SHORT FIC ON RN

hey

this is the short fic on RN based on new promo ...........we all RN made this

Originally posted by: ashi_kapoor

naina - voh huda ne kaha thi ki agar main sari pehnugi to revolt karne me aasaani hogi
raj-aisi khoosurti ke liye to koi apni jaan bhi de sakta hai revolt kya hai
naina blushes
naina-ummm sir voh mujhe kaafi ajeeb lag raha, pata nahin main sari me kaisi lag rahi hoon.. pata nahin maine huda ki baat kyun maan li?
raj-mujhe to huda ko thanku kehna chahiye ki uski vajah se maine tumhe sari me dekha 

Originally posted by: pinka_anshu

naina:- sir main sahi lag rahi hun na .. vo huda humesha kahta rahta........vo mm
RAJ [came close to her ] [in dreamy and soft whispering voice straight looking into her eyes]:- kya khta rahta hai ??
naina[with so much of blush but still looking in his eyes]:- amm.....yehi ki main .....main...mujhme ...koi janni vali baat nahin hai
RAJ:- [smile]....apko pata hai cadet singh ....vo aisa kyon khta hai........ vo apko aisa dekhna chata hai
naina:- aur sir aap??
RAJ:- [with surprise tone].me main kya
naina:- [with soft and wisper tone.] " aap kya chate hai".....apko kya lgata hai main kais lagti hun
RAJ:- naina tum bhut achi lag rahi ho [with so much love in voice and so close to her][ but suddenly he realize he is too close to her] [than he say to light up the mood]...agar apka dost[shantunu] aise dekhta to apkka apko date k liye le jata
naina:- aur sir aap?? [with lil anger tone but still swt one] kya kabhi aap apne dil ki baat krenge 

Edited by pinka_anshu - 16 years ago

Wow 👏
Ashi and Pinku.... you 2 must be the romantic comedy writers of the century yaar..... beautiful romance and funny comedy..... aur likho na please about this situation 😳 😳 😳

luv
kanak

Originally posted by: tere_bin

Wow 👏
Ashi and Pinku.... you 2 must be the romantic comedy writers of the century yaar..... beautiful romance and funny comedy..... aur likho na please about this situation 😳 😳 😳

luv
kanak

😆 comedy? well!...pinku knows all the funny stuff

here it is last and final part

Originally posted by: daisy_luvs_ ff

raj comes more close and tilts her chin towards himself and softly says,"Agar aaj keh du toh tum kya sunogi?"

naina blushes even harder but she bravely says,"kehkar toh dekhiye!"

raj takes a deep breath and lovinly says,"Jab bhi tumhe dekhta hoon ajab sa khushi mehsoos hota hai. tum jab samne nahi rehti ho tab bhi tumhara paas hone ka ehsaas dil ko bechain karta hai. tumhari jhil si akhon mein hamesha khudko dhund ne ka ek chahat hoti hai. Shayed mujhe tumse pyaar ho gaya hai.

ab tum kya kahogi cadet naina ah singh!"

saying this he leaves her and walks away. after taking some steps, he looks back and gives naina one of his killer looks and goes away.

naina stands there completely stunned.

And yes she s happy and that is reflected on her glowing face.

Originally posted by: pinka_anshu

after this jab NAINA RAJ ko jate dekh rahi thi aur vahin khadi thi jaise ki apni hi duniya mein khoyi ho .tabhi alekh aa jata hai

alekh taping on her shoulder from behind:-kya ..kya soch rahi hai....

naina[with complete surprised expresion]:- kya......... mai kya soch rahi hun.tu kab aya

alekh :- JAB tera RAJA tujhse ek swal puch ker chala gaya

naina:- kya🤔...

alekh.:- kya...........nahin kha tha maine raja ki jaan tote mein aur teri capt RAJVEER mein

naina:- kya kah raha hai alekh ye to maine huda ki shart k...

alekh :- [ in between] haan aur boys hostel ka rast faculty rooms ki trah jata hai na😆 

naina:- nahin vo to main bas

alekh;- bhul ja naina....sir ne jo swal pucha hai uska jwab de de...uska jwab dhund le jo tere dil mein

[and he left]

and naina realize

to vo RAJ k room ki tarf jati hai

RAJ in his room [ naina knock on his door] per tabhi power fail ho jata hai

aur RAJ candel jalta hai aur door open kerta hai with candel in his hand

and the first thought in his mind when he saw her face in that candel light 

Nazre jhukaye zulf khole lagte hai is tarah,
Jaise ke sang tarash ne devi tarash di.

(Sang tarash=Murti banane wala)

than naina say may i come in sir

 

aur RAJ  [jaise kisi ne uska dream toda ho] :-

 

yes.. yes come in cadet singh

 

 

thodi der jab naina vahin chup bathi rahi aur

 

RAJ ko bhi samjh nahin aya to

 

RAJ:- so cadet singh.,,,pani ya coffe...

 

naina:- nahin sir i am fine

 

RAJ:-[ after some hesitation, and lil naughty tone] .... so cadet naina ah singh aaj kya puchne ayi ho

 

naina:- [look up to her ] and stand up from chair and come lil close..lil only ]  main   manti hun sir main humesha kuch puchne ati hun apse .apko kuch na kuch preshan kerti hun ...per aaj kuch puchne nahin .kisi swal ka jwab mangne nahin ...dene ayi hun

 

RAJ[come lil close to her][with soft tone]....kya naina

 

naina:- sir aap ne kaha tha na ki ,"Jab bhi mujhe dekhte hain ajab sa khushi mehsoos hoti hai."

 

per mujhe khushi mahsoos nahin hoti hai....balki  aap mere dukh le  lete hai

 

" main jab samne nahi rehti hun tab bhi mere paas hone ka ehsaas dil ko bechain karta hai.'

 

per sir jab bhi aap pass hote sirf tabhi dil ko skun hota hota , jaab aap nahin hote aapk pass hone ka ahsas nahin... apse dur hone ka hsas dil ko bhut bechain kerta hai

 

"meri akhon mein hamesha khudko dhund ne ka ek chahat hoti hai."

 

per sir meri to ankhe hi apk liye hai........jo vishwash main dekhti hun sirf apki ankho mein .....kudh ko main dhundti hi nahin..... kyonki apki ankho k alwa mera kahin koi vajood hi nahin

 

apne jo swal puch tha uska jwab hum dono jante hai shayd kab se pata nahin per .ye sach hai sir mujh apse pyar ho gaya hai

 

after this RAJ was not able to say anything and he just came close to her and hug her

and he say in whisper tone in her ear 'u know what naina tum humesha se bhut bolti rahi ho"

 

yaar isk age khud socho😳😳

 

Edited by pinka_anshu - 16 years ago

Originally posted by: ashi_kapoor

😆 comedy? well!...pinku knows all the funny stuff

kuch jyada hi hgaa dosto

thanx kanak......and ashi you are too good than me...tune start kiya to main kuch likh payi hun

OMG.... I have no words.... all writers ... a standing ovation to all... for writing such an amazingly beautiful FF..... iske baad sochne mein koi problem to nahi...
infact yeh khayal dil se jaane mein time lagega 😳 😳

kal shayad mere papa bol hi denge... "tun theek ho na?... itna smile kyun kar rahi ho...?" 😆

ab main unhe kya jawab dungi??

YOu brought a broadest smile on my face...😃

.awesome... 👏

And I can't think of anything else after watching tht promo... 😳

Originally posted by: tere_bin

OMG.... I have no words.... all writers ... a standing ovation to all... for writing such an amazingly beautiful FF..... iske baad sochne mein koi problem to nahi...
infact yeh khayal dil se jaane mein time lagega 😳 😳

kal shayad mere papa bol hi denge... "tun theek ho na?... itna smile kyun kar rahi ho...?" 😆

ab main unhe kya jawab dungi??

thanx kanak .per ye baat mere papa abhi tak mujhse 3 baar uch chuke hai' " beta tabiyat to thik hai na"😆😆

yaar main aise sirf 9:30 se 10:00  k bich muskurati hun ......vo bhi jab RAJ ka koi mindblowing scne hota hai....aur phir main aaj 2 ghante tak tv dekh rahi thi sirf ye promo dkehne k liye😆😆,,, jo amin kabhi anhin kerti i mean ami tv nahin dekhti siva lrl  k

to mere papa ko laga meri tabiyat khrab ho gayi hai😆

OMG!!! pinku n ashi.........im awestruck...... 😛 😛 tht was one jhech of an FF......yaar iskey baad ka toh aapney aap hi aakhon k saaamney aa jata hai...... 😳 😳 😳 haaaila my cheecks r going red 😆 too gud pinku....the atmosphere was sooo romantic........haaaaaai 😳 😳 😳 luved it......just luved it.......

Originally posted by: pinka_anshu

thanx kanak .per ye baat mere papa abhi tak mujhse 3 baar uch chuke hai' " beta tabiyat to thik hai na"😆😆

yaar main aise sirf 9:30 se 10:00  k bich muskurati hun ......vo bhi jab RAJ ka koi mindblowing scne hota hai....aur phir main aaj 2 ghante tak tv dekh rahi thi sirf ye promo dkehne k liye😆😆,,, jo amin kabhi anhin kerti i mean ami tv nahin dekhti siva lrl  k

to mere papa ko laga meri tabiyat khrab ho gayi hai😆

😆
Papa ko agar pata chal gaya to shamat aa jayegi 😆