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Pyaar or Nafrat (sk,pm,np,lkt) note-pg6 (Page 3)

ktandlakshyalov IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 26 August 2007 at 8:14pm | IP Logged
gr8 introduction!! Clap ...........i always beleive ur a gr8 writter!!!so continue........soon!! Clap Clap


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Posted: 27 August 2007 at 1:49am | IP Logged
GR8 intro. post the first part soon plz
kt4lakshya Senior Member

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Posted: 27 August 2007 at 7:35am | IP Logged
Part 1

First we see a back of a girl with long wet hair and all put on one side. She first opens the curtains and lets the sunshine in. She then picks up a pooja ki thalli in her hand and is pushing the smoke/smell in the air. She then goes to the dressing table and we see in the mirror that it's the one and only beautiful kashish sinha. She turns around and heads out of the room then she walks into another room that has yellow wallpaper all around and is very tidy. She looks around but doesn't see anyone then kashish hears the shower running in the bathroom
K: mukti…..mukti….mukti lagta naha rahi hai koi baat nahin mein us ke liye kapde nikal de tihoon hamesha ki tarha .
She took out a yellow shalwar kameez with orange embroidering then we see a girl coming out of the bathroom and drying her hair with a towel and we its our very own mukti…..
M: good morning di raat ache se sooen
K: haan aur tum
M: well it was ok
K: acha tum tayar ho jayo mein un dono ko utha har ati hoon
M: well prachi to uth jaati hai lekin KT to uff usko to chilla chilla ke uthana padta hai
K: koi baat nahi har subha to mein hi usko utha ti hoon to aadat si pad chuki hai warna mere bi na to who uthi nahi sakta aur tum jaldi se change karke neechay khana khane ajana ok
M: ya di u rock
Kashish just smiled and left the room. While mukti got changed and did her hair etc.

Then she headed into another room which was also very tidy but lots of shelves with millions of books on each of them all sorted out according to the alphabetical order. The wallpaper was all baby pink (just like prachi's room in Kayamath) and we see a girl who was just coming out of the washroom and was drying her hair in her night suit. And we see that its none other than the simple prachi
K: arre prachi tum abhi tak ready nahi hue
P: kashish di aap ko to pata jab tak aap mere kapde nahi nikal ti tab tak mein kaise ready ho sakti hoon and puts her hands oer the arti and over her hair
K: acha theek hai mein hi tere liye har subha ki tarha kapde nikal deti hoon ok
Then kashish went to her wardrobe and got out an orange salwar kameez
K: yeh leh tere kapde bas ab mujhe jaana hai us sust KT ko uthane
P: di usk liye to alarm kaafi nahi hai ussse to aapne uthana hota hai har subha
K: jaanti hoon lekin kya Karun who hai to abhi bhi bachi na acha tu jaldi se change karke neechay khana khane aja ok
P: ji didi

Then kashish wnt out of the room leaving prachi to change and now she walks into another room wich is also tidy but has magazines and CD's everywhere. The wallpaper is baby blue with fish all around painted right in the middle of the wall.
K: uffff…….yeh ladki abhi tak uthi nahi
She walks over to the curtains and lets the sunshine in but we and we see a girl very calmly sleeping on her bed. We don't see her face because it's the other way
K: KT…..KT….KT utho na itney derr hogayi hai tu abhi tak thi nahi
Then the girls face turns around and we see that its our very own KT sinha
KT: kya di subha subha kyun tang karahi hain maine sona hai mujhe sone de
K: theek hai to tu soja lekin jab tu college ka din miss karegi na tab tu exams mein fail hojaye gi tab tujhe koi job ya certificates nahi milenge phir tu akeli ghoom ti rahe gi phir……
Kt interrupts
KT: ok ok di mein uthrahi hoon ab subha subha yoon mujhe college na jaane ka fiada nai samjhaye
K: theek hain meine tere kapde nikaldiye hain tu jaldi se fresh ho kar neechjay nashta karne aja ok
KT: jaisa aap kahen mein to sab se choti hoon mujhe to aap ki baat mani hi padegi - in a lousy tone.
Kashish went downstairs and got the table ready with the breakfast she cooked and was putting the final things on it.
Then prachi and mukti were coming downstairs and sat on the table
K: prachi kt kaha regayi
P: pata nahi di aap ko to pata hai who kitni lazy hai ab who poora aap na time legi or aram se ready hogi chahe who late ho ya aur bhi late ho
They all laugh at that comment
M: arre kt agayi
K: kt jaldi kar nashta thanda horahai
P: haan kt jaldi karo
Kt came and like always mukti sat on the right hand side of kashish and prachi on the left and KT opposite hashish (it was a square table)

Now over in the mehra house
We see that a man is sitting on the dinning table wearing a black suit then the camera turns to face him and we see that its sujal. Then we see another boy coming down the stairs with jeans and a blue shirt on and the camera goes to his feat then it starts to move upwards then we see that its none other than neev….
N: good morning bhaiyya how r u
S: fine and good morning to u too waisey neev aaj kuch khaas hai tumhare college main
N: kyun aap ko aisa kyun laga
S: woh actually aaj laksh badi jaldi uth gaya aur abhi kitchen main hai ata hi hoga
N: arre haan aaj to……
S: aaj to kya neev
N: kuch nahi bhaiya woh main usse table par balata hoon
S: theek hai jaldi ana
Then neev heads into the kitchen and we see the back of boy with blue jeens and a black shirt with a white jacket on top
N: laksh aaj tujhe kya hogaya
Then the boy turns around and we see its our very own lakshya
L: kya hai neev tujhe yaad nahi
N: haan yaad hai or ishi liye mai tujhe ke raha hoon its not good yaar
L: kuch nahi hota neev bas tujhe ladki se milna hai and then u have a girlfriend
N: laksh maine tujhe kitni baar kaha hai keh I don't wanna girlfriend ok
L: kya neev theek hai maihi uss ladki ke saat date par chala jaata hoon ok happy now
N: yes very happy (sarcastically) ab chal sujal bhaiyya tera intezaar karahe hai chal
Then the both go out of the kitchen and head to the dinning table which was really long due to their richness
S: arre tum dono agaye chalo ab khana khao
They both sit down and suddenly laksh remembers something
L: arre bhaiyya yeh bhai kahan hai
S: tum dono ko to patahai balki tum dono ko kya sabko pata hai ki who har roz 10 baje ata hai aur uski rehearsels bhi hoti hai dance ki
N: oh haan
S: seriously mujhe kissi ko rakhna chahiye jo usse sudaar sake par aisa koi milta hi nahi anyway hopes up
They all eat and when neev and laksh head out they both turn around and see that prem is walking down the stairs
P: hey guys wats up
S: tum taal na band karo aur khana khalo
P: ok ok whatever u say
L: thinks to himself pata nahi yeh kab sudhrenge
And dujal drops laksh and neev off to their college

While in the sinha house
K: mukti aaj to tune job dhoonde jaana hai
M: arre haan mein to bhool hi gayi acha mein chal ti hoon
K: arre naashta to khatam kar
But mukti is out of the door to hear anything anyone said
Kt: acha mein or prachi chalte hain college aap apna dehaan rakhiye ga ok
K: haan haan lekin tum dono bhi apna dehaan rakhna ok
P: ok di she heads outside while kt is still moving slowly on purpose you'll see why in a min
K: arre jaldi kar kt woh dekh prachi chali bhi gayi
Then kt quickly runs over to Kaashish and takes her blessings and gives her a kiss and runs off
K: hamesha aisehi karti hai paagal (says that with a smile)

Well guys that was the first part hope u likes it tell me if u did
Plz leave comments
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Edited by kt4lakshya - 27 August 2007 at 10:35am
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Posted: 27 August 2007 at 8:00am | IP Logged
OMG !! Tuba you meanie !! Angry Angry Don't inform me of your FF early , you little ....
LOL LOL Okie .. No porblem !! Hug
Ahaa !! Great intro and Part 1 ! Dancing
Continue Soon !! Hug
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Posted: 27 August 2007 at 12:13pm | IP Logged
hey great update plzzz continue soon!
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Posted: 27 August 2007 at 2:09pm | IP Logged

Originally posted by Zinu29

OMG !! Tuba you meanie !! Angry Angry Don't inform me of your FF early , you little ....
LOL LOL Okie .. No porblem !! Hug
Ahaa !! Great intro and Part 1 ! Dancing
Continue Soon !! Hug

ditto LOLClap

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Posted: 27 August 2007 at 3:30pm | IP Logged
awesome part yaar.plz continue soonnnnnnnn
Patel 1993 Goldie
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Posted: 28 August 2007 at 2:42am | IP Logged
nice first apart. love the intro of everyone. especially Prem's. continue soon

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