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Chocolate_luver IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 21 September 2007 at 5:14am | IP Logged


INTRO:    Kick of love


Kripa Kapoor an eighteen year old total tom boy girl in university is and captain of a local soccer team. She loves to play soccer; it's her passion apart from fighting, she's girl with attitude, class, but most of all a girl with looks who hides herself. She's tough, stubborn, spoilt, and loves to hang out with her "mates" and her best friend sanjana. But what happens one day when, a cool, dashing, witty, arrogant, flirty new coach takes over her team making her life a living hell, well according to her, with twist and turns that take place in her life, what happens to Kripa Kapoor?

Part 1

RINGGGGG, RINGGGGGG, I growl half a sleep, cursing the person on the other side for ruining my precious sleep. "Hello" I say mumbling into the phone trying to open my eyes, "KRIPAAAA DARLING, WAKEY WAKEY, IT'S TIME FOR PRACTICE IF YOU DON'T GET YOU'RE A** HERE IN THIRTY MINTUES, COACH WON'T BE SO HAPPY", "crap" I say to my self looking at my alarm clock, which I thought I had turned on last night, "don't worry sanjana I'll be there in 20, bye "and I put the phone down running into the bathroom. I come out with only a towel around me ten minutes later having a quick shower; I walk over to my dressing table, and look at myself. I smile this was the real kripa Kapoor, a girl and not a boy, of course they all knew that though they still called me a tom boy, it's not that I hate being a girl but I guess I'm not into that love crap and dressing up, it's a waste of time, though sometime I wish I could do all those things, but oh well, I look at my watch, and curse myself for wasting two minutes looking at myself.

I put my uniform on, which was a pair of blue shorts and white and blues shirt with the number 1 on the back with my last name "KAPOOR" in big letter. It made me feel so proud of myself. I tied my hair in a ponytail, not caring if it looked bad, I grabbed my gym bag and ran out of my room. Bumping into my mum, Mrs. Gayathri Kapoor. G- kripa beta have something to eat before you leave, K- noooooo mumma I have to go otherwise coach is going to kick my a**, she said running out the door , Gayathri just shook her head what was she too do with kripa, she already had a son, she didn't want another and she left heading into the kitchen. Kripa arrived there five minute early, running to sanjana (Anita). S- twenty minutes huh she said with a smirk, K- you know traffic, S- yeh yeh, come on coach is calling us.

They both walked over with the rest of the team , kripa of course standing up with the coach talking and preparing for their next game, when the coach had gave some shocking new, C- now , I'm sorry to say but I'll be retiring, team- WHAT!, C- yes I'm thinking of retiring , but don't worry my son, will be combing back , and he will be taking over for me, don't worry you girls will love him, Team- aww we're going to miss you coach, C- I'll miss you to girls, make sure you girls keep the hard work up and listen to my son, and kripa I hope you continue to lead the team on, kripa nodded smiling, C- okay now enough with this speech , two laps around the grounds and then 30 push ups and crunches and we'll get started with a game. And the girls took off.

As usual kripa and sanjana ran together. S- hmm I wonder how the new coach will be like, K- who cares, S- but aren't you little curious , K- no , who ever he is, what do I have to do with it, nothing, S- man kripa your so stubborn and arrogant, K- and that's why we get along, S- funny, K- I know , so how was the week, S- you know college boring as usual, and your annoying brother Eijaz will not leave me alone, K- yeh that's because he likes you, she said widening her eyes a few seconds later, realizing she had just spilled that out, S- WHAT, K- nothing I was just joking , hahaha, S- okay you scared me, K- sorry. And they continued with their two laps , as usual they both finished before the rest, of course that's why kripa was captain and sanjana was vice captain, though they were similar, they had many differences, sanjana was a typical girlie girl but loved playing sport, where kripa was of course opposite. 

The whole team was done with their warm up and game, when the coach called them, C- okay girls , tomorrow here at 7 sharp okay my son will be here, T- okay coach, and they all left, after saying good bye to Mr. Khanna. Kripa and sanjana went back home. Kripa had a shower , and went down to get a bite, when her mum called her , G- kripa come here, K- yeh mum she said walking into the kitchen, G- kripa we have to go shopping for your cousins wedding , K- mum noooooo you know I hate shopping, G- what girl hates shopping, k- I doo, g- whatever your going and that's final , we will go tomorrow after your practice, how was it today, K- good she said taking a bite out of her pair , K- where getting a new coach, g- yeh I heard Mr. khanna's son, K- yeh, G- hmmmm.

Kripa had a early night, knowing she had to wake up pretty early for tomorrow's practice. The next morning kripa and sanjana and the rest were already at the ground a little early. S- seriously I wonder how he looks, k- sanjana seriously what does that have to do with soccer , S- no I'm just really curious , k- whatever.  One and half hours later kripa and the girls where getting angry they had been waiting and still this new coach had not come.


When bam she crashed into someone's chest, she looked up to see tall guy grinning at her tossing a soccer ball in the air yes it was none other than angad khanna.



okay here is the first part, tell me how it is, i'll open we're simply opposite when i write the first part!!! plzzzzz leave comments!!!,thanks!

Edited by Chocolate_luver - 07 March 2008 at 10:35am

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joa123 Senior Member

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Posted: 21 September 2007 at 5:26am | IP Logged
wow gr8 start...
i luv this tomboy kripa Wink
first meeting me hi ladai start ho gayi inkiLOL Wink
do update soon
cheeselova IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 21 September 2007 at 5:51am | IP Logged
awesome part
i'm glad u started writing another ff
i'm soo happy
cont soon
can't wait for the next part

Kaj! IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 21 September 2007 at 5:55am | IP Logged
wow gr8 part. another fab fan fic....continue soon LOL Tongue
mintfresh Senior Member

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Posted: 21 September 2007 at 6:29am | IP Logged
glad u started this ff
i loved the concept
it really sounds fun and interesting
amzing start
plz cont soon
ridizzz IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 21 September 2007 at 6:30am | IP Logged
Fab start.
liked it...interesting.
plz cont. soon
Shazia_haya IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 21 September 2007 at 6:37am | IP Logged started a new fanfic...omg...I love this one I guess I'd prefer you to continue this ff and Chupke Se Nazar Mille..... Embarrassed Wink
tommygirl Groupbie

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Posted: 21 September 2007 at 6:51am | IP Logged
awesome part
continue soon

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