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Posted: 08 August 2007 at 1:18pm | IP Logged

Great chapter! But it's too small and things are happening too quick. So slow things down and write a much longer chapter next time!Smile

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Posted: 08 August 2007 at 6:04pm | IP Logged
superb story pokkeri. the emotions are cute. i am wating for 3 Wink
Caryn IF-Rockerz
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Posted: 08 August 2007 at 10:48pm | IP Logged

Originally posted by ~*Thamizhan*~

Originally posted by Caryn

Big smile Big smile Ho you are mad!

Pokiri is the youngest in IF. I thought he and Sri are of the same age.

Good for you Pokiri. Nice start. Who is Deepa? AS in Deepa Venkat.

Caryn, I'm few months younger than Pokiri! So still i'm the youngest!

Ok Thamizhan, got it.  Smile

Right Pokkiri thambi, you are giving a good attempt. Story line is nice, but as Thamizhan Thambi says, don't move too fast.  Build it up to certain level.

Good job done.  Thanks for the PM

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Posted: 08 August 2007 at 11:03pm | IP Logged
Great da Pokkiri paiyya??? so, ithile some part
u play as well??? yes, like Usha, I too want to know
the cast - enakku oru chance unda??? comedy role???
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Posted: 09 August 2007 at 2:54am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Caryn

 Ho you are mad!

Pokiri is the youngest in IF. I thought he and Sri are of the same age.

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Ennamma Caryn, One of my  Form three girls is passionately in love with a Form 2 boy! Kaathalukku vaisu, kaalam ellam illai!



Edited by Hosanna - 09 August 2007 at 2:57am
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Posted: 09 August 2007 at 2:35pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Hosanna

Originally posted by Caryn


Ho you are mad! Pokiri is the youngest in IF. I thought he and Sri are of the same age. .

Ennamma Caryn, One of my Form three girls is passionately in love with a Form 2 boy! Kaathalukku vaisu, kaalam ellam illai!



Who are these people i want to know Big smile.
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Posted: 09 August 2007 at 2:42pm | IP Logged
episode 003 its going to come tommorrow.

These are episdoes not chapters soo that why i have written short. This is going to be a fast pacing serial.

Cast
Deepa: Deepa Venkat(My hero)
Sanjay: unknown
Sarani: Deepa Venkat mother
Villian: ME(POKKIRI)
Villie: Nethra(From Lakshmi)

More and more people are going to be introduced unfortunately there is going to be less humour Wink.

usha_pooja IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 09 August 2007 at 2:55pm | IP Logged
Wow! Pokkiri u got Deepa Venkat in your story wicket. I am an adment fan of hers. Well wow Pokkiri thambi is going to be a villian thats kool. Thx for the list buddy.

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