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FF-Life after KMA! (Page 4)

Princess_Priya1 IF-Sizzlerz
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Posted: 24 August 2007 at 11:14pm | IP Logged
First of all thanx ars I hope too my wound heals soon.
Smile
Thanx Nishtha for ur message waise ur idea isn't bad afterall but the problem is I don't like kekta a wee bit and after her differences with Rajeev huh……………..she's not really in my good books!U see Wink

ok lets strt from where we left!-

Nandini too has tears in her eyes. Cry
She leaves without saying anything.
She calls someone-------Raj is just not fine. He has suffered a lot .

The man on the other line says( his face is not shown)-----------
Hum jante hain, lekin yeh bhi sach hai ki iss baar bhi Raj yeh jung jeetega.
Donot worry I'll be coming soon. Confused

Nandini replies uneasily-----------No sir u just don't understand! Cry
Who toot chukka hai. He's just loosing it.And and I feel so helpless! Cry Cry

I, I just don't know what will happen when he comes to know who has been behind this all along---------Navven's case, his own trial All hell will break loose. Confused Ouch Ouch


"Then LET IT BE SO" Raj says from behind. Ermm
Nandini is shocked and turns around top see Raj.She immediately cuts the line. Shocked

What………..What r u talking about Raj she stammers……….

U know very well Nandini.

Raj tum nahin janna chahoge.Trust me on that one.
Tumhe dukh hoga. Confused

Nandini jitna dookh, jitni takleef maine ab tak bardasht ki hai, usse zyada aur dookh mujhe nahin mil saktabut I want to know who did all this to me and kisne Naveen ko fasaya. Cry

No Raj! I can't!

No Nandini u have to and u will! Look at me he turns her around! Cry

He looks at her pleadingly! Broken Heart

Tell me please Nandini--------Tell me!

Raj………………Raj……………..It's Lala Saab.

Raj is shell shocked. Shocked Cry

He shouts-Just shut up Nandini Just shut up! Cry

Mazak mein bhi aisa doobara mat kehna!

Lala saab's everything for me.(Raj has tears in his eyes),

He can't do this. He just can't do this! Angry Angry

And he picks up the vase on the nearby table and breaks the wall mirror! Angry Angry

RAJ KA GUSSA!!!!!!!!!!!!Hai uss par toh hum sab fida hai!
Embarrassed

Embarrassed Embarrassed How did u all like it.


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Posted: 25 August 2007 at 12:59am | IP Logged
how u managed to type in one hand such a good part..keep it up..n do update soon..though I know ur not well n but i can't help it..I wanna read d next part soon Smile
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Posted: 25 August 2007 at 3:00am | IP Logged
update soon

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Posted: 25 August 2007 at 3:21am | IP Logged
its gr8.....update soon....but plzzz do take care of ur self....
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Posted: 25 August 2007 at 10:34am | IP Logged
Thanx yaar all of u! Tongue Big smile

Please patience rakho tina do not worry RN jaldi milenge!
Embarrassed
Sabr ka fal meetha hota hai dear! Smile Dead

Waise bas few minutes aur I'll update soon! Wink Wink

And yaar Divya ek haath se type karna is torturous Cry It takes me more than double of the usual time! Ouch

And donot worry I'm taking good care of myself Big smile   Smile
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Posted: 25 August 2007 at 10:52am | IP Logged
The mirror's broken to pieces. Confused Confused

Poor raj falls on his knees and folds his hands in desperation asking Nandini beggingly----------------
Cry
Please kaho ki yeh sab jhoot hai, Yeh sab jhoot hai,
Please!   Cry Cry                   He bows his head and cries.

Nandini kneels down beside Raj. Cry

She wispers in his ears--------I told u raj tumhe dard hoga.

Raj looks up………..He says angrily in frustation-----------Tum dard ki baat kar rahi ho……………………nandini tumhare iss sach ne meri zindagi ki neev ko hila kar rakh diya hai.
Ouch Ouch
Lala saab…………………Lala saab mere liye pita ke samaan hain shayd usse bhi badhkar.

Unka haath pakadkar chalna seekha hai maine. ( he cries all along)_
Cry Cry
Unke pyaar ki chaya mein apna bachpan bitaya hai maine.

Mujhe aaj bhi yaad hai who lala saab hi the jinhone mujhe sambhala tha jab main toot chukka tha BABA ke jaane ke baad………..Don't u remember?

Nahin !( Raj stands up) Yeh SACH NAHIN HO SAKTA!

Ouch

Someone comes from behind and says--------Raj yehi sach hai.

Raj recognizes the voice immediately-Baba he is shocked!

( Ok guys its Raj's ex boss with whom he used to work before he came to the academy …..remember when lala saab was asking Raj to escape since he has worked I don't remember somewhere he had mentioned and that raj could do it without leaving a trail………….i'm talking about Raj's those days of work.) Confused
He turns around to see his own very boss whom he thought had lost in that car accident in the car in which raj was meant to go but it was his boss who went instead.
Cry Cry
Raj runs to the man and hugs him tightly--------Baba aap mujhe laga maine aapko hamesha ke liye kho diya.( he continues to cry). Smile

The man sats bas Raj bas. Dekho meri taraf.

Raj looks at him. Cry

Raj yeh sab jo Nandini ne tumse kaha who sach hai. Tumhe iss sachai ke saath jeena seekhna hoga.

Raj has that look of pain, betrayl, agony, anguish, suffering, heart break, …………………………..on his face.( U all can imagine how well Raj potrays such look )
Ouch

Yaar I really miss him. But when I write this FF I really feel that he's still there and that everything is fine.
Cry
But kaash aisa sach mein hota' Embarrassed

Anyways plaease batao tum log kaise ho and do u all feel the same when u read my FF.???????????????? Smile Smile




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Posted: 25 August 2007 at 11:54am | IP Logged
Hey leo tell me 1st how r u? n my name is diya dear Smile not divya Wink..anywayz..U know whenevr I read the name Capt. Rajveer..only once face comes in my mind..that's none other than Rajeev's face Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed ..I start visualizing that he is actually doing that scene... Embarrassed

ur work is really nice... Clap..keep it up...I know u asked all of us 2 hv patience..but I seriously feel Naina should be there wid Rajveer at this crucial state of him... Cry ..pls bring her asap.. Smile ...do update soon   

Edited by diya7000 - 25 August 2007 at 11:55am
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Posted: 25 August 2007 at 11:30pm | IP Logged
I'm sooooooooooooo sorry Diya. Ouch

I just don't know how made this mistake! Confused

Waise I'm better now day after tommorrow I'll go do the doc to get the wound dressed again. Smile

I should be fine by late next week! Wink

Actually yaar I was not planning RN in my track!
Par abb since all of u want that I need time to change things.
Wink

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