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gujugurl

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Posted: 05 August 2007 at 2:10pm | IP Logged

 

     the show begins with crackling thunderstorm and lighting....the camera moves towards a police station..in the jail where there are investigations going on...the spotlight is flashing on a scared girl dressed in white sari...her hair tied in a low ponytail...tears rolling down her eyes.Cry..she looked very innocent...but yet had alot of questions but no answers....

policeofficer: apka naam kya hai??? apna yeh kiske kehne paar kiya???apne yeh kyun kiya????jawab do???apna apne pati ka katal kyun kiya????

the questions continued...and the policeman got harsher....

girl: baas...she said as she covered her ears....please band kar....maine apne pati ka katal nahi kia.....she cried out loud shouting that she was innocent....Cry....

policeman #2: stop this right now...wat kind of a way is this to talk to a lady...  please ap rona band kijeye.....or shanti se bataye...apka naam kya hai...

the girl: as she wiped her tears..and drank a bit of water..she replied...mera naam chandani khurana hai....

policeman #2:    apne apke pati to kyu mara....mujhe puri kahani bataye.....

chandani: meri duniya khushi se phari hui thi....mera ek parivar tha...ek bhai tha, do behane or mujhe buhat pyaar karne wale mama or papa...jime me pyar se ma or pa bulaya kartitey... 

flash back 5 years back.....

starts with the sunrising in the morning...mrs.khurana waking up....starting her day with the kitchen....making tea for mr.khurana...so she enters the kitchen and sees chaman sleeping on the kitchen floor..snoring his way about....

devika: chaman...chaman....chaman...

chaman: as he shouts out kya hai kitna accha sapna dekh rata...mere sapno ki rani mujhe mil rahi thi or ab woh sapna tot kaya....eh..yeh kya me yaha kese aya...LOLLOL

devika: yehi to mein tumse pooch yehi who ...tum hai kesi.....zaroor tum phol kaye hunge...chaldi otho or nasta banow...

chaman: nasta kyu....dinner kyu nahi...LOLLOL

devika:chaman....it's morning so breakfast....

so while making tea she shouts out chandani,ishan, otha....subha hogayehai....

ishan twirls in his bed...

ishan: kya yaar...main kitna accha sapna dekh raha tha...oh priyanka....

as he gets of his bed his phone alarm rings..with priyanka's voice saying wake up honey...wake up honey..LOLLOL

ishan: he looks at priyanka's poster and kisses it...i love u...Embarrassed

then devika shouts again....

then the camera moves to another room....blue walls..wind chimes hanging...stuffed animals in th showcase...and they show her sleeping like a princess....

she slowly lifts her blanket and sits upright....devika enters the room and calls her name out....chandani...she turns around....episode ends...

ok guys hope u enjoyed it....if it sounds boring please don't hesistate to tell me...please comment...

lots of luv margiEmbarrassed



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Posted: 05 August 2007 at 8:42pm | IP Logged
hun wonderful part, but next time post this in the topic of your character intros, and continue on, hope ya understand..looking forward to this update soon Embarrassed

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Posted: 05 August 2007 at 9:12pm | IP Logged
Kool....i liked it....all your "camera moves towards this and that" reminded me of my earlier days when I started writing fan fics! Clap

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Posted: 05 August 2007 at 9:31pm | IP Logged
thanxs guys for ya comments and mimi i'll keep that in mind the nexr time....


luv margi Embarrassed

gujugurl

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Posted: 06 August 2007 at 10:13am | IP Logged
episode#2...
chandani=chand.

she turns around with a big smile on her face...
devika: chand chaldi freshup hoke neje aoo.....
chand noods and walks away....

meanwhile ishan in his bathroom...shaving....
ishaan: mere sapno ki rani kaab aye gi to.....
at that instant chaman appears from the back and continues...

chaman: mein aye aye.....aja LOL

ishan: chamn tu...mere bathroom me kya kar yaha hai...

chaman: yeh sawal mein ap se bhi phuj sakta hu...ap
mere bathroom mein shave kyu kar rehe hai.....
ishan: oh god not again...mrs.d'souza....

mrs.d'souza: kya hua son...aur chaman tum yahaan kya
kaar rehen ho....jao apna kaam karo kitchen mein...

chaman: jarahon na kyu chila rahi ho....
he leaves the room

downstairs everyone is eating breakfast...and having common family discussions.....

sanjay: devika tum nahi lagta ke ab chand ki shaadi kar deni jahiye....koi accha sa ladka dond ke...

dekika: sayad ap tik kehrahe ho....

chand walks down the stairs approaches the table....greets good morning....

chand: pooja di nahi aye....

devika: woh apne kamremein karahe breakfast....

then ishan comes down.
he picks up a rose from the vase and walks towards his mom...

ishan: wah, kya khubsurat chehra hai....bilkool is phool ke jehsa....
he hands the rose to his mom...and his mom slightly touches his face...

devika: badmash....
the phone rings and chaman picks it up....

chaman: hello.

the person: hello mein khurana se baat kar sakta hoon...chaman...

chaman: unse kyun baat kerne hai...mujhse kyun nehein...

the person: unse kaho kein unke purane dost ka phone hai australia se...

chaman: australia se kyun...india se kyun nahi...
then sanjay gets up and takes the phone....

sanjay: hello kun bul raha hai...

the person: hello..sanjay....mujhe pehjana nahi...itna chaldi phool kaya....

sanjay: boman tum..kaise hoon....
the door bell rings at that time and chand goes to open the door

boman: yaar sab tik hai....maine kuch important baat karne kileye phone kiya tha...mere beta karan waha ana wale hai...

sanjay: that's great but kab....so hum use lene jasake

boman:don't worry about picking him up he will come on his own....woh ab tak waha phoj jana jahiye...

at the door
chand: yes, apko kise milna hai....
karan: wow...how beautiful
chand: excuse me...kitne batamis inse hai....
karan: woh mein..
chand: please mein ap jese ladko ko janti ho...kabhi bhi kahi bhi flirt karne lagte hoon...or ab to hadh hi hogaye ab ghar tak ane lage....
karan: nahi ap mujhe kalat...

before he could finish she slammed the door on his face.

sanjay: kon tha chand...
chand: patanahi da...yeh ladke...
sanjay:ladka...in his mind woh karan to nahi...chand woh karan hoga...boman uncle ka bata...
chand: feeling very embarresed she opens he door...but he is not there....
episode ends...

luv margi Embarrassed


gujugurl

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Posted: 06 August 2007 at 10:15am | IP Logged
oops i'm sry i posted it here....really sry i'll post it in the character descriptions...both the parts....will surely remember next time....


sry again luv margi Embarrassed

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Posted: 06 August 2007 at 10:21am | IP Logged
Wow..both sre gr8.. Smile will comment on 2nd one wen u post them on another topic.. Smile

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Posted: 06 August 2007 at 7:36pm | IP Logged
its okay hun, it takes time to get used to, but why dont u just continue here, it'd be easier, since you have both here, just go to edit on the first once and change the title Big smile

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