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Posted: 13 August 2005 at 2:31pm | IP Logged

This will be a short like 5 parts fan fic, till then i wont be conting my "Aashiq Banaya Aapna" fan fic, there are a few reasons, and im sorry for that, well heres the first part and it starts from Prithvi and Kripa's engagemnet, it follows the actually story line, this is what I want next in KYPH

Fan Fiction- Kripa and Anagd unite.

Everyone is at Prithvi's and Kripa's engagement, Even Kripa is there! The Khanna's are here, including Anagd, and the Bose family is here to, its a grand event, Everyone is happy, Kripa, Prithvi, Dadi, Damani, and Mishty! Anagd is happy for Kripa too but somewhere in him he's unhappy, but he's smiling all the way, as everyone congratulates Kripa and Prithvi, Anagd takes the boquet in his hand and moves towards Kripa and Prithvi.

The stage is empyt and Anagd stands infront of Kripa, a smiling Angad. There's a sweet smile on his face but pain can clearly be seen in his eyes. He hands the folwers to Kripa.

A: Congrats.

Prithvi just looks at Angad.

K: Thanks. She puts the flowers down and looks back at Angad.

Anagd moves to Prithvi and shakes hands with him.

A: Congrats Prithvi.

P: Thanks Angad.

A: Prithvi I know ki maina Misty ka saath kuch aacha nahie kiya, aur na he Kripa ka saath, main yeh bhi jaanta ho ki Kripa tumara saath saayda kush rahagi, tum uusko vo saari Kushiyan do ga jho maina kabhie dena ka vaada kiya tha.

P: Angad, in sab baato ka kya favda?

A: I know, lakin kya hum saari poorani baatain bhola ka ek naie shruwaat nahie kar saktha?

P: Angad... yeh hauk main sift Kripa ko de saktha hoo.

Angad looks down smiling as tears fall out of his eyes.

A: Laughing, Kripa sa main maafi kaisa maango.

He turns to leave leave tears in Kripa's eyes too.

K: Angad.

Angad turns around and looks at Kripa.

K: Tumna theek kaha, tum mujhse maafi kis mo sa maango ga, tumhari galti itni bari hai, aur main tumko kabhie maaf karbhi nahie sakthi. Kabhi Nahie, main tumko baarbaad karna chati thi so maina kar diya. Tumna mujhe haar kadam pe dukh diya, har kadam pa maina thokar kahie, mera baacha bhi.... now Angad closes his eyes, as more tears roll out. Anyways, main janti ho ki main tumko kabhie maaf nahie kar sakthi, iisliya main chati ho ki ajj kab meri ek naie zindagi ki shruwaat ho rahi hai, tum aaj ka baad kabhie mujhse milna ki ya baat karna ki kooshish maat karo. Tum mujhe pelha bauth dukh da chuka ho, lakin please ab, aur nahie. Main aur bardash nahie kar paogi, so please.

Angad smiles again: Kripa, shyad tum janti nahie ho, lakin main aaj raat ko is shear sa (city) humasha ka liya jaa raha ho, yaha sa bauth door, aaj ke baad tum meri ye shakal nahie dekho ga, kabhie nahie, infact main India chor ka jaa raha hoo. Mera saab na saath chor diya hai, sabna, koi bacha hai tho meri ya zindagi, jis din is zindagi na bhi mera saath choor diya us din main is duniya ka sab sa kush naaseb addmi hoga.

Angad's everyword has hit Kripa right on her heart, As Anagd walks away, we seen Josh crying.

J: Ab mujhe he kuch karna paraga.

Angad walks across the room bumping into Aaliya.

Aa: Bahi... app.

Angad lifts his hand up and walks foward as Josh watches and makes his way to Kripa and Prithvi.

J: So guys!

A teary Kripa: Hi Josh, thanks for comming.

J: Ok Quite Kripa, tum bhi naa, why thanks!

K: Ok baba.

J: So guys, i have a very special surprise for u!

P: Kya?

J: Cholo mera saath bata hoo.

K: Ok!

Prithvi and Kripa make there way behind Josh outside the hall, Josh nods Aaliya to bring.

Aa: Bahi.... Aapko koi bahar milna aaya hai....

A: Kaun???

Aa: Pata nahie, aap ja kar dekho.

A: Ok.....

Angad walks outside and looks around, and then sees a Smiling Kripa standing with Prithvi and Josh.

He walks across on the road, still looking at the smiling Kripa.

J: Um... Kripa give me one more minute.

K: Sure... lakin please Josh Jaldi.

Josh turns around smiling evil.

He picks up his cell and dials a number.

J: Hello... josh here, KILL ANAGD.....

We see a evil smiling Josh. Kripa looks around and Finds Angad in the middle of the road.

There eyes meet, there's a sadness in both Kripa's eyes and lips while, theres a smile on Angad' lip and sadness on his eyes.

As Anagd keeps moving into the road Kripa sees a truck comming from the other side in fast speed.

Kripa is shocked as Anagd isnt noticing anything.

K: Angad..... Angad.....

Prithvi is confused and follows Kripa's gaze. And sees a truck coming towards Anagd.

Kripa quickly runs and Pushes Anagd to the other side, and the Truck takes a quick stops, as the tires squeek. And comes out a man.

Anagd gets up and helps Kripa get up too.

A mad Kripa walks over to the driver.

K: What the hell, tumko dekta nahie hai, aagar Anagd ko kuch bhi hojata to main tumko maar dalthi understand, Anagd is shocked at Kripa's words. God, tumlog dhayan sa nahie chala saktha.

Guy: Ma'am... mujhse maaf kardo. Mujhe jaldi thi.

K: Tho iiska matlab yeh nahie hai ki tum kisi ko bhi maar do ga, god.

The guys just stands there and then comes out Josh, with an evil smile on his face.

Josh hands the some money and asks him to leave.

Kripa and Anagd are confused and now comes over a running Prithvi.

J: Well, Well, atleast tumna yeh sabit kar diya aagar Angad ko abhi bhi chot laga tho tumko dard hota hai.

A: JOSH NAHIE..... U CANT....

J: Shut Up Anagd, main ab aur chup nahie raha saktha, i have to tell Miss.Kripa Sharama ki shaacai kya hai.

J: So Kripa, tum tho bauth kush hogi ka tumna Angad ko barbad kar diya, RITE.

Kripa just looks away.

J: Look at me dam it.

J: Ab suno.

A: Josh nahie, please.

J: Anagd aagar tumna ek aur baar beech main bola tho i'll kill u for reals.

K: Josh tum kya keha raha ho.

J: Well, fact no 1, me and Anagd are best friends, fact no 2, Anagd na he mujhe yaha boolaja tha tumahra saath concert main part lana kal iya, aur phir yeh aapna concert pa gya acting drunck so sab log uusa concert choor kar tumaraa paas aaya, aur bilkul aaisa he hua. Aur iiska baad haar baar jo tumko jeet mili isma Angad ka haat tha, uusna jaan pooch ka perfume campange pa gussa kiya aur mujhe phone kar ka kaha ki main yeh campange karo, and then lastly, jab tumko 11% shares ki saroorat thi tab bhi Angad na AAPNA shares bech ka tumko vo shares delaya, aur aapni baarbadi ka har kadam pa vo roota tha lakin phir hass ka ketha tha ki atleast Kripa aaj kush hogi.

Kripa is shocked, Prithvi is too shoked and Angad is just standing there crying.

J: Tho ab kaho, tum kya karogi.

K: Wiping her tears, main ab bhi Prithvi ka saath engagement karogi.

Prithvi and Josh are shocked while Anagd stands there smiling Again.

J: Lakin-

A: Josh, mujhe pata tha, its ok Kripa. Mujhe yakeen tha ki tum saach jaana ka baad bhi mujhe wapis.

He laughs and starts walking away.

 

Prithvi takes Kripa's hand and drags her inside as Anagd follwoes.

A happy josh follows too,

The 3 get up on stage, and PRITHV is on the mic now.

P: Ladies and gentelmen, lets start the ceremoni.

Mishty brings the Rings and Damani next to them.

 

Misty: Bahi app??/

P: Chup Mishty, quite.

P: Kripa tum mujhse engagement karna chati ho lakin main tumsa engagement nahie kar saktha.

Kripa is shocked and Anagd is confused

P: Haan Kripa, aagar aaj main tumsa engagement kar latha ho tho ajj 3 zindagiya bardab ho jaygi. Aur main aaisa nahie kar saktha.

A: Lakin Prithvi.

P: Chup Anagd, maina tumko aaj tak galat samjha hai, jitna pyaar tum kripa sa kartha ho koi kisi sa nahie karta, Hearing this everything is clear and Dadi is the happist person there.

P: U have to marry Kripa. Lakin, lets start with this engagement first.

Prithvi takes both rings in his hands, he hands one the Kripa and the other one to Angad.

 

P: Come on guys..... tum dono yeh deney nahie karsak tha ki tum dono ek doosra sa kitn apyaar kartha ho, can u guys???

Kripa looks down and Anagd looks away. And Prithvi has a u knew it look on his face.

P: Come on Anagd..

But Anagd isnt ready.

Now Kripa looks at Anagd and then his hand, she takes a few steps towards Anagd and then takes his hand, and slowly, slower than ever slips the ring into his fingure.

Anagd looks up at a crying Kripa.

K: Anagd maina galti ki thi, lakin tumna, tumna uusa bhi bari galthi ki hai, tumna mera liya kudh ko.... Aur ab tumahari ya he saaza hai ki tumko aapni saari zindagi mera saath rehana paraga.

A: Very Smart Kripa, aagar tum pelhi baar main he meri baat sun lati tho aaisa kabhie nahie hota, now Anagd slips the ring into Kripa's fingure. Aur iisliya tumko bhi aapni saari zindagi mera saath rehna para ga.

 

Kripa smiles and cries at the same time, and then turns to Prithvi.

K: Prithvi.. main...

P: Kripa.... its ok.

Everyone claps and cheers as Anagd kisses Kripa's hand, a soft slow songs starts and Anagd takes Kripa Hands and they dance to the song, looking deep into each others eyes, Suddenly Angad takes Kripa's hand and takes her out the hall.

A: Kripa, mera saath cholo.

K: Kahan?

They both sit in the car and they drive away.

Finally the car stops in front of the outhouse.

 

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Posted: 13 August 2005 at 2:37pm | IP Logged
Please post ur comments like always
LOL

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Posted: 13 August 2005 at 2:43pm | IP Logged
wow too good please do continue it yaar Clap

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Posted: 13 August 2005 at 2:47pm | IP Logged
Clap too gud yaar juzz luved it

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Posted: 13 August 2005 at 2:55pm | IP Logged
i love this story..its wicked man....please continue

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Posted: 13 August 2005 at 2:59pm | IP Logged
awesome awesome story
thanks alot
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That was great..... Pls continue Clap Clap

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