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I Would Die -SAD LOVE STORY

iluvDharmesh IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 11 August 2007 at 12:49pm | IP Logged

One night a guy and a girl were driving home from the movies. The boy sensed there was something wrong because of the painful silence they shared between them that night. The girl then asked the boy to pull over because she wanted to talk. She told him that her feelings had changed and that it was time to move on. A silent tear slid down his cheek as he slowly reached into his pocket and passed her a folded note. At that moment, a drunk driver was speeding down that very same street. He swerved right into the drivers seat, killing the boy. Miraculously, the girl survived. Remembering the note, she pulled it out and read it. "Without your love, I would die".

Cry

How did you like the story? Please reply Smile

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Posted: 12 August 2007 at 3:46pm | IP Logged
OMG one of the saddest storys i have ever read.it makes me wanna cry! Cry Cry .hope it isn't true!! Cry well done for fining this story Clap
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Posted: 15 August 2007 at 3:50am | IP Logged
ohhhhhh such a sad end
Cry Cry Cry
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Posted: 16 August 2007 at 10:51am | IP Logged
Cry aww...that was sad Cry
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Posted: 16 August 2007 at 10:37pm | IP Logged
Awwww..that is so sad! Cry
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Posted: 18 August 2007 at 4:03pm | IP Logged
Ouch thanks for sharing, it's beautiful..yet sadCry
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Posted: 20 August 2007 at 10:28pm | IP Logged
Sweet and sad story. I wish it were a little longer though.
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Posted: 22 August 2007 at 4:35am | IP Logged
that wsa very well written and i liked it... but well it is very very short and there doesnt seem much u can say bout the story becasuse its very short! my advice to you is to make it longer because if i remember right, here on WC we have an 800 word limit for stories so please adfhere to that!

It was well written and you can clearly write quite well so please try smething logner!

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