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Fan-Fic: Vaada - The Promise (Page 7)

dancing babe Goldie
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Posted: 14 August 2005 at 5:23pm | IP Logged
that part rocked! plz continue soon !

charmedangel Senior Member

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Posted: 14 August 2005 at 7:32pm | IP Logged
Episode 4

Prithvi is really happy that Kripa n Angad have finally cleared all their misunderstandings……Now prithvi .. Angad n kripa alwaz used 2 chill out together n have fun with each other…..

As days passes by their frenship becomes more n more strong……. Angad n prithvi had never thought that 1 day a gal like Kripa would come in their life……. Both Angad n Prithvi likes Kripa's company………And it was just a matter of time when these 2 guyz falls in love with kripa………..

It's not that prithvi didn't had any fren whose been a gal b4…… but there was something in kripa which made him feel the warmth of frenship.. the magic of love…. He's never been so close 2 a gal as he is to kripa….. kripa never made him feel that he is blind…. she supported him in each step of his life. Just like Angad!!!!!

Like Prithvi, Angad was also madly in love with Kripa…… he had many gf b4 but had never fallen in love….. It was Kripa who made him fall in love…… who taught him what love is n what is the true meaning of frenship……. Kripa was just the perfect gal 4 her!!!!! She had all those qualities which he wanted in his dream gal…….

kripa is still unaware of their feelings for her…… kripa also had never thought that 1 day she wud get such good frens like Prithvi n Angad……. Prithvi n Angad meant the whole world 2 her…… She knows that Prithvi n Angad will alwaz stand beside her when ever she needed a true fren……..

Soul Music Academy:

Kripa is inside the classroom tryin 2 play Angad's guitar ……. She tries hard 2 hold the guitar properly but the guitar keeps slipping 4rm her lap….. LOL LOL
Just then Angad comes in n is enjoyin the whole situation……..

K( 2 herself): gwaddddddddd!!!!! Yeh Angad ka guitar bhi nah….. uffffffff pata nahi yese stupid guitar ko Angad kaise bajata hai????? This is soo useless!!!!!

Now Angad just can't stop himself n bursts out laughing…

A: kyaa huwa???? Guitar pakad na nahi aata ????
K: tumhe kisne kaha ki mujhe guitar pakad na nahi aata….. voh toh tumhara stupid guitar kuch extra ordinarily heavy hai ishliye…..

Tumhe kyaa lagta hai.. mujhe guitar bajana nahi aata ?????
Then she again tries 2 play guitar but again the guitar keeps slipping 4rm her lap… LOL

Now Angad just smiles n comes closer 2 kripa…… he holds her 4rm back n Places the guitar in her lap. He holds kripa's finger n makes her play the guitar along with himself…..

Kripa could feels Angad's touch … Angad is really close 2 kripa… she could feel the warmth of Angad's breath........ her heart begans 2 beat more n more faster with evey beat of music played by the guitar……

Now Angad cud feel that kripa is feeling uncomfortable….. n he lets her go…..kripa just runs away 4rm their lowering her eyes…………..

As kripa rums away 4rm there Angad realizes what he just did….. he has a cute innocent smile in his face n pats his head feeling shy……… u cud see the innocence of first love in his eyes…..

Okay guyzz… 2 B continued
I hope I explained the guitar scene properly….
Hope u guyzz got it…
Love ya
~Angel~ Goldie

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Posted: 14 August 2005 at 7:38pm | IP Logged
great she is falling in love with angad
plz cont soon
x_Roxy_x IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 14 August 2005 at 7:38pm | IP Logged
eshika that was fab cont soonClap
happe IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 14 August 2005 at 7:42pm | IP Logged

kripa better falls in love with angad.
the guitar scene was cute eshika.
simplyconfused IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 14 August 2005 at 8:58pm | IP Logged
the guitar scene was soooo sweet and awsome job!
sangi Goldie

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Posted: 14 August 2005 at 9:21pm | IP Logged
awe...sooo sweet..plz continue..
shagun_luvs_? Goldie

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Posted: 14 August 2005 at 9:32pm | IP Logged
wow. its great. please continue.

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