dmg forum's own ff

hey guys !!!!!!!!!!!!! dis is tia !!!!!!!!!

i saw many ff's in dis forum and trust me , i loved each one of dem ...........they are jus' so cool !!!!!!!

but i wanted to start one ff which has no villians and only a love story b/w armaan and rids !!!!!!!!!!!!

here , it's not only me who's gonna write but every1 can contribute to dis ...... dat's why i 've called it dmg forum's own ff !!!!!!!!

 

charcters:same as d serial wid the only difference being dat anjali is armaan's real and younger  sis .........she's one year younger to all of dem but is an intern wid all of dem in d same hospital .......... she luvs ridz and armaan ..................armaan dotes on his sis ..............armaan and ridz are seeing each oder .............................

 

 

 

 

so guys , plz give a starting den only can i continue as i am not so good wid d startings ........

k .........i'll give d starting

armaan and ridz were sitting in d hospital cafe and armaan told her dat he has planned to take her on a date ......

r:armaan .. kya tum paagal ho gaye ho ???????? date ???????
a:kyun??????
r:kya tumhe pataaaa nahi hai ki tumhare dad kitne strict
hain ??????????woh tumhe date ke liye toh kya , padne ke liye bhi kissi ladki ke saath nahi jaane dete the school days mein ......... remember ???????
a:haan tum theek keh rahi ho ......... but i have planned sumthing sooooooooooooooo cool fr both of us ..........
kuch toh sochna padega .........
ridz feels so bad fr him seeing dat he is upset
r:armaan , i understand ur feelings but tumhare dad ko yeh sab accha nahi lagega ........woh tumhe jaane nahi denge .......dekho , next month woh kaam se out of town jaa rahe hain naa two weeks ke liye , hum tab chale jaayenge ......... cool ?????????
a:shayad tum theek keh rahi ho ........he cheers up a little
den anji enters
anji:hey bro !! hey ridz !! wat's up wid u bro ?? y r u lukin' so upset ??
ar:nuthing anji !! i just planned to take ridz on a date but dad allow nahi karenge
anji:bro , toh tumhe mere paas ana chahiye tha naa , mein tumhe solution bataati ....... jaise mein jaati hoon atul ke saath, waise hi tum bhi jaaoge ridz ke saath ..
ar:tum atul ke saath date pe kab gayi??
anji:see bro !! kisi ko pataa bhi nahi chala
.. it's simple!! meine dad ko bola ki ek patient bahut bimaar hai and dere's an emergency and i have to rush to d hospital ......
ar:aur dad ne maan liya ??
anji:maanta kyun nahi ?? after all , i am a born actress .... u know dat , dont u bro ?? jaise tumhe bachpan me , meri wajeh see maar padti thi
ar:yeah how can i forget dat my lil sis ?? but temme one thing , mujhe toh acting atti nahin , ab mein kya karoon
anji:ridz , r u sure sure tumhe mera dufus bhai pasand hai ??
r:(nodded)i know he's such a dufus but i guess i just cant help it .......
armaan made that expression"oh yeah ????? really!??!"dat sort of an expression .......
anji:neways , toh bro tumhe kab jaana hai ??
ar:aaj sham ko !!
anji: kewl den , u guys go ahead mein dad ko sambhal doongi aur bro mein tumhe phone pe bataa doongi meine dad ko exactly kya kaha .. k ??
ar:thanks a ton sis !! u rock!!
anji leaves the cafe and now both of dem are very excited and start talking in d cafe !!!!!!!!

that was a great part tia........... 👏 👏 👏
loved it aur angie atul ke saath...... 😆

ya it was nice pls some1 continue

r:toh armaan ab hum kahaan jaa rahe hain raat ko ??
ar:dat's a surprise !!
r:armaaaaaaan !!tum aur tumhare surprises !!
ar:so i'll catch up wid u l8r .. tonight at 8 !! i'll pick u up !!!!
r:cool but tum kahaan jaa rahe ho abhi ??
ar:(in a teasing way)kucch PERSONAL kaam tha
r:(gets curous to know)personal?? kya personal kaam ??
ar:bas kissi ladki ke liye gift lena tha par tum yeh sab kyun pooch rahi ho ??
r:(trying to act as if she doesnt care) nahin kucch nahi !! bas aise hi !! kyunki tum kaafi jaldi mein lag rahe the .. mujhe kya tum jahaan bhi jaao
ar:i was jus' kiddin' .. chill ..
just then a girl pases by and armaan stares at her just to tease ridz !!
r:armaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaan !!
he pretends as if he's lost
r:armaaaaaaaaaan !! r u dere??
den she pretends to leave
he grabs hold of her hand as she was abt to get up and started laughing !!!

wow gd ff..cont.. 😉

Komal

ar:(Asks in an innocent tone)kya hua ridz??
r:(givin' him a taunt)kuch nahi .. tum itne busy the toh meine osocha ki tumhe akela chod doon
ar:ooooooooooooooh !! a jealous basket !! dat's new !!(in an innocent tone)basket , why r u soooooooooo jealous??
r:jealous ?? aur woh bhi kyunki tum us ladki ko check out kar rahe the ??neva .. y shud i be jealous dr.armaan??
she leaves
in d locker room
she is lukin' fr sumthin' in her locker wen ar cums frm behind and hugs her ..
ar:hey sweetheart

no comments 😭 :(

r dusnt reply
ar:uknow tuday was such a hectic day !! i am soooooooooooooooo tired !!!!
but after meeting u i feel much betta
(kisses her on her cheek and still hugging her from behind)
r:armaan aaj hum bahaar nahi jaa payenge kujhe kucch kaam hai(still angry)
she starts walking away
he catches hold of her
ar:wat happenened baby?are u upset abt dat cafe scene
i was jus' kiddin' ........... iam really sorry ...........i didnt mean to hurt u !!!!!!!!!and u know dat
riddhima saw him and her heart melted
r:it's okay !!
so , will u drop me home ??so dat i can change??
ar:sure .. let's go
he drops her home
and cums to pick her up at 8
she cums out at 8:30 luking drop-dead gorgeous !!
armaan almost faints
she was wearing a black short dress with her hair let -loose ..

nice!!! yaar, achha hua tumne yeh forum join kiya. I was wondering what happened to u!!! Anyway, cont someone. Bechaari Tia se saara kaam karva rahe ho!!!

i'll continue as usual !!

r:armaan , r u okay ??
a:(getting back to his senses)huh ?? ya . me ? ya i am fine .. let's go ??
r: ya sure !!
armaan opens d door fr rids
wen she ws abt to sit down , she tripped and fell on armaan .. she was in his arms .. dey kept kuin' at each oder and den separated ..
in d car ,
ar: ridz , u r lukin' realy pretty
r:thanks armaan .. even u r lukin' really hot in ur red shirt ..
armaan couldnt stop lukin' at her ......
r:(feelin' weird) armaan , toh hum kahaan jaa rahe hain
ar:u'll cum to know abt dat really very soon ..
(he had actually planned sumthin' really cool fr her )
dey reach armaan's place .. ridz was a bit surprised .. she thought that he wud take her to sum romantic place and instead he tuk her to his house ?? wat was he up to ??
r: armaan , hum tumhare ghar kyun aaye ??
ar: ummmm !! woh !! i realized that i forgot sumthin' at my place ..
r:oh !!okay !! i'll wait in d car ..
ar: no no !! u cum along wid me !! it mite take sum time !! plz u cum along !!
r:k !!
armaan takes her to his place ..
when dey enter , ridz sees her family and armaan's family sitting together in d dining room ..
r:(shocked or i shud rather say surprised) armaan , yeh sab kya hai ??
ar puts his hand around her shoulder ..
ridz notices it and feels embarassed in front of her family ..
armaan had actually gathered courage , earlier in d day and spoken to his father abt his and rids' marriage .. his father had agreed and both d families had gathered fr d same ..
armaan told ridz abt dis.. ridz was very surprised and couldnt stop blushing ..


Edited by lrl_fan14 - 16 years ago