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Posted: 27 July 2007 at 11:51pm | IP Logged

Originally posted by **@liy@**

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cant wait for the LK scene Embarrassed Tongue
wen are u coming hOor? Cry
love,aliya Embarrassed

thx alot for commenting....n 'll PM u abt the 'vaapsi'

missin ya loadz...

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thx for all the comments...sorry for posting late but i was a lil busy....so heres the next part

RECAP:

A: kt...chodd yaar....hum kaheein aur chalte hain...yahaan toh ek bhi seat nahin mille gi....
kt: no yaar!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! jab kt aaye hai toh khali haath nahin jaegi......
A: but vt shuld v do??
kt: u just wait n watch...
A: yaar chood na....chalo chalte hain (while grabbing her arms)
kt: nahin ayesha.................

 ayesha held kt's arm so tight that wen she released it...she (kt)...........

PART 3:

ayesha held kt's arm so tight that as soon as she released it....she bumped into our KISNA.............lakshya................who had 2 bags of popkorns...........which fell down................n both............lakshya n kt.............fell to the ground....lakshya was at the bottom while kt, blushingly, was at the top!!!!!!!!!!!!!! all the popkorns flew in the air n soon they both got lost in each others eyez................

A: ktttttttttttttt!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! uthh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

 just then....there day-dreaming broke n they came to the actual environment.............

kt: mmmmmmmmmmmmm...im sorry...........
L: no prob but can u plz..............get up....................
kt: oh.......im really sorry.................
L: no prob.........

she gets up n apologizes to lakshya again..........

L: mere liye yeh hairat ki baat hai ke college ki sab se popular ladki....jo kissi se sorry n thx nahin kehti....usne aaj mujhe thx kaha!!!!!!!!!!!!!
A: haan yaar....mujhe bhi teri yeh baat nahin samajh aa rahi
kt: yeah yeah...
L: anywayz....im lakshya....lakshya kapoor....aur aap??
A: mein hoon ayesha aur yeh hai..............
L: kt...........

kt makes a vteva face.........

L: anywayz...u two...enjoy the match....
A: sure...

lakshya is goin but kt stops him

kt: lakshya....im really sorry
L: no prob.(slowly) mujhe tumhara gerna bohat pasand aaya...
kt: haan??? tumne kuch kaha!?!?!
L: nahin toh....anywayz..bye
kt & A: bye.........

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lakshya goes back to his seat...

p2: bhai...itni deir se kahaan thhe??
L: woh mein kt ke uppar.........
p2: huh????????? vt r u talking abt?/
L: acha...u just forget it....

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as time passed....the match came to an end n KOOL KATZ won by 5-2....................every1 in the tem held kunal up in the air.......just then, kunal gets a call

K: hello??

its his dad.....raj khanna...

R: haan kunal...
K: jee dad...boliye
R: tum abhi kahaan ho?? (in an angry tone)
K: jee...................................................woh mein..................................mera aaj............................................
R: football match tha naa????
K: jee..........woh..................
R: jus forget it.............tum abhi ek ghante mein mujhe mere office mein millo....
K: liken dad.............
R: aaj phir tumhari koi party hogi??
K: jee wohhhhhhhhh
R: no buts............i want u in my office!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! tumhe graduate hoye 1 n a half yrs ho chuke hein liken tumhara enjoy karna abhi bhi nahin khatam hoa!!!
K: jee.............
R: aab mein chahta hoon ke tum serious ho jao isiliye....meet me in my office.........in an hour
K: ok dad........

kunal makes a "oh my god" face....................

-to be cont.............

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PRECAP: saksham's entry..............................a decision in anjali's life...............

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hope u all liked the third part!!! keep reading n do comment!!!

love
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Posted: 29 July 2007 at 12:52am | IP Logged
awesome part hoor........cont soon

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Great part hoor can't wait to read the next part
PLZ continue soon
everyone is waiting
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gr8 part hoor Clap Clap Clap
yay l-kt met Smile !
update soon

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Posted: 29 July 2007 at 8:28pm | IP Logged
wow love Lakshya and kt's scene!!WinkWink

Plzzzzzzzzzzzzz continue soon!!EmbarrassedEmbarrassed


Edited by Radhakrishna123 - 29 July 2007 at 8:29pm

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Posted: 29 July 2007 at 11:24pm | IP Logged

thx for all the comments.......

RECAP:

K: hello??

its his dad.....raj khanna...

R: haan kunal...

K: jee dad...boliye

R: tum abhi kahaan ho?? (in an angry tone)

K: jee...................................................woh mein..................................mera aaj............................................

R: football match tha naa????

K: jee..........woh..................

R: jus forget it.............tum abhi ek ghante mein mujhe mere office mein millo....

K: liken dad.............

R: aaj phir tumhari koi party hogi??

K: jee wohhhhhhhhh

R: no buts............i want u in my office!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! tumhe graduate hoye 1 n a half yrs ho chuke hein liken tumhara enjoy karna abhi bhi nahin khatam hoa!!!

K: jee.............

R: aab mein chahta hoon ke tum serious ho jao isiliye....meet me in my office.........in an hour

K: ok dad........

kunal makes a "oh my god" face....................

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PART 4:

kunal goes back to the changing room....lakshya n p2 cum there....

L: heyyyyyyy bhaiyya!!! welldone!!!! three winning matches in a row!!!

K: thx yaar...agar tum aur meri pyaari si behen mujhe subah utha kar ghar se nikalne ke idea nahin dete toh mein aur bhi late ho jata...

p2 & L: no prob bhai...

p2: liken bhai....humne apko jaldi uthaya toh phir aap ko itni deir kyun ho gayi??

L: haan haan....boliye...

K: wohhhhh...........actually..........

p2: bas bas...samaj gayi.....ladkiyaan....

K: haan.........woh mein aa raha tha toh mujhe ladkiyon ne gher (surround) kar liya aur tum dono toh jante ho ke football ke baad meri hobby ladkiyaan hain!!

L: hum kya...yeh toh pura college janta hai

K: acha...is sab ko choro liken aab yeh batao ke dad ka mood kyun kharab hai??

L: bhaiyya.woh.....(he tells him abt his dad's anger)

K: god!!! mujhe toh aaj koi farishtaa hi bachaa sakta hai!!!

p2: best of luck bhai...

K: aur p2...tumhara toh aaj pehla din hai na...college mein...

p2: jee..aur issi se mujhe yaad aya ke hum kaafi late ho chuke hain....toh lakshya....chale??

L: haan chalo!!! bye bhaiyya...

K: see ya!!!

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lakshya shows p2 her class n then he goes to his...

in p2's class...

teacher: humari class mein aaj ek nayi student aayi hai jiska naam prerna hai...

p2 cums n stands in frnt of the class...

T: aur yeh kunal aur lakshya ki behen hai....

a giel from the class says: lucky u prerna!!! ek hi ghar mein do cute ladke....

p2 smiles

p2: plz...ma'am (to her teacher)...mein chahti hoon ke sab mujhe p2 kahein...

T: ok..........p2..aab tum apni jaga pe baith sakti ho

p2 sits beside a girl.....the teacher takes attendance...while lukin in the class...

T: saksham....

a boy says: not here

T: toh phir woh sahabzade late hain...

every1 makes a "vts so new in that" face....while p2 wonders that who is this saksham....

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lakshya n kt r in the same class but nobody studies bcoz the MS. PERFECT is in their class so they just stare her (boys) n girls just chat along....but not-obviously...kt is very studious n very intelligent.... lakshya has changed his section n now hes in the same as kt....

L: excuse me...kya mein yahaan beit sakta hoon (2 sum1 who isnt facing towards him)??

that sum1 is kt....

kt: yeah..................

L: tum??

kt: tum?????????

L: haan mein...mera section change ho gaya...

kt: who cares....

L: stadium mein toh kaafi simple lag rahi thi liken abhi toh kaafi nakcharii lag rahi ho...

kt: excuse me?? baat karne se pehle socha karo ke tum kisse baat kar rahe ho

L: anywayz...kya mein tumhare saath baith sakta hoon??

kt: kyun?? kya class ki sari seats toot gayi hain...kahin aur baitho...

L: ok bhaiy....jus chill....

 

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IN P2'S CLASS:

there was a test taking place today after lunch break

T: can u...p2...plz get me the new edition of chemistry book...from the library,..

p2: sure ma'am...

she goes in the library n while she's finding the book...she sees sum1 roaming all around the library who's sweating like anythng.....

p2: excuse me??? aap...theek tuh hain??

the sum1 is saksham....hes really tensed abt the upcomin test........

S: jee.....yeah.....im fine....

turns back n starts learning.....

p2: mein apki kuch help karon??

S: tum meri kya help kar sakti ho??

p2: pehle toh aap batain ke aap..........aap ke pasine kyun beh rahe hai??

S: i have a grand test today n i havent prepared for it....

p2: kyun?

S: actually.................ummmm................mere ghar kissi ki death ho gayi thi.....(in a sad tone)

p2: uh.....i understand......toh aap ek kaam karein ke mujhe lunch time mein milye ga....i'll teach u.....

S: itne kam time mein??

p2: yeah....hope u have no prob....

S: nope.....see ya

p2 takes the bk n goes back to her class....

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anjali is still in that meeting.............when she cums out, she sees herself on a TV.....the news was abt the most rich businessman's daughter entered business......evry1 was sayin that anjali is such a rich n big man's daughter..................anjali got a lil upset....she went in her cabin

A (thinkng): har koi mujhe 'the rich n famous kabir kapoor' ki beti ki tarahaan pehchanta hai magar koi bhi "anjali" ko nahin pehchanta....vt shuld i do to bulid up my own self-resoect??

after intense thinking she gets an idea so she calls up her dad for the permission.....

kabir: hello??

A: hello papa......??

k: haan anjali beta.....kaisi ho??

A: mein theek hoon papa....actually....mujhe apse permission chahiye thi??

k: kaisi permission??

A: papa mein apni khood ki self-respect banana chahti hoon so i thought that i shuld work in sum other company...rather than our owns....

k: theek hai anjali.....agar tum aisa hi chahti ho so its fine wid me.....but do u noe which company u'll join??

A: wohi mein soch rahi thi papa......can u give me sum idea.....??

k: haan.....mere ek business frnd hain.....Mr. Raj khanna.....u dont u join his company???

A: is taht ok wid u??

k: haan.....toh u'll join it....

A: yes.....thx papa.....bye

k: bye

anjali decides that she'll, the next day, go to the company which her father recommended..............n take up a job...........

-to be cont....

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PRECAP: kunal n anjali meet........................

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hope u all liked this part coz it hardly had any romance................waiting for ur comments..............plzzzzz comment..

luv

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