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Princess_Priya1

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Posted: 25 August 2007 at 10:52am | IP Logged
The mirror's broken to pieces. Confused Confused

Poor raj falls on his knees and folds his hands in desperation asking Nandini beggingly----------------
Cry
Please kaho ki yeh sab jhoot hai, Yeh sab jhoot hai,
Please!   Cry Cry                   He bows his head and cries.

Nandini kneels down beside Raj. Cry

She wispers in his ears--------I told u raj tumhe dard hoga.

Raj looks up………..He says angrily in frustation-----------Tum dard ki baat kar rahi ho……………………nandini tumhare iss sach ne meri zindagi ki neev ko hila kar rakh diya hai.
Ouch Ouch
Lala saab…………………Lala saab mere liye pita ke samaan hain shayd usse bhi badhkar.

Unka haath pakadkar chalna seekha hai maine. ( he cries all along)_
Cry Cry
Unke pyaar ki chaya mein apna bachpan bitaya hai maine.

Mujhe aaj bhi yaad hai who lala saab hi the jinhone mujhe sambhala tha jab main toot chukka tha BABA ke jaane ke baad………..Don't u remember?

Nahin !( Raj stands up) Yeh SACH NAHIN HO SAKTA!

Ouch

Someone comes from behind and says--------Raj yehi sach hai.

Raj recognizes the voice immediately-Baba he is shocked!

( Ok guys its Raj's ex boss with whom he used to work before he came to the academy …..remember when lala saab was asking Raj to escape since he has worked I don't remember somewhere he had mentioned and that raj could do it without leaving a trail………….i'm talking about Raj's those days of work.) Confused
He turns around to see his own very boss whom he thought had lost in that car accident in the car in which raj was meant to go but it was his boss who went instead.
Cry Cry
Raj runs to the man and hugs him tightly--------Baba aap mujhe laga maine aapko hamesha ke liye kho diya.( he continues to cry). Smile

The man sats bas Raj bas. Dekho meri taraf.

Raj looks at him. Cry

Raj yeh sab jo Nandini ne tumse kaha who sach hai. Tumhe iss sachai ke saath jeena seekhna hoga.

Raj has that look of pain, betrayl, agony, anguish, suffering, heart break, …………………………..on his face.( U all can imagine how well Raj potrays such look )
Ouch

Yaar I really miss him. But when I write this FF I really feel that he's still there and that everything is fine.
Cry
But kaash aisa sach mein hota' Embarrassed

Anyways plaease batao tum log kaise ho and do u all feel the same when u read my FF.???????????????? Smile Smile




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diya7000

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Posted: 25 August 2007 at 11:54am | IP Logged
Hey leo tell me 1st how r u? n my name is diya dear Smile not divya Wink..anywayz..U know whenevr I read the name Capt. Rajveer..only once face comes in my mind..that's none other than Rajeev's face Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed ..I start visualizing that he is actually doing that scene... Embarrassed

ur work is really nice... Clap..keep it up...I know u asked all of us 2 hv patience..but I seriously feel Naina should be there wid Rajveer at this crucial state of him... Cry ..pls bring her asap.. Smile ...do update soon   

Edited by diya7000 - 25 August 2007 at 11:55am

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Posted: 25 August 2007 at 11:30pm | IP Logged
I'm sooooooooooooo sorry Diya. Ouch

I just don't know how made this mistake! Confused

Waise I'm better now day after tommorrow I'll go do the doc to get the wound dressed again. Smile

I should be fine by late next week! Wink

Actually yaar I was not planning RN in my track!
Par abb since all of u want that I need time to change things.
Wink

diya7000

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Posted: 26 August 2007 at 12:31am | IP Logged

Originally posted by leothebest9

I'm sooooooooooooo sorry Diya. Ouch

I just don't know how made this mistake! Confused

Waise I'm better now day after tommorrow I'll go do the doc to get the wound dressed again. Smile

I should be fine by late next week! Wink

Actually yaar I was not planning RN in my track!
Par abb since all of u want that I need time to change things.
Wink

Ohh its alrite ur not only one who did this mistake..Smile..

It's good 2 hear that ur wound is healing....

Yeah plss bring RN closeEmbarrassed..n write some nice romantic scenes.EmbarrassedEmbarrassed..it's my request..do update soon..Smile

Princess_Priya1

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Posted: 26 August 2007 at 1:01am | IP Logged
Raj aaj tak tumne jung dushmanon ke khilaaf ladi hai aur tum jeete bhi ho.
Lekin aaj se tumhe ek nai jung ladni hai, Yeh jung tumhare apne khilaaf hai aur apne aap ke saath hai.

Raj jo hamare saath hua, jo naveen ke saath hua, aur abb yeh sab jo tumhare saath ho raha hai uske liye Lala saab hi zimmedar hain.

Raj main tumse bahut pehle milne aa jata jail mein lekin maine dekha ki ek baar phir se wahi khel khel rahein hai tab maine soch liya tha Raj ki ab tumhare sach janne ka waqt aa gaya hai.


Aur yahi wajah hai ki Raj himne judge saab se kehlava kar judgement tumhare khilaaf dilvai-----------RAJ IS SHOCKED----------

Raj kyunki hum tumhe wahan se door lana chahte the.
Kyunki hum nahin chahte the ki Raj jo Naveen ke saath hua who tumhare saath bhi ho.

Raj looks at him questiongly………………..Lekin Why is Lala Saab doing all this? WHY?

Power Raj POWER .
Yeh power bahut buri cheez hoti hai.

Yeh apno ko paraya kar deti hai.
Aur doston ko dushman bana deti hai.

Raj who jaante the ki ek baar tum Rad box tak pahunch jaoge toh phir tumhe untak pahunchne mein zyada waqt nahin lagega.

Hum dekh rahe the Raj ki kis tarah tum Lala Saab ke bichaye jaal mein phanste jaa rahe the.

Isliye humne tumhare cadets aur Abhi ke bayaan tumhare hak mein hote hue bhi tumhe saza dilvaye.


Yehi ek tareeka tha hamare paas. Cry Cry
Jo zillat aur sharmindigi tumhe iss wajah se uthani padi hum uske liye tumse maafi maangte hain Raj.

Nahin baba kyun sharminda kar rahein hain aap mujhe. Smile Embarrassed

Raj abb tum aazad ho . Smile
Tum aazad ho apni tarah se apni innocence prove karne ke liye.
Naveen ki begunahi saabit karne ke liye.
Aur lala saab ko unke kiye ki saza dilane ke liye

Raj is silent he looks into his boss' eyes.


Raj then asks his boss………………Lekin Nandini?

Raj Nandini ab humare saath hi kaam karti hai. We all work under cover. She is in place of Abhimanyu now.

Jab humne Nandini se tumhari baat ki toh who humari madad karne ko tayyar ho gayi Kyunki who apni galti ko sudharna chahti thi. Smile

Jo dhoka usne tumhe diya uske liye.
Raj looks at Nandini.

It seems they read each other's thoughts.

Nandini looks at raj pleadingly as if apologizing. Smile


He gives her and understanding nod and gives a smile( Wahi sweet million dollar smile Rajveer ki…………………………………………….) Embarrassed

Then Nandini leaves satisfied. Smile


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Posted: 26 August 2007 at 4:45am | IP Logged
will thr be any rn track

its rocking

keep updating

diya7000

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Posted: 26 August 2007 at 5:34am | IP Logged
nice part Clap ..when there will be any RN conversation.. Cry

Princess_Priya1

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Posted: 26 August 2007 at 6:16am | IP Logged

Raj hum jante hain tum humari bahut izzat karte ho.
Aaj hum tumse ek wada chahte hain Raj.

Kya Baba? Smile

Tum iss bare mein jo bhi faisla loge who apne dimaag se loge dil se nahin Raj kyunki hum jaanten hain ki tumhara dil saaf hai isliye tumhe tumhare aas paas wale sab ache nazar aate hain aur tum sachayi ka saath doge hamesha ki tarh In saaf ke liye ladoge. Clap

Aur haan HAMESHA KI TARAH YEH JUNG BHI JEETOGE! Clap

Raj looks up there is that fire in his red eyes ( red with tears).

Fire of anger. Angry

Fireof hurt of betrayl. Cry

Fire of will to fight the pain, the agony. Smile

Fire of a new hope. Tongue

And fire of starting life afresh with a new mission all together. Clap Clap

He replies-------------MAIN AAPSE WADA KARTA HOON. Embarrassed


Its night.
Raj comes to the dining room.

Nandini's waiting for him at the dinner table.

I'm glad u r fine now, she says.

Thanx to u Nandini. (Raj quips)

Namdini just smiles and looks at him.
She says—Imade ur fav dishes today. Hope u like them. Smile

Raj replies instantly and unconsciously--------Oh come on nandini U r the best cook in the world I know and u know that too. Big smile

And they both laugh heartedly.
( Itne dinon baad Raj ke hasne ke khayal se toh mein bhi chehak uthi yaar----------I#magine karo Who laughter apne Raj ki………………Love u for this Nandini)
Smile

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