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Pyaar or Nafrat (sk,pm,np,lkt) note-pg6 (Page 5)

Patel 1993 Goldie
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Posted: 31 August 2007 at 7:34am | IP Logged
FAB part. can't wait till PM meet. this is gonna be so much fun. can't wait. update soon

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Posted: 31 August 2007 at 7:36am | IP Logged
great part so PM meeting is finalised Smile Sk ko bhi plz jaldi introduce karvao eik dusre se Smile cont. soon
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Posted: 31 August 2007 at 10:20am | IP Logged
Lovely Part , Tuba , dear ! Clap Clap Clap
Continue Soon , can't wait for the next part ! Embarrassed
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Posted: 31 August 2007 at 11:06am | IP Logged
hi! i started to read.......snd it is amazing ff........ple continue soon.......cant wait any more.........thanks

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kashish
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Posted: 31 August 2007 at 11:37am | IP Logged
hey great update plzz continue soon!!!
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Recap:
KT: kamal hai prachi se poocha to usne nahi bataya mukti didi se poocha unhone bhi nahi bataya ab aap se poochne ayi hoon to aap bhi nahin batara hi
K: just smiled and shooked her head…..wo isliye ki raat bohot ho chuki hai phir kal college bhi jaana hai ok ab meri pyari toti (parrot) jao or so jao
KT: di mujhe yeh toti mat bulaya karen
K: ok baba nahi bulaungi ab jao
KT: theek hai theek hai jarahi hoon and headed for the door and walked out….
K: pata nahi kab sudhregi (with a smile)
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PART 4

Now:
Next morning the sun rose and the shines fell up on kashish's beautiful eyes. She slowly opened her eyes and yawned and stretched her arms and walked out of her bed, took a shower and got changed into her clothes

She then went into mukti's room
K: mukti…..mukti….
K: arre haan mein to bhool hi gayi aaj to uska pehla job ka din hai na to wo neechay khana khaa rahi hogi

She then goes into prachi's room and notices that she is in the shower
K: prachi maine tumhare kapde rakh diye hai change karke ajana
P: from the shower …….ok di

She goes into KT's room
K: ufffff yeh toti abhi tak uthi nahi ………..kt utho college jana hai
KT: moans
K: kt utho varna
KT: no answer
K: ufffff…….varna mein tumhare upar paani phekungi
KT: with a great shock jumps out of her bed and stands on the floor…kya di aap bhi na sone bhi nahi deti
K: ab chal naha dho kar change karke neechay aja
KT: okie dokie

Downstairs:
Mukti was eating really fast
K: mukti slow down tum koi train nahi catch kari
M: I know di lekin yeh meri pehli job hai to…
KT: (interrupts) to socha ki jaldi jaldi kha ke saara khana khatam karke phir apney pyare se …kya tha uska naam?
P: PREM
KT: right apne darling prem se milne jaogi
M: (irritated)….kashish di isko dekhiye na
K: kt kyun pareshaan kari ho isko
M: (got up ) im going bye everyone
K,P,KT: bye….

Prachi then got up collected her bag and stuff and headed out of the door but waiting outside for kt while took kashish's blessings gave and took a cheek kiss and left.

Now we go over to the mehra house while mukti enters for the first time….
M: wow kitna bada ghar hai lekin sir kahan hai (then she sees him sitting on the table with his laptop, she goes upto him) sir
S: (turns around and smiles to see mukti) oh mukti agayi tum ar bilkul sahi waqt par ayi ho yeh lo prem ka timetable or baki to tumhe pata hi hai ke kya karna hai hmm
M: ji sir or wo hai kahan
S: oh sahab zadey apney room mein hai sorahe hai toh uska jagana bhi summary hi kaam hai
M: right sir erm lekin unka room kahan hai
S: (just then he sees neev coming down the stairs ) arre good morning neev
N: good morning bhaiyya and stops there ……erm bhaiyya yeh kaun hai (pointing towards mukti)
S: oh yeh mukti hai meine bataya tha na
N: oh haan welcome to our house
M: thank you
S: er neev tum mukti ko prem ka kamra dikhao or phir khaana khana ok
N: ok bhaiyya

He took mukti up the stairs and they both noticed lakah on the way

L: hello miss…..
M: mukti, mein prem ki personal secretary
L: oh ya I know I heard waise mein aapko bata doon ki bhai ko sudharna itna asaan nahi hoga
M: koi baat nahi nothing is impossible
N: ab chalein
M: chalo

Neev and mukti finally arrived into prem's room and mukti was not impressed at all
N: here you go and all the best
M: thanx

Neev left and she went in, there were clothes, magazines, empty cans, rubbish all over the floor
M: omg…..yeh room hai ke rubbish bin (then she sees someone laying in the bed with the blanket overing his whole body) and she yells …MISTER PREM MEHRA!!!!!!!!!!
P: jumps out of his bed and moans……….wat who is it
M: main hoon mukti sinha aapki personal secretary sir ne aap ko bataya hi hoga na
P: haan haan bataya tha
M: to plz aap jaldi se change karlein or neechay ajayen
P: jaldi se change karoon or mai impossible
M: sir nothing is impossible (she snatched the beer out of his)
P: hey what are you doing?
M: sir jab tak aap ready nahi hojate tab tak aap yeh nahi peesakte
P: you know what tum mujhe yeh sir or aap kehke mat bulayo its annoying ok so stop it
M: ok prem (like she doesn't care)
P: just go ok your annoying
M: no way!!!!!!
P: you know what you remind me of someone
M: what
P: BASANTI
M: what
P: yes
M: I don't care aap jaldi fresh up hojaye or agar aap nahi aye to mai dobara aungi
P: no way don't you dare come into my room again
M: dekho agar aap neechay ayenge to mein dobara nahi aaongi simple
P: moans this is not fair (and heads into the shower)
M: smiles

Mukti goes downstairs and stands beside the table next to sujal

S: arre mukti tumne prem ko utha diya
M: ji sir
L: wow tumne, I mean aapna to chamatkar kardiya it's a miracle
N: wow waise kya mai aapko didi bala sakta hoon
L: oho neev yeh sab zaroori hai
M: bilkul kyun nahi bula sakte
S: well mai to challa office or haan mukti look after prem
M: of course sir aap bifilar hoke jaye

Sujal leaves gets into his car and drives off and midway he gets a call from home it was neev
S: hello
N: hi bhayya
S: arre neev kya baat hai
N: bhaiyya kya baat hai mukti mein isne bhai ko utha ya phir khana khilaya or wo bhi bas 5 min mein or phir abhi abhi wo unko apney rehearsels pe leke gayi hai
S: wow yeh to bohot achi baat hai
N: I know
S: acha tum or laksh college chale jao ok
N: ok bye bhayya
S: bye…

They both hang up and sujal is driving going to work until he sees some girl with long hair standing on the road he presses his horn loud and a lot of times to warn the girl but she is not looking

On the other hand KT is standing in the middle of the road
P: kt tu idhar aa
KT: wk min mai bas wo shop pe jari hoon
P: nai kt tu idhar aa riski hai
KT: arre kt keliye kuch bhi riski nahi hai
P: KT idhar aa wo dekh gaadi arihai

KT turned around and with great shock saw the car coming towards her but before she could make a move the car hit her legs she flew in the air with her arms out and mouth opened with shock and scariness. She came back down and hit the ground very hardly all her head was bleeding her arms had scratches all over and she was unconscious.

P: (very shocked and had a little tear in her eye) KT!!!!!!

The man in the car comes out with also a shocked face and it was sujal he was very scared. People gathered all around them and started looking at poor KT.
S: omg………im so sorry
P: plz aap sorry baad mein boliye ga pehle isse plz aap hospital leke jaye
S: ok come on lets go
P: hmm
Sujal picked kt up and put her at the back of his car prachi also sat at the back with kt laying down and her head was on prachi's lap and prachi was gently stroking her hair
P: aap plz jaldi kijiye na iska bohot khoon behraha hai
S: haan bas abhi pooch ne wale hai………

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Precap: kasish and sujal meet, what the doctor says about kt keep reading…
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Hope u guys liked it I will post the next part soon
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Posted: 02 September 2007 at 11:13am | IP Logged
wow. wonder how kashish & sujal meeting will be? continue soon please
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Posted: 02 September 2007 at 11:43am | IP Logged
hey great update plzzz continue soon!!

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