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The poem we r gonna discuss this week is a poem called Love Ruins friendship which is a poem written by myself...
Love Ruins friendship
I knew him when we were kids
We used to always play
Then the time came when he had to leave
I wanted him to stay
He came up to me to say goodbye
I looked into his eyes
I could see the tears coming
I remembered the good old times
I sat and thought to myself
Why I lost a friend
Does this always happen to me
Why did everything end
After many years I also moved
And he added me on MSN
I talked to him and realized
We could be friends again
After sometime I noticed
That the relationship
was a little more
than just friendship
So I decide to let him know
For me it was very tough
I called him and said to him
That we were both in love
At first he didn't say anything
Then he said he feels that too
We were both quiet for a while
And then he said I love you
That day I can never forget
It looked like the world was smiling
And then we always talked
But was it the right timing?
He then changed a little bit
And he wasn't the same person
I decided to break the relationship
But it made everything worsen?
After that we tried to be just friends
But it didn't work at all
Because every time we tried to talk
We remembered that one call
Will we get together again?
I really don't know
I really hope everything works out
I hope things just flow
So everyone please listen to me
Don't ruin what you have
Because now I feel that I should've known
That friendship was enough
Do u feel that love ruins friendship?
Are u in love with someone whom u have known since childhood?
If u loved ur best friend would u not tell them how u feel coz u would be afraid that it would ruin what u a;ready have?
Anything else u would like to add about this poem.
L&F Dev. Team
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Do u feel that love ruins friendship?-yes....it does ive had the experience!
Are u in love with someone whom u have known since childhood?-yes my best friend....and i broke my 11yr friendship wid him...
If u loved ur best friend would u not tell them how u feel coz u would be afraid that it would ruin what u a;ready have? yes.....but at the same time no...cuz who noes! he might feel the same way too u noe!
Anything else u would like to add about this poem.-no actually...its a perfect poem!
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