Hum Aapke Hain Kon?? (LK fanfic) - Page 5

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Posted: 16 years ago
#41
here is the next part!

PART 5:

it was nite time...

KT was standing near the window and just thinking wat happened EXACTLY a day before..

"FLASH BACKS"

laksh & kt standing near the same window..

L: KT..
K: haan...
L: kal iss waqt tum mujhe yaad kar rahi hogi...(and looks at kt and smile)
K: mein..? tumhe? kabhi nahi..!!
L: haan haan....i kno u!!
K: OK...lets see...
L: ok...then lets have a DEAL..!!
K: of???
L: i mean lets bet !! i wud say u will .....and u say that u wont..!!
K: OK!! {but she knew she will}
K: lekin...tum to Dubai mein ho ge!! how wud u kno ke tum jeetey ya haare!! (smiles)
L: mujhe ye jawab zaroor mile gaa...
**out of flashbacks**

KT had tears in her eyes....

K: paagal!! {in a sweet way!} i love u laksh!! {to herself}

*someone comes on the door...*

P=person

P: i LOVE U TOO!!

*kt turns*

Part 5:

K: tumm!!!??!!
*it was laksh!*

L: haan mein..!! mein ne kaha tha naa....i'll come to know this answer!!
K: laksh..!! is it true??..!!
*she goes and touches but it disappears!*

KT's face turns again SAD from her HAPPY FACE!!

K: ye laksh bhi naa....jab nahi hota tab bhi taang karta hain!! {smiles}
K: lekin woh gaya!!
*she goes to sleep but couldn't sleep as she was really worried for Laksh & his work!!*
*same with Laksh.....he couldn't sleep whole nite as he was really missing KT and the way she pushes Laksh out her room wen he teases her*

Just then Kt's cell phone rings............she picks it up!!

P-person

K: hello...
P:tumare pati ko hum maar da linge!! (very heavy voice)
K: ye kya bol rahe hoo tum?? aur tum ho kon!! ??!! {crying badly}
P: hum jo bhi hain!! lekin aab woh zinda nahi rahe gaa!!
K: tum!! laksh ko kuch nahi karoge!!! tum agar mujhse kisi cheez ka badla lena chahte ho to mujhse baat karo!!lekin LAKSH ko haath bhi mat lagana!!!!!!!!!!!!
P: acha acha...KT tum rona baand karo pls!! {laughs...it was LAKSH!!}
L: mein hoon!! LAKSH!!
K: TUM!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! laksh ye kaisa mazaak tha!! tum ne meri jaan he nikal di!!(crying)
L: ok ok SORRY!!.........waise KT kya main tumara Pati hoon?? (says in a flirty way!!)
K: shut up!! i hate u!! i seriously HATE U LAKSH!! (in a kiddish way )
L: yeah rite....as if u do!! iss hee liye itna roo rahi thi!! hmm..??
K: laksh!! ye sab kyun kia tumne'?? agar aisa tumare saath hota to??
L: shhhhhhh...!! chup!! aisi baat maat karna!!
K: gr8!! amazing!!...mein aisi baat karu bhi naa!! aur tum!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! tum ne meri jaan he nikal di!! uss ka kia??
L: kt! jhoot maat bolo!
K: kia??
L: tumara jaan to mere paas hain.....mujhe nikaal dia kia!!
K: laksh pls!! lekin tum ne ye sab kia kyun?
L: mein dekhna chahta tha ke PATI kehne pe tumara kia reaction ho ga!!
K: acha...to kia tha?? khair mujhe ye baatao ke tum ne khaana khaya?
L: nahi.......
K: kyun??
L: woh actually im not feeling like getting up??
K: why wat happened?? tum theek ho na??
L: haan...woh baas thora sa bhu!!(fever) (he was saying bhukaar but stopped as he didnt wanted KT getting worried)
K: kyaaaaaaaaaaaa!!???!!! tumhe bhukaar hain/?? aur tum ne mujhe bataya bhi nahi!! {angry)
L: aray baba "bhukaaar" nahi mein keh raha tha ke mujhe bhook nahi....
K: laksh!! jhoot mat bolo pls!!
L: ..............
K: mein ne tumare hand carry mein , second pocket mein medicines rakhi hain .......jo blue color wali hain naa pls woh kha lo......twice a day!! pls!!
L: (smiles) ok my sweetheart!! KT!?!
K: haan.....
L: tum itni achi kyun ho?
K: tumare saath jo hoon....acha aab tum baatein kam karo aur jaa ke dawa (medicine) le lo..!!
L: OK MaDAM!!
K: thank u!!
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hope u liked!! wat do u think will happen next :)
love,aliya Edited by **@liy@** - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#42
aw..that was so cute and sweet 👏
plz jaldi update karo 😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
#43
awww.... that was so cute i loved it
plz update soon cant wait

-tuba
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Posted: 16 years ago
#44
First of all, when you mentioned the 'pati' part, I was a bit confused 😆 ... But it turned out to be great... Love their jodi! *Muah*
Please continue soon, whenever you get time.
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Posted: 16 years ago
#45
awsome part aliya cont..soon.... 👏

Shona
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Posted: 16 years ago
#46
cute part!!!!!!!!!!continue soon.

laksh is so cute!!!!!!!!!!!!! 😳 😃
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Posted: 16 years ago
#47
sorry made u all wait thisss long 😭 here is the next paRt!! 😳

Part 6:
ON THE PHONE..
K: laksh ....ab tum soo jao......waise bhi tumhari tabiyat theek nahi..
L: kt..! mein theek hoon....
K: laksh pls...ab jao aur jaake soo jao naa...
L: mujhse baat karne ka Maan nahi hai kia?.... 😃 😭
K: LAKSH!! ..
L: laag to aise hee raha hain... 😉
K: laksh pls...
L: ok baba ...mazaak tha...
*kt coughs a litle*
L: KT!!...!! 😡
K: haan..? 😕
L: tumari tabiyat theek hai na..??
K: nahi baba...im perfect..!! ab pls tum jaake soo jao...
L: kt..dont Lie!!
K: woh bas thori se tabiyat kharab thi 😃 ..
L: aur mujhe baataya bhi nahi..??
K: tumne bataya?
*someone knocks the door...*KT* acts as if she is sleeping....she pulls the comforter on her self and keeps the cellphone in her hand...* 😆 😳
*Tulsi comes..........smilez at KT...and just leaves*
kt comes out ...
K: yea..
L: kya hua tha..?
K: woh ...baa aaye thi..
K: abb pls meray SHWEET HEART!! aap sooo jayei..!! 😳
L: OhO..kya kaha aawaz nai aayi.. 😉
K: laksh!!..
L: ok ok....just say the three beautiful words...
K: laksh..
L: kya laksh..?? aab taak sharmati ho kya??
K: ok !!... I LOVE U!!... ❓
L: kya kaha...
K: I --LOVE-- U !!
L: LOVE U MORE THAN MY LIFE!!... 😳
*kt 😳 😳 blushes*
L: aab blush karna baand karo...aur pls meri aamanat [property] ka khayal rakhiye gaa(which meant KT).....
(kt smiles)
K: hmm....aap hai to apni aamanat ka khayal rakhne ko[app hain to mera khyal rakhne ke liye]... waise aap bhi meri aamanat ko sambhaal ke rakiye gaa....
(laksh smiles)
K: now good nite...
L: wats soo good about the nite/?? TUMARE BINA...
K: laksh...shut up....soocho ke mein wahi pe hoon (and giggles)
L: haan....aik beautiful white colour ke dress mein 😉 ,.....WOW!! kitni khoobsurat laag rahi hoo...BEAUTIFUL..
K: LAKSH!! pagal ho gaye ho kia.. 😆 !!?!! aab agar koi aaya na ....to masla ho jaye ga....GOOD NITE!!
L: GOOD NITE Honey..........mein tumare saath enjoy karta hunn...
(kt giggles)...
K: bye...
*keeps the fone*
K: PAGAL!!(SMILES)
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scene changes to the MORNING TIME...
kt wakes up at about 9...and sees tht there is an SMS on her cell
*she went in the inbox...the contact name was written "SwEeTiE" *
She smiled to her self...
opened the msg,.....it said "Gud Morning...LUBZ" (LUBZ meanz ; luv u buhat ziyada)
kT REPLIED "good morning sweetheart....LOVE U TOO..come back sooooonnnn!! :(
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kt dressed in a really nice suit..
really nice light pink shirt...with collar neck.. sleeveless..short shirt.. white shalwar....& pink n white - tie n dye dupatta....
very glossyy .. brown lip gloss... kaajal...her hair all open....looking BEAUTIFUL!!...
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h3y ...hope u liked it ...i wrote a part for this FF after about a MONTH...soooRry!!...
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Posted: 16 years ago
#48

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Edited by **@liy@** - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#49
wow great and sweet part
👏
cont soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
#50
soo sweet aliya!!!!!!!!!!!! hahaha, i loved hwo tulsi walked inwhile she was talking lol, its good that she's understand about it...great part !! continue soon!! 👏 👏