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Fan-Fic: Vaada - The Promise (Page 8)

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Posted: 14 August 2005 at 10:11pm | IP Logged
awesome story
thanks alot
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Episode 5


Kripa runs aways 4rm there thinking what just happened between her n Angad….. her heart was still beating faster…. Meanwhile she gets a call 4rm prithvi…..
K: heloo
P: hiee kripa…
K: haan prithvi bolo….
P: ummm voh actually Angad ka birthday hai soo… kyun nah hum uske liya ek surprise party de…..
K: what??????? Angad ka b'day hai aaur tum mujhe aab batarahe ho????? Prithvi tum bhi nah?????????? Anywaz main abhi tumhare yaha aarahi hoon. So wait 4 me okay…

Prithvi is happy that Kripa is coming 2 his place n is all blushing…..

Prithvi's Home:

K: Prithviiiiiiiiiii!!!!!!!!!!!! Tum nah?????? U r impossible.. Angry
Angad ka b'day aaur tum ne mujhe bataya kuyn nahi????
P: aacha baba I am sorry….. aage yesi galti nahi hogi bas!!!!!!!
K: aacha thik hai thik hai!!!! aab yeh batao ki party ka saara saman kaha hai?????
Then both of them gets back 2 work…….

Kripa is running here n there like a mad gal……

K: gosh!!!!!!!! Sham hone ko aagayee hai aur aabhi tak humne room bhi thik nahi kiya….. .
Prithvi voh balloons kahe hai??????
Now Prithvi gives her the balloons n Kripa is bg fixing them……

Now prithvi thinks of helping Kripa so while she is fixing the balloons he goes 2 the kitchen 2 cut some salads but instead cuts his own finger….. LOL

P: aaauchhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!!
Kripa gets all worried n comes running towards the kitchen…..
K: OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!! Prithvi yeh kyaaa kiya tumne…?????
K( mad at prithvi): kaha tha na maine k main sab kardoongi toh tumhe yeh sab karne ki kyaaa zaroorat thi huh???
She takes his finger inside her mouth…..

P: kripa main toh bas tumheri help karne ki……
K( yelling at him): help!!!!!!!!! Isse help karna keheta hai????? Aagar tumhe kuch hojata toh mera kyaa hota ???? Angad ko kitna dukh hota !!! kabhi socha hai tumne???

Prithvi is slightly taken back by seeing the concern of kripa 4 him…. He is happy that kripa is concerned 4 hi, n has a smile in his face

K( still angry): aaba yese hus kyun rahe ho?????
P: nahi kripa mujhe actually achha laga .. tumhara mujhe daat nah…. Aaj tak kabhi kisi ne aapna samaj k mujhe ish tarah nahi daata…… mujhe bahot aacha laga…..actually mera ish duniya koi nahi hai nah.....ish liya
Now b4 prithvi cud complete his words kripa puts her finger in his lips …
K: sushhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!! Phir kabhi mat kehe ki tumhare koi nahi hai…. Main hoon nah… aaur angad bhi toh hai nah…..

Now both Kripa N prithvi smiles n gets back 2 work….

Birthday party

Kripa has decorated all the room with balloons n flowers….it was all dark when Angad comes in…….
A: prithvi…. Kripa…. yaha itna aadera kuyn hai….???
Then kripa comes close 2 Angad with a candle in her hand
Both of them were close 2 each other….. the fire of the candle was burning in between their eyes……
Angad is all smiling n can't take off his eyes 4rm kripa…
Then slowly kripa whispers in his ears…..
K: tumhe pata hai….. tum aahista aahista buddhe ho rahe ho????
A( confused): kyaa???
K: tum aaj pure 25 saal k hogaye ho idiot!!!!
Happy birthday 2 my special friend…………

Then all of sudden Prithvi n all the others joins them singing the happy b'day song…..
Angad is really happy n keeps on smiling at kripa…..

P: pata hai Angad!!! Aaj ka saara arrangements Kripa ne kiya hai…….

Then he looks at kripa with so much love n affection in his eyes…..
Both angad n kripa r lookin at each other….they r not talking but their eyes r sayin all the words…
Angad's eyes: thank you soo much….. u don know what u've given me 2 day…..
Kripa's eyes: aapno se thanku nahi kehete….. thanku kehe ne se risto k maneene badal jate hai…..

Both angad n kripa keeps on smiling at each other…… while all the others request the b'day boy 2 sing a song 4 them…..
He then smiles n looks at Kripa……. as if askin her like do u really wana me 2 sing a song?????
Kripa nods n head

Song:

Is kadar pyaar hain tumse ae humsafar
Is kadar pyaar hain tumse ae humsafar
Ab to jeete hain hum bas tumhe dekhkar
Tumhari har ada tumhari har nazar
Yeh kya kehne lagi tumhe hain kya khabar
Is kadar pyaar hain tumse ae humsafar
Ab to jeete hain hum bas tumhe dekhkar


Angad looks at kripa ….. kripa all smiling n lookin him back…… then he holds her hand… looks deep in her eyes…

Dil mein hain betabiyan neend udne lagi
Tere khayalon se hi aankh judne lagi
Har pal tumko dekha maine
Kehti hain meri nazar
Tumhari har ada tumhari har nazar
Yeh kya kehne lagi tumhe hain kya khabar
Is kadar pyaar hain tumse ae humsafar
Ab to jeete hain hum bas tumhe dekhkar


Now angad kneels down in front of Kripa n ask her 4 a dance……..kripa is all Blushing n smiling…..
Now both Angad n kripa r on the dance floor with of course other ppl dancing too…




Sasoon mein basne lagi jabse tu ho jaane jaan
Apna sa lagne laga mujhko saara jahan
Mehka mehka lagta mujhko
Khushiyo se dil ka nagar
Tumhari har ada tumhari har nazar
Yeh kya kehne lagi tumhe hain kya khabar
Is kadar pyaar hain tumse ae humsafar
Ab to jeete hain hum bas tumhe dekhkar
Tumhari har ada tumhari har nazar

Yeh kya kehne lagi tumhe hain kya khabar

Now Angad n kripa r lost in each others eyes……


Okay guyzzz 2 b continued
Lov ya
Eshika



Edited by eshika - 15 August 2005 at 12:00am
cheen2005 Senior Member
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Posted: 14 August 2005 at 11:45pm | IP Logged
gr8 part Tongue

Originally posted by eshika



Prithvi is slightly taken back by seeing the concern of kripa 4 him…. He is happy that kripa is concerned 4 hi, n has a smile in his face n is continuously lookin at kripa…...
K( still angry): aaba mujhe aase kyaaa dekh rahe ho???
 


but wasnt prithvi blind Confused
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Posted: 14 August 2005 at 11:45pm | IP Logged
wonderful! What movie is that song from! I loved the gutiar part! it was very cute!
charmedangel Senior Member
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Posted: 14 August 2005 at 11:48pm | IP Logged

Originally posted by cheen2005

gr8 part Tongue

Originally posted by eshika



Prithvi is slightly taken back by seeing the concern of kripa 4 him…. He is happy that kripa is concerned 4 hi, n has a smile in his face n is continuously lookin at kripa…...
K( still angry): aaba mujhe aase kyaaa dekh rahe ho???
 


but wasnt prithvi blind Confused
 

heheheh!!!!!!!! i am suchha dumboo....!!! i 4 got that he was blind!!!!!! tks 4 reminding me...lolzLOLLOL

i'll edit that part rite now... stupid me lolzLOL

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Posted: 14 August 2005 at 11:52pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by eshika

Originally posted by cheen2005

gr8 part Tongue

Originally posted by eshika



Prithvi is slightly taken back by seeing the concern of kripa 4 him…. He is happy that kripa is concerned 4 hi, n has a smile in his face n is continuously lookin at kripa…...
K( still angry): aaba mujhe aase kyaaa dekh rahe ho???
 


but wasnt prithvi blind Confused
 

heheheh!!!!!!!! i am suchha dumboo....!!! i 4 got that he was blind!!!!!! tks 4 reminding me...lolzLOLLOL

i'll edit that part rite now... stupid me lolzLOL



thats ok eshika, but u'll be punished 4 that n ur punishment is that u have 2 post the nxt part verrrrrrrrryyyyyyyyyyyy soon of both ur fanfics. i love em both so get 2 work Wink
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Posted: 14 August 2005 at 11:53pm | IP Logged
ahhh just edited that part!!!!!! gosh !!! how can b soooo stupid.... i 4 got the main concept of my story.... LOL
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Posted: 14 August 2005 at 11:55pm | IP Logged

Originally posted by armaans4ever

wonderful! What movie is that song from! I loved the gutiar part! it was very cute!

hey neha tks 4 likin it..... n that song is 4rm sonu nigam's alblum deewana..... OMG i just loove this song...... if u have not listened it do it rite now.... i'm sure u'll love it. 2......Big smile coz ur n mine choice of songs r similar....Embarrassed

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