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FAN FICTION BY SAARRTHI LOVER (Page 9)

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Posted: 14 November 2005 at 7:13am | IP Logged
great work saarthi lover but i thought from the previous post that bhumi was pregant
please continue soon

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Posted: 15 November 2005 at 3:00am | IP Logged
Great!simply great.Except the CD part everything is very good.I think that the writers of SAARRTHI must see this portion of ur fic and should to follow it.After such a long time ur fic just refreshed us.
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Posted: 15 November 2005 at 6:32am | IP Logged
guys i m continuing the story:
manasvi is shocked by listening bhumika
manasvi goes to arjun in his room and very rudely says to him that:patni to laxmi hoti hai na leken tumne usse shaadi karke usse na apna ke laxmi ka apman kiya hai

arjun:bhabhi main to bahut pehle bhavri ko apnana chahta tha leken wo........

manasvi:leken wo kya shefali par itna bharosa tha .........

arjun:bhabhi .........

manasvi leaves in anger

bhumika enters the room she is having severe headache she is about to fall when arjun catches her she gets faint

after the checkup doctor says she is very weak you have to take care of her she is having fever

arjun and bhumika are left alone in the room bhumika gets up and sees arjun sitting beside her crying silently.
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Posted: 15 November 2005 at 11:19am | IP Logged
plz continue soon!!! Clap Clap Clap
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Posted: 15 November 2005 at 12:53pm | IP Logged
please write soon!!!
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Posted: 16 November 2005 at 9:03am | IP Logged
That's really nice and thanks for being so fast in posting the fic.Just keep up this speed.
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Posted: 18 November 2005 at 6:11am | IP Logged
well today i was not in a mood of writing but by seeing such a great response i m really happy and want to write:

recap:bhumika got faint doctor says she is very weak arjun is sitting beside her crying silently Cry

bhumika gets up from the bed when arjun says:bhavri mein to tumse baat karne kay laiq nahin hoon tumse kabhi bhi aankh mila kar baat nahin karpaon ga

guys i m gonna continue afterwards please give me some suggetions and dont forget to post comments

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Posted: 19 November 2005 at 9:52am | IP Logged
great job saarthi lover!
why don't you expose shefali's truth to everyone!
add romantic sences between arjun and bhoomi!
please write soon!

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