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Aww!Poor Mets! Wonder what is in store for Kripa though! Ouch Wonderful!




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Originally posted by kyphkamahbuba

wow! i like it keep on write for the fans. pleaz read my first fanfic
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Chapter 4


Kripa sat up in bed and opened a drawer. She took out Angad's photo and stared at it. Tears trickled down her eyes when she remembered how he treated her.



First day of college, angad sat with his friends and laughed at their jokes

"hey angad…you're track record…you know the 'other one' I don't think its true!"

"oh yeah!!" replied angad… "i can prove it to you! I can make any girl fall for me and that's the truth!"

"no angad!! I bet you can't make a typical behenji fall for you!"

There were laughs around… "they're the easiest kind!" Angad casually said…

"ok then!! Make…hmm...that girl fall for you!!"

Angad looked in the direction his friend pointed to and he saw the back of a girl. She was wearing a light yellow salwaar, her hair loose and carrying books in her hands. She stopped half way while walking and turned round. Her hair flinged to the other side and the first thing Angad saw were her eyes, her light hazel eyes. His eyes scanned her face down to her feet. She certainly looked beautiful…but in another way… he didn't know what way. He just kept staring at her.

He went up to her and smiled… "hi...I'm angad… Angad Khanna.."

The girl introduced herself "Kripa…Kripa Sharma!"


Kripa turned away from the photo as she remembered how Angad used to act like a saint in front of her, how he always used to 'protect' her, how he lied to her countless  times…



"Kripa…please stay away from me!" angad said with tears in his eyes

"why angad!! What have I done?" Kripa asked in a worried tone. "Kripa…I don't want to stay with you...I'm scared…I don't want to make the same mistake again!!"

"what mistake angad???" Kripa questioned him

"loving you…"

Those words left Kripa stunned… "w…what???"

"Kripa…" Angad got on his knees… "the first time I saw you… I fell in love with you!…I really love you… but I know you can't be mine…an di just don't want to hurt myself or you.." Angad slowly got up and turned round, but Kripa held his hand… "Angad...i love you…" she silently whispered…

Angad sniggered, but Kripa mistook it for a smile. He moved foreword and kissed her tender lips. She surrendered herself to him but regretted every moment of it…

Angad parted from her and whispered… "you're lips tasted soo sweet.." He laughed and she looked on at his strange behaviour…

A crowd of guys came from behind a tree… "wow angad!! Hats off to you!! you even got this behenji under you're spell!!!"

Kripa looked shocked and taken aback..

"angad…" she stuttered… but angad only laughed at her…everybody laughed at her… she ran off crying….


Kripa threw the photo frame on the floor…. She HATED ANGAD KHANNA!!! HATED HIM!!! She had had enough!! She got up and went into maithili's room, as she predicted, Maithili was standing by a window crying…Kripa grabbed maithili's hand and dragged her out…

"Kripa..Kripa!! what are you doing??" Maithili tried to speak but Kripa just pulled her into Mukti's room.


Mu: what happened Kripa?

K: I'll tell you what happened!!! Our lives are ruined!!!

Maithili and mukti were both silent…Kripa walked to the TV and turned it on. There on the screen, news was spreading…

"three handsome bachelors coming from London to launch their Fashion Line in Mumbai… " the news reported read out… pictures of Angad, Adi and Prem came up on screen. Maithili and Mukti were both shocked…

"this would be the most awaited welcome in the fashion industry…three very eligible and handsome bachelors will be coming to Mumbai this weekend and all three seem to be single…ready to mingle.." the news reporter read out.


Kripa looked at the screen with disgust… this was what I saw in the morning!! This was why I was crying…but no more!! I hate it!! I don't want to shed any more tears for that jerk…he's out there living his life like not a damn thing happened and here I am cursing every moment of my life!!! Kripa was shouting now and maithili brought a glass of water for her…

"I've decided…enough Is enough!! I've suffered enough!!

I want revenge!!!"


Edited by tsamhita - 09 September 2007 at 4:45am




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Posted: 09 September 2007 at 9:24am | IP Logged
Wow! Soo sweet revenge comming our way now! Evil Smile
Good job!

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Posted: 09 September 2007 at 9:58am | IP Logged
wonderful. revenge is on the way i think for the guys. hope the girls get wht they want




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Posted: 09 September 2007 at 10:34am | IP Logged
oooooooooo Wink love the ff Tongue

sounds intersting, revenge comeing our way Big smile

contiue soon Tongue




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wow i cant believe i missed this ff, i love it please continue soon its rocking Clap Clap Clap

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