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Hi Amju How are you?my name is krunal and thi is my sister's ID.she allways talk about you lol that she s very thanksful to you becasue of posting the vidio now anju i am in acting career and i am looking for one chance to show my telent so if you know any directore or someone plese help me out
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Episode-7

AT the Malhotras house:-

Dhruv calls up karan and says thst he forgot to ask him what happened the previous day and also Mama was there.
Karan says to himself " achha hua tumne pucha nahi..zhoot main bata nahi sakta tha..ab main sach nahi bol sakta hoon.."(I couldn't have lied yesterday but I cant tell truth now)

And says to dhruv that he had minor might with prashant.
Dhruv is happy and says "itni chhoti si baat.."


AT The Kapoors:-
Its Sunday. All of them are having breakfast at the kapoor house. Sanjana is ready to go somewhere. On seeing this arundhati asks her where she is going (in a weird voice as usual). Sanjana says that she is going to Mandir as its Sunday. Bhoomi and saurav also ask their mom to let them go and aru allows. Sanjana Leaves.

In the temple:
Its Sunday and dhruv too has come to temple as he couldn't come to temple on his birthday.Sanjana is getting down from the steps of the temple when she Bhoomi rolls down the steps and falls down.Dhruv coming up the stairs picks up cring Bhoomi. Sanjan comes down running. Bhoomi is crying. She has minor wounds. Dhruv lifts bhoomi to a side.He has never seen sanjana. Bhoomi is still crying. Dhruv decides to take Bhoomi hospital and looks up to see sanjan's attractive face. He says not to worry and Bhoomi will be alright. There are no wounds and she just need a Aid.Hospital is near and Bhoomis woonds are plastered. Dhruv himself pays.
Sanjana in a thankful voice to dhruv says that if he was not there she wouldn t have managed thi alone along with saurav " bahut shukriya" she says.
"aaap nahi hote to.."
Dhruv says not to say thanks as he did his duty.
"Yeh mera farz tha.."
.Sanjana is impressed by dhruv..
Dhruv too is impressed by beautiful face of sanjana and her care towards kids.

In all these..Sanjana forgets to ask dhruv his name although dhruv himself guesses sanjana's name after hearing kids saying" sanju bua."

AT KAPOORS:- Aru on coming to know the hospital incident..taunts to sanjana that she doesn't know how to take care of kids..then why did she take them along?? Sanjana maintains silence…
Bhoomi shouts " mama..main bahut masti karti hoon na..isleyi gir gayi ". Sanjana feels like kissing bhhomi on hearing this as to how kids love her.



AT THE AGARWALS: -
Dhruv is aksed by Reema..as to why he is late..Dhruv explains everthing that happened in the Mandir.

AT THE Malhotra:-
Karan is taking his evening BATH. He is thinking of sanjana.How dare a girl slap him?? He is embarrassed and is not able to forget the whole incident.
He decides to take revenge on her. He thinks to himself that if he cant rag sanjana its ok but now he will be making her friendship just for fun. He decides to take revenge that sanjana is definitely going to sing..
EPIOSDE ends..

COMING UP:-

1.Karan gives yellow roses to sanjan and telles her that he is intd in frndship with her.
2. Prashant threatens karan that he has seen all the episode of ragging and is going to complain..and use sanjana as his weapon against him.
3.Avantika is surprised by Karan's behaviour..jealous too..

SO Stay tuned…

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Edited by anju_bangalore - 18 August 2005 at 11:42pm
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Posted: 18 August 2005 at 11:43pm | IP Logged
shaifali...

i donno anyone in TV industry...

if i know i will let u know...

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anju great job plz do continue i love the story. keep up the gud work.
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TIME OF EPISODE POST:-
1.Mon-Fri: before 10 AM IST

2.Saturday: bfore 8pm IST.

Sunday :Not posted..

Thanks.
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KITNA PYAR KATI HOON TUMSE EPISODE 8
Story so far:
Karan is slapped by sanjana and he deicdes to take revenge on sanjana. Dhruv and sanjana meet in the temple. Dhruv takes bhoomi to the hospital on falling in the temple.

Now next:-episode 8
College:-
Its Monday morning. College has started as usual. Sanjana enters the college premsises as usual along with Anita. She sees Karan' s team (exculding karan) staring at her from a certain distance from the entrance. Avantika leading the team approicahes her and says " chala You have come…ab apne boore dinoe ki ginti karna shooru kardo( start counting your bad days).

Sanjana neglects them and walks away from there.
Avantika and Ritu discuss that they are not going to leave sanjana. Ritu proposes some plan to take revenge but avantika too has her own plans.but both of them drop and decide on staying silent and waiting for karan's action against her.
Karan's Team is waiting for karan and as usual he comes late in his car. Avantika,mohit,shabbir and ritu approach him and ask. Avantika says her abt her morning meet with sanjana that morning.Karan shouts at her " kyun…kya zaroorat thi…"(what was the necessary).He tells that now he wants to make friendship now with sanjana…" everyone is surprised. Avantika is jealous too…All of them look at each others faces and wonder what happened to karan in just 2 days.

All of them leave for their classes except Mohit who stays back and aks karan: what happened to him in 2 days that he has preffered to remain silent: " 2 dino main kya hogaya karan..KI tum kuch nahi karma chahte ho...."

Karan smiles and pats at him and says: " Main chup nahi betunga..badla loonga par apni tareeke se..and explains whole plan.(I will not remain silent but take revenge in my own way)

mohit pats him and says that he understood his plan of making sanjana's friendship and taking revenge on her.

Karan approaches with a yellow flower to sanjana and says he wants to forget the whole incident and wants her friendship.. "Mujhse dosti karogi..".Sanjana says that she too has forgot the whole incident but she is not interested in his friendship. "Main us tarah ki ladki nahin hoon..jaise aap soch rahe hain.." karan smiles and says : "toh kis type ki ho tum.." and says that girls dream of becoming his girlfriend but he just wants her to make her his friend and she should be happy.

Sanjana smiles and doesn't say anthing and accepts the rose and leaves.

Mohit who is watching all these comes and pats him..karan smiles and says "yeh ladkiyan kitne bewakoof hoti hain na…karan inse zor se baat karoon..to chandi ban jaate hain..aur pyar se baat karoon to asani se motti mein aa jaati hain.."I AM THE BEST YAAr.

Meanwhile Prashant approaches sanjana and says that he had seen the whole episode of karan and his team giving trouble and he would like her to give complain to the board regarding this. Sanjana asks him as to what does he get by this. He answers that he wants juniors peace in this college and turns back and give a wicked smile. Sanjana says that he has forgotten the whole incident and doesn not want again someone to open the topic. Prashant tells her to think about the future juniors."humare aane wale juniors ke bare me socho..aise logo ke saath kaise pad sakte hain.."

Sanjana thinks that whatever prashant told was right and agrees with him to give complain but she does not complain herself. Prashant says " Tum uske bare mein mat socho..main dekh llonga…".Sanjana says him thanks and leaves.

After she leaves prashant smiles and says to himself: " karan..abt dekta hoon tum kya karoge.."he is finally successful.

Karan and his friends are smoking cigar at the canteen.

Prashant approaches karan and says : " hai mere dost…kaisa he.."
Karan doesn't speak anything. Prashant says to him that he has complained to the board regarding ragging by his team and principla could meet him anytime..says :tayyar rehan(be ready).

Karan smiles at him.. "Tum jante hoon tum mera kuch nahi bigad sakte.." and asks him why he makes unneccsseary efforts.

Prashant smiles at him and says that.."manta hoon main tumhare saath kuch kar nahi sakta..is leye maine compliant Mohit ke against ki hain.."

Karan is shocked ..

Prashant says: " bacha sakte ho to bacha lo apne pyaare dost ko.." and leaves.(save ur friend if u can)

Karan explains to mohit everthing..Mohit is scared.Karan tells him not to worry..Mohit says that his dad would kill him if he comes to know and he could be expelled from the college.

AFTER THE LUNCH:-
Principal calls karan and his team to his room and enquires to mohit..

Mohit is scared and says that he didn't do anything " Maine kuch nahi kiya hain sir.." main to anti ragging team main hoon.."

Principal enquires..and akss his peon to call sanjana from her class and few other juniors..
All the juniors disagree that they were ragged. They say that karan and his team didn't even speak to him..
Now its sanjana's turn…

All of them look at sanjana.. karan too is smiling and looking at sanjana

What does sanjana say??

Stay on..

Coming UP: -


Dhruv meets sanjana again at the pani poori stall with anita..

Keep reading..

Edited by anju_bangalore - 20 August 2005 at 10:11am
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what is sanjana going to say?????? is she going to defend karan or go against him? hey anju good story keep on going.
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Posted: 21 August 2005 at 11:18pm | IP Logged

EPISODE-9

SO FAR:

Karan has some plan and decides to make sanjana's friendship and gives her yellow rose.
Prashant approachs sanjana and tells that she should take action against karan and his team.
The borad members enquire some junior students and all say NO..
Now its sanjana turn..

Read:
The principal and other members of the anti ragging committee question sanjana whether she came across any incident or whether she was ragged. Sanjana is numb. And remains silence. They question again…whether the seniors came to their class and ragged them..
Sanjana opens her mouth and says "YES".

All are shocked. Karan too is shocked as to how sanjana did this as he had made her friendship in morning. Mohit is sweating already. Sanjana continues and says yes that seniors had come to their class not to rag them but to invite them for a function.
All are relived now. Avantika whispers in Ritu's ears: "Yeh kya Bol rahi hai."(what she's telling)
Ritu says: "Mujhe bhi kuch pata nahi..shayyad karan ka koi jaado hoga.."(karan might have performed some magic).

Sanjana continue and says that seniors had come to invite them for a special intoduction party and welcome party for us(JUNIORS)this week and that's it. Prashant is surprised.All are relieved. Principal apologises to karan and mohit and says that they can leave now. Mohit is relieved totally. But karan is not satisfied. Prashant is angry on sanjana.

Principal warns prashant not to give false complains against anti-ragging committee..and also says not take his personal fight like this. Prashant apologizes and all of them leave.When leaving from principal's chamber karan stares at prashant and says : " phir se haar gaya bachho.." by putting hands on his cheeks..Prashant removes karan's hands..
Prashant is very much angry and decides he will never leave them. He says to himself:" aur bhi kahi mauke aayenge karan…"

LUNCH HOUR:

Prashant asks sanjana as to why did she change her statements at nth moment.
Sanjana says that she did not want someone career to be destroyed. Someone dreams to be destroyed… Prashant says to himself that middle class girls always talk like that way..and leaves..

Karan and mohit are happy…Mohit hugs karan and says that its because of karan he is saved. If he had not made freindshop with sanjana that morning he would have been dispelled from the college. Karan says that sanjana might be having her own plans and says she is very cunning girl.

Avantika is very angry on sanjana and says that sanjana made an attempt to impress karan. Ritu says that whatever happened they have been saved from great mishap…
Avantika.. : "Saari ladkiyon ko mere karan par hi nazar kyun hain.."

Shabbir too aggress with his girlfriend ritu…and Ritu says: "tumhara karan is college ka sabse handsome,dashing sexy hero hain na..isleye.."
Ritu, shabbbir and avantika are always togther. Ritu and shabbir love each other. Sabbir is close friend of karan after Mohit. The fact that avantika loves karan is known only to shabbir and Ritu. They always force her to say to karan..but avantika fears regection as karan considers her as a good friend.

Anita says to sanjana that she made the right thing by not telling yes..
"tumne bahut accha kiya sanju..warna is bar sach much bahut gadbad hoti..woh karan is bar bhi chup nahi bet tha.."
Sanjana says that whatever she did was just to save..someone career..Some parents dream..she says that she doesn't have anybody to see her dreams..but mohit's parents..might get shocked when they learn that..mohit is expelled from the college.
eveNING

In the evening karan sees sanjana approaching him and mohit. Mohit says." Who dekh teri nayi friend aa rahi hai.."
Karan is angry and says don't call her his friend..Mohit pats him and says he was just joking..
Sanjana is with yellow flower…Karan gives her a false smile…
She gives a big lecture to karan..
She says to karan: that he might be thinking why did she lie..
"Maine jhoot is leyi nahi bola kyun ki..tum ne aaj subah muje dost bana liya…
She says that she knew that he has some wicked plans for her and that was the reason he made her friendship.She returns to karan the flower and says "Mujhe yeh dosti nahi chahiye.."and alos says that morning she took flwer just to make him think that he had won in his plans.
She continues and says that she knew he was not the person who would remain silent after being slapped by him. She says that she doenst know his wicked plans but knows him..
"main tumse junior hoon..sirf pdayi mein…lekhin..logo ko parakh ne mein..main tumse senior hoon…"

She says that she said lie not because of fear of his team and him nor his false friendship but just for the sake of mohit's parents.
"mere ma papa nahi hai..lekhin..jinke hain..who apne bachho ke liye sapne dekhte hain…mohit ke ma aur papa ne bhi dekh li hogi..kya hota jab unhe..yeh pata chalta ki unka beta college se expel ho gaya hain…??ek pal mein unka sapna toot jata.."
she says to her this much and alos says that she doidnt want mohit to repnt on his friendship he made to him.."main nahi chahti mohit ko afsos ho tumse dosti karke"
she also warns him to stay away again from him…
She leaves..just bfore mohit says her thank u…
After she leaves..karan keeps looking at her until she is invisible from sight…

He feels unknown pain within himself and wonder why sanjana's word s make such an impact on him Everytime. Mohit who sees karan seeing sanjana and says"kya hua??"
He says to mohit.."main us ladki ko nahi chodunga.."just for that sake…to show that he hates her which he actually doesn't…
ENDS…
Coming UP:-1.Dhruv meets sanjana
2. Karan meets dhruv..

not want someone career to be destroyed. Someone dreams to be destroyed… Prashant says to himself that middle class girls always talk like that way..and leaves..

Karan and mohit are happy…Mohit hugs karan and says that its because of karan he is saved. If he had not made freindshop with sanjana that morning he would have been dispelled from the college. Karan says that sanjana might be having her own plans and says she is very cunning girl.

Avantika is very angry on sanjana and says that sanjana made an attempt to impress karan. Ritu says that whatever happened they have been saved from great mishap…
Avantika.. : "Saari ladkiyon ko mere karan par hi nazar kyun hain.."

Shabbir too aggress with his girlfriend ritu…and Ritu says: "tumhara karan is college ka sabse handsome,dashing sexy hero hain na..isleye.."
Ritu, shabbbir and avantika are always togther. Ritu and shabbir love each other. Sabbir is close friend of karan after Mohit. The fact that avantika loves karan is known only to shabbir and Ritu. They always force her to say to karan..but avantika fears regection as karan considers her as a good friend.

Anita says to sanjana that she made the right thing by not telling yes..
"tumne bahut accha kiya sanju..warna is bar sach much bahut gadbad hoti..woh karan is bar bhi chup nahi bet tha.."
Sanjana says that whatever she did was just to save..someone career..Some parents dream..she says that she doesn't have anybody to see her dreams..but mohit's parents..might get shocked when they learn that..mohit is expelled from the college.
eveNING

In the evening karan sees sanjana approaching him and mohit. Mohit says." Who dekh teri nayi friend aa rahi hai.."
Karan is angry and says don't call her his friend..Mohit pats him and says he was just joking..
Sanjana is with yellow flower…Karan gives her a false smile…
She gives a big lecture to karan..
She says to karan: that he might be thinking why did she lie..
"Maine jhoot is leyi nahi bola kyun ki..tum ne aaj subah muje dost bana liya…
She says that she knew that he has some wicked plans for her and that was the reason he made her friendship.She returns to karan the flower and says "Mujhe yeh dosti nahi chahiye.."and alos says that morning she took flwer just to make him think that he had won in his plans.
She continues and says that she knew he was not the person who would remain silent after being slapped by him. She says that she doenst know his wicked plans but knows him..
"main tumse junior hoon..sirf pdayi mein…lekhin..logo ko parakh ne mein..main tumse senior hoon…"

She says that she said lie not because of fear of his team and him nor his false friendship but just for the sake of mohit's parents.
"mere ma papa nahi hai..lekhin..jinke hain..who apne bachho ke liye sapne dekhte hain…mohit ke ma aur papa ne bhi dekh li hogi..kya hota jab unhe..yeh pata chalta ki unka beta college se expel ho gaya hain…??ek pal mein unka sapna toot jata.."
she says to her this much and alos says that she doidnt want mohit to repnt on his friendship he made to him.."main nahi chahti mohit ko afsos ho tumse dosti karke"
she also warns him to stay away again from him…
She leaves..just bfore mohit says her thank u…
After she leaves..karan keeps looking at her until she is invisible from sight…

He feels unknown pain within himself and wonder why sanjana's word s make such an impact on him Everytime. Mohit who sees karan seeing sanjana and says"kya hua??"
He says to mohit.."main us ladki ko nahi chodunga.."just for that sake…to show that he hates her which he actually doesn't…
ENDS…
Coming UP:-1.Dhruv meets sanjana
2. Karan meets dhruv..

Edited by anju_bangalore - 21 August 2005 at 11:19pm
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Great job anju! I can jsut imagine Shipla for Sanjana's role... keep them coming Big smile

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