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Pyaar or Nafrat (sk,pm,np,lkt) note-pg6 (Page 5)

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goooddd going.... Clap continue soon.... Smile

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S: well tum yeh batao ke tumhare ek bhai hai ya nahi
M: mukti totally confused at his question but answered…………. Um nahi mera bhai nahi hai lekin 3 bhene hai kyun
S: waise hi acha tumhare bheno maise koi ek sister hai jo bohot hi lazy hai ziddi hai aur or bohot tang karti hai bohot badi sar dard
M: mukti lit up and quickly answered… ji haan meri sabse choti behen KT bohot hi shararti hai ziddi aur lazy hai
S: acha very good or tumhare maa baap
M: um sir kuch saal pehle ek plane crash mein hume chod ke chale gaye
S: oh im very sorry         & nbsp;
M: its ok sir
S: waise mera bhi ek bhai hai bilkul tumharey behen jaise jisse mein chahta hoon ki tum uski personal secretary bano or usko sudharo theek hai wat do u think
M: sir I love to be a personal secretary lekin mai kaise unhe sudharoongi
S: dekho mukti its not so hard or mujhe laga ki tum yeh job karsakti ho or isiliye meine tumhe yeh job offer ki now the rest is upto you
M: she thought about all the hard times she has been through and about kashish and finally made a decision….. Sir mein yeh job zaroor karungi and thank you very much for it
S: oh that's great to hear mukti
M: waise sir aapke bhai ka kya naam hai?
S: oh haan who to main bata na hi bhool gaya and takes a photo of him out of his draw and shows it to mukti … iska naam hai Prem , Prem mehra
M: wow nice name or im ready for it sir
S: with a smile to theek hai tum kal se hi mere ghar 7:00 am pohonch jana or phir mein tumhe uska timetable doonga then u have to make sure ki har jaga bilkul time par or sahi jaga par pohoche….ok
M: ok sir she turns around to leave and starts walking to the door and pulls the door and walks out
S: this is going to be so great ( to himself)

After a long tiring day mukti prachi and KT reach home.

K: arre tum log agaye
KT: haan di
P: di aaj aap shopping ke liye gaye thi
K: nahi
KT: kaashu di (KT sometimes calls kashish that) meine aap ko phone pe bola tha na ke aap chaley jaana aap ne meri baat nahi maani
K: kya kt meine kuch lena hi nahi tha to ishilye nahi gayi
Kt: theek hai jaise aap ki marzi
M: guess what people (jumping around everywhere with a biiiiig smile on her face)
P: kya hai didi aap itni khush kaise
K: kya such mukti
KT: I cant believe this mukti didi
M: haan bhai haan mujhe job milgayeeeeeeeeee
P: lekin kaise aap toh kehrahi thi ki koi job available nahi hai
M: wo sab KT ki wajhe se mili hai
KT: kyaaaa lekin meine kya kiya
M: dekho aap sab betho phir mein sab kuch batati hoon ok

So they all sat down on the sofa kt sat next to mukti and prachi and kashish and prachi sat on single sofas

P: to finally iss kt ka shararti, ziddi, noisy ……
Kt: (interrupts) ok ok we get the point prachi
P: to finally tumhara iss tarha hona kabhi to kaam aya
M: was so happy she kissed kt on the cheek and hugged her really tight …. Thanks kt for being the way you are
KT: (a lot confused) its ok didi…..

Now its night time at the mehra house

Sujal comes home and finds prem as usual laying on the house with a can of beer in his hand watching TV
S: um prem
P: jii bhaiyya kya kaam hai aapko
S: meine tumhare liya aaj ek personal secretary rakhi hai
P: (was so surprised that he dropped his can on the floor and shot up in there air with a really chocked face) WHAT????
S: haan
P: lekin kyun why????
S: tumhe sudhaar ne ke liye what else
P: lekin mein to bilkul theek hoon mujhe sudharne ki kiya zaroorat hai

At that moment neev and lakshya came back from upstairs and prem tells them everything….

N: wow that's a great idea bhaiyya
L: waise wo ladki hai kaun
S: uska naam hai mukti
L: mukti wah kya naam hai, mukti meaning freedom right
N: right
P: lekin meri mukti, I mean freedom ka kya
L & N: start laughing
S: tumhe tumhare freedom bohot milgayi abb or nahi mukti kal yahan saat -7 baje yahan ayegi or tumhe timetable ke hisaab se tumhe jaga jaga phonchaye gi ok
P: but….
S: no ifs and buts mai bada or mujhe pata hai mujhe tumhare liye kya karna chahiye ok

Prem was a lot confused and just dropped himself on the couch and his head in his hands. Lakshya and neev sat on either side of him.

N: don't worry bhai everything is gonna be just fine
L: or kya bhai nalki iss hi bahane ghar mein ladki to ayegi na
P: lekin…..and just started to moan

Neev and lakshya just patted him on the shoulder and left…

While with the sinha sisters……

It was night time and al the girls were in their rooms kashish
Was at the dressing table taking her jewellery off, mukti was listening to some music, prachi was reading a book (love story) and KT was basically just BORED!!!!

Kt: omg im so bored kya karoon……idea its time to have some funnnnnnnn

She went into prachi's room and peeked inside and saw that ahe was wearing her baby pink nighty and was supposed to be reading her book but was thinking about something else so kt started to sing
KT: kahin pyar na hojaye……(walked inside) kahin pyar na hojaye….eh dil bata yeh tune kya kiya tu hai kyun bekaraar itna (and sat on her bed)

Prachi was shocked to see her and said
P: KT tum iss waqt
Kt: haan wo kya hai na mai bohot bore horahi thi to socha ki tumhare paas ajaon
P: bolo kya kaam hai
KT: prachu…
P: kt kitni dafa bola hai prachu mat bulao prachi hai
KT: arre kya faraq padta hai waise pyar kya hota hai?
P: huh…..kt tum jao yahan se
KT: prachu tumhe sach mein nahi pata ke yeh kya hota hai
P: arre baba nahi pata ab jao
KT: sachi
P: haan sachi ab jao
KT: such mein
P: arre haan ab JAO!!!!!
KT: prachu……(said it with a moaning tone)
P: nahin pata baba jao
KT: (singing)….jhoot bole, jhoot bole kawa kate…kale kawe se dharyo
KT:mai yahan se bhaag jaongi tum dekhte rahiyo
P: jaoooooooooo

KT ran outside with a laugh
P: uff bilkul pagal hai yeh ladki, bilkul

KT then ran into mukti's room and she was wearing her
Yellow nighty and was listening to music…
She came in without a sound and sat on the bed quietly because she knew that mukti didn't know she was here….
KT: MUKTI DIDI!!!!!!!!!
M: oho kya hai kt tum mere paas kya karne ayi ho
KT: aapka murder karni (sarcastically)
M: kya?????
KT: offo kya ek behen doosri behen ke kamre mein nahi aasakti
M: baba aasakti hai bolo kya kaam hai
KT: didi pyar kya hota hai?
M: huh yeh aaj tumhe kya hogaya kaise sawal poocrahi ho
KT: bataye na pizzazz
M: kt tum jao
KT: nahi
KT: didi aap nakhre bohot karti ho
M: kya matlab hai timhara
KT: (singing) soni de nakhre sone lagde menu soni de nakhre sone lagde..
M: (picked her pillow up from her left hand and threw it at Kt) JAOOOOOOOOOOO

But KT had already left the room
M: shaitan kahin ki kispar gaye hai yeh????

KT next went into kashish's room and she was at the dressing table taking her kangan off
KT silently came in without being seen in the mirror bent down and slowly put her arms round kashish neck
KT: (sang) roop hai tera sona sona, soni teri payal, (started walking to her bed) Chan chana chan aise chanke karde sab ko ghayal (when she said that she threw herself on the bed backwards with her arms stretched out)..
K: kt kya chahiye tumhe
KT: kuch zyada nahi bas yeh bata dijiye ki pyar kya hota hai?
K: huh???
KT: nai matlab pyar ka matlab kya hota hai???
K: (totally confused at her question) dekho kt raat bohot hogayi hai tum jao or jaa kar sojao
KT: par kashu di
K: nahin kt tum jao
KT: kamal hai prachi se poocha to usne nahi bataya mukti didi se poocha unhone bhi nahi bataya ab aap se poochne ayi hoon to aap bhi nahin batara hi
K: just smiled and shooked her head…..wo isliye ki raat bohot ho chuki hai phir kal college bhi jaana hai ok ab meri pyari toti (parrot) jao or so jao
KT: di mujhe yeh toti mat bulaya karen
K: ok baba nahi bulaungi ab jao
KT: theek hai theek hai jarahi hoon and headed for the door and walked out….
K: pata nahi kab sudhregi (with a smile)

KT went back to her room with a frown and slowly opened her door stepped in and closed it again. She went to her bed calmly yawned and slipped in under her duvet and slowly closed her eyes and went off to sleep…..

Well guys this was part 3 I know there is no romance but plz bear with me there is going to be later on hope u understand..

-plz comment

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Posted: 31 August 2007 at 7:34am | IP Logged
FAB part. can't wait till PM meet. this is gonna be so much fun. can't wait. update soon
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Posted: 31 August 2007 at 7:36am | IP Logged
great part so PM meeting is finalised Smile Sk ko bhi plz jaldi introduce karvao eik dusre se Smile cont. soon
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Posted: 31 August 2007 at 10:20am | IP Logged
Lovely Part , Tuba , dear ! Clap Clap Clap
Continue Soon , can't wait for the next part ! Embarrassed
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hi! i started to read.......snd it is amazing ff........ple continue soon.......cant wait any more.........thanks


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Posted: 31 August 2007 at 11:37am | IP Logged
hey great update plzz continue soon!!!
kt4lakshya Senior Member

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Posted: 02 September 2007 at 9:14am | IP Logged
KT: kamal hai prachi se poocha to usne nahi bataya mukti didi se poocha unhone bhi nahi bataya ab aap se poochne ayi hoon to aap bhi nahin batara hi
K: just smiled and shooked her head…..wo isliye ki raat bohot ho chuki hai phir kal college bhi jaana hai ok ab meri pyari toti (parrot) jao or so jao
KT: di mujhe yeh toti mat bulaya karen
K: ok baba nahi bulaungi ab jao
KT: theek hai theek hai jarahi hoon and headed for the door and walked out….
K: pata nahi kab sudhregi (with a smile)
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Next morning the sun rose and the shines fell up on kashish's beautiful eyes. She slowly opened her eyes and yawned and stretched her arms and walked out of her bed, took a shower and got changed into her clothes

She then went into mukti's room
K: mukti…..mukti….
K: arre haan mein to bhool hi gayi aaj to uska pehla job ka din hai na to wo neechay khana khaa rahi hogi

She then goes into prachi's room and notices that she is in the shower
K: prachi maine tumhare kapde rakh diye hai change karke ajana
P: from the shower …….ok di

She goes into KT's room
K: ufffff yeh toti abhi tak uthi nahi ………..kt utho college jana hai
KT: moans
K: kt utho varna
KT: no answer
K: ufffff…….varna mein tumhare upar paani phekungi
KT: with a great shock jumps out of her bed and stands on the floor…kya di aap bhi na sone bhi nahi deti
K: ab chal naha dho kar change karke neechay aja
KT: okie dokie

Mukti was eating really fast
K: mukti slow down tum koi train nahi catch kari
M: I know di lekin yeh meri pehli job hai to…
KT: (interrupts) to socha ki jaldi jaldi kha ke saara khana khatam karke phir apney pyare se …kya tha uska naam?
KT: right apne darling prem se milne jaogi
M: (irritated)….kashish di isko dekhiye na
K: kt kyun pareshaan kari ho isko
M: (got up ) im going bye everyone
K,P,KT: bye….

Prachi then got up collected her bag and stuff and headed out of the door but waiting outside for kt while took kashish's blessings gave and took a cheek kiss and left.

Now we go over to the mehra house while mukti enters for the first time….
M: wow kitna bada ghar hai lekin sir kahan hai (then she sees him sitting on the table with his laptop, she goes upto him) sir
S: (turns around and smiles to see mukti) oh mukti agayi tum ar bilkul sahi waqt par ayi ho yeh lo prem ka timetable or baki to tumhe pata hi hai ke kya karna hai hmm
M: ji sir or wo hai kahan
S: oh sahab zadey apney room mein hai sorahe hai toh uska jagana bhi summary hi kaam hai
M: right sir erm lekin unka room kahan hai
S: (just then he sees neev coming down the stairs ) arre good morning neev
N: good morning bhaiyya and stops there ……erm bhaiyya yeh kaun hai (pointing towards mukti)
S: oh yeh mukti hai meine bataya tha na
N: oh haan welcome to our house
M: thank you
S: er neev tum mukti ko prem ka kamra dikhao or phir khaana khana ok
N: ok bhaiyya

He took mukti up the stairs and they both noticed lakah on the way

L: hello miss…..
M: mukti, mein prem ki personal secretary
L: oh ya I know I heard waise mein aapko bata doon ki bhai ko sudharna itna asaan nahi hoga
M: koi baat nahi nothing is impossible
N: ab chalein
M: chalo

Neev and mukti finally arrived into prem's room and mukti was not impressed at all
N: here you go and all the best
M: thanx

Neev left and she went in, there were clothes, magazines, empty cans, rubbish all over the floor
M: omg…..yeh room hai ke rubbish bin (then she sees someone laying in the bed with the blanket overing his whole body) and she yells …MISTER PREM MEHRA!!!!!!!!!!
P: jumps out of his bed and moans……….wat who is it
M: main hoon mukti sinha aapki personal secretary sir ne aap ko bataya hi hoga na
P: haan haan bataya tha
M: to plz aap jaldi se change karlein or neechay ajayen
P: jaldi se change karoon or mai impossible
M: sir nothing is impossible (she snatched the beer out of his)
P: hey what are you doing?
M: sir jab tak aap ready nahi hojate tab tak aap yeh nahi peesakte
P: you know what tum mujhe yeh sir or aap kehke mat bulayo its annoying ok so stop it
M: ok prem (like she doesn't care)
P: just go ok your annoying
M: no way!!!!!!
P: you know what you remind me of someone
M: what
M: what
P: yes
M: I don't care aap jaldi fresh up hojaye or agar aap nahi aye to mai dobara aungi
P: no way don't you dare come into my room again
M: dekho agar aap neechay ayenge to mein dobara nahi aaongi simple
P: moans this is not fair (and heads into the shower)
M: smiles

Mukti goes downstairs and stands beside the table next to sujal

S: arre mukti tumne prem ko utha diya
M: ji sir
L: wow tumne, I mean aapna to chamatkar kardiya it's a miracle
N: wow waise kya mai aapko didi bala sakta hoon
L: oho neev yeh sab zaroori hai
M: bilkul kyun nahi bula sakte
S: well mai to challa office or haan mukti look after prem
M: of course sir aap bifilar hoke jaye

Sujal leaves gets into his car and drives off and midway he gets a call from home it was neev
S: hello
N: hi bhayya
S: arre neev kya baat hai
N: bhaiyya kya baat hai mukti mein isne bhai ko utha ya phir khana khilaya or wo bhi bas 5 min mein or phir abhi abhi wo unko apney rehearsels pe leke gayi hai
S: wow yeh to bohot achi baat hai
N: I know
S: acha tum or laksh college chale jao ok
N: ok bye bhayya
S: bye…

They both hang up and sujal is driving going to work until he sees some girl with long hair standing on the road he presses his horn loud and a lot of times to warn the girl but she is not looking

On the other hand KT is standing in the middle of the road
P: kt tu idhar aa
KT: wk min mai bas wo shop pe jari hoon
P: nai kt tu idhar aa riski hai
KT: arre kt keliye kuch bhi riski nahi hai
P: KT idhar aa wo dekh gaadi arihai

KT turned around and with great shock saw the car coming towards her but before she could make a move the car hit her legs she flew in the air with her arms out and mouth opened with shock and scariness. She came back down and hit the ground very hardly all her head was bleeding her arms had scratches all over and she was unconscious.

P: (very shocked and had a little tear in her eye) KT!!!!!!

The man in the car comes out with also a shocked face and it was sujal he was very scared. People gathered all around them and started looking at poor KT.
S: omg………im so sorry
P: plz aap sorry baad mein boliye ga pehle isse plz aap hospital leke jaye
S: ok come on lets go
P: hmm
Sujal picked kt up and put her at the back of his car prachi also sat at the back with kt laying down and her head was on prachi's lap and prachi was gently stroking her hair
P: aap plz jaldi kijiye na iska bohot khoon behraha hai
S: haan bas abhi pooch ne wale hai………

Precap: kasish and sujal meet, what the doctor says about kt keep reading…

Hope u guys liked it I will post the next part soon
Plz comment

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