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Posted: 16 years ago
Originally posted by: yulZ

wow gr8 part 👏 👏 i m lovin it 😳 😆 por adi 😭loved all the scenes of RK n SP2 😍   but still loved the funny dialogue guys spoke during serious situation also 😆 😆 cont. soon hun 😃 😉

😆....i'll def.cont....😃
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Posted: 16 years ago
Originally posted by: angelic shaz

awesum!!!! 👏 👏
im luving it
continue soon 😃

i'll cont soon...😳..thnx 4 luvin it....😳
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Posted: 16 years ago

Part-18

Adi's lying on his bed and is thinkin....

Adi's thinks tht he loves Maithilli and he should b happy if she's happy....

Adi(to himself):Mein usse hamesha pyaar karta rahoonga...lekin mein uski khushi mein hi khush rahoonga....

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Kasturi,here's thinkin,tht how she'll make Maithili read the letter..

Kasturi(to P2):Tum Maithilli ko apne saath Library le jao...

P2:Kyun??

Kasturi tells her everything....

P2:Par Maithilli ki to...

Kasturi:Woh to seedhi saadhi si hai..use tab tak samajh mein nahin aayega ke woh bhi Adi se pyaar karti,jab tak yeh letter us tak nahin pohnche ge...woh pagal to yehi samajhti rahe gi....ke woh sirf uska dost hai...

P2:Theek hai...mein use le jaati hoon....Best of Luck!

Kasturi:Thnk u...

P2:Chalo,ab mein use le kar jaati hoon..(and she gets up)..

P2 cums to Maithilli...

P2:Maithilli,mere saath Library chalo gi...

Maithilli:Nahiin P2...Mujhe bohat kaam karna hai...tum KT ko le jao...

P2:Nahiin..tum hi chalo..

Maithilli:Achcha theek hai...History class mein..

P2:Nahiin..abhi chalo..

Maithilli(gets up):Achcha,theek hai....

P2 and Maithilli leave...

Kasturi gets up and goes to Maithilli's seat,nd puts he letter in her bag,,,,and cums to her seat...

Kasturi(to herself):Ho gaya kaam!!!!

                                        ~*~Part-18 ends~*~

Edited by ~*~A~*~ - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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wow awesum
i hope mets reads da letta
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Part-19

Maithilli is in her bedroom....Kastutri calls her....

Kasturi:Maithilli,tum ne apnna bag khola??

Maithilli:Na Hello,na HI....Maithilli,tum ne apna bag khola!!...by the way,yeh tum kyun pooch rahi ho??

Kasturi:Woh meri History book..shayad tumhare bag mein...

Maithilli:Achcha,mein check karti hoon...

Maithilli opens her bag,and starts findin he book,and she gets the letter....

Maithilli:Kasturi,tumhari book to nahin par ek letter...

Kasturi:Ok,bye....Maithilli...

Maithilli(thinks):Yeh Kasturi ko kya ho gaya hai??

Maithilli is abt to open the letter but the phone bell rings again..this tum,it's P2....

P2:Maithilli,tum ne apna bag khola...

Maithilli:Haan par..tum..

P2:Woh meri Maths book tumhare baag mein hai,shayad..

Maithilli:Kya museebat hai!Apni books apne bag mein daalne ke bajaye meri bag mein thoons di thin kya..thehro,chack karti hoo...

Maithilli checks her bag again..

Maithilli:P2,tumhari book nahin hai mere bag mein!

P2:Kuch aur hai...

Maithilli:Haan..woh ek letter..

P2(interrupts):Achcha Maithilli..ab mein rakhti hoon..kuch kaam yaad aagaya...

Maithilli(to herself):Yeh in donon ko kya hogaya hai??

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Maithilli sits on her bed and reads the letter...

Maithilli(to herself)):Usne yeh baat pehle kyun nahin batai??

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Next day,all the fenzz r sittin,Robbie and Adi enter..

Neev:Adi ji,aapko fursat mil gaye aane ki...

Adi:Neev,mein mazaaq ke mood mein nahiin hoon..

Neev:Woh to tu kabhi nahin hota...

Robbie:Achcha chalo,ab class mein...

All of them leave 4 the class.

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All of them enter the classroom...

Adi cums to Prachi..

Adi:Prachi..

Prachi(turns):Haan...

Adi:Woh aaj Maithilli nahiin aaye..

Prachi:Nahiin Aditya....uski do din baad shaadi hai na...is liye..lekin tum..

Adi:Nahiin..woh aise hi..bas..thnx..

Prachi:Ur welcum...

Adi leaves and  thinks tht he won't tell her anything.

                                 ~*~Part-19 ends~*~

                                      

Edited by ~*~A~*~ - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
Originally posted by: angelic shaz

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wow awesum
i hope mets reads da letta
continue soon 😃

Abhi mein bilkul faarigh hoon..😆..thts y i'll update 2 or 3 parts more...😳
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Posted: 16 years ago

Part-20

~~~4 days later~~~

All the guyzz r sittin near the entrance...

Kasturi and Maithilli enter....

Adi gets up...

Ad:Hi Maithilli..kaisi ho...

Maithilli:Theek hoon...aur tum??

Adi:Mein bhi theek hoon...by the way,Congratulationzzz!Tumhati shaadi..

Maithilli:Maine shaadi nahiin ki,Adi..

Adi's shocked..

Maithilli:Mein chalti hoon..

Adi(tries to stop her):Par Maithilli...

Maithilli:Bye Adi...

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In the Recess...Maithilli is goin to the class...Adi's sittin with his frenzzz...Adi follows her...

Adi:Maithilli,ruku..

Maithilli doesnt stop..

Adi:Meri baat to suno..

Maithilli doesnt stop....

Adi holds her hand...Maithilli turns..

Adi:Tum kyun mujhse baat nahi kar rahi....mane kya kiya hai??

Maithilli(gets angry):Mujhse pooch rahe ho ke tum ne ya kia hai....tumhe kya lagta hai yeh khat maine khud k=likhe hai>??(shows him the letter)..

Adi:Yeh kya hai...mein kuch nahin jaanta..

Maithilli:Main nahin jaanti thi ke tum itni safai se jhoot bhi bol lete ho..

Adi:Meri baat ka yakeen karo...

Maithilli:Plz Adi....mera haath chodo....aur yeh rakho tum apne paas..(throws the letter away)..

Maithilli leaves...

Adi picks up the letter and starts readin...

Adi(to himself):Yeh kya bukwaas hai...Mein Robbie ko nahin chodon ga...

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Adi goes to Robbie and throws the letter...

Adi:Robbie,yeh kya hai...

Robbie:Lagta hai Maithilli ke pyaar mein rote rote teri aankhon par gehra asar pada hai...yeh paper hai,mere bhai...pehchaan ise...

All the guyzz start laughin..

Adi:Shut up!Mein mazaaq ke mood mein nahiin hoon...

Robbie:To tujhe kya lata hai mein yahaan ''The Great Indian Laughter Challenge'' ki taiyaari kar raha hoon..mein bhi mazaaq ke mood mein nahiin hoon...

Adi:Tu ne yeh letter kyun likhe Maithilli ke liye....

Nakul:Sirf Robbie ne nahiin...yeh hum sab ne mil ke kiya hai..

Adi:Par kyun...

Laksh:Kyunke...hamein pata tha ke tu use kabhi nahiin bataye ga..aur zindagi bhar Devdas bana rahe ga...is liye...

Adi:Aur tum logon ko lagta hai ke tum sab ne mei madad ki hai....

Saksham:Aur nahin to kya...

Adi:Maithilli mujhse baat bhi nahiin karna chahti....

Neev:Subah to theek thi...ab kya daura pada ha teri Maithilli begum ko...

Robbie:Koi baat nahin,Adi..hum teri madad..

Adi:Thnk u very much..tum log pehle hi meri bohat madad kar chuke ho..ab aur madad nahin chahiye mujhe...

Adi leaves...

Nakul:Uska ghussa karna theek hai....

Neev:Kya khaak theek hai....

Robbie:Nahiin yaar...Nakul theek keh raha hai...humein uski madad karni chahiye...

Saksham:Ki to thi...aur izzat bhi karwali..

Laksh:Hamein Maithilli ko batana hoga ke woh letter humne likhwaaya tha..

Neev:Tu theek keh raha hai..

Saksham:Ab chalte hain...class mein...Ka bataden ge Maithilli ko..abhi kuch kaha to hamein kachcha chaba jayegi...

Robbie:Haan..tab tak apne ''angry young man'' bhi thande ho jayenge..

Laksh:Chalo..ab chalte hain....

All the guyzz get up and leave 4 the class...

                              ~*~Part-20 ends~*~

 

Edited by ~*~A~*~ - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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fab!!!
mets read da letta 😃
cnt wait 4 more continue soon 😃
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Posted: 16 years ago

Part-21

(1 week later)

All the gilzz r sittin in the class,Adi enters.....

All the girlz r goin out...

Adi:Maithilli,ruku..

She doesnt stop...KT asks her to stop...

All the girlzz leave except Maithilli...

Maithilli:Kya hai?

Adi:Tum ab bhi mujhse...

Maithilli:Haan...

Adi:Lekin woh letter maine nahin likha??

Maithilli:To mein kya karoon...

Maithilli is abt to leave....

Adi:Maithilli,I love u...

Maithilli is shocked to hear this...

Maithilli:Par tum ne to woh khat,...

Adi:Nahin likha tha....par mein tumse yehi kehna chahta tha....

Maithilli:To kyun nahi kaha....

Adi:Mein.....

Maithilli(cries and hugs him):I love u too,Adi....

Adi's shocked to hear tht Maithilli luvs him,too...he hugs her....

Adi:I'm sorry,Maithilli...

Maithilli's abt to say sumthin,Saksham and Neev enter..

Saksham,Neev(together):Oh..we're sorry...

Adi and Maithilli stand apart...Maithilli leaves..

Neev:Oye...yeh kya ho raha tha...

Adi blushes..

Saksham:O Bhai saab!Thoda hosla...Yeh classroom hai,Lovers' Point nahin...

Saksham and Neev laugh...

Adi:Shut up!..

Then the otherzz enter the classroom....and sum seconds later,the English teacher enters...

                              ~*~Part-21 ends~*~

 

Edited by ~*~A~*~ - 16 years ago
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wow awesum!!
continue soon 😃