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Posted: 16 years ago

๐Ÿ˜‰ ๐Ÿ˜‰ i like kripa roll ๐Ÿ˜‰ ๐Ÿ˜‰

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Edited by tekhum - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago

Part twenty five

Pari: ๐Ÿ˜ก baat nahi karoongee me onse

Prince: itna ghussa! Bilkul apnee maa pe gayee ho ๐Ÿ˜† 

Rani: Prince! ๐Ÿ˜ฒ Aap bhi na. Aakhir khaar huwa kya?

Pari: kuch nahi huwa wahee to problem hai.

Both Rani and Prince are confused.๐Ÿ˜• ๐Ÿ˜• Their daughter had been like that whole day and now they decided to talk it out with her.

Prince: aisa kya jagra hogaya tum dono me?

Pari: jagra nahi huwa hai papa. Bus me onse naraaz hu. ๐Ÿ˜’ Pure din se onka phone try karahee hu, per janab ka phone switched off hai.

Prince: itnee chotee see baat pe itna ghussa?

Pari: chotee baat! ๐Ÿ˜กYeh chotee baat nahi hai. Onhone mujhe phone kyu nahi kiya, or ese ghum kese hogaye? Wo bhi aaj ke din.

Rani: aaj ke din aesa khaas kya hai?

Pari: (embarrassed ๐Ÿ˜ณ and hesistated) nahi woโ€ฆbus aaj ke din onka phone nahi aaya, isiliyeโ€ฆ

Rani: dekh, yu ghussa karne se kuch nahi hoga. Kuch zaroori kaam me phas gaya hoga. Tu to jaantee hai na ke kitna kaam ose saambhaalna hota hai. Filhaal tu rehne de. Shaadi ke baad khoob daatna ose.

Prince: yeh kya apnee lat lagarahee ho apnee betee ko ๐Ÿ˜ˆ mujhe to har pal daat tee rehtee ho.

Rani: Prince! ๐Ÿ˜ณ

Prince: dekha Pari, phirse kiya na. tu aisa mat karna. Her koi meree tarha bhola bhala ๐Ÿคฃ to nahi jo chup chaap apnee biwi kee daant sunle.๐Ÿ˜† Kya pata Saumya agar bhaag gaya to.

Rani: Prince yeh kya kehrahe hai aap?๐Ÿ˜ก ๐Ÿ˜ฒ

Both argued.

Pari: me yaha apnee baat karahee hu, or aap dono shuroo hogaye. Koi fiyada nahi. Theek hai yeh baataye ke kya aaj raat ko me Kripa ke saat bahar jaasaktee hu?

Rani: kitne baje?

Pari: maโ€ฆwoโ€ฆmaโ€ฆwo baara baje

Prince and Rani: Baara baje? ๐Ÿ˜’

Prince: itnee dair ko ghar ke bahar kaha jaana hai?

Pari: (hesitated because first time she was going to lie to her parents) wo Kripa ke ghar. Wo chahtee hai ke aaj me oske ghar pe raat guzaaroo. Phir me ne socha ke yeh thikh nahi hoga kyu ke Saumya bhi wahee honge perโ€ฆ

Rani: bilkul theek socha tuโ€ฆ

Prince: jaa.๐Ÿ˜Š Is bahane tera mood bhi change hojaehga.

Pari stormed to her room whilst Prince was making himself prepared for a furious Rani.

Rani: yeh kya kiya aapne?๐Ÿ˜ก

Prince: (has an innocent face ๐Ÿ˜›) kya kiya? Sirf apnee betee ko thoree choote deraha hu.

Rani: choote? Aisee choote?

Prince: dekho, is waqt oska dimaag garam hai. Agar hum ose na kehte to wo phir bhi chalee jaatee, humse jhooth boleke. Wese to me Pari ko jaanta hu,๐Ÿ˜Š per jabse Saumya oskee zindagee me aaya hai to wo kuch badal see gayee hai. Oske kaam karne ke andaaz or zindagee dekhne ka nazarya badal gaya hai. Yeh sab dhayaan me rakh ke mene yeh faisal liya. Ab batao kuch ghalat kiya? or me jaanta hu ke wo Saumya se milna chahtee hai. 

Rani: itna sab kuch aapne itnee thoree dair me soch liya?

Prince: are yeh to Prince Thaapar ka kamaal hai.๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜ƒ

Rani: rehne dijye. Khud kee tareef khud ke mooh se acchee nahi lagtee. Per aaj waaqe me aap per mujhe pyaar aaraha hai. โ˜บ๏ธ (kisses him on the cheek)

Prince:
๐Ÿ˜ฒ are wah. Lagta hai ab roze mujhe Pari ko bahar bhejna hoga raat ko. Jo agar tohfa itna haseen milega to. (takes her in his embrace, ๐Ÿค— she rests her hed on his chest)    

Rani: me jaantee hu, Pari kuch ghalat nahi karegee, kyu ke mujhe hamaree parwarish pe bharosa hai.

Meanwhile in Pari's room, Pari was really upset ๐Ÿ˜ญ that Saumya remembered nothing and didn't even bother to call.

Pari: (to herself) me bhi nahi phone karoongee ab, or agar onka phone aaehga bhi na to baat bhi nahi karoongee.

end of part.

Edited by arwa72 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: tekhum

                    ๐Ÿ˜‰

๐Ÿ˜‰ ๐Ÿ˜‰ i think ke tumhe part thode bade banane chahiye ๐Ÿ˜‰ ๐Ÿ˜‰

๐Ÿ˜‰ ๐Ÿ˜‰ wait nahi kar sakta yaar, its too good, samjha karo. ๐Ÿ˜‰ ๐Ÿ˜‰

im doing a long one with the next part, just for you. but wo kehte hai na keh u shud always leave the reader wanting more.

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Posted: 16 years ago

Part twenty six

Kripa picked Pari up around 11:45 pm and was dazed to see her. She was wearing a beautiful red saree with embroidered work. She wore red bangles on her hands, long red earings in her ears and to make everything complete, a ruby choker in her neck.

Kripa: (to herself) aaj to bhaiya kee nikal paree ๐Ÿ˜† 

Pari: chal. Ye kya, ๐Ÿ˜ฒ mujhse sajne sawarne ko kaha or khud itne saade kapre me aaeee?

Kripa: bhabhi aap to jaantee hai na ke mujhe ziada sajne sawarne ka shoke nahi. But you're looking mind blowing (whistles).

Pari: ab ziada taareefe karnee band kar, or chal, warna dair hojaehgee.

Port

Kripa parked the car at the side of the port, just near their house boat. The reason why Pari didn't know about this was because Saumya had bought it a few months ago and wanted to surprise her.

Pari:
yeh kaha aagayeh hum?

Kripa: osne mujhe yahi ka address diya hai. Chalye dekhte hai. (took hold of Pari's hand and began walking when stopped midway) are bhabhi  me apna purse gaari me bhool gayee.

Pari: ja, jaake lekar aa. Me intezaar kartee hu.

Kripa: aap chalye, me aatee hu.

Pari: nahi ๐Ÿ˜’ hum saat jaaenge, agar mujhe pehle dekhliya to kya sochega?

Kripa: (to herself) are hosh hee or jaenge ๐Ÿ˜ƒ ๐Ÿ˜† to sochega kaise?

Pari: kya soch rahee hai. Jaake lekar aah, jaldee

Kripa: bura laega agar hum waqt pe nahi pohoche. Aap jaaye na, me bus do minute me aatee hu.

Again Pari couldn't defy because Kripa left. She had no choice. As she walked towards the edge of the port, slowly the lights came up, with her each step. Then there it was right in front of her.  She froze in her tracks due to shock.

In front of her was the most beautiful thing ever. A big boat was lit up with lights and in the middle it said 'WELCOME PARI'. She was amazed as to what was happening and who was doing all this. She made her way up the stairs and once onto the dock, her eyes searched for the person responsible for all this. A hand covered her eyes and a soft voice whispered in her ear.

Saumya:
I love you, meri Pari.

Pari felt his sweet smell and his soft soothing breath on her neck, ๐Ÿ˜ณ which transformed her into someone else.

Pari: ๐Ÿ˜Š Saumya aapโ€ฆ

Saumya: ssh. Kuch na kaho. Bus chalo mere saath. (he put his one arm around her shoulder whislt the other remianed on her closed eyes. He escorted her to the middle of the dock.) ab dheere se apnee aakhen kholo.

As soon as she opened her eyes, they glinted with surprise and awe. ๐Ÿ˜ƒ ๐Ÿ˜ฒThe place was decorated with lights and flowers. There was a banner which read 'HAPPY ANNIVERSARY SWEETHEART' right above a three tier chocloate cake. Everything was just so amazing. The atmosphere was perfectly romantic and she was lost for words. Then she heard some soft music and she turned around to find Saumya standing there with his handsomely cute smile.๐Ÿ˜ƒ ๐Ÿ˜ƒ

Saumya: pariyo kee maleka ka is nacheez ke darbaar me swagat hai. ๐Ÿ˜† May I have this dance?

Pari laughed โ˜บ๏ธand gave her hand in his.  They stayed very close staring into each other's passionful eyes. The song was just perfect.

Bheege honth tereโ€ฆpyaasa dil mera
Lage abr saโ€ฆmujhe tan tera
โ€“ first Saumya looked at Pari's lips, then Pari looked at his lips, but no- one said anything because their eyes said it all.

Chamke barsayeโ€ฆmujh per ghataeh, tu hee meree piyasโ€ฆtu he mera jaam.
Kabhi mere saath, koi raat guzaar, tujhe subah tak me karoon pyar.

Then he holds her even tight โ€“ Sansen aanch tereeโ€ฆtan aag tera, cheene neend mereeโ€ฆloote chain mera.

Wind blew Pari's hair โ€“ Kala jadoo kareโ€ฆlambe baal tere, aankhen jheel tereeโ€ฆtore laal tere.
Kabhi mere saat koi raat guzaar, tujhe subah tak me karoon pyar.
Aankhen kehraheeโ€ฆjo na hum kahen, ose sun le tuuโ€ฆjo na lab kahe

He turned her around and held her by the waist. He rested his chin on her shoulder โ€“ tu na soye aajโ€ฆme na soun aaj, tujhe dekhoo aajโ€ฆtujhme koun aaj
Kabhi mere saat koi raat guzaar. Tujhe subah tak me karoon pyar
.

Now they were facing each other waiting for the other to make the move. A new bunch of emotions were running in Pari ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜• which made her uneasy and just wanted to hide away in Saumya.

Saumya gradually bent down closer and closer to Pari's face. Then he carressed her cheek, with his finger โค๏ธ and then on the tip of her lips. Then he moved even closer, so that there was only an inch distance between their lips.

Pari had her eyes closed ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ because she was too shy to look into his eyes. She didn't want to stop him but also was afraid. It wasn't the first time they had kissed but it was the first time after they got engaged and that night was also special. She could feel her heartbeat going faster with every breath she took. She wanted to feel his softness and taste his sweetness.

He was just about to lip lock, when Pari became shy and ran away to the otherside of the dock. He smiled and went after her, took her into his arms and kissed her. It was full of passion, love, hunger as if it had been deprived of the sweet taste. As he continued the kiss, he crushed her more into him, making them even closer.

Saumya: (in between kiss) ๐Ÿ˜‰ yeh mera os din ka tha

Then he kissed her again and again this time it was long, full of passion. This time he dug deeper, attempting to go in and have a war with the tongue.

Saumya:
(breathing heavily) ๐Ÿ˜ƒ and this one was for giving me this wonderful day to celebrate. ๐Ÿฅณ 

They both leaned their noves on each other and caught up with their breath. At that moment they really wanted to get lost into each other ๐Ÿ˜ but they knew that they better stop before it's too late.

Pari:
Saumya, yeh sab aapne kiya?

Saumya: or nahi to kya. ๐Ÿ˜‰ Meree Pari mujhse kuch maange or me ose na du.

She hugged ๐Ÿค— ๐Ÿค—him tight and rested her head on his chest.

Saumya: pata hai aaj sub kuch bemisaal hai. Chaandni raat hai, ๐Ÿ˜‰ ๐Ÿ˜‰haseen saath hai, or dono me beinteha pyaar hai ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ (this last line he spoke whilst looking into her eyes).

The only thing Pari could think about right then was that how Saumya's eyes made him look so damn sexy that it was hard for her to control herself.

Saumya: you've got to stop teasing me. ๐Ÿ˜‰ ๐Ÿ˜†

Pari: mene kya kiya?

Saumya: bohat khoobsurat jo dekhrahee ho aaj. ๐Ÿ˜ƒ Itnee ke jee chahta hai ke tumhe bus dekhta rahu puree raat.

Pari: ๐Ÿ˜ณ yeh saaj, sringhaar aap hee ke wajese hai. Jab Kripa ne kahaโ€ฆKripa? ๐Ÿ˜• Yeh Kripa kaha rehgayee?

Saumya: ๐Ÿ˜’ kya tum bhi. Itne acche romantic mood ko aise bigaar diya. Hum dono ke beech, yeh Kripa kaha aagayee?

Pari: Saumya, mazaak mat kijye. Kripa hee mujhe yahaโ€ฆ(she understood) acha! To yeh sab aap dono kee milee bhaghat thee. ๐Ÿ˜› 

Saumya: tumhe surprise jo dena tha. ๐Ÿ˜ƒ Warna tumto naraaz hee hogayee thee.

Pari: ๐Ÿ˜ฒ aap ko kese pata chala ke me naraaz thi?

Saumya: kyu, agar tumhe meree her ek pal kee khabar rehtee hai, to phir mujhe tumharee her ek pal kee khabar nahi rahegee?

Pari: I love you!

Saumya: phir se kaho ๐Ÿ˜‰ 

Pari: I love you!

Saumya: jore se kaho๐Ÿ˜ƒ   

Pari: (whilst hugging ๐Ÿค— him) I love you! I love you! I love you!

end of part, hope u guys enjoy it.    

Edited by arwa72 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
Fab ff.
liked it.
plz cont. soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
๐Ÿ‘

"WOW , TUMNE TO IS PART ME KAMAAL HI KAR DIYA"
""EKDAM PERFECT LOVE SCENE CREATE KIYA HE""
"""AS ALWAYS WAITING 4 MORE AND MORE"""

๐Ÿ‘
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: tekhum

๐Ÿ‘

"WOW , TUMNE TO IS PART ME KAMAAL HI KAR DIYA"
""EKDAM PERFECT LOVE SCENE CREATE KIYA HE""
"""AS ALWAYS WAITING 4 MORE AND MORE"""

๐Ÿ‘

im glad its making an impact on u

tekhum thumbnail
Posted: 16 years ago
hmmm wht happen nothing new 2day
awaazilicious thumbnail
Posted: 16 years ago
itll be posted tomorrow, i promise
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Posted: 16 years ago

Part twenty seven

After have spent a long time eating the cake and then feeding each other their favourite food, they sat cuddled ๐Ÿค— together on a lounger.

Saumya:
Pari, apni aankhen band karo

Pari: ๐Ÿ˜‰ ๐Ÿ˜ƒ phirse koi surprise hai?

Saumya: tum band to karo.

She closed her eyes in excitement.

Saumya: (pulled out a red box from the side and opened it.) ab kholdo!

She was amazed to find in front of her a beautiful diamond necklace.

Pari: wow, ๐Ÿ˜ƒ ๐Ÿ˜ƒ ๐Ÿ˜ƒSaumya yeah?

Saumya: pariyo kee maleka ke liye ek nacheez tohfa. ๐Ÿ˜† 

Pari: bohat hee khoobsurat hai.

Saumya: or bhi khoobsurat lagega agar maleka โ€“ eh- husn ๐Ÿ˜‰ iska sringhaar karegee.

Pari: yu shayaro kee zubaan kabse bole ne lage aap?

Saumya: yeh to tumhara sangat hai. ๐Ÿ˜Š Ab chalo, jaldi se yeh pehn ke dekhao.

Pari: aaphee pehna dijya na ๐Ÿ˜› 

She lifted her hands to untie her choker when Saumya stopped her. then he slowly slid the tie on and let it loose. He moved her hair away from her neck and now was able to see her bare upper back. He had this urge to touch. Then he put the necklace around her neck and as he clasped the lock, he touched her bare skin. Pari felt a strange tingle ๐Ÿ˜ณ and all of a sudden she was being turned on again. Then Saumya left a soft kiss โค๏ธ on her shoulder.

Saumya:
ab dekhoo to zara ke meree pyaari see Pari, lagtee kesee hai. (he turned her around facing him and she looked so beautiful that he got lost in her beauty ๐Ÿ˜)

Pari: I'm sorry Saumya. Me aapke liye koi tohfa nahi laayee.

Saumya: tohfa to tumne de diya hai mujhe.๐Ÿ˜‰

Pari: ๐Ÿ˜ฒ mene kya diya?

Saumya: lagta hai phirse namoona dekha na parega ๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜† (he was going to kiss her again but she stopped him).

Pari: ๐Ÿ˜ณ nahi Saumya, phirse nahi. Actually mene aapke liye ek bohat see sweet cheez tayaar kee thee, ๐Ÿ˜ƒ lekin mujhe to pata hee nahi tha ke yaha pe yeh hone waala hai.

Saumya: hmm. Kahee wo sweet see cheez yeh to nahi? (pulled out an album from the side as well).

Pari: aapko kese pata chala iske baare me?

Saumya: MAGIC! ๐Ÿ‘ 

Pari: zaroor meree jasoosi karahai the ๐Ÿ˜›

Saumya: jab tum meree aakhon ke saamne har pal rehtee ho to phir jaasoosi ka sawaal kaha peda hota hai. Tumhare dil โค๏ธ kee raah mere dil โค๏ธ tak hai, to kya mujhe nahi pata chalaega, tumhara dil โค๏ธ kya chahta hai

Both Saumya and Pari smiled. Then they looked at the album together which was full of all their memories over the last two years. There were some amusing moments,๐Ÿ˜† sensual moments, ๐Ÿ˜ณ emotional moments ๐Ÿ˜ญ and some very cute moments. ๐Ÿ˜ƒ There were also few pictures with Sujal and Kashish when all four use to hang out together.

Pari: Saumya, aapko yaad hai, jab hum pehlee baar mile the?

Saumya: wo mulaqaat me kese bhool sakta hu (took her in his arms from behind and rested his chin on her shoulder) os din se to sab kuch badal gayaโ€ฆ

okay guys here it ends, ill try and write the next part today so meanwhile enjoy and leave comments.

     

Edited by arwa72 - 16 years ago