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wow.... Clap great going Anju

Plzzz continue

cant wait

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it's really superb anu...plz continue

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Posted: 22 August 2005 at 4:21pm | IP Logged
hi anju....so finally i found your story!!!! its brilliant yaar! great. keep it up. mujhe to dhruv se zaida karan acha lagne laga hai. hehhehehe Tongue
keep it up!

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Excellent job. Do continue

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EPISODE-10

STORY SO FAR: -
Sanjana says that she wasn't ragged. Mohit is happy and thanks karan for everthing. Sanjana approaches karan and says that she knows him..and warns to stAy way from her.

NOW:-
That day again…Karan leaves home…All the words of sanjana are again repeating in his ears. He stops his car and keeps thinking..why does her words always makes an impact on him. He drives to dhruv's home to meet MAMA (REEMA)

[b]AGARWAL:-
Its evening and Dhruv has gone to his evening college…Reema sees karan at the door and is happy. ." aaj mere bete ko is maa ki yaad kaise aa gayi..". Karan says that even if he doesn't come she always is with her. Karna goes straight and sleeps on her Laps..Reema waves her hands on his hair and asks whether he is tired. He says yes. Reema aks karan what happened to him."kya hua beta..".Karn says nothing…
Reema says don't lie..if he doesn't want to say don't say but don't lie…
Karan smiles and says that how she gets him everytime."mama meri man ki baat hamehs jaan lete ho.."
Reema also asks him what happened that night that forced him to drink. Karan never says the truth and says he fought with someone..
Reeema asks "ladki ya ladka.."
Karan :"kya mama aap bhi.."
Reema smiles and puts her hand on his cheeks.
Karan continues and says that there is one person who he doesn't like.and wants to trouble him but evrtime he tells something that makes an impact on him. Last time he drunk for the same reason. He fought with that person.he aks her why?
Reema says : "Woh is leye beta..kyunki tumhara Dil hai na..us insaan ki har baat man ta hai..tumhe bhi paata hain ki woh sach hai..par dimaag hain na..woh nahi manta kyunki tum us insaan ko pasand nahi kart bas itna hi.."
Karan smiles and keeps thinking…and reema awakens him from his thoughts..
"kis soch mein doobe ho.."
Karan smiles and says nothing and asks her to give food…
Reema serves him food and he eats from her hand as always.

STREET:-
Anita and sanjana are eating Paani poori…at one famous stall where anita usually eats..
On seeing dhruv..sanjana shouts.."Ji.."
Dhruv..smiles at her..and says hi to her.
Sanjana thanks him once again and says that that day she forgot to ask his name too…
"mera naam dhruv hai.." he says..aur aap ka naam sanju hain..na.."

Sanjana and anita laugh..dhruv watches himself and feels that something might be wrong in his dress. Sanjana says: "sorry..actually mera naam sanjana hain..Log mujhe pyaar se sanju bulate hain..". Dhruv says sorry and tells her the reason for guessing her name..
Sanjana says: " Its ok.." She also asks him about him..He tells evrthing about his work and college..Sanjana is impressed when she comes to know he attends evening college to support his mother and studying in evening.Dhruv says: " chalo..mujhe der ho rahi hai.." and leaves..
After he leaves sanjana explains to anita the whole incident..

AT THE KAPOOR:-
Nitin and Lalit ask sanjana bout their college and ragging..
She explains to them..Both are happy and say: " chalo hapy ending hua.."
When they hear arundhati shouting.."khana tayyar hain.."
All of them laugh…

AT THE AGARWALS:_
After karan returns after his evening college..reema says that karan had come today..
Dhruv is happy..Reema also says..that was sad…for some reason..
Dhruv says. "Phir se kise ladki ke chakkar me pad gaya hoga.."
Reema says no and says that about his fight with one man..
Dhruv too says that karan had told him..she tells him that he need to find ou that…
Dhruv knows about prashant and says to reema that it alwas happens to him as Prashant is the person and he was his friend once upon a time..
Reema is relived ..

episode ends

COMING UP:
Karan and his friends decide to organize an event for juniours after pricipal asks them..Avantika says to karan that organisisng an event means accepting defeat in fron of sanjana.Karan says that he never defeats in front of anyone and sanjana is not the only juniour..they should organize…



Edited by anju_bangalore - 23 August 2005 at 12:07am

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Posted: 23 August 2005 at 12:08am | IP Logged
yes rajeev...

u will like karan because he is both villian and hero this story Wink

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Posted: 23 August 2005 at 4:04pm | IP Logged
gud job anju keep up the gud work

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Posted: 23 August 2005 at 6:16pm | IP Logged
story is really turning out to be interesting...continue

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