FAN FICTION BY SAARRTHI LOVER - Page 7

Posted: 18 years ago
plzz post next part soon . U r just great keep it up. 😊
Posted: 18 years ago
You r just doing a great job.You can open up the truth of Suraj and the factory blust also,make kakashahebs situation worse and obviously do not forget to put romantic dialogues and scences between A-B. πŸ‘
Posted: 18 years ago
please continue..

Great job.. πŸ‘
Posted: 18 years ago
u r doing a great job 😊 plzz post soon
Posted: 18 years ago
guys after such a long time i m back with new story well guys from today onwards u will just see romantic scenes so
next scene:
recap:arjun says to bhumika that he has done very wrong

bhumika answers:aaarrrrrjjjjuuuuunnnn( πŸ˜† )
arjun put his fingers on her lips and come closer to her but bhumika leaves him and about to go when arjun grabs her dupatta she looks back and hug arjun
then arjun says :bhumika plz mujhe maaf kardo main is duniya ka sab se kharab pati hoon
bhumika says:nahin arjun tum is duniya ke sab se ache pati ho ab rona band karo warna phir tumhein suit wala murga bana pade ga and they laugh and hug each other
Posted: 18 years ago
okay....arjun calls her bhavri..to please bhavri ko bumika nai bulao....but the romance is too good....good to have you back....with the romance
Posted: 18 years ago
welcome back
great work
please write soon
i also agree with hetal
Posted: 18 years ago
i like it,keep it up.
but plz write some longer scences.
Posted: 18 years ago
Where are you?????We all are waiting.
Posted: 18 years ago
hey i m back and also free from my exams so from tomorrow i m going to start the fic

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