Surya 2 : Avval Than Anthu Penn(Closed)

pokkiri26 Goldie

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Title of my serial have change for good since i got some message to change it. Which encourged me more.

In a couple of hours i have going t write down the first episdoe. Smile

Edited by pokkri26 - 14 October 2007 at 8:28am

pokkiri26 Goldie

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  Episode 001    

Far in site a girl was being chased by a herd of rowdies. Deepa inside to her self said "Deepa keep running
its not you did it was them". Just to see how far she was from the rowdies stopped and turned around. She saw them right behind her, the chase began again. Nearby, where she was a bridge "this leaves to know choice" Deepa was going to jump into the water. Running as fast she could the rowdies from behind shouted "Neeladi Deepa". Edging the bridge Deepa jumped into the water leaving the rowdies dumbfounded. Looking left to right the rowdies couldn't find her no sign of her. One of them said "Thali vettavum adtha mourai avval sethal" and left. Deepa got from the water and  saw them leave and started crying. "Where will I go and will I do" so many thoughts made her shiver in fear. Slowly walking she saw a kali temple and went inside there. Praying to god really hard asking "What did I do to deserve all this madness just because I loved him I need all this". To her amazement a women went to trance and turned in a Bathrakali and said "Ippane Unaku ell am areibakagam" (bells and drugs ring)……. Freeze    

Comments are welcome:

Edited by pokkri26 - 03 August 2007 at 10:11am
rojapoooo IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 03 August 2007 at 8:54am | IP Logged
mmm apram enna aachu??? Deepa voda lover yaaru??
mellisai IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 03 August 2007 at 9:05am | IP Logged

Great part, Pokiri!Clap Post the next part soon!

kabee IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 03 August 2007 at 1:09pm | IP Logged
well done pokkri Clap Clap
deepa voda kathalanum rowdyya?
usha_pooja IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 04 August 2007 at 1:38pm | IP Logged
super super pokkiri nice chapter. Liking the thrilling suspense.
Hosanna Goldie

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Posted: 05 August 2007 at 10:09am | IP Logged

Well Pokkiri, what happened next?

Since it is an actual story, are u the lover?

Edited by Hosanna - 05 August 2007 at 10:10am
Caryn IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 05 August 2007 at 10:57pm | IP Logged
Big smile Big smile Ho you are mad!

Pokiri is the youngest in IF. I thought he and Sri are of the same age.

Good for you Pokiri. Nice start. Who is Deepa? AS in Deepa Venkat.

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