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drashti26

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Posted: 08 September 2007 at 4:36pm | IP Logged
hey that was awesome.

Edited by drashti26 - 08 September 2007 at 4:36pm

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Sorry 4 the delay…

RECAP:

On the other hand, p2 goes to the restroom n while washing her face, she sees saksham who is holding her hands n helping her out…she gets confused n as soon as she turns around, saksham vanishes…when she is abt to cum to her seat…sum1 holds her hand n when she turns around, it was saksham!!!! They both stare into each others eyes…then….suddenly…p2 hears sum1 calling her…when she starts to leave then she realizes that she was only imagining saksham!!!

PART 12:

Evry1 safely reach goa n there hotel is right in frnt of the beach…as adi was even angad's close junior, he invited him as well but he was comin frm the next flight of theirs…so evry is told to quickly get ready n cum down for the engagement…

Kt is getting ready…looking extremely beautiful in a sky blue, baby pink garara…just then

*knock knock*

She goes n sees p2…

P2: yaar kt…tumhare paas kya green earrings hein??
Kt: nope...
P2: acha………toh necklace hai??
Kt: nahin yaar!!! I dunt have anything of green…
P2: anywayz…im getting very bored so…
Kt: but im getting ready yaar…
P2: kuch nahin hota…I'll watch ya!!!
Kt: no wayz…chalo bahar jao (in a joking manner)
P2: nmm….

Kt jokingly, pushes her out…n closes the door…

*knock knock*

Wen kt opens da door…its again p2…

Kt: aab kya hai??
P2: kuch nahin…

She again pushes her out n closes the door…

*knock knock*

Kt: p2 toh paagal ho gayi hai!!! Aab mein aise mazza chakhati hoon…she takes a soft toy, opens the door, n widout looking, throws it on the person…unknowingly, it was LAKSHYA!!!

L: ouch!!
Kt: ohhhhhhh!!! Im really sorry lakshya!!! Actually I thought that it was…
L: doesn't matters hun…

He starts to get in the room…

Kt: woh….actually lakshya….mujhe tayyar hona hai…
L: so…??
Kt: vt do ya mean so?? Bahar toh jao…
L: nm…

He moves forward n kt moves backwards…

Kt: lakshya!!! Yeh kya kar rahe ho??

He moves further n now, kt is leaning by the wall n lakshya has trapped her wid his arms on the wall…he moves forward…

Kt: lakshya!!!! Koi dekh le ga!!! Kya kar rahe ho??

He is 1-2 inch far from kt n just then, he diverts his face to her ears n says

L: kuch bhi toh nahin kar raha!!!

N releases kt from the trap he made…

Kt: ufF!!! Tum ne toh mujhe darra hi diya tha!!!
L: bas…itni si baat se darr gayi…
Kt: acha lakshya…plz jao…mujhe ready hona hai warna hum late ho jaye ge…
L: kk…liken niche jaldi aana…

Kt smiles n lakshya leaves…


On the other hand…kunal, lakshya, saksham n angad r in the hall n evry1 is waiting for the girls 2 cum…

Kunal: bhaiyy angad….sabarr ka phal meetha hota hai…
A: yaar…aur intezaar nahin ho raha…mein agar itna meetha phal khaon ga toh mujhe diabetes ho jaye ga…

*laughs*

Just then, all the beautiful girls, cum from the stairs n each n evry guy is amazed by the beauty of the 4 girls…lakshya's mouth is open in amazement…

S: lakshya!!! Moo toh bandh karo!!!

He closes it but still is starring at kt…

The engagement ceremony starts…
Kunal n anjo brngs ak forward n give them rings… angad n kripa exchange rings n just after that, angad kisses kripa on the cheek…everybody dance to the tunes of "ram milaye jodi" from "just married"!!!

After all the dancing…kripa was going to brng herself water n just then, sum1 grabs her to the other side of the wall o that no1 can see her…the one who grabs her was…ANGAD!!!

K: angad!!!!!!!!
A: aahista bolo!!!
K: yeh kya kar rahe ho…
A: dekho naa…sab ke saamne toh mein tumse romance karne se raha isi liye…
K: isi liye aap ne mujhe choro ki tarhaan…
A: choron ki tarhaan nahin…deewano ki tarhaan…
K: acha acha… baatein bana chhoro…aur mujhe jaane do…mujhe pyaas lag rahi hai…
A: umm…mera dil nahin chha raha…

Kunal was searching for angad but he was nowhere to be found…he saw sum curtains moving so moved it n he saw angad n kripa…

K: uff…tum dono se itna bhi control nahin hota!!!

Ak realizes that kunal is there…

A: arre yaar….woh aisehi…
K: baatein mat banao…chalo aab bahar niklo…tumhe sab bola rahe hain…

So all three leave….


Adi is even the engagement n he cannot forget his insult wen lakshya fought wid him n kt was even against him…in anger, he sees lakshya n kt, holding each others hand n smiling….he gets very jealoused…

A: is lakshya ka toh kuch karma hi parega…

Just then, he gets sum idea…

A: aaj ki raat…lakshya ki aakhri raat hogi…

N he gives a cute, deadly n an evil smile…

-to be cont…


PRECAP: adi's plan successful…


Hope u all lied this part…actually…as u all must be noeing that these days r of Ramadan n as im busy in that…I hardly have time to sit on net…so I'll try my level best to update my ff more quickly but that's really hard for me….i hope u all understand…so stay tuned n do comment….


N ya…does any1 noes that wen will diwali take place???

Luv
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Posted: 22 September 2007 at 6:47am | IP Logged
that was absolutely amazing. i wonder what will adi do. whatever it is i can't wait to read the next part and plz don't let anything happen to lakshya.

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Posted: 22 September 2007 at 8:16am | IP Logged
exellent part update soon
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RECAP:

 

Adi is even the engagement n he cannot forget his insult wen lakshya fought wid him n kt was even against him…in anger, he sees lakshya n kt, holding each others hand n smiling….he gets very jealoused…

 

A: is lakshya ka toh kuch karma hi parega…

 

Just then, he gets sum idea…

 

A: aaj ki raat…lakshya ki aakhri raat hogi…

 

N he gives a cute, deadly n an evil smile…

 

PART 13:

 

Theres sum aunt of p2 (kunal n lakshya as well), living in goa so p2 decides to visit at her aunts place after the engagement is over…so as soon as she starts  2 leave, saksham sees her n goes 2 her…

 

S: kahaan jaa rahi ho??

P2: actually meri yahaan aunty rehti hain toh mein unse milne jaa rahi hoon…

S: ok then…ill drop u…

P2: no need…

S: its ok…

P2: sure then…

 

They both leave for the aunts place…while sitting in the car, saksham gets an idea to win his bet…he makes sure that p2 isnt seeing him…n he puts sum waste in the exhaust pipe…after traveling for 10 mins or so, their car stops…

 

P2: kya ho gaya car ko??

S: I thnk sumthngs wrong…wait a minute…I'll just check it out…

 

He opens the bonnet n breaks one of the wire…

 

S: p2, car toh bilqul hi kharab ho chuki hai…

P2: so vt shuld v do??

S: mein koi mechanic dhondh kar aata hoon…u keep sitting in the car…

P2: saksham…I'll go wid u…mujhe akele darr lagta hai…

S: ok….cmon…

 

They both walk in search of the mechanic…

 

P2: acha saksham…yeh toh batao ke tum sabse cloze kis ke saath ho??

S: ummm……anjo di n kt…

P2: ohh…aur college mein??

S: umm…lakshya…varun…(n takes sum more names but not hers)

P2 (thnkng): uff…yeh toh mera naam le hi nahin raha…

P2: aur kaun??

S: aur mujhe SRK bohat pasand hai…

P2: I mean…from college…

S: no1 else…

P2: sure??

S: haan haan!! Y?? am I forgetting sum1??

P2: thnk saksham…is that all

S: definitely…

P2: pakka??

S: dekho p2!! Agar tum mujhse kissi ka naam bolwana chahti ho toh batado…mein us insaan ka naam boldoon ga…

P2: nmm…no…aisa kuch bhi nahin hai…

 

 

While adi, making sure that nobodys watchin him, escapes from the hall n sits in a jet black car, whose windows r even sprayed black so no outsider could see him…while sitting in the car, he gets sum idea of brnging lakshya outside…so he gives him a call

 

L: hello??

A: hi…lakshya…

L: adi, tumne mujhe call kyun kiya hai??

A: im no mood of fighting…I called u to tell u that ive seen saksham n p2 walking on the road, n their cars all broken out (just makes a guess)

 

Lakshya disconnects the call thnkng that hes joking but wen he searches for them, they were nowhere to be found…as a result, he realizes that adi was speaking the truth…so, widout telling any1, he goes in search of saksham n p2 in a car…

 

Adi sees lakshya's car n starts chasing his car, unknowing to lakshya…saksham n p2 r walking just around the corner…

 

Lakshya sees saksham n p2s car so he gets off frm his car n thnks that they must be around the corner…so while shouting out their names, adi cums, in full speed, n screeches r being heard by saksham n p2…in amazement n afraidness, p2 turns around to see who was it n sees that sum jet black car hits lakshya n he falls into a "khaai"…

 

P2: bhaiyya!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

 

Saksham turns around n sees lakshya hanging from a tree's branch…adi escapes frm the area n luckily, he wasn't seen by any1…saksham n p2 run to save lakshya…

 

S: lakshya…apna haath do…

 

Lakshya tries to give his hand in saksham's but fails…the branch breakes n our very own cute hunk falls in the deep down river n hits his fore-head on a very gigantic rock…

 

P2: bhai!!!!

S: lakshya!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

 

 

On the other hand, kt sees that lakshya is nowhere to be found…she searches for him, tries his cell…but no answer…so she finds a soft corner for herself…n thnk all abt lakshya…their first meeting, their confession n all their romantic moments….

 

While p2 is cryin like hell n saksham is confused abt all vts happening……

 

Deep inside the river, lakshya is all in blood n he is even remembering evrythng kt…

 

Just then, kt decides to call p2 to ask her abt lakshya…

 

P2 (while crying): hello??

Kt: hello p2…tu ro kyun rahi hai???

P2: kt…….kt…

Kt: kya hoa p2??

P2: kt…………..woh…….lakhsya bhaiyya….

Kt: kya hoa lakshya ko???

P2: woh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Kt: p2!!! Tum log kahaan ho??? Aur lakshya???

 

Saksham takes the cell…

 

S: kt……..woh…

Kt (tears in her eyes): kya hoa saksham??? Jaldi bata naa??!!

S: kt…woh…………………lakshya ka accident ho gaya!!!

 

Kt is all shocked…she drops the phone n just then, a picture of lakshya n kt, which was in her hands, fall to the ground n breaks in pieces while kt falls to the grnd as well n heavy tears in her eyes…kunal, angad, kripa n anjali sees her…

 

Anjo: kt!!! Kya hoa?? Tu ro kyun rahi hai??

 

No answer…

 

Kr: kya hoa kt??? Sab theek toh hai naa??

Kt: woh!!! Lakshya……

Ku: kya hoa lakshya ho??? Kt…jawwab do!!!

A: kt plz batao…

Kt: lakshya ka accident ho gaya hai…

 

-to be cont…

 

 

PRECAP: lakshya's body is found…

 

 

Hope it wasn't a dieing moment for all the kisna deewanis but it was really hard for me even coz im even a die-hard fan of lakshya!!! So stay tuned n do comment…to noe more…

 

Luv

hoor

 

 

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Posted: 28 September 2007 at 10:04am | IP Logged
gr8 part and i hope laksh is ok
update soon

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Posted: 28 September 2007 at 5:43pm | IP Logged
awww...my jaanu lakshya, i hope he's okay Cry
really awesome ff!! loved it!!
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Posted: 28 September 2007 at 5:56pm | IP Logged
awww, omg! my jaanuuu !! hope he's fine ! Cry Embarrassed
HOOR !! LOVELY FF , Hug please continue ASAP ! :)

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