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Posted: 09 October 2007 at 3:38am | IP Logged
tooo damn interesting...cooollll... just too goodd... superb... Clap do post the next part soon..me waiting for it eagerly.... Smile Tongue Big smile
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Posted: 09 October 2007 at 6:01am | IP Logged
really rocking.........................
woh the girl hi nia/naina hai na????????????????
excellent!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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waiting 4 next......................
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Posted: 09 October 2007 at 6:44am | IP Logged
thanks a loooooooooooooooot!!
you guys have really made my day...

btw..i have a request...
can you ask your friends out here to
give this fic a try...

and i'd love your suggestions too!!![/red]


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Posted: 09 October 2007 at 12:11pm | IP Logged
thik se samjha nehi
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Posted: 10 October 2007 at 1:23am | IP Logged
thik se samjha nahi matlab???
story samajh nahi aa rahi???

please keep reading...
sab samajh aane lagega!
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Posted: 10 October 2007 at 1:38am | IP Logged
a long silence followed...for neither knew how
to start d conversation...

it was indeed weird ...
inspite of d fact dat raj & navin were best
friends...
it had been 11 years since he'd talked to naina...

agreed he'd heard bits of information bout her from nanoo..
stuff like she missed india...
& dat she got enrolled at d cambridge university...
dat she was a great scholar...

but not stuff dat really mattered to him...
he hadn't even seen a single picture of her...
knew navin had one...but how could he ask??

she was a part of nanoo's life...
dat he seldom shared wid raj....
& raj wondered why???

he broke d silence first...

"so..how're u doing??"

"very well....& u??...
u'r a captain in d army too i believe...
like bhaai??"

"haan...& i'm doin great too...
by the way..where r u dese days??"

"dese days....
well at d moment i'm at the heathrow airport
at london.."

"airport??...seeing someone off??"

"yup!..myself!..."

"wat??!!"

she giggled at his surprised tone...

"pehle yeh batao..nanoo aas-paas hai?"

"nahi..he forgot his phone in my jeep..."

"can u keep secrets??"...
he could literally see her smiling...

"secrets??...nia!!..wat r u hiding??"

"it sounds really nice to be called nia still.....
yahaan london mein to...anyway...i'm in...
i'm coming back to india raj..."
a longer silence followed...

"hello??..raj??..u dere??"

he caught his breath back....

"superb nia!!...dat's great news!...kab??...
wen r u reaching?..i'll see u at d airport!"
he spoke so quickly dat she smiled...


"w..woh..no need really...main pahunch jaaoongi...
u'r at d delhi academy right??...
accha raj...i need to go...aur bhaai
ko mat bataana...i'll give him a surprise...
bye..."
& she kept d phone down leaving him stunned...

"isse kya hua??...
u could've atleast told me d time...nia!...
u'r still impossible!!"...he shrugged...
shaking his head....
.................................

he thought dat her phone call would dispell his
foul mood...but he was wrong...

10 minutes!...
it took him just 10 minutes to review d past 3-4 hours...
& it left him glaring & angry...
both wid dat woman...& wid himself!

main uske mooh kyon lag raha tha??
why d hell didn't i just walk out!?

because dear raj...
get dis little fact right down ur brain...
dat u fell for her!!...for dat ...oooh!!

by d time he reached his room he was
shaking wid self-loathing...
& detesting dat meeting....

nanoo was fast asleep...
a small lamp was lit at d corner...

he lied down too...
but sleep eluded him...

after tossing for about 2 hours...
he couldn't stand it any longer!

so he did wat dey usually did wen dey were out of control!

he kicked navin real hard...
d poor guy fell off d bed....& suddenly jumped up!
alert!...vigilant!

den relaxed a bit....

"saale...aaaah!!"..he rubbed his hips...
"aaraam se bhi to utha sakta tah naa!"
he shouted...

"dekh nanoo..." navin was taken aback...

it had been too long since raj really called him by dat name..

"mera dimaag aaj waise hi kharaab chal raha hai...
aur kharaab mat kar...aur maine to tujhe pehli baar laat maari hai..
apni baari mein to pata nahi tune kitni baar mujhe...
ganeemat hai ki main chal bhi paa raha hoon..!"

"woh..to..hai...sorry...bol yaar kya hua??
aaj tu aisi haalat mei kaise?"

raj began to tell him everything dat had
happened...

by the time he ended...
a costly vase lay broken on d floor,
d curtains lay torn....
d books were strewn over d bed...torn..

now he felt calm...

"itni si baat par tu kuch zyaada hi gussa nahi ho gaya??"
navin wondered...looking around at d condition of d room...

"haan yaar....but i don't know why??"
he looked confused..."i mean i could actually kill
her if i see her again..."

"i'm sure you can...ab ho gaya na...chal so ja..."
he yawned...

"so ja??"

"raat ke 1 baje bahngra karega kya??"

"nahi...par guppe to maar hi sakte hain...
B.C ne kyon bulaaya tha?"

"one...to remind me ki humme rehne ki
koi jagaah dhoondni hogi..
we've got to shift real soon...
new teachers ko yeh quarters alott hone hain...
& i told him we'd do something...woh dingy
govt. apartments mein rehane ka mujhe koi shauk nahi hai....

two...woh report dat u'r working on...
kal submit karni hai tujhe...

& three...well...mujhe apna usual lecture dene ke liye...
about...discipline...honour...

why d hell does he still treat me as
a cadet??...nia se to itna pyaar karte hai!"

suddenly reminded...he was bout to tell him about d call...
but naina's question came back to his mind....

yes...i can keep secrets!..he smiled to himself...
..................................

captains..abhimanyu , aalekh, huda were in d cafeteria....
when raj & navin walked in ...

"gud morning....
accha shifting ke baare mein kuch decide hua kya?"
navin asked..

"huda & abhimanyu will b goin home....
aur main..well...i thought i'll go back to london
for a few days..."

"stop talking nonsense aalekh!
u'll come wid us!" raj proposed...

"raj bhaiya....khud ke paas rehne ki jagah hai
jo usse offer kar rahe ho?"
navin asked sarcastically...

"dhoond lenge...anyway...dere's still time...
suriji!!" raj screamed..
(he'd been posted here too...)

"haanji...captain sir.."

"newspaper please!"...

he was reminded of d woman's threat...
curious he thought..he'd look through it

"yeh li jiye..."

"thankyou..."

briskly turning d pages...he sighed...
"nothing...so you're a liar too..."

"stop mumbling...chai pee..."
huda told raj...

"oye-hoye!!...sorry captain sir...
aapko kal ka paper de diya maine!"

raj was disappointed...
& now..
wen he looked at d local headlines
shocked too!!

it read:

'DRUNK CAPTAIN RAMS JEEP INTO OCTAVIA...
LADY DRIVER INJURED, VERBALLY ABUSED....
FIR LODGED"

"FIR!!!!!???...dat chunk of a woman!!
i'll murder her!!"

he shook wid fury...

the cadets all around were surprised at d insane behaviour
of their favourite captain....

he threw d newspaper on d table...

"relax yaar...she was on drugs too...
we'll talk to d police!"

"sirjee...woh brigadier ne aapko bulaaya hai..."

"oh damn!!...wish me luck guys..."
.............................

"but sir...it's only half d truth!"

"look captain shekhawat...
whatever it be...
u agree you were drunk!!"
he said sternly...

"yes sir but..."

"is dis d standard dat u want to set for our cadets?
drink & drive!.." he was angry...

"certainly not sir...but..."

"no buts captain!" he stopped raj...

"dat article had your jeep no. too...
since you're in d army...
maine abhi to tumhe jail jaane se bacha liya hai...

but 2 things...
the newspaper tomorrow must carry your aplogy to dat woman...
& second...u'll personally go & apologize to her!"

"dat's not fair sir!!
it wasn't even my fault completely!"

"dismissed captain...!"

"sir please..."

"dismiss!!"

"yes-sir!!"

............................

his mood remained depressed till d evening....

he'd followed B.C's order reluctantly...
cursing d woman all d time...

but he still had to go to her personally...
& he just couldn't stand dat idea...

raj & navin were havin their tea in their
room wen navin's phone rang...

"wat??!!"..he stood shocked...

& den ran out at d speed of lightening...

amazed by his behaviour raj followed...
but wat he saw left him dazed.................
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well...dat's it guys!!

i hope ki story ki pace aapko theek lag rahi hai...

naina's goin to enter d picture really soon!!

i hope to see loads of replies dis time too!!

thanx a lot for raeding...

hope u enjoy dis bit too!!

cya
byeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
yoginisahakari Goldie
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Posted: 10 October 2007 at 2:41am | IP Logged
hey too good

dipika

great going

pl cont soon
EimenEnchanted Goldie
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Posted: 10 October 2007 at 3:18am | IP Logged
good going..update soon pls Smile

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