LETHAL INSTINCTS - new rn fic

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i've written destiny + attraction before..

and got a pretty good response from u guys...

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THE FIC'S CALLED LETHAL INSTINCTS...

CHARACTER SKETCH......

CAPTAIN RAJVEER
CAPTAIN NAVIN'
CAPTAIN AALEKH....
CAPTAIN ABHIMANYU
NAINA.....(I CAN'T DISCLOSE WHO SHE IS AS OF NOW!!)
(THE REST WILL MAKE APPEARANCES BUT NOT EQUALLY IMPORTANT...
EXCEPT CAPTAIN HUDA....HE MAY GAIN IMPORTANCE)

NEW CHARACTERS BEECH MEIN AA SAKTE HAIN....

3 IMP. POINTS...

....NAINA & NAVIN R TWINS...

.....NAINA & AALEKH R CAMBRIDGE (LONDON) PASSOUTS....&
THEY'VE BEEN HAD AN AFFAIR....
& LASTLY...

.....BRIGADIER CHANDOK IS NAINA & NAVIN'S UNCLE...

NAINA MAY SEEM BIGDI HUI!!
BUT B.C LOVES HER...& HE'S DAMN STRICT WID NAVIN....

NAINA & NAVIN'S PARENTS R IN LONDON.....

RAJ AUR NAINA KI CHEMISTRY...IT'S SHOCKING!!

WAITIN 2 C IF IT INTERESTS U!
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hopin for a positive response!!!!

 

THIS IS THE FIRST PART:


CRASH!!

"OUCH!!...OH DAMN!"
a woman clutched her head as it hit d steering wheel of her car...
"oooooooh!!...d rascal...scoundrel!!

"oh hell!...i should've known better!
drinking & driving don't mix!"
a man cursed himself as he began to get out of his jeep...
..................................

4 hours earlier.....

as navin slipped into his room...

he saw his best Friend dropping off to sleep in his armchair..
surrounded by a sea of documents!

"bahut ho gaya raj!!
its been 3 weeks...& i still see you immersed in dose stupid files..."
navin yelled at him...waking him...

"god !!...wat d hell did u shout for??!!

stupid files!!....main teri tarah vellah nahi hoon navin...
u may be enjoyin yourself..but i've got to submit dis report to B.C....
.&...i'm chasing a deadline!..."...
he once again immersed himself in his work..
a little reluctanty of course...

"dekh dost...yaar...
pichle 3 hafte se main raat ko theek se soya nahi hoon...
u'r always working!!...round d clock raj!...
u deserve a break!"...he sighed

"go talk to your uncle if you've got problems wid sharing dis room!"

"u know dat's not what i...oooooh!!....uth!!..get up!"
exasperated...
navin dragged raj out of his chair...

"navin!...stop it yaar!!.."

"i know u'r a workaholic....but still...
we're going for a drink tonight...chal!"
he pulled raj along...

"but..." he tried to reason..

"no buts!!...dere's dis cool bar dat we're hitting tonight!"

raj resigned...knowing dat once navin made up his mind...
no sane person could change it!
..............................

as dey stepped out of the academy (located in delhi)....
the chilly night air hit dem on their faces....

"do we really have to go....??"
raj made a face wen navin answered in d affirmative...

as soon as dey had seated themselves in raj's jeep..
navin's phone rang...

"hi uncle..."

"captain ahluwalia!!...its sir for you till lights out remember...!"
a strict b.c. shouted in navin's ear...

dey talked for awhile...

"kya hai??..y d hell r u smiling??"

"kuch nahin!....B.C se baat karke teri fat ti hai...
u'r expression was hilarious...
...anyway...stop giving me dat murderous look..bol kya hua?"

"he wants 2 meet me abhi....i'll hv to go..."

"thank god!!..chal!"

"aye...hello??...main jaa raha hoon..aur tu jaayega bar!!"

after a brief argument raj agreed & navin explained him d route...
"aaraam se aana...i'll handle it here...bye"

"bye..."
........................

as d young, charming captain drove...
he was surprised..
surprised as to how after so many years he was reminded of
his childhood days.....

22 years back....

"Nia...raj...nanoo...andar chalo!!..
it's bout to rain!"
nia's mom... shouted....& the three 6 year old kids ran inside....
all muddy...smelly...wid a smile on their faces..

18 years back...

"bahut ho gaya...stop teasing her...
tum dono ko aur koi kaam nahi hai...
go out & play!!"...& raj's mom pushed him & nanoo out into d garden...

dey were pulling her hair...snatching her story books..
tearing it to pieces...while she wailed


16 years back...

"cheeeee!!...yeh kya ladkiyon jaisi dress pehni hai!"
raj made a face at nia...

"stupid!!...ladki hi to hoon..."

"den go play wid girls...humaare peeche kyon padi hai.."
nanoo shouted...

something dat made nia burst into tears...
& raj..& nanoo..grinned....happy to have made her terrible yet again...!

13 years back...

"mrs.shekhawat...aaj khaana bahut hi badiya bana hai..."

"thank you so much...
aap bataiye...nia..nanoo ki padaai kaisi chal rahi hai?"

"nia to exceptionally dedicated hai....
par nanoo....nanoo aur raj ko masti se fursat mile to padenge na...!"

"oh come on mom!!..we're 15!...
padna ladkiyon ka kaam hota hai.."

"yup!!..we're going...cycling..& den cricket..."

the two rushed away...

11 years back..

"aapki flight kitne baje ki hai?"

"bas another 4 hours...r u sure about nanoo??"

"aap kyon tension le rahi hai...?
u know we're much more dan neighbours...or family friends!
main to kehti hoon nia ko bhi yahin chod do...
she'll do her studies from here..."

"nahi...nanoo aur raj ki baat alag hai....
nia london mein humaare saath hi theek hai...
waise bhi raj aur nanoo ne to army join karni hai...
naina still has to decide her future..."

everything was packed....

nanoo was to live wid raj for d coming 1-2 years...

the twins hugged each other tightly....
they were currently in 11th...

"i'll miss u sis..."
"i'll miss u too bhaai..."

raj remained still...not knowing how to bid her a good-bye...

they'd grown-up together...fought,played,teased...

yet...today everything seemed awkward...distant...

as dey were bout 2 leave...
raj ran out & called nia..

"u forgot something inside..."he shouted...


"nia..hurry up!..we're already gettin late...
jaldi se aana.." her father told her...

the parents hugged each other...
"jaldi waapis aana...india jaisa kuch nahi hai..."

"dekhiye...ab to nanoo ke soldier banne ke baad hi aayenge"

"mom!!...kam se kam jaate-jaate to nanoo mat bolo...
i'm old enough for dat name....!"

everyone laughed their heads off as his parents hugged him....

"atleast ab thoda serious ho jaana....
its not easy to be a soldier!.." his father twisted his ear...

"uncle hain na!!"
& dey shook their head...
little did he know ki uske uncle is maamle mein kitne strict hai...
....................
as nia hurried back in d room...
"wat??...kya reh gaya?"

raj closed d door...
turned her round & kissed her lightly on d cheek...
"yeh!......stay in touch nia...i'll miss you"

"so....will...i..."
she blushed...& he smiled...

now 11 years later...he still went pink thinking about her...
about his first kiss...dat face entered his dreams frequently..
even today...but he didn't undestand why...

he was shaken out of his reverie...

"nia...raj...nanoo...
we were called NRN in one breath by so many people..
simply coz we were inseparable...

nanoo ..navin...to yahin hai...par tum...tum kahaan ho naina...?
do dey still call u nia??" he smiled at d thought

he sighed pleasantly stunned by d turn of his thoughts...

there were so many other beautiful memories...
but dey had begun to fade...

"aah...finally!"
he parked his car...& entered a bar cum disc...filled wid boisterous people...

"i'll have gin please..." he ordered...

it was den ...as he was taking his first sip...
dat his eyes fell on her.......

a bar-girl..
& he was lost..taken in by her beauty...!
"wow!"

very nice..coolll intro...i liked reading it... very good start..keep up the good working going.... do post the next part soon.. me waiting for it eagerly...

ur fic looks really very promissing
pls upload the next part i can't wait to read it

hey hi dipika

your FF seem to be interesting

pl continue soon

hey and pl dont bother about the replies.

pl i will really be waiting for the next updarte and update soon

thanks a loooooooooooooooooooooot guys!!!
well....hopin to have more readers in the future...
here's d next part!!!



As he drank his gin..his eyes kept on searching for her...

abhi to yahin thi...kahaan gayi??
he wondered...
den cursed himself..

raj...u'r losing it...!
kuch zyaada hi jaldi chad gayi hai...
he shook his head violently!
i've better standards dan a ...a..

his eyes landed on her yet again..
& he couldn't take dem away from her face...

d way those silky strands...curled around her cheek...

he had dis sudden urge to rush to her...
& touch dem....

d mood at d bar had been lighter...
but now a song changed it all..
made it sexier...

Got my eyes on you,
won't u bring dem back to me,

got my eyes on you,
u know where i'm gonna be,

got my eyes on u,
& i see u checking me,

got my eyes on u....

& i like wat i see!

it was in dis crowded bar...
as everyone danced away to glory..
dat their eyes met...

they stared at each other for a handsome amount of time...

& den...as if shaken out of her reverie...
d girl broke d contact...& disappeared yet again!

aaaah!!...dere she goes again!

"a repeat please..." he placed d order..

it was highly unusual of a level-headed ,
sensible person like him
to drink so much...
but dat woman had simply unnerved him...

after having drunk quite a lot..he decided to go upto her...
he felt pretty light-headed...

he chuckled at himself..
wat i call light-headed...navin would call .....drunk!

before he could approach her...
he saw her being pulled to d dance floor by three men...
he didn't like d sight of anyone of dem...

but she seemed pretty casual about it...

as a new song shook d disc...
he saw her being tossed from one man to d other...
&...laughing...but her eyes seemed...???

na pairo mein paayal,
na haathon mein kangana,
chali main,chali main,chali...
na aankhon mein kaajal,
na maathe pe bindiya,
deewaane ki dhoondhu gali....

i wanna show my body,
move d night away...

chaahe bas chaahe yeh dil...
dilbar ko paana re..

halla re..halla re..halla re
tu jhoom le, tu naach le,
masti mein tu kuch gaa re...[/red]

well..dat's exactly wat she was doing...
dancing like maniacs...

tossing around from one set of arms to d other....
in her ooh so hot denim micro-mini & turquoise tube top...

"u'r not a bar-girl!!...
but u'r into something really nasty!"

raj's opinion changed as he kept a watch on her....
& d song proceeded..

aaya kahin pe mujhko mera humsafar
...jo nazar...
aaya kahin pe mujhko mera humsafar
...jo nazar...
mohabbat ki raahon par.
.main hadh se bad jaaoongi...
main uske naam jawaani,
kasam se kar jaaoongi...
mujhe hai itna kehna...
wahi hai mera gehna...
agar baahon me lele..
khushi se mar jaaoongi..
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it was dere dat she saw him again...
& stopped all of a sudden...

she whispered something into a man's ear..
& dey walked off d floor..

he saw her go into a dark corner...
dere d man took her into his arms...&
was about to kiss her...

enough!! i need to get out of here!
he turned & walked away...

he stepped out & felt a chill run through him again ...

running his hand through his hair...
unaware dat he looked extraordinarily sexy..
he sighed...

he was bout to start his jeep...
wen he heard a wail...
& den a certain noise...
it came from d alley behind d bar...

walking upto dat area...
he saw dem again...

but dis time dey were having a row...
he was trying to make her sniff something...
but she refused....

"come-on honey...try it!..."
he forced her yet agin

"par rohan..."

"it'll take u to a different world!"

shit!!...drugs!!...i've got to stop dis!!

he rushed & held d man's collar...

"chal!!...tujhe to main police ke hawaale karoonga...
selling drugs huh!"

"excuse me..."
she called lightly but wen raj ignored her...

she shouted..
"EXCUSE ME!!...just wat d'hell do u think u'r doing??
& who gave u d permission to interfere in our personal matter!?"

"personal matter!!....look lady...dis is drugs dat we're talkin bout!!
not a chewing gum...& if dis is ur 'personal matter' "
he answered sarcastically
"den kindly keep your voices down!!..."

he shrugged & was bout 2 leave wen she called him...

"hey you!!..."

she smiled at him...
took d packet from her friend's hand...

& sniffed...again & again...
"wanna try some too??"

the two giggled...& d man drew her in his arms...

sickened to his stomach..raj shook his head..

wondered where d world was headed...
& began to drive back to d academy...

his mood sullen...& irritating..
..................................

it was after sometime...
dat he saw a car race past him...

feeling revolted he increased d speed of his car too....
.....................................

after another 15 minutes...

lost in wat had happened a few moments back...
he didn't realise wen suddenly dat same
car loomed out in front of him...

it was too dark...& probably too late wen
he finally did see it...for he went right into it!!

BANG!...CRASH!!

he hurried out of his car....
& so did d driver of d other car...

"tum!!" he was shocked to see dat same girl
who he'd fought a while back wid...

"oh damn!!...not u again...
lost ur eyes wid ur brains too kya?"

she asked..angry, frustrated...& simply irritated..

"look...it wasn't my fault alone...
why d hell did u stop d car so suddenly?"

"dere's something as simple as maintaining
distance between two vehicles!!
r u new at dis??...who d hell's goin to pay for d damage!?"
she screamed back..

"well...if a girl like u can afford a luxury car...
hang around drug addicts...probably selling it too...
money ki problem to nahi hogi..i bet!"
he added sarcastic...insulting!

"stay out of it!!...u don't know wat u'r talkin bout!
& how dare u insult me??"

"insult!!...haah...u still have dat pride left in you??
tossing around from one man to d other..."


SLAP!!...

she was shivering wid anger...
"tum jaante nahi main kaun hoon??"

he came & held her tightly...
crushing her ...forcing her back...
"certainly not d queen my dear!!.."

"oooooh!!...you!!...leave me!!...u'r hurting me!!"
she screamed...

"something dat u richly deserve!!"

saying dis...he left her...his mouth twitched..

"i'd rather keep away from girls like you!"
he thundered...& sat back in his jeep...

"u'r so dead!!
don't forget to read d headlines kal mister!!"
she screamed...her hands rolled into tight fists...

"oh really...your father's a rich man...i guess...
no wonder u'r so arrogant...spoilt!!
....& btw it isn't mister...it's captain!!"

saying dis he drove away...
happy to have got d last word..
dat left her glaring & furious!!

he wondered where d self-composed man had disappeared....
probably washed away wid d drinks...

a cell rang....
"great !!navin apna phone yahin bhool gaya ..."

he picked it up...

"hi nanoo!!...nia bol rahi hoon..."
a cheerfull voice struck him like lightening...

"n....nia!!"

"wat's wrong bhaai?..ur voice seems different?"

"nia...dis is..raj here"
he felt his heartbeats pacing up...

"r...raj..."
he felt d stammer in her beautiful voice....

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sorry for dat colour change!!!!!

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