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nice introductions can't wait for the next part!!Clap

Plzzzzzzzzzzzzz continue soon!!EmbarrassedEmbarrassed

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sounds great plz continue soon Smile

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hey best friend Wink
good going!! amazing intRo Clap Clap
continue soon Embarrassed
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gr8 Introo

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thx for all those lovely comments.....so here v go....the first part....

 

PART 1:

At the kapoors:

we see a huge mansion named "KK VILLAS" (k for kabir n another one for kapoor)...its a very grand house...in a room, which is fully decorated by flowers n natural stuff, we see a beautiful girl waking up by the alarm...she wakes up, moves her hair from her face n its none other than anjali (anita)...

A (2 herself): OMG!!! saath baj gaye!!! hey bhagwaan....mein aath (8) baje ki meeting ke liye late ho jaogi....haiy anjali....abhi toh kt ko bhi uthana hai!!!

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she rushes in the washroom...takes a shower n goes to an another very beautiful room which is of KT.

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A: kt!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! uth (wake up)!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! mein late ho jaogi is liye hurry up...

KT: di....sunne dein naa!!!

A: tujhe pata nahin liken is waqt saath baj rahe hain!!!

KT: who cares di?! kt ke liye college ke darwaaze kabhi bhi khool jaege...

A: lekin jaldi kar...i'll leave at 7:45 so i'll drop u...

KT: acha di...app nechin jaye...mein apko breakfast pe melti hoon....................

she wake up...takes a shower n changes into a very beautiful girl!!!!

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on the brkfast table....anjali is reading the newspaper......she asks a servant

A: saksham kahaan hai?? utha ke nahin??

S: ma'am woh toh subah 6 baje uth kar chale bhi gae...

A: itni subaah!!! kuch bata kar gaya hai??

S: nahin ma'am liken unho ne kaha ke aap unse phone par baat kar lein...

A: theek hai...zara dekhna ke kt kahaan reh gayi.

KT: mein aa gayi (saying from the stairs)

A: acha aab jaldi se naashta karle take hum nilein...

KT: lekin bhaiyya kahaan hai??

A: woh aaj subaah hi nikaal gaya

KT: huh?? bhai subaah nikaal gaye?? kya baat hai!!

A: koi baat nahin...uski koi brkfast date hogi!!!

KT: right!!!

they finish their brkfast n then anjali drops kt at her college.....

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At the khannas:

we see another grand mansion named "khanna house".... the scene shifts to the dining room where madhu khanna is getting brkfast ready...there cums raj khanna in a suit reay to go to his office.......he sits on the table n

R: madhu...teeno bachche kahaan hain??

M: kunal toh subah hi nikaal gaya...

R: football pe na??

M: haan...aur lakshya aur p2 abhi aate hi hongein...

R: acha....

M: arre...dekho...woh aa gaya mere saab se pyara beta...lakshya!!

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Lakshya (pulkit) cums down the stairs...all set for his college.....

L: good morning mom.....gud morng dad!!!

R & M: good morning beta....

R: toh apke bhai phir football par...

L: kuch nahin hota papa...unka aaj bohat hi bara match hai is liye...

R: acha...p2 kahaan hai??

L: woh apne kamre mein hai aur kaafi nervous hai...

R: kyun??

L: kyunki uss ka aaj pehla din hai...college ka

R: ohhhhhh....

M (shouts): P2!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

p2: jee maa (v hear a voice)

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n then comes...our p2 (krithika)!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

M: bacha aa kar brkfast karle...

p2: jee maa...

she cums downstairs n haves brkfast.......

R: lakshya hume bata raha tha ke tum nervous ho...college ki wajaah se!!!

p2: jee.....woh.............papa...........im really nervous....aur bhai bhi keh rahe hein ke woh mujhe bilkul help nahin karein ge!!!!

R: lakshya!!!!!!!!!!!!

L: nahin.............woh papa..........mein toh bas chahta hoon ke p2 independant ho................

R: woh toh sahi hai... (b4 he finishes)

p2 (interrupts): liken papa yeh mera first din hai.........

R: haan....p2 sahi hai aur lakshya bhi toh lakshya tum sifr isse iski class batana aur kuch nahin

L: ok....

p2: jee...

M: lakshya...jaate waqt zara kunal se bhi mil lena...pata nahin kab ayega....phone bhi nahin utha raha....

R: aur usko bolna ke woh mujhe phone kare...(in an angry tone)

L: jee papa

p2 (whispers to lakshya): aaj toh bhai gaye....

L: haan...aaj toh bhaiyya ki khair nahin.....

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to be cont..................

PRECAP: eijaz khan aka kunal enters.....

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well frndz...this was the first part....hope u liked it....n plz comment

love

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Posted: 24 July 2007 at 11:11pm | IP Logged
woW!hoor nice part Clap Clap i'am waiting for the couples meet!! Embarrassed Embarrassed
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Posted: 24 July 2007 at 11:24pm | IP Logged
Clap Nicely written...
i think their love stories are going to be awesome. Your other FF is really good. Big smile Smile

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