes, there is!"

"really!! wow!...i'd sure like to hear dose lies..
why den..go on..tell us!" he added sarcastically...

"God dammit nanoo!!

coz it's my job!...

i'm an undercover reporter for BBC
& this is a sting operation going on!!"

their jaws dropped open...
a pin drop silence surrounded d
house as d news began to sink in....

"u'r lying!...nice try!"

"go ...to...hell!
believe wat u want to den...
but get dis thing straight through dat
large empty head of yours...
i'm not leavin!!"

"lets sit down guys...naina ..
tell us everything clearly..."

raj calmed d atmosphere..
while aalekh poured a
drink for everyone....

navin was fidgeting from one position to another...

"6 months back...i got a job with BBC in london...

for a year i was under a contract not to tell anyone
about it coz i'd be handed undercover assignments....

i was a part of 3 major operations...

d last one involving drug trafficking in england...
i checked out bars, universities, casinos...& lots more....

the operation was a success
....impressed by my performance...
my boss decided to hand me BBC's indian operations ....

i was to track d drug racketeers here initially...

mom-dad ko bata diya maine...
par navin ko nahin...don't look at me like dat!!
i couldn't endanger my task...

i was warned ki main buri tarah fas
jaaoongi if someone in india
recognised me....

so i decided to stay shut for sometime...

ab... jab maine unki ring mein ek position bana li hain...
i thought i could tell u the truth...

it's just dat raj caught me at d disc dat day...
although why he bothered to interfere
is still a mystery to me!!"

she glanced at him...
& saw dat he was embarassed...

navin knew exactly why!!...

raj had been smitten by her looks...
but he kept quiet about it....

"well...koi baat nahin nia...i forgive you"
navin answered ...

"forgive me!!
spare me from dat gratitude...
u should be the one to be sorry...
& i ...don't....forgive ...you"
she stood up...her eyes burning wid anger....

"cut it sis!!...but i still think u should leave...
dis isn't d right job for you.....not for a gi..."

"i swear i'll slap u nanoo if u give me those
sexist remarks!!

not right for a girl!!..yahin kehne lage the na...
to hell wid u!!...keep ur ideas to yourself..."

"actually naina...i think i agree wid navin...
india isn't dat safe..." aalekh added...

& got a furious look back...so instantly shut up...

"criminals have similar minds in all countries
....u too want me to go back....kyon raj?"

he stood silent for a minute then began...

"i don't want to be taking sides...
aalekh & navin are being protective about u...."

when she glared at him....

"but...but if u think your job
satisfies you...
then i see no reason why you should leave it....."

"but i do !!...her job isn't SAFE!!..."navin defied

"yours is??" she asked ...an eyebrow up...

"look..."

"you're in the army!!...dat's more dangerous...
c'mon nanoo leave d army!!...it isn't a safe job!"
she mimcked him..

"FINE!!...do wat pleases you!!"

"you don't have to tell me !..i'll do exactly dat...!"
she smiled...having won the round!
........................................................
somewhere in the future:

as d car roared on d highway.......
lights in d rearview mirror curved behind it....

they were too bright...
& menacingly near by..
belonging to a truck it seemed...

it was raining hard...& d chilly , foggy night
led to a pathetic view...

suddenly the headlights
grew to monstrous proprtions.....

the truck seemed to be pushing d car ahead...

dizziness overwhelmed d driver for a second ...
& d steering wheel was gripped harder...

the driver weaved backward & forward...
struggling to hold on as d truck
slammed it repeatedly...

water rushed through the open window...

d driver's clumsy fingers fumbled for d seat belt....
feet repeatedly hitting the brake paddle..
but to no avail...

all control was lost!

this was a nightmare coming true...

trapped,locked inside...

wid no escape seemingly possible
for d brakes had failed!

FINALLY..
AFTER WAT SEEMED AN ETERNITY...

THE TRUCK SLAMMED INTO THE CAR
SENDING IT ROLLING ONTO THE SLIPPERY ROADS..

THIS WAS NO ACCIDENT,
THIS WAS ATTEMPTED MURDER!
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Posted: 12 October 2007 at 7:03am | IP Logged
THANKS FOR UR LOVELY REPLIES.....

I HOPE YOU'RE ENJOYIN THE RIDE...

NAINA'S A REPORTER...

MAZA AAYA?????

&...can anyone plz tell me how to popularize my fic here...
and make it stand out???????
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Posted: 12 October 2007 at 12:20pm | IP Logged
super coolll.too goodd..... Clap do continue soon.. Smile

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