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hey guys hi im new here.......n im starting a new fan fic .....n raj-naina......the story s named -STARS SHINW DOWN.

ive already completed this fic n 2 sites......n hope u ll here 2 will lke t....

 

 

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THE STARS SHINE DOWN

the cold winds gushed in..........

there was a knock......

"maam"

(no reply)

"a lady wishes 2 c you"

"should i send her in?"

the woman waved her hand,as if asking her 2 send her in

silence prevailed

just then the door opened .........some1 stepped in

the room was 2 dark........

notng could be seen................

only white curtains which by now wre flowing to and fro due 2 the wind

the lady stepped forward........

towards the balcony.........there she saw her............sitting all alone.........

there was pin drop silence.......

finally she called-"naina"

she saw her shivering.........

"naina....its me shalini......."

she turned

maybe this was the beautiful sight one would want 2 c.......

there she was -naina singh ahluwahlia.........

dressed in a white salwar kameez.......

she looked beautiful............




"naina,raj is back"

she saw her shivering again.......

"naina"

"r u listening 2 me?y d hell dnt u say anytng?"

silence

"speak up naina.........no point in keeping quiet......."

"shalini........it doesnt matter 2 me now........whether he s hre or nt.........when i needed him......he wasnt there........."

"maybe he had sme problem?"

"n so he didnt turn up????????n dat 2 for his own wedding?????"       

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scene 2..........

"hmmmm.........coffee.........."

"thankz navin"

silence....

"raj i trust u more than myself..........i knw smtng must be seriously wrong .........dats y u didint turn up.........."

"thanx navin.........uve always been there"

"frndship mein no srry no thankyous ok?"

raj gave him a faint smile.......

"dnt wrry shalini has gne 2 speak wid naina........but i tnk u shld go n speak 2 her............"

"i tried.......i called her.......but she s nt recieving my calls"

hmmmmmmm

navin sighs

"dnt wrry tngs will be ok"

raj starts crying..........

"hey raj...........stop cryng.........cme on raj"

"navin i wnt be able 2 live without her"

he covers his face with both his hands...........

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part 3

raj was lying on his bed now............

navin had gne back.......

it was late

he was trying 2 sleep.......

but he couldnt.......

the only tng which came 2 his mind was-"wat if i lose naina?"

his eyes were full of tears......

suddenly there was a knock n d frnt door......

the servant took the lead.......

he came back........

n called for rajveer

"koi milne aaya hai beta"

"kaun hai ramu kaka?"

"andar bejh dijeye"

sme 1 appeared after some time

"raj aisa kyun kiya tune?"

"alekh .........cme have a seat......."

"nahi 1st answer my question"

silence........

"so raj u wnt tell naina were u had gne ???????"

raj looked up.....

"i knw u dint tell her.........but i will.........i knw everytng........"

rajveer looked at him shocked..........

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"ritu called u ..........rit??????"

raj looked at him stunned.........

"how do u knw dat alekh?"

"listen raj i knw both u n naina vry well i tnk its better ki u go n tell her everytng................otherwise it may be late............ritu ka natak toh hamesha hi chalta rahega"

silence

"tnk ..........will u be able 2 live without naina?"

"wat will i tell her?"

"wat ritu told u.........look she cant do anytng 2 naina.......n anyways ur always there then????n wat will she do????go raj tell her"

"i cnt tell her"

"y?"

"coz there s sme1 else also in this game ..........n dat person is very close 2 naina"

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"wat.......n y would u do dat?"

"i hve no idea bout wat i should do now.........

help me alekh"

raj says moving his hands through his hair..........

alekh notices smtng..........

rajveers hand was bleeding.........

there was a deep wound....................

"wat s all dis?"..............

alekh shouted.............

"ntng......."

he tries 2 change the topic

"y dnt u go n tell her raj............

u hve done so much for her............

n she s being misled............"

suddenly the phone rings.........

alekh picks up the phone highly irritated.................

"hello"

"ya"

"wat???????"

"ya vl be there........"

raj looked at him


"kaun tha?"

"raj............naina.........."

"alekh naina wat............?'

silence.

"speak up alekh.............."

............................................................ ............................................................ ................


the next moment v c raj driving the car at top speed..............


alekh was sitting next to him.........
"alekh wat else did shalini say?

where s navin?"


"she just said dat.........they couldnt find naina anywhre...........

she was in the garden...........

shalini was also ther.............

shalini had gne 2 do sme wrk...............

but when she came back naina wasnt there...............

silence

now wat will u do raj?

ritu ka kaam hai kya?"


rajveer sighed..........

"ya..........

il hve to tell all dis 2 navin now.............

theres no point n hiding t now......................."
(they rushed)

they reached navin s house.........

they saw navin rushing out when they reached.......

"navin"............raj called.........

"raj..........acha hua tu aa gaya.........raj..........naina........."

"i hve 2 tell u smtng navin"

"v dnt hve tme now raj"

"its related 2 all dis"

silence

"bolo.........cme on.........wats the matter???????"




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Posted: 21 July 2007 at 11:51am | IP Logged
hey guys dat was a long one.......did u lke t?????do gve yr comments.....

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Posted: 21 July 2007 at 1:54pm | IP Logged
hey great start...plzz continue soonnnn Tongue Tongue

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